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harryzabest 10-08-2008 08:59 PM

i think so too. hey, maybe i should start a fan fic! i love writing!

Paint.the.Limelight 10-08-2008 09:26 PM

Yeah, maybe.

OK peopleses, I have it! I will post it now.

Paint.the.Limelight 10-08-2008 09:59 PM

Here you go!



Chapter Twenty-Four

Twenty minutes later, Salazar hadn’t returned yet, and Godric was becoming worried. “Sal has been at the toilet for a long time,” he said nervously.

“Maybe he fell in,” suggested Rowena. “Just kidding, just kidding,” she added hastily as Godric shot her an icy glare. “Really Ric, you worry too much. Like Helga.”

“Hey!” protested Helga. “I’m not nervous!” She was biting her fingernails and her eyes were darting around the room. The others glanced at her. “Well, maybe I am, a little,” she admitted. “But Ro is right. I’m sure he’s fine.”


At that moment, the door banged open and Salazar stormed in. The other three jumped up and started bombarding him with questions.

“Where were you?”

“What took you so long?”

Salazar had to think of an answer, fast. “Um..nothing,” he said shiftily. “Darn it, it’s so hard to go to the toilet here. We have to put them in.” Whew.


Rowena nodded. “You see, Ric? You worry too much. He’s fine.”

Helga launched herself at Salazar unexpectedly. “Oh Sal, I was so nervous!” she cried, throwing her arms around him. Salazar staggered under her weight.

“Whoa there, Helga!” he said hastily. “I’m okay!” He patted her head awkwardly and gently pushed her away. The other two sniggered. Helga blushed and backed away.

“All right, let’s get back to celebrating!” said Godric merrily, but Salazar pulled him aside.

“Can we talk?”

Ric regarded him curiously. “Sure,” he said. “What’s on your mind?”

Salazar did not smile. “I am…unhappy about letting Muggle-borns into the school.”

Godric sighed. “We’ve been through this,” he said. “We will make sure that everyone under your House is pure-blood. You do not have to worry.”

Salazar growled. “But they’ll still be in the school, and I’ll have to teach the scum!”

Godric frowned. “How can you say that? Helga is Muggle born! I know that the people who killed your relatives, and Ro’s, and mine too, were Muggle-born, but holding that against all of them is just prejudiced, Salazar.”

Salazar’s eyes were blazing. “I will not have them under this roof!” he screamed. Godric backed away, but Salazar bore down upon him. “Helga is the one exception. They are all unworthy! Every single one of them!”

Godric regarded him with wary eyes. “Salazar, please calm down. We have all made our decisions. You will have to let them come here, or you shall not be allowed to teach.” He walked away, leaving the irate Salazar fuming behind him.

Paint.the.Limelight 10-08-2008 11:23 PM

so, what do you guys think? Comments?

draco*malfoy*lover 10-09-2008 12:44 AM

Ooh, that was fantastic! i liked it when Helga hugged him. =]

hehe

pams!
Prongs.

Paint.the.Limelight 10-09-2008 11:18 PM

Thanks!

harryzabest 10-10-2008 12:34 AM

that was really awesome! PAMS PAMS PAMS!

Abbie0312 10-10-2008 03:18 PM

Omg!!! Hehe it'd be funny if he'd fallen in the toilet lol!

harryzabest 10-10-2008 07:17 PM

yep! that would be good....

Paint.the.Limelight 10-10-2008 08:32 PM

I was considering it. I really was. Lol!!

OK, I'm not sure if Susannah knows that we've put up the new chappie yet!

dark_emeralds 10-10-2008 11:53 PM

Yay! Chappie! Ok, I'll have to think of something... :)

Paint.the.Limelight 10-10-2008 11:59 PM

Oh, and now she does know. Lol!!

PAMS

dark_emeralds 10-11-2008 12:21 AM

yes i do... hmm.. man eating gophers don't work... what does...? Hmm...

Paint.the.Limelight 10-12-2008 03:23 PM

Umm...I'm sorry, what?

PAMS!!

Obsidian Sage 10-13-2008 04:18 AM

Lol I bet Helga took Sally by surprise. Though, I wouldn't have expected it either :P

Paint.the.Limelight 10-13-2008 03:46 PM

Haha yeah, well Helga worries too much.

Paint.the.Limelight 11-16-2008 01:08 AM

OK, I've made a decision. It's time to finish this FF up. There are only going to be a few more chapters, guys.

Paint.the.Limelight 12-01-2008 09:32 PM

Okay, Susi is sick or something, I haven't been able to get ahold of her, but I will talk to her as soon as I can. Sorry for the wait, you guys. *goes off to stalk Susi :mwaha:*

Paint.the.Limelight 12-08-2008 08:16 PM

All right everyone! Susi's sick so she won't be posting for awhile. I'm really sorry it's taking so long!

Paint.the.Limelight 12-26-2008 01:22 AM

OK, you know what, I've decided to post the new chapter myself, it's just taking her way too long...I'll put it up later tonight. Promise! I'm sooo sorry for the wait guys!

*goes off to write chapter*

Paint.the.Limelight 12-26-2008 02:16 AM

OK here it is guys.

Chapter Twenty-Five

"That's it!" fumed Salazar. "I've had it with you, all three of you!" He whirled around and started to stomp away angrily.

"Sal, wait!" cried Helga. She ran after him and caught his arm. "Sal--"
Salazar whipped around. All Helga had time to register was the expression on his face. His face was twisted into an angry, almost demonic scowl, hard lines etched into steel. There was cold fury in his emerald eyes, burning there like wildfire. He wrenched his arm free of her grasp with more strength than necessary. Salazar then slapped Helga across the face, hard. She cried out and stumbled backwards, but he had already turned and was storming off. Even through her tear-filled eyes, Helga could see that the muscles of his back and neck were tight with anger under his bottle-green cloak.


Rowena ran forwards and put her hands on Helga's shoulders and looked at her. There was an angry bright red welt raising up on her cheek and there were even a few scratches where Salazar's fingernails had grazed her skin. Tears were pouring down Helga's face. Rowena hugged her tightly. Helga's tears made a salty wet spot all over Rowena's neck and chest. Ro pulled back gently and said in a soft, soothing voice, "Hel, dear, Salazar just needs some space and some time to calm down. He'll come back and apologize, you'll see."

Godric joined them. He put his arms around both of them and for a moment they all just shared a group hug. "Salazar has a bit of a twisted mind, but that can't weigh us down," Godric murmured. "We said we'd make a school and so we shall, Sal or no Sal." He looked down at Rowena, whose face was closest to his. "We need to Owl everyone we know. Anyone who has children who need a magical education. And we need other staff."

Rowena looked up at Godric and was slightly startled to see his face just inches from her own. "I know a few people," she murmured back. "Actually I know a lot of people." She smiled. Godric smiled back.

"And I as well," said Helga, who had composed herself. "I guess it is settled then. We should sleep on it, see if Sal comes back, and start sending out owls in the morning."

Meanwhile, Salazar was in his happy place. The Chamber.
He was curled up on the stone floor, contemplating his actions. Did I do the right thing? he wondered. Salazar sighed aloud. The purple toad in front of him let out a croak. He looked at it. He looked at the chicken egg it was sitting on. Not much of it was visible but for a tiny part of it in between two folds of the toad's slimy, horny skin. He supposed it didn't much matter the intention behind his actions. For soon, the egg would hatch and he would have all he wanted. A true friend. Someone to talk to. The great Basilisk of Slytherin would go down in history as the greatest and most famous basilisk. The Monster of the Chamber of Secrets. He liked the sound of that.

He liked the sound of that very much.



Comments?

hpObsessed 12-26-2008 06:47 AM

Very nice!! But I couldn’t believe that Salazar hit Helga! :gasp:
The last part was really nicely done too!
PAMS!!
:flower:

Abbie0312 12-26-2008 12:23 PM

Salazar is a big nasty! How could he be so mean?

Paint.the.Limelight 12-26-2008 08:17 PM

Aw, he was just acting out of anger. He'll come back and apologize and it'll be all rainbows and butterflies again.

draco*malfoy*lover 01-14-2009 05:13 PM

rainbows and butterflies with salazar?
haha fantastic.

pams.


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