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what it's a cool number (thank you Ginnie) |
New rEader! This is such a good story! great plot! i wonder how long it will take them to find the perfect spot to build hogwarts... PAMS! ~Sydnie :harry3: |
OK OK so here's the next chapter, I know it isn't as good as what i've written before but please bear with me, I'm trying to make a really good one for Afraid to Love.... Chapter Nine Godric handed the tiara back to Rowena. He was becoming freaked out by what it could do. The instant he took it off, he fely empty-headed and stupid. "Whoa...what?" he said groggily. Rowena took it and held it in her lap, frowning, feeling the mysterious magic coursing through her arms and up into her heart. She put it on again and closed her eyes, breathing deeply. She sat like that for a full ten minutes, everyone watching her in silence. Salazar began to worry. "Ro...is everything okay?" he asked nervously. "Rowena!" He touched her shoulder lightly, then drew back, shocked. He could feel the power of the diadem flowing through his friend's body as her touched her. Panicking, Salazar reached up and took it off her head, and dropped it on the floor of the tent. As Helga watched, Rowena opened her eyes as if from a long sleep. She put her hand to where Salazar had touched her as if she could still feel his hand there on her shoulder. Helga flew at her friend, overjoyed, and threw her arms around a very surprised Rowena. "Helga? I'm all right!" laughed Rowena. She gently pushed her away and then looked at the tiara, still lying where Salazar had flung it. "My goodness, what just happened?" Godric sat up as he was feeling back to normal. "You were just sitting there holding that thing, and we were getting a bit uneasy. That's all, Ro." He examined the tiara as closely as he could without touching it. By putting his had to the floor right next to it, he could feel a faint vibration. "It's humming!" he said in astonishment. Helga put her own hand next to his. "Why, you're right, Ric," she said in surprise. "Goodness, where did a filthy old squid like that find such a thing?" "Isn't it obvious? It was going to a wedding and wanted to look shiny." laughed Salazar. Everyone groaned at his sad attempt at a joke. He rolled his eyes. "Well who has a better idea?" No one bothered answering. Rowena scooted forward until the tiara was right in front of her. She took out her wand and touched its tip to the diadem. She murmured something under her breath and in seconds, a message had been carved onto the back of the tiara. "Wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure." "It stopped vibrating," said Godric in some surprise. "Yeah. Isn't that odd?" said Helga in wonderment. Then she gasped with pleasure as Rowena put it on again. "Oh, Ro! you look simply radiant!" she breathed. And so she did. The tiara, nestled in Rowena's glossy curls, shone silver. The pearls and sapphires glittered in the light, and Rowena's clear blue eyes seemed to sparkle. "I don't feel that strange magic anymore!" she said happily. Her spell had canceled out the other one permanently. End of Chapter Nine |
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no that's stupid. |
yeah i thought so too |
That was a great chapter! PAMS! |
Yep. I made the diadem have evil brain zapping powers because I was feeling rebellious. So anyway, I'm not quite sure when Susi will have the next chapter up but I think she told me she was almost done writing it. She still needs to type it. |
Woot! keep it up! :jump: |
NEW READER!!!! luv ur posts! (I'm a true Ravenclaw!) |
That was AWESOME!!! Keep it up, and can't wait for the next chapter! PAMS. |
Wow new reader. love what your writing keep it up!!!!!!!:read!: |
:faint: I missed alot! Omg, I still love it though.. PAMS!! |
Thank you Voldemort&88 and D/Hr4evr. BTW everybody, Susi told me that she has written the chapter, both for this and for Afraid to Love. She just needs to type them up. We're both swamped with schoolwork, we're doing this big exhibition...anyway, she will type them as soon as she can. Happy Valentine's Day, everyone!! |
Oh man my word processor is on the fritz, the context is doomed... i will post as soon as possible... like two days or so... |
*New Reader* I like it alot PAMS!!! |
Okay everyone listen up! *spots new reader* Oh hello hufflepuffyness...ahem...welcome all new readers! Anyway, susi will put up the new chapter within half an hour! |
Ok, so it was a bit more than a half an hour but... They reached Edinburgh as the clock struck midnight. The wind blew, cold off the wild moors. Salazar nervously fingered his locket. He looked at the words inscribed on it. "Are we there yet?" the ornate snake on it asked. "No, be patient," he whispered to it in Parseltongue. "Talking to your snake again, Sal?" Godric asked. "I still can't believe you can understand her." "Can we get to the inn?" asked Helga. She was cold and miserable. She desperately wanted the warmth and comfort of the Honeyed Doxy Inn. "All right Hel, as soon as I've made sure we have everything," said Rowena, checking the items in their packs. "C'mon Ro, can't can't we go in now?" Godric asked. He too was tired ans chilled to the bone. "Hark who's talking Godric, where would you be without your socks?" Rowena told him. Godric looked down at his feet rather sheepishly. He had always had a slightly unhealthy obsession with socks. "Blast it! Godric's socks can wait! We're tired, hungry, cold, and on top of everything, it's started to rain." Helga exploded in one of her rare displays of anger. The others nodded fervently. "Oh all right," Rowena said, slightly flustered by her friend's outburst. The four walked to the door which Salazar opened and they entered eagerly. The atmosphere was cozy, the barmaid had rosy cheeks, and the patrons were only slightly tipsy. A small wash boy scuttled across the floor. "Two rooms please," Godric said to the woman at the bar. "Double or single?" the girl replied. "Two single beds per room, if you please," he told her. "Up the stairs, to the right and turn right again, rooms 155 ans 156. That will be fourteen Galleons please." "Thank you," Gopdric said, handing her the gold coins. They said their goodbyes and began to climb up the long staircase. * * * Godric put his sword under his pillowcase, where he always kept it. It made him feel strong and important (and he knew no one would touch his socks.) Salazar ran his long, pale fingers over the surface of his ring in his last waking moments before falling into a dreamless sleep. Rowena put her diadem on and looked in the mirror, and she felt her mind fill with questions which she happily fell asleep contemplating. Helga placed her mother's cup with her family creat on it up on the mantel, the yellow, gold, and black obsidian looked stunning in the firelight. Helga slept remembering her happy childhood and her mother baking her treacle tart. As the four slept peacefully, power reared its ugly head and the friends would not always remain so. Sorry about the socks... |
socks lol |
I like the post! But I have a question, Why can't they just Apparate?? |
Well they could, but they're adventurous people, so Apparating would take all the fun out of it...and it would take most of the excitement out of this fan fiction! lol I am almost done with the next chapter. It should be up sometime this weekend, I think. |
can't wait |
Well, to further answer your question Hufflepuffyness, they might miss something, seeing as they're on a quest to find the right place :D |
love it! (as usual) can't wait until the next chapter! |
**New Reader** I luv your story!!! The characters are so funny! This story is like the only one I've read about the founders! SO GOOD!!! Bye for now! ~Abby~ |
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