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06-30-2006, 11:19 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Traitor – Sa9+
Sirius is a key character in the Harry Potter series. This trilogy of one-shot fics tells of three important events that happened in his life from his point of view. We are opened up to Sirius' mind, entering his thoughts and dreams. Sit back and enjoy!
The Sirius Black Fan Club was the thing that started the gears in my brain for writing this trilogy, so I'd like to dedicate this series to all my fellow SBFC members on SnitchSeeker! You guys rock. The doorbell rings. I am filled with mixed feelings: a part of me is glad because my favorite cousin is here, yet another part is dreading the arrival of another portion of my terrible family. Sighing and tucking my wand into my pants (who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?) I trudge downstairs to greet them: the normal custom.
Regulus is already downstairs, helping them with their bags and things. He smirks at me smugly, happy that he is getting all the positive attention. Of course, he’s always been the family favorite.
“Hey Aunt and Uncle, Bellatrix, Narcissa, Andromeda,” I say. The last name is accompanied with a grin. Andromeda is my favorite cousin. Unlike the rest of our family, we don’t believe in purebloods running the wizarding world.
The rest of them just give me a withering glance before heading off towards the drawing room. I can hear mother’s loud voice acknowledging them as they enter her sight. Seriously, Narcissa reminds me of a grumpy Barbie doll (I know what Barbies are like, thanks to Lily) and Bellatrix reminds me of a grumpy Barbie doll…with black hair.
“Ignore them,” Andromeda whispers to me with a roll of her eyes. Then she wraps her arms around me. “How are you, Sirius?” Giggling, she ruffles my black hair.
Giving her a lopsided grin, I shrug. “Could be better. How are you doing?” It’s my turn to ruffle her reddish-blonde hair, but she pulls away with a playful shriek.
“Gosh, Sirius, don’t ruin my hair!” she smoothes it back in place carefully.
I just laugh at her. It’s so fun to watch her freak every time I try to mess up her hair. Whatever. It figures; she’s a girl.
When I stop laughing, I beckon her towards me. In a whisper, I say to her, “I need to tell you something.”
With a curious look on her face, she nods. “Okay, what is it?” She leans her ear towards me.
Glancing around the room, over my shoulder, I make sure that no one in the Black family is listening. Seeing Kreacher in his stupid loincloth hovering not far away, I grab her wrist and lead her up the stairs into my bedroom.
I shut the door quietly and move over to a large duffle bag on the floor. She sees it and cocks her head, but says nothing.
“I’m running away. I’ve decided that I’ve had enough of this idiotic family.” I know it sounds rash, even to my own ears now that I’ve said it aloud, but I can’t back out on it now.
Andromeda gapes at me. Her eyes flit from the bulging duffle bag to my face. “You’re not serious, Sirius.” Then she sees the set and determined look on my face and sighs. “Where are you going to run away to?”
“James’ house,” I state matter-of-factly. “They’re nice folks and they’ll let me stay with them.” As confident as my voice sounds, there’s a shadow of a doubt in my mind, but I quickly brush it away.
Being the oh-so-sensible one, Andromeda doesn’t look convinced. “You know, Sirius, our family is not going to be happy with this. I mean, are you just going to pack your bags and run?”
I nod, feeling a bit childish and foolish. “And who cares if they’re not going to be happy? They’ll probably be happy! What have I ever done that has made them proud of me? Nothing.” Bitterness edges my voice.
“True,” Andromeda concludes with an evil grin. I throw a stray pillow on the floor at her, but she catches it and throws it behind her. “You know, I have to tell you something too.”
Glad that the attention is off me, I listen to her intently.
“I…I met this Muggle boy, and he’s really nice…” she starts.
“Oh ho!” I cry amusingly. “And is he as good-looking as me?” I snigger.
This time, she grabs the pillow and hucks it at my head. (Which, I must add, I easily dodge. She’s such a wimpy thrower.)
With a good-humored scowl, she retorts, “He’s way better looking than you, Sirius.” Ignoring my protests, she continues. “And it seems like it’s getting pretty serious. Not that I mind or anything.” She blushes furiously.
“Your family doesn’t know, right?” I ask suspiciously.
She shakes her head. “No, of course not! But I was thinking…what if we get married and.—“
“Is that all you girls talk about, boys and marriage?” I wail, which earns me another pillow in the head. (I dodge this one too, however.)
Despite my jibes, she laughs. “As I was saying—“
“Okay,” I interrupt for the second time. “If you do get married,” I roll my eyes at this, “Then you’ll be a disgrace to your family as well, just like me!”
Andromeda snorts. “And we can be disgraces together?”
“Oh yeah,” I agree, giving her a high-five.
“This is ridiculous,” she moans with a grin.
Chortling, I add, “We’ll probably get our names burnt off the Black family tree as well.”
Suddenly, Andromeda looks sad and her voice drops. “I don’t really want to be a disgrace to the family, Sirius.”
Slinging my duffle bag over my shoulder with my broom in hand, I walk over to her and give her a sideways hug. “It’s your decision, cousin. Whether you go off with this Muggle—what’s his name, anyways?”
“Ted Tonks.”
I give a little chuckle (ha ha, his name sounds so…Muggle-ish!) and I carry on. “Even if you don’t elope with him, I will. I mean, I won’t elope with him,--another chortle--but I’ll end up as a shame to the Black family name. I just think it’ll be fun to do it together, but it’s your choice.”
With a hint of a tear in her eye, Andromeda nods and hugs me. “Are you going now?” she asks softly.
“Yes. I just passed my apparation test already, so no need to walk.” I grin proudly, letting her know that it’s alright.
Kreacher pounds on my bedroom door. “I know you filth are planning something in there,” he squeals.
That’s the when I decide it’s now or never. “Invite me to your wedding,” I tell her before I disapparate with a crack. *
I’m whizzing and whizzing through the air. It’s so weird apparating. However, I suppose I’ll get used to it one of these days.
I land with a crack in front of the Potter’s gate. It’s a very nice house, with large windows and a very green garden. Opening the gate with a creak, I realize that there’s no turning back now.
Striding up to the front door, I knock three times. Knocking is way more manly than ringing a doorbell. James opens the door and seeing me, a look of utmost surprise crosses his face. Grinning from ear to ear, he lets me in. “Hey mate!”
“Hey.” I step into the house, breathing in the scent of hardwood. For a moment, I think about Grimmauld Place, and of my name being singed off the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. This thought makes me laugh, thinking about my father blasting off my name. I hope it stinks up the whole house. fin EDIT: The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Escape, the second part to this trilogy, is up! *claps* EDIT 2: The third and final part is up-- The Sirius Trilogy: The Black Ending
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie!
Last edited by Fortune_Cookie; 08-04-2006 at 02:07 AM.
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07-01-2006, 02:14 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: CrazyTown
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil
*squees*
This is awesome Cookie!  Thank you so much!
Am running off to tell the club...  Will return...
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07-01-2006, 02:28 AM
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| Manticore
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Stalkers United Club
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Brett Carlen Flourish and Blotts Shopkeeper | Potter Nurse || Hockey obsession <3 | Go Wings! || Geaux Tigers!
*bounces around excitedly* Thanks Lissy for making the announcement! *hugs*
That was fantastic Cookie! I loved the whole Barbie reference.
Very nice job with the emotions and I enjoyed the banter between Sirius and Andromeda. So sweet!
I look forward to the second part of the trilogy!
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07-01-2006, 03:06 AM
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| Erumpent
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The Golden Coast
Posts: 33,761
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bueller B. Betsworth Fifth Year | Jor!Jor! Queen Hermidana
That was uber fantastic Cookie!  I just got into reading fan fics and I don't usually read fan fics but this one along with one other one that has just started I will for sure read.
So talented our Cookie is.  I especially like the "who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?"
Can't wait for more!!! *waits patiently for more hot I mean Sirius FF. |
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07-01-2006, 03:18 AM
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| Veela
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In a fairytale
Posts: 37,061
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jillian McGuffin Sixth Year | Gryffindor Goddess Quote: “I…I met this Muggle boy, and he’s really nice…” she starts.
“Oh ho!” I cry amusingly. “And is he as good-looking as me?” I snigger. pfft..ppffftt...hahahahaha Quote:
“Okay,” I interrupt for the second time. “If you do get married,” I roll my eyes at this, “Then you’ll be a disgrace to your family as well, just like me!”
Andromeda snorts. “And we can be disgraces together?”
“Oh yeah,” I agree, giving her a high-five.
“This is ridiculous,” she moans with a grin.
Chortling, I add, “We’ll probably get our names burnt off the Black family tree as well.”
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For a moment, I think about Grimmauld Place, and of my name being singed off the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. This thought makes me laugh, thinking about my father blasting off my name. I hope it stinks up the whole house.  
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07-01-2006, 04:08 AM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
Originally Posted by Lissydove *squees*
This is awesome Cookie!  Thank you so much!
Am running off to tell the club...  Will return...  Thanks so much, Lissy! Quote:
Originally Posted by Granger1814 *bounces around excitedly* Thanks Lissy for making the announcement! *hugs*
That was fantastic Cookie! I loved the whole Barbie reference.
Very nice job with the emotions and I enjoyed the banter between Sirius and Andromeda. So sweet!
I look forward to the second part of the trilogy!  Thanks, Sabs! *huggles* Heh heh...I just had to add Andromeda in there... Quote:
Originally Posted by BrightestWitch That was uber fantastic Cookie!  I just got into reading fan fics and I don't usually read fan fics but this one along with one other one that has just started I will for sure read.
So talented our Cookie is.  I especially like the "who cares if I set my buttocks on fire?"
Can't wait for more!!! *waits patiently for more hot I mean Sirius FF.   That's great that I pulled you into this fan fiction craze.
Heh heh...thankies!  Thank you!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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07-01-2006, 04:30 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun  Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maisie Travers Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr! Quote:
I give a little chuckle (ha ha, his name sounds so…Muggle-ish!) and I carry on. “Even if you don’t elope with him, I will. I mean, I won’t elope with him,--another chortle--but I’ll end up as a shame to the Black family name. I just think it’ll be fun to do it together, but it’s your choice.”
I giggled at that. I love it!! Awww. Poor Andromeda. Now, I wonder if She ever got married before Sirius was off to Azkaban. JK!! I've got a question!! *giggles* This is another fantastic story from the fantastic Cookie!! *bows to your awesomeness*
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07-01-2006, 04:49 PM
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| Chizpurfle
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 10,113
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sinead Murphy First Year x1
| Feathery Thingywhatsit | BookSnake Cookie, I love it! It's funny, not to mention it's dedictaed to the SBFC. Keep on writting! I am so subscribing to this thread.
~Alanna |
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07-01-2006, 07:09 PM
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| Fairy
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: midnight sun
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| Kitchen Seers/ICU James’ Girl/Sirius's too
Cookie what a wonderful job. Nicely thought out and well written.
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07-01-2006, 08:27 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
Originally Posted by harrypottersummer I giggled at that. I love it!! Awww. Poor Andromeda. Now, I wonder if She ever got married before Sirius was off to Azkaban. JK!! I've got a question!! *giggles* This is another fantastic story from the fantastic Cookie!! *bows to your awesomeness*  Thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by Egyptian_Blue Cookie, I love it! It's funny, not to mention it's dedictaed to the SBFC. Keep on writting! I am so subscribing to this thread.
~Alanna Woot! Glad it was funny.  I'm not very good in the whole comedy area, so...  Thankies! Quote:
Originally Posted by Freya Cookie what a wonderful job. Nicely thought out and well written. Thanks for reading!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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07-01-2006, 09:10 PM
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| Formerly: Rookins   Shrake
Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Texas
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cassiopeia "Cassi" Nero First Year
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OMSJL!!!! Cookie!!!!! This is absolutely brilliant!!!! Oh your style of writing....wow!! I have heard others brag on you and wondered how you wrote but this is just beyond....wow!!!
*blows kiss* You are a true talent and I certainly cannot wait for more!! *subscribes to the thread*
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07-02-2006, 08:39 AM
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|  SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] *pounces*
You've another fic and you didn't let me know. Back off everyone - I stalk.
OMSJL, this is amazing, Cookie. I should have been here sooner. Bad me. I luff it so very much. It's amazing. I'll post a longer reply later on, I've got so much to do right now. *headwall* I just want to let you know that it's T-E-R-R-I-F-I-C.
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07-02-2006, 07:03 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second |
I love this fanfic! It is soooooo awesome! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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07-02-2006, 07:26 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
Originally Posted by LadyNRd73 OMSJL!!!! Cookie!!!!! This is absolutely brilliant!!!! Oh your style of writing....wow!! I have heard others brag on you and wondered how you wrote but this is just beyond....wow!!!
*blows kiss* You are a true talent and I certainly cannot wait for more!! *subscribes to the thread*  Thanks, Stacey!  Well, your best bet to find out if I've written any more stories is to check the site *points to siggy* which I know you have visited already.
Heh heh..thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by HPlover_09 I love this fanfic! It is soooooo awesome! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks.  Well, this is a one-shot trilogy, so for the next two parts of this series I'll be putting up new threads.
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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07-02-2006, 07:30 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second |
Oh! I thought you were going to post the other two parts on this thread............what are the others going to be called?
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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07-02-2006, 08:36 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Port Angeles, WA
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new reader, I love your story! Please post more soon!
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07-02-2006, 08:43 PM
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| Romanian Longhorn
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Neverland
Posts: 39,693
Hogwarts RPG Name: Margaret Jacqueline Atkinson Morris Fifth Year | Potter’s Princess A+ FangGirl
It's AMAZING!!!! I absolutely love it Quote: “You’re not serious, Sirius.” LMAO XD
__________________ I gotta go back to the muggle world,
they're gonna try and tell me this wasn't, that none of this happened,
but you know what? It was real. It did happen.
We spent time here. We made friends here. That's a part of us.
Cause Hogwarts is bigger than any of us, of any of it's founders,
and it's going to be around long after we're gone.
Maybe we'll see our kids come here one day.
That's the thing about Hogwarts.
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07-02-2006, 09:50 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
Originally Posted by HPlover_09 Oh! I thought you were going to post the other two parts on this thread............what are the others going to be called? Now that...is a surprise. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sirius_Padfoot new reader, I love your story! Please post more soon! Well, this first one-shot is over. There are two ore parts of this trilogy, but they'll be different threads. I'll be sure to put up the links to them when they're up, though. Quote:
Originally Posted by HermionePotter89 It's AMAZING!!!! I absolutely love it
LMAO XD  Thanks!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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07-05-2006, 11:22 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second |
I want to read the next two parts! Post them soon please!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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07-11-2006, 11:33 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: With Lydia and Hubby
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Siriana Red | Prongs’ Smoocher
That's so awesome Cookie 
You're soooooo talented and thanks for having us as inspiration. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!
*runs to read the second part*
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07-19-2006, 07:16 PM
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| Dugbog
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Oh, Wow!!!!!!! This Is Awesome!!!
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What if there Had Been No Dursleys? - Sa13+
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07-20-2006, 09:06 AM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
I want to read the next two parts! Post them soon please!
The second part is up, as you know.  I'll post the link for the third one once I submit it. Quote:
Originally Posted by Siriana Red That's so awesome Cookie 
You're soooooo talented and thanks for having us as inspiration. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!
*runs to read the second part*  Thanks! Of course I had to dedicate it to y'all. Quote:
Oh, Wow!!!!!!! This Is Awesome!!!
Why, thank you.
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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