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Pottergrl101 07-07-2010 07:46 PM

BRE.

TIS IS FREAKING AMAZINGG! I'm in love,and I love the way you have Jared<3333

Awweee Jake and Autumn are soo cute<33

AlwaysDance 07-07-2010 09:00 PM

love it I'm so happy they made up and kissed hehe yeah
PAMS!

MuggleDinosaur 07-08-2010 05:21 PM

Here's the next chapter. It's very short. Sorry about that. I'm still having writers block. Any ideas for me?

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Time to Say Goodbye
MuggleVampire
Chapter Six: Gryffindor Common Room


Jared looked at me. I saw him blush. I smiled at him. I looked around at Jake. He looked like an idiot right now. “Hey Jared I gotta show you something so awesome.” Vanessa told him. I know that she was going to try and comfort him some how to get what just happened out of his mind. “Jake that was just mean.” I told him. “Well I’m sorry.” He sighed. “Sometimes I forget he’s there.” He told me. “Well try to remember that he’s there before you try and make out with me.” I told him. “So does that mean you’re my girlfriend?” Jake asked me. “Well yes I guess that means you’re my boyfriend.” I told him.

Jake smirked. I looked into the fire. “Yes!” he said happily. “So where am I suppose to sleep?” I asked him. “Well either on the sofa or on the floor.” Jake said. “I’ll take the sofa.” I laughed. “Thank god we’re here at Hogwarts already.” Jake said happily. “Um yeah.” I said. AKWARD!


COMMENTS PLEASE!!!

Ladybug 07-08-2010 06:21 PM

Ohh good chapter :D

MuggleDinosaur 07-08-2010 06:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9534434)
Ohh good chapter :D

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Ladybug 07-08-2010 06:25 PM

Your Welcome :glomp:

KatielovesHP 07-08-2010 07:39 PM

That was great. I will join in with the hug:glomp:

Cassiopia Malfoy 07-08-2010 07:43 PM

WOW! I read this and forgot to review for some dumb reason.

Anyhow!

OHMIGOSH! Isn't she Slytherin!?!?!? Haha.. We all love inter-house communicating anyways :xd: Love the update! :glomp:

Ron&Hermione(L) 07-08-2010 08:23 PM

wow there dating :D Lets hope it doesn't stay awkward :P great chapter :DPAMS

MuggleDinosaur 07-28-2010 05:17 PM

Thank you everyone for your nice, loveley and awesome comments. I'm so very sorry that I haven't been updating like I said I was going to. I seem to be having writers block again. If any of you have any ideas or if you have anything that that you want to happen. Please tell me and the next chapter will be dedicated to you.


Thanks for reading this,
Bre

Gryffindorgurl 08-16-2010 04:34 AM

Ooo, I am now in love with this FF (and Jake :P) You may now tag me as new reader :D I luv this Bre, it's great! (And btw, what does PAMS mean?)

MuggleDinosaur 08-16-2010 03:22 PM

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Time to Say Goodbye
MuggleVampire
Chapter Seven: WTF

I fell asleep very fast that night but I was still o the sofa. Well at least it was very comfortable. But someone had woken me up and it was Travis. I rolled over and he made me fall off the sofa. I took the orange blanket I had around me. I was wear my cute purple PJ's. I looked at Travis. "What the hell is your problem?" I asked him but he just looked at me. I saw him sit in one of the chairs. Then I looked at the other comfy chair that Travis would normally sit in. It was Jake. What was he watching me sleep. Well I think that's kinda sweet seeing that Bella is out to get me and so is my sister. I hated that she was sorted into Gryffindor whe she should've been sorted into Slytherin. "You shouldn't be sleeping right now." he said. "Why is that?" I asked him. "Because it's ten in the mornin." he said. "What it's what?" Jake had said just waking up! Jake looked over at me. "Goodmorning Fall." he said sweetly. I got up and walked out of the Common Room and why was that, that was because I'm hungry. But Jake and Travis followed me very fast. I hurried down the stairs. I was already in the Great Hall and then Jake and Travis were too. The only reason I knew that they were here already was because Jake had wrapped his arms around me and scared me.

Ladybug 08-16-2010 03:25 PM

Good Post :)
Interesting..hm late for class? :lol:
PAMS!

MuggleDinosaur 08-16-2010 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 (Post 9673906)
Good Post :)
Interesting..hm late for class? :lol:
PAMS!

Thanks you so much. I need to start writing longer chapters.


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