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06-25-2006, 04:47 AM
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#1276 (permalink)
|  All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look'Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
Posts: 8,162
First Year |
Well, maybe for you. For me it's 9:47!  *spins* I'm glad you're working on it!!!  | 
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06-25-2006, 05:02 AM
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#1277 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai  Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year |  Bassoons galore!
It's only 9:47 there?! Where do you live?!
I'm almost done with this post!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps*  Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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06-25-2006, 05:04 AM
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#1278 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
Posts: 8,162
First Year |
YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY :party4:   :lock2:  
oh yeah, I live in California!
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06-25-2006, 05:08 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Really? I know a few girls from California! They say that it's awesome there.
So guess what? I'M POSTING!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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06-25-2006, 05:12 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
“She’s going into shock again,” said a nurse, rushing towards a wall with a big red button on it. The nurse slammed her hand onto it and the Healer rushed into the room.
“Pulse is 108,” he said, removing his fingers from her wrist. “Fever, clammy skin, eyes dilated. This is serious.”
However, it didn’t look like it. Marie just laid there, her eyes blank and her mouth slightly open. She would take a short, deep breath occasionally, but besides that, she was still.
The Healer wheeled around towards Remus. “You all need to make a decision, or she’s going to die. Are you sure that she doesn't have any family?”
I wanted to slap him for being so insensitive, but I knew he was right. “Positive. Did you get any eflornithine?
He shook his head. “No, no. What’s your decision?”
Remus bit his lip. “Just give her the melarsoprol, but be gentle.”
“We’ll be as gentle as possible,” he promised. He pulled out a long needle as the nurse held down Marie.
“Come on,” I said softly to Remus. “You don’t want to see this.”
He nodded, turned slowly, and walked out of the room. When we were in the hallway, he collapsed onto the ground. “I don’t feel right about giving that to her.”
“It’s her only chance, Remus,” said James softly. “You made the right choice. She’d want you to do anything you could to help her.”
A loud beeping suddenly echoed out around us as two more Healers raced past us and into the room.
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“I'm very sorry for your loss,” said the same blonde nurse who had announced that Marie was going into shock. “A funeral director will meet you shortly.”
She left Remus there, tears falling down his cheeks softly.
I raced after her. “Wait! I have a question.”
“I'm sorry,” she said. “All questions really need to go to the Healer.”
“It’s just… I mean, you said she had an allergic reaction to the melarsoprol,” I began. “Just what exactly happened?”
She shifted her weight from her right foot to her left. “I'm really not at liberty to discuss that. If you’ll just speak to the doctor-”
“Please,” I begged. “If not for me, than for him.”
I nodded my head in the direction where Remus now had his head in James’ chest. Compulsions took over his body so much that he was shaking wildly.
“I… I didn’t even get to say goodbye,” he moaned between sobs.
The nurse looked at him so long that I thought she was about to cry herself. “All right, but don’t tell anyone I told you. When Miss Newcomb had her reaction… her brain began to swell. We had to put her on painkillers and drill a hole in the back of her head, to drain out the excess liquid, but it didn’t work. She… in a sense… Drowned herself.”
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“Mister Lupin?” asked a shy woman in green scrubs- I assumed she was working her way up to becoming a Healer. All of the other nurses wore purple and the Healers wore blue.
“Yes?” replied Remus. He’s finally stopped crying long enough to breathe, but his eyes were still bloodshot.
“We… we found this next to her nightstand. We don’t know how it got there… The best assumption was that Miss Newcomb came out of her coma for a few minutes, and no one knew. How she ever managed to get enough strength to write something out is mind blowing...” The woman handed over a doctor’s prescription pad.
Remus took it in his shaky hands and I read over his shoulder.
Wobbly, uneven words met my eyes.
“Dear Remus,
I love you, and I want you to be happy. Don’t mourn. It’s okay.”
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 06-25-2006 at 05:24 AM.
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06-25-2006, 05:17 AM
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#1281 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
Posts: 8,162
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I knew you were going to kill her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
Poor Remus!!!!!!!! *goes to mourn her myself*
I still love your writing, even if you killed her...*takes deep breath*
What's your name again?
*runs away to mourn and announce an update*
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06-25-2006, 05:20 AM
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#1282 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
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What's your name again?
*runs away to mourn and announce an update*
Haha, nice. :] It's Caitlin. You're Jessica, right? Would you be offended if I accidentaly called you Kayla?
What update?
I'm going to bed. It's 1:15 AM & my comforter is calling my name! GOODNIGHT! <3
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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06-25-2006, 05:23 AM
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#1283 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
Posts: 8,162
First Year |
 I know *braindead* I thought it was but just making sure........
HI CAITLIN!!!!!!!!!! Yes, I'm Jessica, no I wouldn't be offended...but why would you call me that? O_o
the update on your FF silly, the post u just did!
oo, so your *calculates* 3 hours ahead of me! goodnight!!!!!!!! | |
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06-25-2006, 05:26 AM
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#1284 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
'Cause Kayala is your siggy, so I might get confused, lol!
Haha rigghhttt! *headdesk* I'm blonde. Where did you announce it at?
Yep, three hours. Night! :]
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 | |
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06-25-2006, 05:27 AM
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#1285 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
Posts: 8,162
First Year |
Ooo yeah!!! no, I won't be offended
I'm blonde too!! I'm going to announce it in the person above game 
Night!
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06-25-2006, 01:08 PM
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#1286 (permalink)
|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
Great Story Caitlin. I love it. I'm only on Page 14 though. And Lily seems to have fallen for James really soon. Relationships in my fics are always so slow. You have a good style of writing anyway. Keep posting.
Pickles & & Apples = 
Maxie
Last edited by Maxilocks; 06-25-2006 at 01:25 PM.
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06-25-2006, 03:04 PM
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| | Ashwinder
Join Date: May 2004 Location: USA
Posts: 13,555
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Aw... -is sad for Remus- | |
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06-25-2006, 03:28 PM
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#1288 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Roma Galda
Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Haha hey Maxie! I'm so glad that you've stopped by! I tried to take Lily falling for James slow, but to me, I can see where she's coming from: six previous years of constantly being asked out and probably liking him just a little builds up. I didn't want to take it too slow, though, because in my mind, that's very un-Lily-ish.
I'll take your critisim into good use for Fate! :]
I'll check out your FF. I bet it's lovely! :]
Pickles and Apples, always! I mean... I'd die to protect Bonnie's pickles & apples! I wonder if she would hire me to do that, lol. :p
The end of the story is coming uppp....
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
Last edited by the.time.is.now; 06-25-2006 at 03:33 PM.
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06-25-2006, 03:59 PM
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| My name's not JoMessy Hair FanRadio Artist Demiguise
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: FRIDGE'S FRIDGE
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Aww. Very sad post, beautiful, nonetheless. =[
What?! NO! I don't want it to end! *sob* | |
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06-25-2006, 04:03 PM
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#1290 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: California
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No!! Not the end!!!!! | |
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06-25-2006, 06:24 PM
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#1291 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Poor Remus and Marie!!!
I feel all bad for Remus now 
I don't want it to end!!!
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06-25-2006, 06:47 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nikky Suzume
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She died...Can I cry?This is so sad!I want to cry!*starts to cry*This isn't fair!She shouldn't have died!SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE!*whimpers*NO!!!!!!!!no!
On another note...How do you get those things that say "Padfoot's Green Day Girl" and "My name's not Jo"?
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06-25-2006, 06:55 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
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OMG!!! NOT MARIE!!! Poor Remus!!1 I love Remus!!1 Poor Remus!!! This is ssooooo sad!!!! I love it, Caitlin!!! And it's going to end soon... *cries*
AMAZING POST!!! PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!!!
Rain drops are fallin' on my head...
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06-25-2006, 08:18 PM
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#1294 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
I've nearly finished reading and this is so sad - Marie dead. I can't believe it. And why did I have to join in when the end was so near? *ish sad* I'm so sad I think I'll drop Bonnie's pickles and apples. *hands them over to you* I nicked some from her but I think you can have them - I'm too sad to hide and carry them.
Maxie
Last edited by Maxilocks; 06-25-2006 at 08:22 PM.
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06-25-2006, 10:25 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
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I don't want this story to end
herminiefan#1- I didn't do anything to get mine, it was just there one day, but if you want to get one, I'm pretty sure that you just think of the title you want, and then ask the president of your fan club(s) to give you one.
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06-25-2006, 11:32 PM
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| | Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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SHNAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*dies*
-Dog's spirit writing here-
so okay, WAY TO KILL ME! dang! Shnap! Shoes! Cream! like WOW! I knew you'd do that!!!!!! OMG POOR LUPIN!!! OMG I FEEL SOOOOO BADD FOR HIMMMMMMMM
~Dog
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I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. | |
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06-26-2006, 12:09 AM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Arkansas
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aww...i feel soooo bad for remus ...and just think lily and james will soon be gone too! this is so so sad ...good posts tho! pams soon! | |
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06-26-2006, 12:16 AM
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#1298 (permalink)
| All my voices
Think you're snazzySirius gives me 'the look' Porlock
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Originally Posted by purehermione aww...i feel soooo bad for remus ...and just think lily and james will soon be gone too! this is so so sad ...good posts tho! pams soon! that's why I said I wouldn't be able to handle the end of this story!! | |
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06-26-2006, 01:46 PM
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#1299 (permalink)
|  Red-head Ginny Fan
James' Pranks
K.o. Lupin's LoyaltyFirecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Marie died! That is so sad! What's gonna happen next? PAMS!
__________________   ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
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06-26-2006, 05:18 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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The end is near? Nooo! | |
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