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03-21-2006, 05:33 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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OH my God!!!!!!!!!!! those two post where awesome, no they where beyond words. I can't explain how wonderfull they where. U have to post more very very very very very sooooon!!!!!!!!!
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03-21-2006, 05:32 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Nikki- you're a nut! Yeah I had jazz band today too but I'm skipping it 'cause I still don't feel well. And I knew that you liked the post... but I just had to be sure, ya know? lol.
Nargles- you're on Spring Break right now? LUCKY! Ours isn't until April third, I think! Well, welcome to my ficcy! I'm really glad to have you here! & yeah, I'm a new member... Quick question though. "& you're a new member, too"... are most new people not good? & I PROMISE I'm not trying ot be mean, 'cause that sounds mean... arghhh. Nevermind, lol.
Susan- yay! I'm glad you liked it! Well be warned... there's a lot more coming up! lol you're great!!
All right everyone... I'm going to write a post soon and then I'll be back on later! I'll be posting in like fifteen minutes at the most!
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03-21-2006, 05:34 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
AH AH AH AH LOOK! *points* I made Hufflepuff! I bet it's 'cause I said that I liked ALL the houses. I wish I would've been more honest and said that I liked Slytherin the best, though. But Cedric was from Hufflepuff, so that makes me feel a little better! POSTING!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-21-2006, 05:56 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
The next morning I rushed out of the Hospital Wing, relieved that I could finally leave the smell of sterilization and the horrible taste of the Pepper Up Potion.
My Herbology class took place in Greenhouse number eight and when I sat down next to Marie I couldn’t help to ask. “Where’s James?”
“I don’t know,” she shrugged. “What does it matter? You hate him anyway.”
“Hate is a strong word.” I said roughly and saw Sirius wink at Marie. They just thought that they were so sneaky.
“Hello, class,” the professor said, striding into the room. “Today we shall be working with the Alihotsy. Can anyone tell me what it does?”
My hand was instantly in the air. “Alihotsy leaves, when touched to the bare skin, cause hysteria.”
“Excellent, ten points to Gryffindor. So, it is your duty to fight the struggling plant and re-pot it, but to also keep it from sneaking onto your skin.”
I pit on my elbow-high gloves and grabbed the root of the plant. Its leaves instantly began to crawl up my arm, trying to find a patch of skin to rub on.
“So what happened in the Hospital Wing after we left?” Marie asked casually, watching the plant snake up my arm.
“Nothing,” I replied honestly, but my mind began to wander. He almost kissed me… and I didn’t stop him.
“Careful, it’s trying to pull up your sleeve.”
“Oh,” I said, exasperated. “Stupefy.”
It froze.
“Nothing, huh?” Marie questioned, eyebrows raised, and helped me force it into the next pot.
“Mmhmm.” I replied, distracted again.
Suddenly, there was a loud commotion from across the room and Peter Pettigrew, a boy in my grade who was often found trailing behind Sirius, Remus, and James, suddenly jumped up.
“I JUST CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE!” he screamed, tears rolling down his face. “AHHHHHHH!”
I watched, bemused, as he ran around the room, chasing something that he could only see. The professor took something out of her pocket, shoved it in his mouth, and began to coo softly to him until he was sitting on the floor, knees up to his chest, tears rolling down his face, and his thumb in his mouth.
“There, there,” she said softly. “Miss Newcomb, will you assist Mr. Pettigrew to the Hospital Wing?”
Marie stood up grimly and led him onto the grounds.
Sirius came over and took her place. “Looking for James?”
“No.”
“Well, he told me to tell you that he won't be here for a little while.”
I pretended that I hadn’t heard him and ripped the roots of another Alihotsy out of the ground.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-21-2006, 07:04 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where my heart lives forever, with in all Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley Ship stories!!!!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
Oh this is awesome. I love it. U have to post more sooooon, Very very very very very Sooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-21-2006, 11:06 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hehe yay I'm glad that you like it! Well, I'm going to wait for a little more feedback & then I'll post again, okay? Thanks!! <33
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03-21-2006, 11:28 PM
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| McG's Pet Jobberknoll
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: At band most likely.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nemia Havishaw |
Oh my!!! Greats!!! I was really excited when I read it!!! They almost kissed yay!!! The excitement is rising!!! Its overflowing...YAyadgfhskljgiuwh(just need to get that out you understand)!!! Anywho great can't wait to hear more!!! Freezing my butt off here in Indidana so give me something to read while trying to get warm!!! PAMS!!!
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03-21-2006, 11:40 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Sama- Haha yeah I know I wanted to see them kiss too! Even I have to wait! Why is it so cold? I think, just 'cause you're in Indiana [my mom was born there] I'll dedicate this post to you!
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03-21-2006, 11:44 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
I didn’t see James or Remus for the next two weeks and concern gripped at my stomach even tighter. Every time I asked Sirius about it he turned a deaf ear. I wanted to scream.
Even more odd, the teachers weren’t suspicious about their continual absence. It felt as if everyone knew something I didn’t, and that was extremely annoying.
Finally, at the end of Potions, I approached professor Slughorn.
“Er… Professor?” I asked gently.
He looked up from the essays he was grading and smiled, his eyes sparkling. “Ah, excellent potion today Miss Evans. You are exceptionally talented.”
I blushed. “Thanks very much, sir, but that’s not what I’m here about… Er… well, see, I was just rather curious… do you know where James and Remus have been? There my friends, you see, and I’m awfully worried.”
He looked at me thoughtfully, and said, “Miss Evans, I simply cannot tell you, though I must admit that I was wondering how long it would take you to ask. You’re naturally very curious… and, well, I’m bound to a sort of... ah… contract, you see.”
My face fell but I tried to hide it with a plastic smile. “Oh, well that’s okay…”
To my surprise, his grin spread farther. “Now don’t give up so easy; you’d disappoint me if you did. I wouldn’t do this with many other students, Miss Evans, so take it for granted. Here… It’s a clue.”
He handed me a torn piece of parchment with fancy cursive scribbled on it. I guess he really had been waiting for me to ask.
I wanted to hug him.
I headed towards the library and read it again and again. By the full moon the answer lies
A potion that will not rid of the disguise
However, the effects are cured
But only if this potion maker in lured
Waving at Madam Pekkons, I entered the Restricted Section. The benefits of being Head Girl were immense.
I searched for any potions book I could find but was soon frustrated that my task proved harder than I imagined. I pondered momentarily on the Polyjuice Potion, since the fluxweed needed to be picked at the full moon, but how would that work? The Polyjuice Potion made a disguise while the riddle said that what ever this was wouldn’t get rid of the disguise.
I was so confused and sleepy and I couldn’t help but to lay my head down and sleep.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-22-2006, 12:03 AM
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| McG's Pet Jobberknoll
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: At band most likely.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nemia Havishaw |
Its cold because it snowed in March!!!! Today was the first day of Spring and it snowed. Just imagine having to wait for a bus while snowing and that's what i did today!!! I loved this post and I can't wait to hear more!!! Lily trying to figure out their secret. Its a good secret and it seems to be kept very well. PAMS!!! And a little more PAMS!!! Can I have PAMS with that? And to put it simply just P-A-M-S!!! What's that spell? PAMS!!! (I'm hyper today)
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03-22-2006, 12:12 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
I thought yesterday was the first day of Spring? That's what my calander said. I can't believe it snowed!! How insane is that? Tell me you missed school at least! Haha, I bet you know what the secret is. Do you?
I love your hyperness... & your little PAMS cheer you have going on there, lol!
Well I'm off to play some games with my little brother and sister. When I get back, I'll post again! <33
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03-22-2006, 01:39 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year |
cool!And, congrats on getting into Hufflepuff!!!!!!!!!!!Ever heard of Gryffpuff?Lovely posts!!!!!I know what potion it is!I don't know the name,but, I know what it does!LUCKIES!!!!!!!!!My spring break isn't until after April 3rd.Maybe it starts April 5th, not sure though.PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PAMSOID!!!PAMS!PAMRRS! !!!!!!James, you are so, so so mean and nice.Not telling Lily that you were going to be away, but, almost kissing her.Shesh!!!!!!!!!
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03-22-2006, 01:44 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
A Grypuff? Like a mix between a Gryffindor and a Hufflepuff or something? Nope, I've never heard of it! Haha yeah the potion is obvious to all of us HP-genuises but Lily is kinda slow on the uptake lol. Ahh I CANNOT WAIT until Spring Break; you have no idea. BTW- I'm not going to school tomorrow either but idk if I'll be on the computer much- I'm staying home to clean all day 'cause my b/f is coming over for dinner & I want everything to be perfect. Haha well you think that what James just did was mean? You just wait. He's gonna be real nice to... ahh that's all I can say. James is such a contradiction. <I think I might have to use that line later on, lol. I might just encorporate this conversation into my story! Heck yes! You guys give me such great ideas!
Well I'm going to go put the kids to bed and then I'll post! Sorry about the wait!
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03-22-2006, 02:54 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Hmm anyone here? If not, whatever... but if so... then I'm fixing to post! Though it is really, really short...
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03-22-2006, 02:57 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore! By the full moon the answer lies… The full moon? Wolfs howl at the moon. A potion will not rid of the disguise… What disguise? However, the effects are cured… The effects of the disguise? But only if the potion maker is lured… Is the potion so hard that only one person knows how to make it?
I woke up, and it all clicked. Remus was always in and out of school and every time he came back he looked ill and sickly. Nivy Orson was the creator of the potion.
Remus was a werewolf.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33 |
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03-22-2006, 03:02 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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yay!!!!Another post!!!!!!You're right!Its really really short!!!!!But, at least she figured it out!!!!!!!!!PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!ANd, I'm here!
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03-22-2006, 03:23 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Yay you're here! Yeah I had to make that one really short because the next one is pretty long, but I'm not going ot post it until tomorrow. But, hey, I'm making a new signature. Will you tell me what you think of it if I post it up?
Even better- What if you tell me what you think of my signature... and then I'll post?
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-22-2006, 03:53 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year | You mean the signature you have now?Or the one that you posted in the sumbit signature?I personally like them both.But, I like the one that you want to get now better.I really love the fact that you put some of your story into you signature!But, what does the shop window with the sign in it, and the other pictures have to do with anything?Otherwise, I LOVE your new signature!!!!!PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.In some people's eyes I would be in Gryffpuff.You were right though.It is a combination of Gryffindor and Hufflepuff.
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03-22-2006, 03:56 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
The one I put in the Submit Your Signature. So you saw that, huh? I like the random pictures... they don't really represent anything but the "For Rent" one because it constantly reminds me what I want to happen later on in the story, as does the camera. Yay, so you replied! Would you like a post, then? It's long!
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03-22-2006, 03:58 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year |
yes please ma'am!!!!!Oh, so that's what those pictures stood for!They were really random!!!!!!!!!!!I didn't get it!Now I do though!Thanks for helping me understand!!!!!!!PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-22-2006, 03:59 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Haha no problem! Yay, they're kinda just my reminders... Eww, I just accidentaly ate after my cat! Eww! POSTING!!
By the way- this is long because it's two posts in one... so love me! lol.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-22-2006, 04:03 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Once the initial shock has passed a whole new feeling of worry placed it: James and Remus are out in the world, unprotected, and Remus was to transform soon. How would James keep Remus in line, and even worse, how could James keep himself from being bitten?
I raced up to the Owlery and looked for the fastest bird.
“Bring me back an address book,” I whispered, and the tawny owl took off quickly. I’d considered asking the teachers myself where Mr. Orson lived, but they’d automatically know what I was up to… and for once, that just wasn’t acceptable.
Finally, after ten minutes of waiting, it came back with a thick, leather-bound book.
“Thanks very much!” I said, and flipped excitedly, looking for Orson. “Found it! Nivy Orson, Eighteen Ninety-Three, Godric’s Hollow.”
“That’s a Muggle village,” a soft voice behind me said, making me jump.
I wheeled around to see Avery, the Head Boy, staring at me with a mix of curiosity and hatred.
“What do you want?” I asked sharply.
“To know why you’re looking up my filthy traitor uncle.”
“You’re related to him?”
“Unfortunately. He’s so disgusting… mixing himself with the Muggles and helping the werewolves be reasonable.”
“And what’s wrong with that?”
He laughed like I was an idiot. “What, what’s wrong with that? He is reigning; the werewolves will all be at His side soon, and no matter how many potions Orson makes, Orson will loose because He is above all others!”
I stepped back; Avery was raving like a madman.
He came closer. “And, now, Little Miss Perfect, you’re going to go find him. Why? WHY? LOOK AT ME WHEN I’M TALKING TO YOU, YOU FILTHY MUGGLE!”
I took a few more steps backwards, not breaking my eye contact with him. I’d reached the open window. Any father back and I’d be falling to my death.
He rushed forward and grabbed my neck, shaking me violently. “Why do you want him, why? Are you plotting against me?”
I felt something tugging at my sleeve. Looking down, I saw a pointy green leave.
“You- you wouldn’t happen to have been in the greenhouses, have you?” I asked, gasping for air.
He was muttering to himself, looking around as if searching for something non-existent. “Of course, of course, the cubic centimeter of the mouse is twenty-four, but then why would the terrorists have wanted the coffee? Greenhouses? Oh, yes, I know of those. That’s… that’s where they keep the centralized focal point of the square disc…”
He was making no sense and getting worse every second, but I knew what had happened. Though Avery was evil he wasn’t acting on his own. The Alihotsy leaves had touched his skin, and were quickly going for me.
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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03-22-2006, 04:08 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year |
Nice post!!!!!AVERY!!!!!!!LET ME JINX YOU!!!!!!!!!!LET ME JINX YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AVERY!!!!!!GET AWAY FROM LILY!!!!!YOU MORON!!!LEAVE HER ALONE!!!!!!!!LEAVE HER ALONE YOU IDIOT!!!!!!!LET HER BE!!!!!!!Nice post!!!!!!!Very funny for me!PAMSOID!!!!!
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03-22-2006, 04:09 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Next door to Daniel Radcliffe!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ryan Fifth |
Do the colours mean anything in particular like each individual one????
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03-22-2006, 04:13 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
amberradcliffe-What? Like, the colors of our screename? And I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but this isn't really the place to come in and randomly ask questions unless you're reading the FF. If you have a question, please go here and ask- http://snitchseeker.com/vb3/showthread.php?t=29017 Thanks!
Nikki- haha thanks. But you've got to remember, Avery is under a type of enchancement. He's still really dangerous though... I'm glad you liked it! Man I'm writing like crazy here... I can't wait to see what happens next, either!
__________________ Zoe loves Caitlin the MOST! *glomps* Jess loves and misses Cait more than youuuu!! <33
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