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05-27-2006, 01:27 AM
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#751 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
Posts: 1,537
Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicole |
My name is Nicole. The story is great!!!
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05-27-2006, 01:29 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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oOoOoh i saw you alredy before!!! hehehe i feel like I know something now 
well, you sure stumbled into an awesome FF!! WELCOME!!!  names niky *shakes hands*
hehe, i thought youd like my location Caitlin!
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. |
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05-27-2006, 03:00 AM
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#753 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hi Nicole! *pushes Niky out of the way to shake your hand* haha. I'm just kidding Niky. You know I <3 you.
I changed my location, too.
I'm writing... no guarantees on another post yet though because in the middle of writing for TFotW, I get an idea for "Fate" and I go crazy until I can write it down...
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-27-2006, 03:13 AM
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#754 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
Posts: 3,446
Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
what are we talking about?  are we talking about tfofw or fate?
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05-27-2006, 12:42 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
Posts: 903
Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second | Quote:
Originally Posted by the.time.is.now I'm gonan be sad when this FF ends too...
So my little sister's friend is over.. she's seven... and we're dancing, right? to radio disney... and she starts like shaking her but * stuff... and then she started POLE DANCING. O.O And she's SEVEN. I'm just... like... wtf? lol she what??????? Are you sure that she's seven............. and not like 19?
Anyway.............. are you going to post more this weekend?
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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05-27-2006, 01:40 PM
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#756 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! Quote:
are we talking about tfofw or fate?
Both. Quote:
she what??????? Are you sure that she's seven............. and not like 19?
Nope, she's definantley seven... she's in my little sister's firts grade class. Quote:
Anyway.............. are you going to post more this weekend?
Yeah... Gonna try, anyway. I have a wedding to go to tonight so I'm not going to post anything from the wedding scene yet until I see a real one [even though it's in Mrs. Micklejohn's backyard... but whatever...it's still a wedding.]
*poketh my neweth siggy*
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-27-2006, 02:30 PM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
Posts: 903
Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second | Quote:
Originally Posted by the.time.is.now Nope, she's definantley seven... she's in my little sister's firts grade class. Wow.......... that is messed up! Quote:
Originally Posted by the.time.is.now Yeah... Gonna try, anyway. I have a wedding to go to tonight so I'm not going to post anything from the wedding scene yet until I see a real one [even though it's in Mrs. Micklejohn's backyard... but whatever...it's still a wedding.] Ok, I can't wait for the wedding scene! How are you going to end this fanfic? Is the ending going to be like the wedding........ or when Harry is born........ or when the night they die? I think it would be cute do to a chapter of Lilly and James married......... but it's your fancfic, and I'll be happy with whatever you choose to do.
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed.
Last edited by HPlover_09; 05-27-2006 at 02:33 PM.
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05-27-2006, 02:35 PM
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#758 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
Posts: 1,537
Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicole |
I can't wait for the story to continue, and Fate sounds cool too.
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05-27-2006, 02:39 PM
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#759 (permalink)
| Ashwinder
Join Date: May 2004 Location: USA
Posts: 13,555
| Ultimate Potterite Original original I can't wait to read Fate too. Let us know when it's been posted 
Add more soon, please Your story is great! They're going to get married 
I left you a usernote too...just something simple 
-Monika |
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05-27-2006, 04:19 PM
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#760 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
Posts: 3,446
Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
have you decided what fate will be about?
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05-27-2006, 10:45 PM
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#761 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 15,691
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*pushes Caitlin out of the way and with an evil smirk* nah im joking i heart you too caitlin 
*stares at Caitlin's siggy in awe* o god please DON'T write a FF on how hermione and draco should end up together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *kneels down and begs*
so what else is going on? i just came back from lunch with a friend and there no one online to talk to!!!
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. |
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05-28-2006, 01:24 PM
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#762 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
Posts: 3,446
Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
im waiting for more.... please?
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05-28-2006, 01:26 PM
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#763 (permalink)
| Ashwinder
Join Date: May 2004 Location: USA
Posts: 13,555
| Ultimate Potterite Original original Please, add more soon |
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05-28-2006, 04:54 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! Quote:
*stares at Caitlin's siggy in awe* o god please DON'T write a FF on how hermione and draco should end up together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *kneels down and begs*
Haha. Just read it when it comes along. Quote:
I left you a usernote too...just something simple
Yay, I'm gonna go read it! =] Quote:
How are you going to end this fanfic? Is the ending going to be like the wedding........ or when Harry is born........ or when the night they die?
The ending is going to be the night that they die, so they still have a year left before the story is over... There's not much left to the story though. They have to escape Voldmort two more times to make the prophecy true...
The wedding last night was so romantic <3<3<3<3
I'm writing. =]
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-28-2006, 08:58 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
So I'm posting, if anyone is interested...
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-28-2006, 08:58 PM
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#766 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
Posts: 1,537
Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicole |
I Can't Wait!!!!!!!!
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05-28-2006, 08:59 PM
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#767 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose | Whoa! A lot has happened in just one day! I can't wait to read Fate!!!!! It sounds awesome already!!!!!!! *pokes Caitlin*
I can't wait till you post!!!!!! Yay! You're writing!!!!!
Thanks for the cute user note!!!!!! BTW my b-day's in January...little while away lol
Thanks for reading my second ff! I hope you enjoy it!!!
And the kid has a normal elbow...he's just can...pretty sweet
Oh, the new flavor of the week is... STRAWBERRY!
~Rose
Last edited by halfbloodprincess92; 05-28-2006 at 09:01 PM.
Reason: are you stalking me? *runs away*
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05-28-2006, 09:01 PM
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#768 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
The isle was laden with rose petals and an organ was playing; my father wrapped his arm in mine and we began to walk. Here comes the bride… here comes the bride…
Everyone was standing and smiling. I saw James not far away in front of me.
My father whispered that he loved me in my ear while I tried not to trip on my dress. We got closer and I was surprised to find that I’d been holding my breath.
Finally, the music stopped as my father handed me over to James.
“Take care of her,” he said softly, and walked away.
James wrapped my hand in mine as the Minister nodded.
“Dearly Beloved, we are gathered together here in the sign of God – and in the face of this company – to join together this man and this woman in holy matrimony, which is commended to be honorable among all men; and therefore – is not by any – to be entered into unadvisedly or lightly – but reverently, discreetly, advisedly and solemnly. Into this holy estate these two persons present now come to be joined. If any person can show just cause why they may not be joined together – let them speak now or forever hold their peace.
"Marriage is the union of husband and wife in heart, body and mind. It is intended for their mutual joy – and for the help and comfort given on another in prosperity and adversity. But more importantly – it is a means through which a stable and loving environment may be attained.
"Through marriage, James Potter and Lily Evans make a commitment together to face their disappointments – embrace their dreams – realize their hopes – and accept each other’s failures. James and Lily will promise one another to aspire to these ideals throughout their lives together – through mutual understanding – openness – and sensitivity to each other.
"We are here today – before God – because marriage is one of His most sacred wishes – to witness the joining in marriage of James and Lily. This occasion marks the celebration of love and commitment with which this man and this woman begin their life together. And now – through me – He joins you together in one of the holiest bonds.
"Who gives this woman in marriage to this man?”
My father stepped forward. “Her family and friends gathered here today do.”
“This is a beginning and a continuation of their growth as individuals. With mutual care, respect, responsibility and knowledge comes the affirmation of each one’s own life happiness, growth and freedom. With respect for individual boundaries comes the freedom to love unconditionally…”
I found myself zoning out at the man continued. It soon came to me that I was thinking about James and Milo all over again… and if it would ever happen once more...
I leaned in towards James. “Tell me truthfully, James. When you kissed her, were you happy?”
His eyes grew wide and I could tell that he didn’t find this an appropriate time to discuss this. However, he answered just as quietly as me, “Who? Milo? No, Lil, I wasn’t. The whole time I thought of you, and I felt horrible.”
“Do you, James Potter, take Lily Evans to be your wife – to live together after God’s ordinance – in the holy estate of matrimony? Will you love her, comfort her, honor and keep her, in sickness and in health, for richer, for poorer, for better, for worse, in sadness and in joy, to cherish and continually bestow upon her your heart’s deepest devotion, forsaking all others, keep yourself only unto her as long as you both shall live?”
I bit my lip a little at the last sentence, but James looked at me lovingly. “I do.”
“And do you, Lily Evans, take James Potter to be your husband – to live together after God’s ordinance – in the holy estate of matrimony? Will you love him, comfort him, honor and keep him, in sickness and in health, for richer, for poorer, for better, for worse, in sadness and in joy, to cherish and continually bestow upon him your heart’s deepest devotion, forsaking all others, keep yourself only unto him as long as you both shall live?”
I closed my eyes and breathed in deeply. This was the time. Now or never. I sighed and met his eyes. “I… I…”
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-28-2006, 09:05 PM
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#769 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose | WHAT!?!?! Why is she hesitating!!!!! SAY "I do"!!!!!!1 Eek!!!!!!! This is dramatic!!!!!!!! If Lily won't say it, I'll say it for her: I do! I hope she says "I do"!!!!!!!!
Please post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a fantastic post like always!!!!!!!!!
~Rose |
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05-28-2006, 09:07 PM
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#770 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hahaha. I love you Rose.
[& I love weddings! I nearly cried last night!]
Say "I do" Lily! Say "I do!" She's not listening to me... -_-
Gotta go cut the grass... fun, fun.
I hope you all enjoyed the post! =]
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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05-29-2006, 12:43 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year | Say yes say yes say yes!Oh come on Lily!Just say yes!PLEASE!!!!!!!!If that doesn't work...then....I command you to say yes!SAY IT!!SAY IT!!!!!pamsoid!
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05-29-2006, 12:52 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicole |
I'm so happy you wrote more!
Why is Lily is hesitating? You only have to say I do. That's it. It's not that complicated to say! PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
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05-29-2006, 12:55 AM
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#773 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 15,691
| EEK!!!!!!!
CAITLIN ARE YOU MAD???????? YOURE GONA GIVE ALL YOUR DEVOTED READERS A HEART ATTACK!!!!!!!! OMGOSHHHHHHHHHHH LILY SAY YESSS!!! STUPID JAMES THE THINGS YOU DOOOO!!!!!!
*anyone else noticed i passed the 2,000 posts??
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you.
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05-29-2006, 01:03 AM
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#774 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: I am yet to figure o
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicole |
Lily wouldn't be hesitating if James hadn't cheated on her. ERR!!! Stupid, Stupid James!!!!!
^Congrats on going over 2000, I'm not even close!!!!^
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05-29-2006, 01:15 AM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 15,691
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Nicole! want to run and kill James and Milo? to me it sounds like fun!
Come on Caitlin! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!
__________________ I love you, Niky. I love you, I love you, I love you. I could say it so many times, it wouldn't be enough. I love you. |
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