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Syd 01-11-2008 01:06 AM

The Worries of Little Lily Luna Potter - Sa9+
 
*This is my first one shot. I just came up with the idea, and I thought it was cute.
P.S. as you can probably tell from this and my fan fiction, I’m not that good with Thinking up titles :blushes:*


The Worries of Little Lily Luna Potter



“Lily, why in the world are you out of bed?” Ginny Potter asked her youngest daughter.

“I couldn’t sleep mummy, I’m scared.” Little Lily Potter told her mom.

“Why in the world would you be scared?” Harry asked his daughter. “Hogwarts isn’t scary.” He added.

“Daddy, yes it is, there’s scary teachers and homework and even bullies!” she exclaimed.

“Shhh, you’ll wake up your brothers.” Ginny whispered.

“To late.” James and Albus said together as they walked into the living room and sat down by their dad.

“I could hear her tossing and turning in her bed, I would be amazed if the Weasley’s are still asleep.

“Was I loud enough for the neighbors to hear??” asked Lily, blushing.

“No, I’m sure they are still asleep.” Harry said reassuringly.

“What are you doing up anyway, Lil?” Albus asked.

“She’s scared about going to Hogwarts tomorrow.” Ginny told him.

“Don’t worry Lils, its not scary.”

“Yeah, except the ghosts and centaurs and the lake and the Forbidden forest, and…”

“James! Don’t you dare try to scare your sister!” Harry ordered, trying not to laugh at his daughter’s terrified face.

“Really, it’s not that scary. Most of the people are nice, and unless you are in Slytherin, you make friends from all different houses, so it doesn’t matter.” Albus told her.

“Oh no! I didn’t think about the houses! What if the sorting hat doesn’t know what house I should be in? What if he tells me that I don’t belong in Hogwarts and I have to come back home? What if I’m the first person ever to leave after I just got there? Oh no!” Lily screamed.

“Ha, that reminds me, Snape almost kicked out Ron and I out on the first day of our second year…” Harry remembered thoughtfully. James got a crazy look in his eyes.

“But that’s a different story.” Harry corrected hurriedly. James looked crestfallen.

“Listen, Lily, you just go up to bed, and tomorrow we will take you to King’s Cross, and You will get on the train with your brothers and Have a great time at Hogwarts.” Harry told his daughter.

“While writing us once a month.” Ginny added. Lily looked up, got up from her dad’s lap (where she was sitting,) gave him and her mom a hug, and hurried up to bed.

“Goodnight Lil.” Ginny called afer her.

“Good night!” Harry repeated.

“Night, love you guys!” Lily screamed as she tucked herself in.

*I know it wasn’t the best, but tell me how you guys like it please
~Sydnie :harry3: *

D/hr4evr 01-12-2008 02:06 PM

Aww.. That was nice. I love FFs that talk about the next generation! Too bad it was a one shot.

Lilly xXx

Syd 01-12-2008 05:04 PM

Thank you! Im glad someone liked it!

Beth2310 01-12-2008 10:43 PM

this is a great story keep it up!!

Syd 01-13-2008 09:47 PM

oh, sorry beth, this was a on eshot, was it really that good? wow. thank you guys for reading!

Waddles 01-13-2008 10:28 PM

ooh, it's intriguing. i like...

Jojojojosey (Josey)

Little Trooper 01-14-2008 06:16 AM

That was a great one shot. i loved it. i love your writing its so good.

Abbie0312 01-14-2008 05:10 PM

That was really sweet! :)

Syd 01-15-2008 12:24 AM

Thank you guys for commenting, i appreciate it alot, and Thanks Little Trooper, for reading my ff too! :D

Faith Summers 01-15-2008 07:17 PM

yeh it was a good one shot:)

Tonks+Lupin=Teddy 01-18-2008 12:00 PM

Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chelliephone 01-18-2008 05:42 PM

great, just to bad it was a one shot.

OtterySt.Catchpole 01-20-2008 01:44 AM

I ♥ Lily *Glomps* and Albus too cuz he's cute. *glomps Albus too*
 
So the title was bugging me for a while now ... and curiosity got the better of me and I had to come read it. :lol: I really liked it, I thought it was very cute. I liked how you wrote the character of Lily Luna Potter ... :yes: you should write more one-shots of her. :yes:

Syd 01-21-2008 03:30 PM

Thank you all for reading! I'm thinking about doing another one shot about the second generation, i need an idea tho, i cant think of one. ~Sydnie :harry3:

Mrs_Molly_Weasley 02-06-2008 01:07 AM

O I like this 1! Keep writing I want to see what happens when Lily goes to Hogwarts!Great job

-<3Molly

voldemort&88 02-06-2008 09:32 PM

New reader i like this !

Syd 02-16-2008 03:03 AM

Thanks guys, Im thinking about doing a james potter (harry's son). do you think that i should? any ideas?

voldemort&88 03-21-2008 01:08 AM

That sounds great:woot:
Are you going to do it from his point of view??????

Ginnie Weasley 03-21-2008 12:31 PM

Sydnie,I think u know me..I from ur other ff:That's Me; Ginny Weasley?

Um...pity it was a one shot...But it's a good one!Would u PLEASE consider continuing it please?*makes puppy eyes*

Yvonne

Night_Owl 03-24-2008 12:31 AM

pretty good.

purple·myst 03-30-2008 04:44 PM

This one is really good too Sydnie, as are all of your ff's. it's to bad it's a one shot though :(
<3Jenn


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