This was good!!!!
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Ohhh a great chapter
Was very sweet
Awww Autumn and Jake
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Awwwwww, Jake is like... Breaking her heart! That's soooo terrible. I think I'm going to cry! Waaa.. Oh wow.. My eyes are watering up. His little brother is sooo annoying! love the new chapter, even though I'm almost crying! Haha, now I'm gonna laugh..

Thanks for the comments everyone. I enjoy reading them.

**I know poor Autumn getting her heart broken. I might post a new chapter tomorrow.**

You're very welcome, I love writing comments.
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oh thats so sad, poor Autumn PAMS

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Time to Say Goodbye
MuggleVampire
Chapter Four:

Jake and I haven’t talked to each other for a couple of days now. It’s just something stupid I swear. Well here we go. Jake’s mother got all of us a car from the Ministry. When I mean all of us I mean. Jake’s older brother Jason, his younger brother Jared. Also my sisters came along. My older sister Arianna and my younger sister Clarisse. I could feel Jake’s blue eyes staring me down, it was making me very uncomfortable. I just want to get on the stupid train now. I don’t know what to say to him when other people are near us like this. The black Ministry car stopped. I got out of the car. I put my orange backpack on my shoulder and I carried my trunk in one hand and my owl’s cage in another. The next this I knew I was on Platform 9 ¾ . Thank you god. I was here on the platform. I said goodbye to my older sister Arianna. Clarisse and Jared followed me onto the train. I walked into one of the compartments and Clarisse and Jared walked some place else. Jake walked in. I think I felt my heart sink.

Sorry about the short chapter. Comments please. Oh and check out Autumn and Jake's blog Autumn & Jake Fans

Nice little chapter.
Aww she's sadd
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nice post
aww poor Autumn

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Bwhahaha! You got a blog

Ooooh! I love the new chapter!

Nice chappie!!!!!!
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Thank you everyone for the lovely comments. The next chapter should be up very soon.

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edit: okay all my readers sorry I haven't posted a new chapter I've been very busy and I've been have writer block alot lately. So I would like to get some suggestions from all of you.

What would you like happen in the next chapter?
Do you want Autumn and Jake to make up?
Give me some ideas please.

Hey. Autumn and Jake have to make up, they can't be angry forever.
Friendship should have some bumps along the road but they havee to make up.

This story is amazing !!! PAMS

I say that Autumn and Jake should make up. And the should become a couple. I love Autumn and Jake. <3

I say they should make up, but add some twist to it. make it more exciting

Cant wait for more <33

I think I voted for Autumn (pretty sure I did lol)

I like Evie's idea, twists are fun

awsome writing

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Time to Say Goodbye
MuggleVampire
Chapter Five:The Long and Winding Ride

Chapter 5: The long and winding ride

I have no clue what to say to him. I wish I could say what I really feel but that won’t happen! I wonder if he’s thinking the same thing I’m thinking. Ugh why won’t my heart stop pounding. My heart needs to slow down a little bit. I looked out the window so I could avoid looking at Jake’s amazing dark blue eyes. I don’t know how long that will last. He’s so cute ugh. Fall stop thinking about your best friend like that.

Jake’s POV
I need to say something before she starts yelling at me. I looked at her. Wow she’s so beautiful. Her long curly red hair made her look amazing. I looked into her eyes as she looked away from me. Her bright blue eyes sparkled with emotion.
End of Jake’s POV

I looked at Jake. I finally caved in. It’s only been one minute and thirty seconds. But I just can’t help it, he’s my best friend and I’m in love with him. I can’t help it that I’m in love with him. He’s sweet, kind, caring. He’s also a great listener. He’s very loyal. That’s some of the reason why he’s my best friend. But there is a bad side to it. If you’re a girl and your Jake’s best friend and you have some guy friends and one of those guy friends are in love with you that’s when Jake gets mad, protective and jealous. I call them ‘The Big Three’ but I guess that’s for a good reason. I like it that Jake and I share an awesome secret together. Don’t tell anyone but we’re shape shifters. Jake is a big red wolf. Me I’m three different things. My Headmaster says that it’s rare to be a shape shifter that can shift into three different things. When I get mad I turn into this big black overgrown wolf. When I’m happy I turn into dark brown New Foundland dog. When I’m confused I turn into a big white polar bear. But I can change at anytime I want. I mostly turn into my dog form. You know so I don’t scare people. “Autumn.” Jake mumbled. Before I could answer I saw a girl with long straight pale blonde-white hair. Bella Malfoy! She just barged in without even knocking. “Hello Jacob Duke.” She said in a flirty tone. Great I was just about to talk to Jake to. “Bella get out now.” Jake told her. “Why?” she asked him. “Because I don’t want you in here right now.” He said. “FINE!” Bella yelled at him. With that she stormed right out of the compartment. “Autumn, I never meant to hurt you like that I’m so sorry it was the heat of the moment.” He told me. “I really truly meant that I never meant to hurt you. I just never meant to.” He said. “Please forgive me. Please.” He begged. “If you don’t then I’ll walk right out of here and I will never bug you again. I swear.” Jake said. I took in a deep breath. “Jake I forgive you.” I told him. “I can’t not have you in my life. You have to be in my life.” I told him. I had this big smile on my face. I bet I looked like an idiot. Jake got up and sat next to me. “Thank god.” He said. “Well you have to be in my life to and if your not in it or if you died then I would have to kill myself.” He said. I shook my head. “No please don’t kill yourself over me Jake.” I said. “Well that’s only if you leave me for good.” Jake said. A grin started to form on his face. “I love you Fall.” He said to me. Jake moved closer to me and kissed me passionately. I don’t remember breaking apart but I do remember Vanessa Campbell walking in on us kissing. “Aww you guys made up.” Nessa said happily. “Now your making out.” She laughed. Jake put his arm around me. “Yep but I wouldn’t call that making out.” He said to Nessa. “I would call that more of a make up kiss but I’ll show both of you making out when we get to Hogwarts.” He laughed. He kissed me once more. “Hey look we’re at Hogwarts.” He said. Vanessa, Jake and I rode up in the carriage and were together until I had to sit at the Slytherin table. After the long speech from the Headmaster I caught up with Jake, Vanessa, Jared and my sister Clarisse. Claire looked at me and stormed away. That was very normal for her. No one else noticed that she left. That was also normal. “Come on Fall.” Jake said. “Your staying in the Gryffindor common room with us tonight.” Nessa added. “Why?” I asked them. “Because you’re a true Gryffindor.” I heard Jared put in. Oh of course I am and that’s why I’m in Slytherin. “I…well…fine.” I told them. The three of them cheered. Now everyone was happy. I was glad. Well now I’m really glad that I’m in the Gryffindor Common Room now. Jake and I sat down the red sofa and Jared sat in one chair and Nessa in the other by the fireplace. “Oh I forgot to show you and Nessa.” Jake said. “Wait what?” Jared and I said at the same time. As soon and Jared and I said that Jake was kissing me. I meant really kissing me like non stop. At least he’s a great kisser. I had to pull away from him after what had to be ten minutes. “Okay thanks Jake.” I said my face getting red. “Wow.” Was the only thing Vanessa could say. I looked over at Jared and he looked heartbroken. That can make you feel like that when your older brother is making out with his best friend and the girl your in love with. I got up and walked over to Jared and kissed him on the cheek. “It’s okay.” I said reassuringly.


COMMENTS and I love NEW READER!!!

OHMIGOSH THAT WAS SOOOO LONG!

I love it! I'm sooo glad that they made up! I was almost bawling my eyes out with happiness, your da best! I looooooove the update! (I'm rather repetitive today)

It was really, really cool! But, poor Jared!

Well that was amazing !!! and cute. So are they together or just making out alot ?
Great post ! loved how long it was
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Kerri, I have a feeling that they are together and not just eating eachother's faces for no reason

Great long post!!!

WOW! that was a freakin' amazing. That was also a very long chapter. I can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the good work Bre! What does PAMS mean. Can anyone help me out.

Anna

that was really good you should write a book with same people but make up your own world it would awesome i still have to write my 29 chapter book for 2011 called year of darkness i need a new chapter if you have any ideas for the book

Oh yay, i LOVE updates! && Longg ones!
O_o they made up! *jumps and dances* Yess!
Can't wait to read what this is going
O_o the kiss....LOL!
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Could i make an suggestion? Not being rude, but it might help spliting up your writing a little, makes it easier to read. Again opinion