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AsKnownAsAbby · 10-10-2006, 03:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Maya Ellwood

Aww, Draco's stuck between Pansy and Charlie!

Lurves,

>> Maya <<

Er, not really. Charlie > Pansy. lol. But Pansy'd like to think so.

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Originally Posted by rupertsgirl67

Awww, at least they got that out in the open. Great post, Draco's the hottest.

Lauren xo

Yeah, well, it would have been fun to make a big deal. But this was a way to bring them closer together. Hmm... ~~maybe I still will make it a big deal~~

Ahhh! Sorry it took so long! (8 days!) and it's still so short! But I needed Draco to know about the ring... and I had little inspiration. But here ya go.

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“Can I ask you something?” Draco asked. He and Charlie had now been dating for two months. It had taken a long time, but it had finally happened. Charlie was snuggled up next to him on the couch and Draco had his arm around her.
“Anything,” Charlie said under her breath, her head nestled on his shoulder. She hadn’t really been listening since they hadn’t really been talking, but now she looked up at him lazily.
“What’s with the rings?” he asked, “You never take them off.” Charlie thought for a little while before answering. Where would she start? With the fact that her mother left her family, how she had given her the rings? Or just the magic of them. Well, she decided she could tell Draco anything, but moved a little bit away from him.
“The first one, my mother used to always wear, on a necklace. Nothing really… special about it,” she took it off and handed it to Draco as she continued, “this one though,” she took off the magic ring, “my mother used to wear this one all the time too… she never gave it to me, up until she left anyways… this summer. I haven’t spoken to her since she left, but she just walked out on me and my dad. I haven’t talked to him much either… but this ring, it’s magic. You can call anyone in the world. Alive, or dead. I haven’t entirely figured out how it works though. I’ve only called Ashley.” She explained. Draco nodded, pay close attention as he twirled the first ring between two fingers, then handing it back to Charlie.
“That all it does?” he finally asked, as if that wasn’t enough. Charlie shrugged.
“I s’pose so… that’s all my mother told me it did before she left.” Draco nodded.
“I see, but I bet it does more.”
“More?” Charlie repeated.
“More,” Draco repeated for the third time.
“What more?” she asked.
“I’m not sure, but MY mum had a ring like this. Well, I assume it was like yours. Father gave it to her, and she never took it off. It looked an awful like that one… with the heart and the crown and I always noticed her whispering into it. Especially after grandfather died. But with that ring, she also did all sorts of stuff, like light stuff… like she’d press a button and a light would shine out, sometimes there were people in the light, but not always. I just, I didn’t understand it. But now I do… well, I think I do. This thing is a lot like a muggle telephone…”
“Used to call people?” Charlie asked.
“Yes, but more. You can actually see the people and stuff you need.” Charlie nodded, listening to him.
“Mind if I see the ring?” Draco asked. Charlie shrugged and took it off.
“Go ahead. I’ve looked at the thing dozens of times, but I haven’t found anything special, other then being able to call Ashley, with it.” Charlie pulled off the ring and handed it to Draco. He looked it over and over.
“Hmmm…” he muttered under his breath, Charlie watched him carefully.

rupertsgirl67 · 10-11-2006, 09:48 PM

Wow, that's cool how Narcissa had a ring like that too...i think. Also cool how he knows so much about it. Let's see that happens next...

Lauren xox

oh, great post! <3

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-15-2006, 08:51 PM

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Originally Posted by rupertsgirl67

Wow, that's cool how Narcissa had a ring like that too...i think. Also cool how he knows so much about it. Let's see that happens next...

Lauren xox

oh, great post! <3

Draco has an obsession with rings? Lol, just kidding. I thought it'd be a great connection for them.

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“No way!” she shrieked. He nodded.
“No way, no way! That’s not even possible!”
“Well, it apparently is…”
“No, even in the wizarding world. That’s not possible! It’s not!” Draco nodded.
“I can’t believe it either, but it’s definitely possible. We just did it.”
“I, no, we couldn’t have! No, no, no!” Charlie held her hand over her mouth.
“We DID though, Charlie…” Draco said, he was smiling.
“Wh-what what did we do??” she asked, for clarification.
“We… well, we brought a dog back, er, from the dead…” it sounded even crazier out loud. But she had wanted to see him in 3-D, Charlie … had wanted to see her dog. So Draco pressed buttons, and here the thing was… perfectly solid in front of them. Charlie tentatively reached her hand out to touch the dog. She screamed again. Her hand didn’t move right through the back like it was supposed to, it stoked the dog.
“We couldn’t have done that! NO ONE can control life!”
“Except for you, apparently.” Draco smirked.
“No, no. I absolutely can’t. If anyone shouldn’t have that power, it’s definitely me!!” Charlie assured him.
“That doesn’t matter. You have it. You can do it. You can bring people back to life.”
“Maybe… maybe it’s just dogs,” she tried to reason it, “or maybe these are just REALLY good holograms…” Charlie took several deep breaths to try to calm down.
“Charlie… you can bring things back to life…” he told her.
“Oh, my, god… I have to tell Ashley!” Charlie gushed, the realization finally hitting her. Draco grabbed Charlie’s arm.
“You can’t.” he told her.
“No one is supposed to have this power. What happens if she gets power-mad?”
“What happens if WE get power-mad?” Charlie questioned in response.
“I think we should forget about this. Unless we actually have to use it.” Draco was doubting everything about this ring, and more then that… he was scared of it. What else could this ring do? It had the most powerful power in the world. What if… what if it could kill people too? Of course, it could bring people back to life, but it was still a terrifying idea.
“Forget about it? Draco, how could we? We could save lives… We could BRING BACK lives!” Charlie was excited now.
“Charlie… we’d overpopulate the world. This wasn’t something meant to be found, it wasn’t meant to be invented. That’s why wizards don’t have it.”
“I thought you loved breaking rules, Draco.” Ouch, blow to the ego (and the Malfoy loved his ego)
“I do… but these aren’t ordinary rules, Charlie. This is… life-altering. Literally. I think you need to think about this first. Sleep on it. We’ll talk in the morning?” he suggested. Charlie didn’t want to, but Draco pulled her into a kiss.
“We’ll talk in the morning.” He told her. “Come on, how ‘bout we sleep on the couch tonight? I bet we’re breaking a rule or so there.” He joked, smirking at her.
“Draco…” Charlie begged. He raised his eyebrows at her.
“I won’t touch you, I promise. I just wanna make sure you’re not calling Ashley,” he assured her. Charlie rolled her eyes.
“Come on,” he said, taking her hand. They had been in the Room of Requirement, for … privacy reasons. They walked to the common room, and Draco lay on the couch, unbuttoning his shirt.
“Come ‘ere.” He said, and she came over. God… he was hott without a shirt on, she couldn’t help but think. He smiled at her and she lay down next to him on the large couch.
“No calling Ashley, I won’t touch you.” he promised.

rupertsgirl67 · 10-16-2006, 01:16 AM

awww, that was cute. I dunno if i'd believe Draco wouldn't touch her, lmao. Like, it's Draco Malfoy....but, i guess she trusts him.

anyways, back to the main idea of the post: she can bring back lives? omgiawd, that's so insane! i could think of sooo many people to bring back, i think. anyways, post soon!!! i need to know what happens next!

Lauren xox

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-17-2006, 09:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Rupert's girl and my #1 reader :)

awww, that was cute. I dunno if i'd believe Draco wouldn't touch her, lmao. Like, it's Draco Malfoy....but, i guess she trusts him.

anyways, back to the main idea of the post: she can bring back lives? omgiawd, that's so insane! i could think of sooo many people to bring back, i think. anyways, post soon!!! i need to know what happens next!

Lauren xox

Charlie does trust Draco, and he loves her. And is not about to rape her... but yeah, it is DRACO MALFOY... so you never know what to expect. lol. And yes, she can bring back lives. And I actually can't. I have a grandma I would, and pets, but my other relatives... well, I wouldn't... it was their time to die, and everyone's lives pass on... you can't keep them on earth forever. That'll be a big thing in the end of the story

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Strangly enough, Charlie trusted Draco. Even more strangly, he kept true to his word. He didn’t touch her, and even better he had left before morning so when everyone came down they didn’t think anything trashy… just that she had fallen asleep on the couch. Of course, that was all before Pansy Parkinson came down the steps.
“Why’re you sleeping on the couch, Jamison?” she asked. Charlie sat up.
“Hm?” she asked.
“Why’re you sleeping on the couch, Jamison, you deaf?” Pansy repeated.
“No, just tired,” Charlie answered cooly, “and I’m sleeping on the couch because I was tired last night.”
“Were you?” Pansy asked, “or were you just waiting for something… or someone?” she asked.
“Someone?” Charlie repeated.
“YES! Someone, who… perhaps, didn’t come?”
“Er, nope Pansy. Sorry to … burst your bubble, but I was just tired.” Pansy cackled.
“I bet you were waiting for Draco, and he stood you up. OR you’re cheating on him!” she laughed. She started skipping. “I’m telling Dracky, I’m telling Dracky.” She laughed while she skipped. Charlie was confident. He wouldn’t believe her. He had been there after all. But… but what if she told the whole school? What if the whole school thought she was cheating on Draco? Oh… well, at least Draco would believe her. She went up to change but could still hear Pansy cackling.
‘I’m telling Drakey, I’m telling Drakey’ she wanted to smack the little b-witch. After changing, she went down to breakfast, and over to Draco. She kissed his cheek and sat down next to him and although he didn’t push her away he didn’t welcome her as usual.
“Something wrong?” she asked him. He only shook his head.
“If it’s Parkinson, I’m going to slap tha tlittle girl all the way to the muggle world.” Charlie swore.
“No, no, it’s not Pansy.”
“Then what is it?” Charlie asked.
“It’s my father…” Draco told her, “he was put in Azkaban last year… and has just died. I just got the owl this morning.”
“Oh, Draco… I’m so sorry.” Charlie consoled him. He looked up at her, a new shine to his icy grey eyes.
“What if you used-“ she cut him off by shaking his head.
“No. No, no, no, no. I thought we said we weren’t going to use it?” she asked.
“Yes, but this is my FATHER.” He said, sadly. Yes, Draco’s father… Lucius Malfoy. Muggle hater, Death Eater, criminal to the muggle and wizarding worlds, not a particular favorite person of Charlie’s… but it was Draco’s father.
“Draco…” he looked away from her.
“Nothing.” He answered to the question she never asked. She wanted to do it. Really, she did. Past all better judgement, she wanted to, but she couldn’t. She had already promised last night that she wouldn’t.
“I’m sick. Tell the teachers I won’t be in class. I don’t feel well. I’ll go to the Hospital Wing.” Charlie told Draco, kissing his cheek again. She got up and went straight to the Hospital Wing.

*Sorry to all my Lucius fans!* ... if I have any... considering I only have two readers...

Kate11 · 10-17-2006, 09:51 PM

so i see you use charlie in your stories and roleplay made ups.

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-17-2006, 09:55 PM

Yes, I <3 my Charlie character

rupertsgirl67 · 10-21-2006, 07:42 PM

omigawd. I <333333 Lucius! OMG! Draco!!!!! Lucius!!!!

Well, Charlie just has to bring him back to life. Who cares if it's like, immoral! JUST DO IT ALREADY!

oh, and post too

Lauren

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-22-2006, 03:53 AM

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Originally Posted by rupertsgirl67

omigawd. I <333333 Lucius! OMG! Draco!!!!! Lucius!!!!

Well, Charlie just has to bring him back to life. Who cares if it's like, immoral! JUST DO IT ALREADY!

oh, and post too

Lauren

Sorry Charlie (hahaha! I crack myself up!!) lol. Nope, sorry, though. Immoral always loses.

Except for maybe in my next fic... which brings me to my next point of...
This fic has been a blast to write, but is nearing an end. This isn't the last chapter, but the next will be. I've already begun my next fic (a Draco/Ginny) fic, though it's not yet posted... it will be called "I Write Sins, Not Tragedies" (yes after the song) but to see my conclusion to how I got to that... you'll have to read that fic (once it's posted. I'll post that first chapter, the same time I post this last chapter. Then I'll add it to my siggy. Hopefully, you'll read that too

And here's the second-to-last chapter now!
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She’d have to think about it. Sure, Lucius was Draco’s father, but she’d promised not to use the ring. And on top of that no one ELSE wanted him back to life. The rest of the world was rejoicing right now that he was dead! He was a threat to the mortal and magical world. But he was Draco’s FATHER…. She’d sleep on it. Right in the Hospital Wing.
“Madame Pomfry?” she asked into the open space.
“Yes, dear?” the healer asked, scurrying about the room.
“I need to rest,” Charlie announced. Madame Pomfry huffed and went over to the girl.
“You need to sleep at night, is what you need to do, and you don’t need to miss classes, but since you’re new to the school I’ll allow it. Sleep today. Don’t let this happen again,” she said, pushing Charlie over to a cot. Charlie lay down and closed her eyes. Between the first and second period, Ashley came.
“Hey, Charlie… you ok?” she asked. Charlie opened her eyes and saw Ashley. She closed them again, but spoke.
“Yeah… stressed, tired…” she sighed. Ashley nodded.
“You look tired, I’ll leave you ‘lone.” Ashley then left, sighing. Between the next two class periods, Draco came. Charlie had been deeply asleep when he had taken her hand and started stroking it. Slowly, she woke up.
“Hey, love,” she said, smiling. Draco bent over and kissed her softly. He then backed up, sitting back down on the edge of the bed. He didn’t speak, but Charlie watched him.
“I’ve been thinking.”
“Have you?” he asked, looking towards her. Minor set-back…
“Yes. I have,” Charlie answered. Draco watched her as she began to speak again.
“I-if you REALLY want, and you think it’s REALLY true that it’d be a good thing…” her voice lowered, “I’llbringyourfatherbacktolife.” Draco went wide-eyed.
“Really?” he asked her, genuinely excited and HAPPY. Charlie wasn’t sure she’d ever seen him so happy, which is what made her know she made the right choice.
“Mmm,” she nodded. Draco hugged her. They sat like that for a long time. Madame Pomfry had left for the period (tending to some… broomstick incident or something) so she didn’t notice Draco skipping class.
“I can’t let you,” he finally sighed.
“What do you mean?” she asked.
“I can’t let you.” he repeated. She looked at him, questioningly.
“You promised not to use the ring, I’d be a hypocrite to force you too. And I know the rest of the wizarding world doesn’t want him back to life… and s’pose if they were to find him… they’d come after you for your ring. I can’t let you bring him back to life.” Draco sighed, he wanted his father back, but he knew he couldn’t.
“I’m sorry your father died.” She said softly. A tear slid down Draco’s face, but Charlie wiped it away.
“I’m sorry your father died, but I’m here for you. I love you.” she said softly. Love. It wasn’t a word Draco knew well. His father never told him he loved him. Though he knew it was true, his mother rarely told him either. Draco didn’t know much of love, but he was sure he felt it for Charlie.
“I love you too,” Draco whispered to Charlie, and for the first time… he was sure he meant it.
“We have to destroy the ring.” She said.
“What?” he asked her. She nodded sullenly

rupertsgirl67 · 10-22-2006, 07:09 PM

omg! Did you say you were ending this fic? So soon? Well, i guess it's alright, like the timing was perfect and how your ending it will probbly be good, but still.

I definitely don't support Draco and Ginny, if it's Draco and anyone, it's Hermione. But, i'll still read it! Don't worry! Just pm me the link when it's up and i'll be your#1 reader!

Draco did the right thing, he always turns out fine the last minute! <33

Lauren xox

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-22-2006, 08:02 PM

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Originally Posted by rupertsgirl67

omg! Did you say you were ending this fic? So soon? Well, i guess it's alright, like the timing was perfect and how your ending it will probbly be good, but still.

I definitely don't support Draco and Ginny, if it's Draco and anyone, it's Hermione. But, i'll still read it! Don't worry! Just pm me the link when it's up and i'll be your#1 reader!

Draco did the right thing, he always turns out fine the last minute! <33

Lauren xox

Sorry, but yes... so soon.

And it's a short ending, but I thought it was alright. Probably doesn't live up to the rest of the story though... sorry for that. >.< And personally, I don't really support Draco/Ginny either. And the story is mostly about Ginny, who I also don't really like... lol. I just like writing about the bad boy and the good girl getting together... but I don't like Draco/Hermione because it just doesn't seem right... so I write Draco/Ginny.

I will send you the link

And without further ado... the last chapter.

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“You can’t destroy it.” Draco begged her for the millionth time. Draco and Charlie were back in the common room now.
“I can’t keep it. I don’t… I don’t have the self-control to… control everything,” Charlie sighed.
“Then throw it the lake,” Draco suggested, “just don’t… don’t destroy it. Give someone else the chance. Wrap it in a box for millions of years… just don’t destroy it.”
“Alright,” Charlie finally agreed. She went to her dormitory and found a box. The ring had been on her finger all year, but now she slipped it off and stuck it in the box. She pulled a green ribbon out of the belt loops on her skirt. (YES she wore skirts with belt loops!) She tied up the box and grabbed Draco’s hand, pulling him off the couch. He followed her up the stairs and through several corridors and then outside. Finally, they made it to the lake. Looking to him, Draco nodded. Charlie nodded as well, and pulled her arm back. Then she let the box fly out of her hand, into the lake where the box would reside for however long, she knew not.
“It was the right choice,” she whispered.
“It was a good choice,” he told her. Charlie leaned her head on Draco’s strong shoulder and he put his arm around her. They stayed like that for a little while. Finally, Draco looked down at her and she looked up at him. Charlie’s rings were what she had left of her mother, just like the ring was the only hope Draco had for his father. It was sentimental to both of them, and then it was gone. He kissed her softly and she took his hand again, leading him back to the common room. They stayed on the couch for a while, and at one point Charlie cried. Draco looked at her and kissed her, then said to Charlie’s agreement,
“That was one magic ring.”

rupertsgirl67 · 10-22-2006, 10:21 PM

omg!!!!! that was just so cute!!!!! sure it lived up to the rest of the story, definitely!!!!!

Umm, excuse me? You don't like Draco and Hermione? *grrrr* lol i'm joking. I have a Draco and Hermione trilogy, yes, that's right. I'm on the second fic, but i think Draco and Hermione are great together. Ready my first fic and then second you'll change your mind

Anyways, that was cute! Be sure to send the link to the new fic!

Laurennnnnnnnn

AsKnownAsAbby · 10-23-2006, 01:05 AM

Thank you, and here's the link to the new fic: I hope people will read/enjoy "I Write Sins, Not Tragedies" http://snitchseeker.com/forum/showthread.php?t=40324