Sound awesome, don't they? =D
-hug- I love my Chloererz more'er. The updates will....come. xDD



EDIT :: Page two! Aww, this is sweet. -hugsy'all-

Wow, the new one was a tearjerker, sweety you know how much i love my sevvie poo <3 It was beautifully written, PAMS!! *goes to read it again*

Aww, I'm glad to know you liked it, Sugah. I love our Severus so much, J. K. ought to write more about him. He is.... too awesome for words. <3

Have fun re-reading. -sad huggg'age-

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Originally Posted by Maxo

Passion.

I luv the start.

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Long ago, passion was suffering.

My suffering.

You just gave me shivers. -shivers-

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As desire, passion consumes.
– As suffering, it kills continuously.

Oh my. =[

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The last thing I saw was Lily’s eyes.

This was.......... just too beautiful! I luved it, I love how you wrote Severus, I love how we don't know how the story is about, at the beginning. It was so short, but it conveyed everything so realistically. So beautifully.

PAMS!

~~Jay~~

Thanks, hun. ^^
Whoa, thanks a heap, luff. I'm glad to know I could do him some justice. He's been such an awesome character, and the least I can do to show my SeverusLove is write a ficlet. -hugsh my Sheverush-

More as soon as I get some inspiration. ^^

Hi Maxie! New Reader!
HOW do you write like that??? It is amazing. You are amazing. I love how deep you get with the characters! Oh, and I loved Lucius and the boxers. So funny! And of course, Sirius being serious! Completely and totally awesome! I am loving these oh so much! Please post lots more soon! I can't wait!

lovelovelove your new favorite reader, Christine

MAXIELUFFYAY!!!!!
How come I didn't know about this fantasticamazingawesomefabtabulousloverrrlyy ficlet of yours??
Anyways new readerrr alertttt!!!! =DDD
I LOVE THIS FICLET..as your others of course...and you. tehee. xDD
PAMS!!!
Jess

Welcome to the Pink Pillow, Christine. Hope you enjoy being here. =]

Whoa, whoa, whoa. First off, thank you VERY much for all the praise. -blushcling- Secondly, thank you again. xD And thirdly, I don't really know myself how I write that way. =[ I guess every author has something of a signature style, and that's mine. Glad to know you like it, though. <3

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lovelovelove your new favorite reader, Christine

LOTS of lovelovelove back at you! ^^
Jesserz! Welcome to the Pink Pillow, sweetie. =]
Thanks, hunny. I love you MORE! <3

Maxie, you made me sad now Sad. Sad. Sad. Sad.

I'm sowwee. =[
*tries to cheer you up by giving you a Fyo doll*

Please don't cry. =[

YAYYYYY I love you <333

I love you too, and am updating. I was going to update an hour ago, actually, but my net connection was mean and died. -Le sigh-

Easier
Mood; Not good.



In the end, killing Dean Thomas was easy.

If you ask me now whether I loved him, whether the time I dated him was special for me, I would say that I did, and that it was. Love came into my life like a breath of fresh air, and it gave me a courage I had lacked before, a courage to reach for my dreams, a courage to touch them.

We were seventeen when we fell in love with each other. He was the one who encouraged me to choose the path that I felt was right, the one who told me he would support me, no matter what choice I made. His words were like rose petals, soft no matter no matter what angle they were felt from, and I found myself drowning in them, drowning as if I could never rise again.

But when I made my choice, it stunned him.

To say the least, I did not understand – could not understand why, after all those assurances of perpetual support, he left my side. He left me the day I told him I had chosen to dedicate my life to the Dark Lord’s service, left me wondering what I had done to offend him, to make him forget the love between us.

That many find the Dark Arts evil, that I understand. But Dean? Dean Thomas, who loved me – Dean Thomas, who had always told me he would never leave me! When he made those vows, there had never been a condition; when he made those vows, he had never said he would break them if I became a Death Eater!

Is loving a death eater wrong?



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In the end, it was easy, easier than I had imagined when the Dark Lord had ordered me to kill a member of the Order of Phoenix, a member named Dean Thomas. In the end, it was easy, easier than I had imagined, easier despite the look of pure horror, pure disbelief on his face; despite the sweat that trickled down my forehead, down my palm – down his wandless hand.

In the end, all it took was a flick of my wand, and the silent noise of my heart breaking into a gazillion pieces.

:O Dude, that was intense. Awww, good for Dean not sticking with ha Death Eater Too bad she killed him. BOOO!!! LOL

PAMS because I love you and this FF

Oh good. Because that means I achieved what I was trying to achieve, with that ficlet. =DD
MySillyWhitterz. Meloveyou. I wrote it with a certain girl in mind, but I didn't mention her name because I wanted to leave it open to interpretation. Now everyone can imagine a narrator of their choice. ^^
Dude, I just posted. =p ILY2!

You killed Dean Thomas ... Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Brilliantly executed that was Teddy's idea ...

I meant to say, your post was brilliant, and the story too ... R.I.P. Dean *sniffles*

I love Dean I always ship him with ... yeah ... I love Dean. I need to write him in my fic ...

Check your usernotes and that character I'm kind of naming after you, you've already met.

-blink-

I can make him come alive in another ficlet, if you want.
*high fives Teddy*
Thanks, Otty, glad to know you liked it. <--- I say that wayyyy too much, I need to find something else to say. =/
Who?

I have? -blink- Wow, I must be a really careless reader. =[

-hides from thee-

I never said I'd told you what his name was ...

I can't say ... oh look Seamus is going to be in my fic ... but really don't ask Maxie ...

How about ... "Oh, Ottery, you're too kind" *fans herself with a fan* "I've always depended on the kindness of strangers ..."

Just a thought ... I love a Streetcar named Desire

O: :O

Would you, please? I've always liked Dean and if you could send him on an adventure with Seamus and Neville ... even better ... but if not, that's okay. I've never liked requests myself otherwise I'd start a request thread for ficlets ...

*goes off to find you*

Oh good, that means I haven't been bad. =p
No comment. =p But I get what you're trying to say.
LOL. Ottsy, you're too kind, and I depend loads on your comments.
The trouble with requests is, they make people expect from you. And it's bad when a ficlet doesn't turn out just the way they imagined it would, because then they're not satisfied with it, and don't seem to care that characters just write themselves and won't be forced to do anything else. =[

Buttt.... I'll try, for my Ottsy's sake. ^__^
It's going to be ficlet #365.

I don't know is it ?

I looooved it,And Im still sitting here waiting for You to update so you'd better update soo -cuddles Maxerers in my sleeping bag-

Luff Yaa

oooh..Maxie.. you're so great.. tis story is so awesome

I'm a big fan of yours

Well, it's a harder question than I can answer. =[
-gasp- But I just updated, earlier today!
Oh my, you people are demanding.
Lufff ya too, myChloererz. <3
WENZ! -madtackles-

Welcome to the Pink Pillow, luff. It's AWESOME to see you here. <3
Aww, thanks luff. -hug-

Maxie. UPDATE WHEN YOU GET ON AGAIN
Even though I have a feeling that you will anyway. You are a FF junkie

And I love that I had the same thoughts of the DE as you did

You're not serious!
Am not! -insists- I just.. write a lot! xDD Besides, I still have to write a new ficlet. Even though I already have this ridiculously entertaining idea. xD
We're brain twins, wifey! =D

-starts chanting-

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