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04-19-2008, 03:31 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | i hope so
poor poor rose
please post soon i dying to find out what happends
I hate that lord vulture woman i am going to kill her soon:hack:
love voldyXOXOXOXOX
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04-19-2008, 04:14 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
oh my goodness! i love this story!!! poor rose! and ron!! and albus! AND hermoine!! keep writing!! |
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04-19-2008, 05:11 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Im bored, Im really bored. I can't be borthered to do my homework so im going to post for all you wonderful people reading.
Im actully sad enough i've written this whole speach down. Help! Im going mad.
Ok guys before i post the next chapter i'd like to say a few things first. 1: that i will be able to post mre this wekend as my brother is away(He owns this computer(the one im using)) But my sister was going to sleep at her friends but the car brokedown so thats going to hold me up. Not!!! Nothing will. 2:Is that i really wanted to link this story to my profile so when itz finished(I really don't know why im on about it being finished, I am really going mad. Hehehe) then you dont have to look in all the pages og fiished fan fics to find mine.
One amazing thing is that i've had sooo much fun writing this story(still writing) so far that i've actually started writting my own character story(Before i've finished this one)Lol!!!(Im noting giving anything away). Itz called:
Tinkerbell Evens....her life diary....
OHMYGOD!!! you all must be very bored by now too, me ramberling on when i promised a chapter. ok scroll down fro the next chapter.
CHAPTER 7
Lord Vulture went mad with rage
“How dare you,” she screamed, “Cruico” Rose screamed in pain. Lord Vulture let out a high-pitched laugh.
“This is what happens to anyone that disobeys me” She said after Rose had stopped screaming. Rose fell to the floor in a heap, to weak to move.
“Get up” Lord vulture snarled
Rose slowly and weakly got of the floor. She stood facing Lord Vulture.
“Now Rose do you know who I am?” She asked calmly
“N…No” Rose stammered in reply
“When you speak to me you must call me master. Now I’m Lord Vulture (Preferring Lord then Lady)” Lord Vulture looked at Rose with sharp eyes. Rose just nodded.
“How do you know my name….”Rose asked without saying master
“Master, call me master. I know your name because you are Harry Potter’s child and you are bait”
Rose looked at Lord Vulture trying not to laugh
“I’m not Harry Potter’s child; my parents are Ron and Hermione Weasley… ma…”
“What?” Lord Vulture screamed before Rose could finish what she was going to say. “Yaxley, Malfoy (I don’t own these names, they belong to J.K Rowling)” She screamed. The next second two men ran in, one tall, blond hair with an ugly looking face(Yaxley) and the other slightly shorter, with dark greasy (as If he hadn’t washed it in weeks) and a handsome looking face(Malfoy). Rose recognized the taller one as her kidnapper.
“Yes master” they both said knelling, Rose could see they were trammelling as if they were scared of Lord Vulture, like she was.
“Yaxley you idiot. This is not the potter’s child; this is one of the blood traitors, Weasley.” She said the name Weasley with hatred. Yaxley looked up, with horror in his face.
“Go get a member his family NOW! And Malfoy throw this thing (Pointing at Rose) in the dungeon” She flicked her hand and they both jumped up.
“Yes master” They said
Yaxley ran out the room as fast as his legs could go and Malfoy took hold of Rose’s shoulders and pulled her out of the room.
‘This one seems nicer then the other one’ Rose thought.
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Harry was holding Ginny’s and Lily’s hand, a couple of hours after Hermione had woken up, on their way to there car. When they arrived at there car he let go of their hands and opened the driver’s door. Ginny opened the back passenger door to help lily get in. Once they were all strapped in they made there long journey to there country house (It happens to be the same house Harry lived in as a baby), miles and miles from London.
Hours later Harry pulled the car up, by their front gate, and looked up at the house in horror. He quickly jumped out of the car, Ginny doing the same also helping Lily out. Together they walked up to the house. The front door was hanging on its hinges, their garden was destroyed (Flowers trampled on and the grass pulled from the ground). All three were dreading what the inside would look like.
“Stay behind me.” Harry said standing in front of them and pulling out his wand, Ginny pulled out her wand too. Lily took her mother and father’s hand.
“Harry slowly moved the door, so they could get inside. Inside the house was a tip, Furniture ruined, ornaments broken, pictures on the floor, pages raped from the book that were on the floor. They just couldn’t stop looking at the mess
“My doll” Lily shouted running to the middle of the living room where her doll was, with its head pulled off.
“Annabelle” She said addressing the doll, she started to cry. Ginny moved away from Harry and walked over to Lily to try and calm her down.
“It’s alright Lily, it can be fixed. Look,” Ginny lifted her wand and pointed it at the doll, “Repario, there good as new” Lily smiled and hugged the doll tightly.
“You stay here, I’m going to look upstairs” Harry said from the doorway. They watched him go. Harry looked in Lily’s room, which was ruined. Next he looked into his and Ginny’s room, which was the same state as Lily’s. All the rooms were the same. Just as he was coming out of James’s room. He heard a scream, It was Ginny.
“Harry”
Then the screaming stopped. Harry teared himself down the stairs to the living room shouting Ginny and Lily’s names. It was empty. He looked in the other room but found them nowhere. Harry fell on the sofa, crying.
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04-19-2008, 09:16 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
GRRR, Why does this Lord Vulture girl have to ruin everything?
PAMS!!!
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04-20-2008, 02:19 PM
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| Wandering Regulus Billywig
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,984
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mathi |
grrr*pokes lady vulture  * 
awesome chapter!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
and i think its good to be a bit mad!all great people have a touch of madness 
*runs off to read your character story*
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04-21-2008, 12:49 AM
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#56 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
Posts: 279
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | this fan fic is so depressing
what is harry going to do????
i swear i kill that lady/lord person:hack:
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOXOX
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04-21-2008, 04:13 PM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year |
Sabrina has just gone off to kill Lord Vulture with Voldemort88 and get Lily, Ginny and Rose back!!! And also give her cousin (Malfoy) a slap around the face!!!
I swear I will kill Lord Vulture! :hack:
Evangelilne this is really really good, but really really sad.
Love,
Jemmz
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04-21-2008, 05:22 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Just to let you know the Malfoy im writting in this story is not the same Malfoy you know, you'll find out why later...
luv ya guys for stiking to the story
xXEvangelineXx
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04-22-2008, 02:32 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
Posts: 279
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | When When will we find out
i want a post now
sorry
love voldyXOXOXOXO
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04-22-2008, 05:58 AM
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| Wandering Regulus Billywig
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,984
Hogwarts RPG Name: Mathi |
What!!
*takes out the thinking cap*waiting for the next post!
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04-22-2008, 07:25 AM
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#61 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. I'll post near the end of this week, i think. Anywho have troble getting on the computer during the week. soz but i promise so,etime this week it will be up
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
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04-22-2008, 11:23 AM
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#62 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
grrrrrrr! this lord vulture just wants to ruin everything doesn't she?! (keep writing!!) |
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04-22-2008, 06:18 PM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year |
Great! Now Sabrina has to go and apologise to Malfoy for slapping him! *grr* Oh well!
Can't wait for the next post hunni!! xxx Keep it going!
Anyone else think that Lord Vulture is going to die at the hands of us?? I do!!!
Jemmz
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04-23-2008, 02:11 AM
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| Sgt. Gryffindor Perfect Premolars! Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Stars
Posts: 1,999
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** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!!
I HATE LORD VULTURE!!!
*pocks her really hard in the eye ... repeatedly*
:evillaugh
Love it
Jade
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P.S. I'm subscribing to this thread!!!!!
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Reason: love it sooo much lol
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04-23-2008, 03:01 PM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by alyweasley ** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!! But if Evangeline did that, then there would be no more story,  and we like this story!!
Would you like a cookie while we wait for the next post!!
Jemma
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04-24-2008, 02:51 AM
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#66 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In my mind
Posts: 279
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Yeeeees please
take a cookie
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOOXOX
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04-24-2008, 07:21 AM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Everyone hopefully I'll have the post up tomorow. na dafter that I wont be posting till next week sometime because I'm so busy this weekend. Friday have friends over, have a talent show(signing Titanic and saying a peom) then after sleeping over a friends. Saturday shopping all day and sunday im swimming all day but if im lucky i'll be on sunday night.
luv ya all for reading
xXEvangelineXx
P.S. I wnated to quote to your messages but the computers at school wont let me. oh well i'll try again tonight at home
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04-24-2008, 10:35 PM
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| PAMS PLZ! Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: on the soccerfield
Posts: 119
Hogwarts RPG Name: kate tabetha williams Graduated |
keep goin!!!
i want to know wat happens!!! so bad
i will kill lady vulture watever her name is
love it keep goin!!!!!
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04-25-2008, 03:13 PM
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| Red Cap
Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Cutlery Ave, Forks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ange-Aimée Belle Morin |
*** New Reader Alert!!! ***
This is amazing!
*hits Lord Vulture repeatedly in the eye*  Why does she ruin everyone's life except for hers??? *pokes harder in eye*
Let all those abducted return safely, plz!!!!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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04-26-2008, 05:11 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by H/G4eva GRRR, Why does this Lord Vulture girl have to ruin everything?
PAMS!!! Well she is just like lord voldemort.Thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by MAthI^_^ grrr*pokes lady vulture  * 
awesome chapter!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
and i think its good to be a bit mad!all great people have a touch of madness 
*runs off to read your character story* Hey thanks and i hope you liked my charactor story???. Everyone is mad in there own way. I'm just good at writing sad storys but other then that i'm still learning. Lol!!!! thanks for reading. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Sabrina has just gone off to kill Lord Vulture with Voldemort88 and get Lily, Ginny and Rose back!!! And also give her cousin (Malfoy) a slap around the face!!!
I swear I will kill Lord Vulture! :hack:
Evangelilne this is really really good, but really really sad.
Love,
Jemmz
xxx Thanks Sabrina i've written that chapter i was on about and there is also a little surprise in store for you when i post it.Lol!!!!!
Thanks for reading. As i said before i'm very good at sad storys but not on any other subject. Lol!!!! To be honest i'll join you in killing Lord Vulture!!!! but i made her up so im in the wrong *Start to cry*
luv ya
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Originally Posted by alyweasley ** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!!
I HATE LORD VULTURE!!!
*pocks her really hard in the eye ... repeatedly*
:evillaugh
Love it
Jade
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P.S. I'm subscribing to this thread!!!!! Hey Jade glad you found my story and liked it. Lol!!!!
ok for the bit about hating Lord Vulture, well join the club everyone hates her except for really mad people which may be reading this story, only if there are not eing rude.
Thanks for subscribing to my story, and a little secret, im mad enough to have subscribe to this story too. Lol!!!! Ok to everyone im sorry but i'll not be able to post until monday/ tuesday time. Sorry and i hope youall dont stop reading.
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
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04-28-2008, 08:08 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Here, or there...
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New reader!  Great ff, PAMS!  I must know what happens!
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04-29-2008, 07:31 AM
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#72 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by hpObsessed New reader!  Great ff, PAMS!  I must know what happens! Hey i have a new reader, yey!!! thanks for reading. the next post will be soon. I'll post it today od tomorrow, don't know yet.
luv ya
xXEvangelineXx
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04-29-2008, 02:48 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Chapter 8 Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Ok everyone this is all you have been waiting for. Hehe Lol!!! Chapter 8. so what am i waiting for???
Here we are guys
CHAPTER 8
Harry dragged himself off the sofa, by now he had swollen eyes from crying. The love of his life and only daughter was gone. ‘Would I see them again?’ he asked himself. He looked around for his wand, which had fallen on the floor when he had fallen.
‘What ever it takes, I’ll get them all back, even if it costs me my life’ he thought again. Harry turned on the spot, there was a loud pop and he was gone. The house was left empty, bare. So many memories left, everything destroyed.
Suddenly Ginny and Lily appeared from behind an over turned table, binded and gagged, both with tears rolling down there cheeks. Following them was Yaxley.
“You know your husband is rather stupid, and is going to die very soon.” Yaxley sneered pulling Ginny’s head back by her long red hair. Ginny tried to pull away from him, which made him laugh even more. He grapped them both by the forearm and turned on the spot. They, like Harry, disappeared with a loud pop.
Yaxley, Ginny and Lily appeared in the same dark creepy room, Rose had been in once before, and like when Rose was there, and there was only a burning fireplace and a chair facing it.
“Yaxley, well done” a cold creep voice came from the chair. It turned and the person faced them. She had long dark hair and her face was chalked white. She was wearing a long clock; the clock was far too big for her
‘It looks familiar to me’ Ginny thought
“Yaxley, leave so I can talk to our guests”
“Yes master” Yaxley bowed and quickly left the room.
“So what have we got here?, Harry potter’s wife and child, I am Lord Vulture and when you reply to me you call me master” She flicked her wand and the binds and gags left Ginny and Lily body’s instantly. Ginny grapped Lily’s hand, this was not missed by Lord Vulture.
“Now, now we can’t have this. Malfoy!” She shouted. Malfoy immedietly ran in.
“Yes master”
“Take Harry potter’s wife and put her in the dungeon, I need to talk with our other guest here”
Malfoy took hold of Ginny’s forearm and started to pull her towards the door.
“Mummy” Lily shouted trying to take hold of Ginny’s outstretched hand. Malfoy pulled her towards the door again.
When they were nearly at the door Lord Vulture spoke
“Wait, I want her to see what happens if they don’t co-operate” She pointed her wand at Lily.
“NO!!” Ginny shouted
“Cruico” Lord Vulture shouted at the same time.
The spell hit Lily on the middle of the chest. Lily screamed in pain and fell to the floor.
“Lily” Ginny screamed trying to get out of Malfoy’s strong grip. Malfoy was just looking at Lily’s limp body with sadness and hatred (Hatred at Lord Vulture)
Lord Vulture laughed Du…Du…Du!
That’s got you thinking. Lol!!!!
More soon
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx
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04-29-2008, 03:56 PM
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| Neville's Patronus Jobberknoll
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: At home.... duh
Posts: 4,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Fourth Year | Evangeline how could you??? Poor Lily!!
Malfoy how can you just stand there?? It's obvious you hate her! Stupid idiotic boy!
Lord Vulture, you are a horrible, ugly, mean, psychotic, evil, derranged, person, who will never be Lord Voldemort, even if you wear his cloak!
Hang in there Ginny, I'll kill her for you!
Harry get your butt over there right now!!!
Okay, now that's out of my system. Brilliant post hunni ! Can't wait to read more!
Jemma
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04-29-2008, 08:12 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks Second Year |
grrrrrrrr!  not lily now too!!!!
get off the couch harry!!! and save them!!!! |
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