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10-08-2008, 08:59 PM
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#276 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Pigfarts.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kelley Lucien Second Year | Awesomest Person EVERRR. 70% Crazy, 30% Sane, and 100% Me!!!!
i think so too. hey, maybe i should start a fan fic! i love writing!
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10-08-2008, 09:26 PM
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#277 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Yeah, maybe.
OK peopleses, I have it! I will post it now.
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10-08-2008, 09:59 PM
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#278 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Here you go! Chapter Twenty-Four Twenty minutes later, Salazar hadn’t returned yet, and Godric was becoming worried. “Sal has been at the toilet for a long time,” he said nervously. “Maybe he fell in,” suggested Rowena. “Just kidding, just kidding,” she added hastily as Godric shot her an icy glare. “Really Ric, you worry too much. Like Helga.”
“Hey!” protested Helga. “I’m not nervous!” She was biting her fingernails and her eyes were darting around the room. The others glanced at her. “Well, maybe I am, a little,” she admitted. “But Ro is right. I’m sure he’s fine.”
At that moment, the door banged open and Salazar stormed in. The other three jumped up and started bombarding him with questions.
“Where were you?”
“What took you so long?”
Salazar had to think of an answer, fast. “Um..nothing,” he said shiftily. “Darn it, it’s so hard to go to the toilet here. We have to put them in.” Whew. Rowena nodded. “You see, Ric? You worry too much. He’s fine.” Helga launched herself at Salazar unexpectedly. “Oh Sal, I was so nervous!” she cried, throwing her arms around him. Salazar staggered under her weight. “Whoa there, Helga!” he said hastily. “I’m okay!” He patted her head awkwardly and gently pushed her away. The other two sniggered. Helga blushed and backed away. “All right, let’s get back to celebrating!” said Godric merrily, but Salazar pulled him aside. “Can we talk?” Ric regarded him curiously. “Sure,” he said. “What’s on your mind?” Salazar did not smile. “I am…unhappy about letting Muggle-borns into the school.” Godric sighed. “We’ve been through this,” he said. “We will make sure that everyone under your House is pure-blood. You do not have to worry.” Salazar growled. “But they’ll still be in the school, and I’ll have to teach the scum!” Godric frowned. “How can you say that? Helga is Muggle born! I know that the people who killed your relatives, and Ro’s, and mine too, were Muggle-born, but holding that against all of them is just prejudiced, Salazar.” Salazar’s eyes were blazing. “I will not have them under this roof!” he screamed. Godric backed away, but Salazar bore down upon him. “Helga is the one exception. They are all unworthy! Every single one of them!” Godric regarded him with wary eyes. “Salazar, please calm down. We have all made our decisions. You will have to let them come here, or you shall not be allowed to teach.” He walked away, leaving the irate Salazar fuming behind him.
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10-08-2008, 11:23 PM
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#279 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
so, what do you guys think? Comments?
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10-09-2008, 12:44 AM
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#280 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: MA, USA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Nicole Brooks Seventh Year | Tom's Quidditch Robes Devilish Draco
Ooh, that was fantastic! i liked it when Helga hugged him. =]
hehe
pams!
Prongs.
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10-09-2008, 11:18 PM
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#281 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pigfarts?
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Thanks!
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10-10-2008, 12:34 AM
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#282 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Pigfarts.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kelley Lucien Second Year | Awesomest Person EVERRR. 70% Crazy, 30% Sane, and 100% Me!!!!
that was really awesome! PAMS PAMS PAMS!
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10-10-2008, 03:18 PM
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#283 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2007
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Omg!!! Hehe it'd be funny if he'd fallen in the toilet lol!
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10-10-2008, 07:17 PM
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#284 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Pigfarts.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kelley Lucien Second Year | Awesomest Person EVERRR. 70% Crazy, 30% Sane, and 100% Me!!!!
yep! that would be good....
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10-10-2008, 08:32 PM
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#285 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
I was considering it. I really was. Lol!!
OK, I'm not sure if Susannah knows that we've put up the new chappie yet!
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10-10-2008, 11:53 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
Yay! Chappie! Ok, I'll have to think of something...
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2nd year Ravvie!
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10-10-2008, 11:59 PM
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#287 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pigfarts?
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Oh, and now she does know. Lol!!
PAMS
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10-11-2008, 12:21 AM
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#288 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Hogwarts
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year |
yes i do... hmm.. man eating gophers don't work... what does...? Hmm...
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2nd year Ravvie!
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10-12-2008, 03:23 PM
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#289 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Umm...I'm sorry, what?
PAMS!!
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10-13-2008, 04:18 AM
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#290 (permalink)
| Murtlap
Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Mexico
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Taryn Sage First Year |
Lol I bet Helga took Sally by surprise. Though, I wouldn't have expected it either |
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10-13-2008, 03:46 PM
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#291 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Haha yeah, well Helga worries too much.
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11-16-2008, 01:08 AM
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#292 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
OK, I've made a decision. It's time to finish this FF up. There are only going to be a few more chapters, guys.
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12-01-2008, 09:32 PM
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#293 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Okay, Susi is sick or something, I haven't been able to get ahold of her, but I will talk to her as soon as I can. Sorry for the wait, you guys. *goes off to stalk Susi  *
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12-08-2008, 08:16 PM
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#294 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
All right everyone! Susi's sick so she won't be posting for awhile. I'm really sorry it's taking so long!
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12-26-2008, 01:22 AM
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#295 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
OK, you know what, I've decided to post the new chapter myself, it's just taking her way too long...I'll put it up later tonight. Promise! I'm sooo sorry for the wait guys!
*goes off to write chapter*
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12-26-2008, 02:16 AM
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#296 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
OK here it is guys. Chapter Twenty-Five "That's it!" fumed Salazar. "I've had it with you, all three of you!" He whirled around and started to stomp away angrily. "Sal, wait!" cried Helga. She ran after him and caught his arm. "Sal--"
Salazar whipped around. All Helga had time to register was the expression on his face. His face was twisted into an angry, almost demonic scowl, hard lines etched into steel. There was cold fury in his emerald eyes, burning there like wildfire. He wrenched his arm free of her grasp with more strength than necessary. Salazar then slapped Helga across the face, hard. She cried out and stumbled backwards, but he had already turned and was storming off. Even through her tear-filled eyes, Helga could see that the muscles of his back and neck were tight with anger under his bottle-green cloak. Rowena ran forwards and put her hands on Helga's shoulders and looked at her. There was an angry bright red welt raising up on her cheek and there were even a few scratches where Salazar's fingernails had grazed her skin. Tears were pouring down Helga's face. Rowena hugged her tightly. Helga's tears made a salty wet spot all over Rowena's neck and chest. Ro pulled back gently and said in a soft, soothing voice, "Hel, dear, Salazar just needs some space and some time to calm down. He'll come back and apologize, you'll see." Godric joined them. He put his arms around both of them and for a moment they all just shared a group hug. "Salazar has a bit of a twisted mind, but that can't weigh us down," Godric murmured. "We said we'd make a school and so we shall, Sal or no Sal." He looked down at Rowena, whose face was closest to his. "We need to Owl everyone we know. Anyone who has children who need a magical education. And we need other staff." Rowena looked up at Godric and was slightly startled to see his face just inches from her own. "I know a few people," she murmured back. "Actually I know a lot of people." She smiled. Godric smiled back. "And I as well," said Helga, who had composed herself. "I guess it is settled then. We should sleep on it, see if Sal comes back, and start sending out owls in the morning." Meanwhile, Salazar was in his happy place. The Chamber.
He was curled up on the stone floor, contemplating his actions. Did I do the right thing? he wondered. Salazar sighed aloud. The purple toad in front of him let out a croak. He looked at it. He looked at the chicken egg it was sitting on. Not much of it was visible but for a tiny part of it in between two folds of the toad's slimy, horny skin. He supposed it didn't much matter the intention behind his actions. For soon, the egg would hatch and he would have all he wanted. A true friend. Someone to talk to. The great Basilisk of Slytherin would go down in history as the greatest and most famous basilisk. The Monster of the Chamber of Secrets. He liked the sound of that.
He liked the sound of that very much.
Comments?
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12-26-2008, 06:47 AM
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#297 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Here, or there...
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Very nice!! But I couldn’t believe that Salazar hit Helga!
The last part was really nicely done too!
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12-26-2008, 12:23 PM
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#298 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2007
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Salazar is a big nasty! How could he be so mean?
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12-26-2008, 08:17 PM
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#299 (permalink)
| Formerly: hrmy_lvr_4evr  Love Detective Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurelie Rylen Sixth Year | Fiyero ♥ | RED VINES! | FOR NARNIAAAAAAAAAAA | "Always." ♥| SupermegafoxyAWESOMEhot!
Aw, he was just acting out of anger. He'll come back and apologize and it'll be all rainbows and butterflies again.
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01-14-2009, 05:13 PM
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#300 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: MA, USA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Nicole Brooks Seventh Year | Tom's Quidditch Robes Devilish Draco
rainbows and butterflies with salazar?
haha fantastic.
pams.
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