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07-07-2010, 07:46 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: New Joiiiseeyyy Kidd
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jayson Melanie Shadow Sixth Year |
BRE.
TIS IS FREAKING AMAZINGG! I'm in love,and I love the way you have Jared<3333
Awweee Jake and Autumn are soo cute<33
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07-07-2010, 09:00 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
love it I'm so happy they made up and kissed hehe yeah
PAMS!
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07-08-2010, 05:21 PM
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| Erkling
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: lost in the mountain
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Periwinkle Evie Paeng Slytherin Fifth Year | Bre Bear | Asherine | Whisper | Kemmy | Raeney | Madyra | Bumble Bee
Here's the next chapter. It's very short. Sorry about that. I'm still having writers block. Any ideas for me?
[CENTER]  Disclaimer:The Harry Potter world belongs to J.K Rowling not me. Time to Say Goodbye
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Chapter Six: Gryffindor Common Room
Jared looked at me. I saw him blush. I smiled at him. I looked around at Jake. He looked like an idiot right now. “Hey Jared I gotta show you something so awesome.” Vanessa told him. I know that she was going to try and comfort him some how to get what just happened out of his mind. “Jake that was just mean.” I told him. “Well I’m sorry.” He sighed. “Sometimes I forget he’s there.” He told me. “Well try to remember that he’s there before you try and make out with me.” I told him. “So does that mean you’re my girlfriend?” Jake asked me. “Well yes I guess that means you’re my boyfriend.” I told him.
Jake smirked. I looked into the fire. “Yes!” he said happily. “So where am I suppose to sleep?” I asked him. “Well either on the sofa or on the floor.” Jake said. “I’ll take the sofa.” I laughed. “Thank god we’re here at Hogwarts already.” Jake said happily. “Um yeah.” I said. AKWARD!
COMMENTS PLEASE!!!
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07-08-2010, 06:21 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohh good chapter
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07-08-2010, 06:22 PM
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| Erkling
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: lost in the mountain
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Periwinkle Evie Paeng Slytherin Fifth Year | Bre Bear | Asherine | Whisper | Kemmy | Raeney | Madyra | Bumble Bee Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Ohh good chapter  Thank you! Glad you liked it.
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07-08-2010, 06:25 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Your Welcome
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07-08-2010, 07:39 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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That was great. I will join in with the hug
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07-08-2010, 07:43 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
WOW! I read this and forgot to review for some dumb reason.
Anyhow!
OHMIGOSH! Isn't she Slytherin!?!?!? Haha.. We all love inter-house communicating anyways  Love the update! |
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07-08-2010, 08:23 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
wow there dating  Lets hope it doesn't stay awkward  great chapter  PAMS
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07-28-2010, 05:17 PM
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| Erkling
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: lost in the mountain
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Periwinkle Evie Paeng Slytherin Fifth Year | Bre Bear | Asherine | Whisper | Kemmy | Raeney | Madyra | Bumble Bee
Thank you everyone for your nice, loveley and awesome comments. I'm so very sorry that I haven't been updating like I said I was going to. I seem to be having writers block again. If any of you have any ideas or if you have anything that that you want to happen. Please tell me and the next chapter will be dedicated to you.
Thanks for reading this,
Bre
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08-16-2010, 04:34 AM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Your mother :3
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Ooo, I am now in love with this FF (and Jake  ) You may now tag me as new reader  I luv this Bre, it's great! (And btw, what does PAMS mean?)
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08-16-2010, 03:22 PM
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| Erkling
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: lost in the mountain
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Periwinkle Evie Paeng Slytherin Fifth Year | Bre Bear | Asherine | Whisper | Kemmy | Raeney | Madyra | Bumble Bee
[CENTER]  Disclaimer:The Harry Potter world belongs to J.K Rowling not me. Time to Say Goodbye
MuggleVampire
Chapter Seven: WTF
I fell asleep very fast that night but I was still o the sofa. Well at least it was very comfortable. But someone had woken me up and it was Travis. I rolled over and he made me fall off the sofa. I took the orange blanket I had around me. I was wear my cute purple PJ's. I looked at Travis. "What the hell is your problem?" I asked him but he just looked at me. I saw him sit in one of the chairs. Then I looked at the other comfy chair that Travis would normally sit in. It was Jake. What was he watching me sleep. Well I think that's kinda sweet seeing that Bella is out to get me and so is my sister. I hated that she was sorted into Gryffindor whe she should've been sorted into Slytherin. "You shouldn't be sleeping right now." he said. "Why is that?" I asked him. "Because it's ten in the mornin." he said. "What it's what?" Jake had said just waking up! Jake looked over at me. "Goodmorning Fall." he said sweetly. I got up and walked out of the Common Room and why was that, that was because I'm hungry. But Jake and Travis followed me very fast. I hurried down the stairs. I was already in the Great Hall and then Jake and Travis were too. The only reason I knew that they were here already was because Jake had wrapped his arms around me and scared me.
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08-16-2010, 03:25 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Good Post 
Interesting..hm late for class? 
PAMS!
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08-16-2010, 03:33 PM
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| Erkling
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: lost in the mountain
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Periwinkle Evie Paeng Slytherin Fifth Year | Bre Bear | Asherine | Whisper | Kemmy | Raeney | Madyra | Bumble Bee Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Good Post 
Interesting..hm late for class? 
PAMS! Thanks you so much. I need to start writing longer chapters.
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