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Fortune_Cookie 06-30-2006 11:19 PM

The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Traitor – Sa9+
 
Sirius is a key character in the Harry Potter series. This trilogy of one-shot fics tells of three important events that happened in his life from his point of view. We are opened up to Sirius' mind, entering his thoughts and dreams. Sit back and enjoy!

The Sirius Black Fan Club was the thing that started the gears in my brain for writing this trilogy, so I'd like to dedicate this series to all my fellow SBFC members on SnitchSeeker! You guys rock. :loved:

The doorbell rings. I am filled with mixed feelings: a part of me is glad because my favorite cousin is here, yet another part is dreading the arrival of another portion of my terrible family. Sighing and tucking my wand into my pants (who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?) I trudge downstairs to greet them: the normal custom.

Regulus is already downstairs, helping them with their bags and things. He smirks at me smugly, happy that he is getting all the positive attention. Of course, he’s always been the family favorite.

“Hey Aunt and Uncle, Bellatrix, Narcissa, Andromeda,” I say. The last name is accompanied with a grin. Andromeda is my favorite cousin. Unlike the rest of our family, we don’t believe in purebloods running the wizarding world.

The rest of them just give me a withering glance before heading off towards the drawing room. I can hear mother’s loud voice acknowledging them as they enter her sight. Seriously, Narcissa reminds me of a grumpy Barbie doll (I know what Barbies are like, thanks to Lily) and Bellatrix reminds me of a grumpy Barbie doll…with black hair.

“Ignore them,” Andromeda whispers to me with a roll of her eyes. Then she wraps her arms around me. “How are you, Sirius?” Giggling, she ruffles my black hair.

Giving her a lopsided grin, I shrug. “Could be better. How are you doing?” It’s my turn to ruffle her reddish-blonde hair, but she pulls away with a playful shriek.

“Gosh, Sirius, don’t ruin my hair!” she smoothes it back in place carefully.

I just laugh at her. It’s so fun to watch her freak every time I try to mess up her hair. Whatever. It figures; she’s a girl.

When I stop laughing, I beckon her towards me. In a whisper, I say to her, “I need to tell you something.”

With a curious look on her face, she nods. “Okay, what is it?” She leans her ear towards me.

Glancing around the room, over my shoulder, I make sure that no one in the Black family is listening. Seeing Kreacher in his stupid loincloth hovering not far away, I grab her wrist and lead her up the stairs into my bedroom.

I shut the door quietly and move over to a large duffle bag on the floor. She sees it and cocks her head, but says nothing.

“I’m running away. I’ve decided that I’ve had enough of this idiotic family.” I know it sounds rash, even to my own ears now that I’ve said it aloud, but I can’t back out on it now.

Andromeda gapes at me. Her eyes flit from the bulging duffle bag to my face. “You’re not serious, Sirius.” Then she sees the set and determined look on my face and sighs. “Where are you going to run away to?”

“James’ house,” I state matter-of-factly. “They’re nice folks and they’ll let me stay with them.” As confident as my voice sounds, there’s a shadow of a doubt in my mind, but I quickly brush it away.

Being the oh-so-sensible one, Andromeda doesn’t look convinced. “You know, Sirius, our family is not going to be happy with this. I mean, are you just going to pack your bags and run?”

I nod, feeling a bit childish and foolish. “And who cares if they’re not going to be happy? They’ll probably be happy! What have I ever done that has made them proud of me? Nothing.” Bitterness edges my voice.

“True,” Andromeda concludes with an evil grin. I throw a stray pillow on the floor at her, but she catches it and throws it behind her. “You know, I have to tell you something too.”

Glad that the attention is off me, I listen to her intently.

“I…I met this Muggle boy, and he’s really nice…” she starts.

“Oh ho!” I cry amusingly. “And is he as good-looking as me?” I snigger.

This time, she grabs the pillow and hucks it at my head. (Which, I must add, I easily dodge. She’s such a wimpy thrower.)

With a good-humored scowl, she retorts, “He’s way better looking than you, Sirius.” Ignoring my protests, she continues. “And it seems like it’s getting pretty serious. Not that I mind or anything.” She blushes furiously.

“Your family doesn’t know, right?” I ask suspiciously.

She shakes her head. “No, of course not! But I was thinking…what if we get married and.—“

“Is that all you girls talk about, boys and marriage?” I wail, which earns me another pillow in the head. (I dodge this one too, however.)

Despite my jibes, she laughs. “As I was saying—“

“Okay,” I interrupt for the second time. “If you do get married,” I roll my eyes at this, “Then you’ll be a disgrace to your family as well, just like me!”

Andromeda snorts. “And we can be disgraces together?”

“Oh yeah,” I agree, giving her a high-five.

“This is ridiculous,” she moans with a grin.

Chortling, I add, “We’ll probably get our names burnt off the Black family tree as well.”

Suddenly, Andromeda looks sad and her voice drops. “I don’t really want to be a disgrace to the family, Sirius.”

Slinging my duffle bag over my shoulder with my broom in hand, I walk over to her and give her a sideways hug. “It’s your decision, cousin. Whether you go off with this Muggle—what’s his name, anyways?”

“Ted Tonks.”

I give a little chuckle (ha ha, his name sounds so…Muggle-ish!) and I carry on. “Even if you don’t elope with him, I will. I mean, I won’t elope with him,--another chortle--but I’ll end up as a shame to the Black family name. I just think it’ll be fun to do it together, but it’s your choice.”

With a hint of a tear in her eye, Andromeda nods and hugs me. “Are you going now?” she asks softly.

“Yes. I just passed my apparation test already, so no need to walk.” I grin proudly, letting her know that it’s alright.

Kreacher pounds on my bedroom door. “I know you filth are planning something in there,” he squeals.

That’s the when I decide it’s now or never. “Invite me to your wedding,” I tell her before I disapparate with a crack.

*


I’m whizzing and whizzing through the air. It’s so weird apparating. However, I suppose I’ll get used to it one of these days.

I land with a crack in front of the Potter’s gate. It’s a very nice house, with large windows and a very green garden. Opening the gate with a creak, I realize that there’s no turning back now.

Striding up to the front door, I knock three times. Knocking is way more manly than ringing a doorbell. James opens the door and seeing me, a look of utmost surprise crosses his face. Grinning from ear to ear, he lets me in. “Hey mate!”

“Hey.” I step into the house, breathing in the scent of hardwood. For a moment, I think about Grimmauld Place, and of my name being singed off the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. This thought makes me laugh, thinking about my father blasting off my name. I hope it stinks up the whole house.


fin


EDIT: The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Escape, the second part to this trilogy, is up! *claps*
EDIT 2: The third and final part is up--The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Ending

Lissydove 07-01-2006 02:14 AM

*squees*

This is awesome Cookie! :woot: Thank you so much!

Am running off to tell the club... :run: Will return...

Granger1814 07-01-2006 02:28 AM

*bounces around excitedly* Thanks Lissy for making the announcement! *hugs*

That was fantastic Cookie! I loved the whole Barbie reference. :rotfl:

Very nice job with the emotions and I enjoyed the banter between Sirius and Andromeda. So sweet! :glomp:

I look forward to the second part of the trilogy!

BrightestWitch 07-01-2006 03:06 AM

That was uber fantastic Cookie! :yes: :glomp: I just got into reading fan fics and I don't usually read fan fics but this one along with one other one that has just started I will for sure read.

So talented our Cookie is. :yes: :loved: I especially like the "who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?" :rotfl: :lol:

Can't wait for more!!! *waits patiently for more hot I mean Sirius FF. :shifty:

griffin_girl 07-01-2006 03:18 AM

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“I…I met this Muggle boy, and he’s really nice…” she starts.

“Oh ho!” I cry amusingly. “And is he as good-looking as me?” I snigger.



pfft..ppffftt...hahahahaha:D

Quote:

“Okay,” I interrupt for the second time. “If you do get married,” I roll my eyes at this, “Then you’ll be a disgrace to your family as well, just like me!”

Andromeda snorts. “And we can be disgraces together?”

“Oh yeah,” I agree, giving her a high-five.

“This is ridiculous,” she moans with a grin.

Chortling, I add, “We’ll probably get our names burnt off the Black family tree as well.”
:lol:

Quote:

For a moment, I think about Grimmauld Place, and of my name being singed off the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. This thought makes me laugh, thinking about my father blasting off my name. I hope it stinks up the whole house.

:lmao::rotfl:

thats so funny!!! great story!!!!

Fortune_Cookie 07-01-2006 04:08 AM

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Originally Posted by Lissydove
*squees*

This is awesome Cookie! :woot: Thank you so much!

Am running off to tell the club... :run: Will return...

:D Thanks so much, Lissy! :glomp:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Granger1814
*bounces around excitedly* Thanks Lissy for making the announcement! *hugs*

That was fantastic Cookie! I loved the whole Barbie reference. :rotfl:

Very nice job with the emotions and I enjoyed the banter between Sirius and Andromeda. So sweet! :glomp:

I look forward to the second part of the trilogy!

:lol: Thanks, Sabs! *huggles* Heh heh...I just had to add Andromeda in there...

Quote:

Originally Posted by BrightestWitch
That was uber fantastic Cookie! :yes: :glomp: I just got into reading fan fics and I don't usually read fan fics but this one along with one other one that has just started I will for sure read.

So talented our Cookie is. :yes: :loved: I especially like the "who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?" :rotfl: :lol:

Can't wait for more!!! *waits patiently for more hot I mean Sirius FF. :shifty:

:woot: That's great that I pulled you into this fan fiction craze. :P

Heh heh...thankies! ^_^

Quote:

Originally Posted by griffin_girl


pfft..ppffftt...hahahahaha:D



:lol:



:lmao::rotfl:

thats so funny!!! great story!!!!

:rotfl: Thank you! :)

ahshlyn 07-01-2006 04:30 AM

Quote:

I give a little chuckle (ha ha, his name sounds so…Muggle-ish!) and I carry on. “Even if you don’t elope with him, I will. I mean, I won’t elope with him,--another chortle--but I’ll end up as a shame to the Black family name. I just think it’ll be fun to do it together, but it’s your choice.”
I giggled at that. I love it!! Awww. Poor Andromeda. Now, I wonder if She ever got married before Sirius was off to Azkaban. JK!! I've got a question!! *giggles* This is another fantastic story from the fantastic Cookie!! *bows to your awesomeness*

Egyptian_Blue 07-01-2006 04:49 PM

Cookie, I love it! It's funny, not to mention it's dedictaed to the SBFC. Keep on writting! I am so subscribing to this thread.

~Alanna

Freya 07-01-2006 07:09 PM

Cookie what a wonderful job. Nicely thought out and well written.

Fortune_Cookie 07-01-2006 08:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypottersummer
I giggled at that. I love it!! Awww. Poor Andromeda. Now, I wonder if She ever got married before Sirius was off to Azkaban. JK!! I've got a question!! *giggles* This is another fantastic story from the fantastic Cookie!! *bows to your awesomeness*

:lol: Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Egyptian_Blue
Cookie, I love it! It's funny, not to mention it's dedictaed to the SBFC. Keep on writting! I am so subscribing to this thread.

~Alanna

Woot! Glad it was funny. ;) I'm not very good in the whole comedy area, so...:P Thankies!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Freya
Cookie what a wonderful job. Nicely thought out and well written.

Thanks for reading! ;)

LadyNerd 07-01-2006 09:10 PM

OMSJL!!!! Cookie!!!!! This is absolutely brilliant!!!! Oh your style of writing....wow!! I have heard others brag on you and wondered how you wrote but this is just beyond....wow!!!

*blows kiss* You are a true talent and I certainly cannot wait for more!! *subscribes to the thread*

Maxilocks 07-02-2006 08:39 AM

*pounces*

You've another fic and you didn't let me know. :( Back off everyone - I stalk. :P

OMSJL, this is amazing, Cookie. I should have been here sooner. Bad me. :head: I luff it so very much. :yes: It's amazing. I'll post a longer reply later on, I've got so much to do right now. *headwall* I just want to let you know that it's T-E-R-R-I-F-I-C.

Maxie

HPlover_09 07-02-2006 07:03 PM

I love this fanfic! It is soooooo awesome! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fortune_Cookie 07-02-2006 07:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadyNRd73
OMSJL!!!! Cookie!!!!! This is absolutely brilliant!!!! Oh your style of writing....wow!! I have heard others brag on you and wondered how you wrote but this is just beyond....wow!!!

*blows kiss* You are a true talent and I certainly cannot wait for more!! *subscribes to the thread*

:blush: Thanks, Stacey! :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie
*pounces*

You've another fic and you didn't let me know. :( Back off everyone - I stalk. :P

OMSJL, this is amazing, Cookie. I should have been here sooner. Bad me. :head: I luff it so very much. :yes: It's amazing. I'll post a longer reply later on, I've got so much to do right now. *headwall* I just want to let you know that it's T-E-R-R-I-F-I-C.

Maxie

:lol: Well, your best bet to find out if I've written any more stories is to check the site *points to siggy* which I know you have visited already. ;)

Heh heh..thanks! :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by HPlover_09
I love this fanfic! It is soooooo awesome! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks. :) Well, this is a one-shot trilogy, so for the next two parts of this series I'll be putting up new threads. ;)

HPlover_09 07-02-2006 07:30 PM

Oh! I thought you were going to post the other two parts on this thread............what are the others going to be called?

Sirius_Padfoot 07-02-2006 08:36 PM

new reader, I love your story! Please post more soon!

Padie 07-02-2006 08:43 PM

It's AMAZING!!!! I absolutely love it ^_^
Quote:

“You’re not serious, Sirius.”
LMAO XD

Fortune_Cookie 07-02-2006 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HPlover_09
Oh! I thought you were going to post the other two parts on this thread............what are the others going to be called?

Now that...is a surprise. ;)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sirius_Padfoot
new reader, I love your story! Please post more soon!

Well, this first one-shot is over. There are two ore parts of this trilogy, but they'll be different threads. I'll be sure to put up the links to them when they're up, though. :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by HermionePotter89
It's AMAZING!!!! I absolutely love it ^_^

LMAO XD

:lol: Thanks!

HPlover_09 07-05-2006 11:22 PM

I want to read the next two parts! Post them soon please!

Siriana Red 07-11-2006 11:33 AM

That's so awesome Cookie :jump:
You're soooooo talented and thanks for having us as inspiration. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!

*runs to read the second part*

loyal_seeker 07-19-2006 07:16 PM

Oh, Wow!!!!!!! This Is Awesome!!!

Fortune_Cookie 07-20-2006 09:06 AM

Quote:

I want to read the next two parts! Post them soon please!
The second part is up, as you know. ;) I'll post the link for the third one once I submit it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Siriana Red
That's so awesome Cookie :jump:
You're soooooo talented and thanks for having us as inspiration. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!

*runs to read the second part*

:lol: Thanks! Of course I had to dedicate it to y'all. ;)

Quote:

Oh, Wow!!!!!!! This Is Awesome!!!
Why, thank you. ;)


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