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04-23-2006, 06:31 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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yay!
*impatiently looking at the screen and refreshing page every minute to see if theres any updates*
juss a reminder to everyone, i *THINK* they cant die YET, harry needs to be born rite? rite? say yes, plz say yes!
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04-23-2006, 06:58 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Haha sorry it's taking me so long guys.
I'm running inbetween writing and my SS homework.
Still writing.
It will be nice and long, ohkay?
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04-23-2006, 08:24 PM
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#478 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Postinggggg!
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04-23-2006, 08:33 PM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
“Shut up!” the man behind James roared, shoving him forward onto the bed. “How dare you speak the Dark Lord’s name? You are disgusting!”
He spit on James.
“Who are you?” I asked, shaking. “And why did you kill Mr. Orson?”
He stepped forward and I moved back, accidentally placing my hand on Mr. Orson’s cold arm. I let out a small scream.
A tall figure swept into the room. “Who are these kids? I though the house was empty?”
“It was,” the man replied. “I don’t know where she came from, but I saw him leaving the house. When he came back in he started shouting about the Dark Mark.”
“So they’re wizards, then?” He didn’t wait for an answer. “How do you know what the Dark Mark is?”
I stood up. “We’re not stupid.”
The man looked at me angrily, and then slapped me. I fell to the floor and looked up at him, the red mark gleaming on my face.
James looked angry, but he didn’t do anything; knowing it was stupid to just stay on the floor, I began to get up. Halfway through, I fell back down, concealing the fact that I was getting my wand out.
“There’s no record of other wizards living in this area.”
“We don’t live here,” James said hastily as I opened my mouth. We… we were coming to wish a late Merry Christmas to Mr. Orson. He’s practically my dad...”
“Oh, yes?” the tall man said, rounding on James. “Where’s your present?”
James began to dig in his pocket, and the man pointed his wand at him, sneering. “Don’t try anything funny. And get up off the floor, girl. You’re not worthy enough to be at my feet.”
I scowled darkly and climbed back onto the bed, hiding the wand in my sleeve, and trying to ignore Mr. Orson’s dead body behind me.
James pulled out the scarlet and gold chain watch that I’d given him for Christmas. “They’re his favorite colors, besides neon green.”
I couldn’t help but to smile a bit as I remembered Mr. Orson’s odd fashion. My eyes swelled up with tears again.
Another person entered the room. “He’s here.”
“God,” I said sarcastically. “How many of you does it take to kill one man?”
“Just one,” the shorter man said. “But we get to kill you now, too. You didn’t think we’d let you live, did you?” he laughed. “This is our superior debut of the Dark Mark…one important, successful man, and two lowly teenagers…”
We heard footsteps coming up the stairs. Suddenly, the two men bowed deeply as yet another man came in; he was tall with dark hair and penetrating eyes. He looked as if he’d previously been handsome, but scars covered his high cheekbones and erased the effect. He had a strange elongated look to him, like someone had squished him with a roller.
“Who are they?” he boomed.
“They came in after we’d killed him, sir.” The tallest said, looking up a bit.
“Amycus, why are they still alive?” he asked the shortest simply. “Kill them.”
Amycus raised his wand. James and I looked at each other, and he nodded.
“STUPEFY!” he roared as I yelled, “PETRIFICUS TOTALUS!”
A sudden silence followed after the two men fell to the floor; James and I both had our wands pointed at Voldemort.
“They were never the best fighters,” he said, shrugging. “So don’t reward yourself. Now tell me, what are you two going to do, kill me? Because I can assure you now that won’t happen.”
“Why did you kill Mr. Orson?” I roared for the third time.
He looked at me, surprised. The expression fell off his and was replaced with a smug smile. “He got in the way of my plans.”
“To have the werewolves join you?” James said more than asked.
Voldemort nodded. “Much impressive. I’m guessing you’re in league with Dumbledore?”
“No,” I said. “You know what? I always pictured you as a bit more… scary. I guess my imagination is worse.”
He rounded on me, glaring. “I may not look scary, girl, but I assure you that I am. I know more things that you ever will… Your name is Lily Evans, and you’re a filthy Mudblood.”
I looked at him, shocked, but I then understood. He’d taken a chance and ‘read my mind.’
“Let’s go,” I said to James.
“You’re not leaving!” Voldemort screamed, letting drops of spit spray into my face.
I shoved him away and he quickly pulled out his wand. “I know who you are, and if you leave, I’ll find you! Crucio!”
I dropped to the ground again, pain shooting through my body. I didn’t think it was ever going to stop, but it ended just as fast as it began. I slowly got up to find James pressed again the wall, Voldemort whispering softly into his ears. All of the color drained from James’ face.
“What do you want from us?” I cried. “What do you want?”
He turned around. “I want your loyalty.”
“To you?”
“Who else? Join my forces and never have to worry about death,” his ever were gleaming and he licked his lips.
“I’m not afraid to die,” I said softly. “… So you can take that as a no.”
He turned from James to me and raised his wand. “Avada Ked-”
Before he could finish, I Disapparated.
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04-23-2006, 09:01 PM
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#480 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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:O:O:O:O:O!!! no no!!!! lily no go back!!! what about james???? NOO!!! LILY GO BACK JAMES IS STILL THERE!!!!!
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04-23-2006, 09:03 PM
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#481 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
[James knows how to Disapparate too, lol.]
Yeah, so.
Whatcha think?
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04-23-2006, 11:39 PM
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#482 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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thats a good point .. why didnt they desaparate earlier then?? o well im not going to question you! your story is awesome it gets better by the minute and the more you write the more i die .. nyways! the story is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont end it  its to good to come to an end! ur an exelent writer!
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04-24-2006, 01:34 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose |
Eek!!! THat was scary for a moment! Great post!!! Post soon!!!
And I declare the flavor of the week: cookies 'n' cream
~Rosiness
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04-24-2006, 01:53 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
They wanted to figure out why they wanted Mr. Orson, remember? & anyway, when people are in a state of shock [like just discovering a friend's dead body], they don't always think.
Haha, nice new flavor. Good pick =]
Prom in FIVE days!!
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04-24-2006, 02:32 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year |
[COLOR=Red]OMG!!!OMG!!!!!!Can I kill them?I want to help so badly!!!!!Don't you DARE kill Lily and James!If you ever....Why I will.........l.Alright.That's over.Great post by the way!But Mr.Orson had to die that way?!he had to!?*crys*PAMSOID!!!!
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04-24-2006, 11:50 PM
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| McG's Pet Jobberknoll
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: At band most likely.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nemia Havishaw |
I lied earlier....I'm still sad about Mr. O!!!! But that post was awsome!!!! Geez!!! That was so cool!!! I'd chat more but I've got things to do!!! PAMS!!!
~Sama~
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04-25-2006, 01:03 AM
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#487 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
JEEZ! You guys rule!
POSTING!! =]
Prom in four days!!
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04-25-2006, 01:06 AM
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#488 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose |
Heck yes! A post!!!!!!!! Hehehehhehe! I'm hyper right now!!!!! Posty Posty posty posty posty posty yay!
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04-25-2006, 01:07 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
I reappeared outside of the Hogwarts’ gates. It began to rain but I couldn’t even feel it; I just ran as fast as I could through the Oak Doors. A few people looked at me, surprised, but I ignored them. In ten minutes I found myself panting outside of Dumbledore’s office with a stitch in my side.
I knocked rapidly and loudly; there was no answer. I suddenly realized that he was teaching a class.
After walking to his classroom, I battled with weather or not to enter. It’d be rude to do so, but at the same time, this was extremely important.
I smoothed out my hair some, straightened my clothes out, knocked, then entered.
Professor Dumbledore looked up from his desk on the opposite side of the classroom, obviously surprised. He stood up in one grand sweep then appeared right in front of me before I realized he’d moved.
“Miss Evans, what’s wrong?”
“Mr. Orson,” I whispered.
The color drained out of his face. He spun on his heal and faced the class. “I will be leaving for a while. Whilst I am gone I expect you to all be on your best behavior; Smith, take names of any disruptors. No homework today, but if I do not make it back by the end of the period I expect your class work to be turned in onto my desk. Copying will be severely punished.”
He turned back around and pushed me out of the doorway. “What’s going on?”
“Mr. Orson… he… he’s dead!” I wailed, beginning to cry again. “Remus said something was wrong so we went over there and he was bleeding, but it wasn’t what killed him; there was a Dark Mark over the house and the tall and shot man tried to kill us and Voldemort came and he knew my name but I left and James was there and I don’t know what happened but I knew we needed help, and oh, he’s dead! How is he dead?” I began to sob so hard that my whole body shook.
“Shh, calm down,” he said softly, patting me on the shoulder. “I know you’ve just suffered a great loss, Miss Evans, but I need you to explain. Voldemort? He was there?”
“Y-Yes!”
“Did you hear any names?”
“Besides my own? I think there was one, I’m not sure. But there were three men besides Voldemort, all in black capes and masks-”
“Wait, what do you mean ‘besides my own?’”
“He read my mind… Legilimency. I wasn’t prepared at all.”
“He is advanced,” Dumbledore said to himself. “Lily, you need to go home. From what you’ve told me, they don’t know where you live. You’re safe there. I’ll take care of this and stop by tomorrow, all right?”
I nodded, sniffling a little. “Professor, just one question.”
“Yes?”
“Why would Mr. Orson protect our house and not his own?”
Dumbledore sighed. “He was never afraid to die… Nivy always cared for others much more than himself. Knowing him closely, if he were still alive, I’m sure that he’d say he didn’t quite find the time.”
I bit my lip, knowing it was the truth, and began to walk away.
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04-25-2006, 01:13 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose |
Ahhh! Great, great post!!!! Now, that Lily's okay, let's find James!!!!
~Rose
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04-25-2006, 01:20 AM
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| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
Haha. Jeez, you rule <3 But you need to post ASAP on IGIMtH! PLEASE! =]
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04-25-2006, 01:26 AM
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#492 (permalink)
| Blast-Ended Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2006
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awww omgosh poor lily  now lets find james, hes okay too right? say yes please
awesome post ive been updating the page for the past 2hrs seeing if ud post the continuation  omgosh ur such a good writer ....
im sorry im not so exited im juss sad
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04-25-2006, 02:38 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The Library,AX,& ALA
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nikky Suzume Third Year |
At least Lily is safe.But, what about James?!Is he alright??!?!I need to know!!!!!PAMSOID!!!
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04-25-2006, 09:08 PM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tara Elizabeth Kensington |
omg i love the two chapters since i missed the second to last becasue of homework but im soo excited ti is soo good
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04-25-2006, 09:13 PM
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| McG's Pet Jobberknoll
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: At band most likely.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nemia Havishaw |
OMG!!!! Where's James!!!! That was an absolutely great post!!!! PAMS!!! I'd love to stay but I have to go to stupid BAND BAQUET!!!! I really rather just stay here but....its a grade so....PAMS!!!! Buh Bye!!!
~Sama~
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04-27-2006, 12:01 AM
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#496 (permalink)
| Formerly: Asrai   Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 7,835
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roma Galda Sixth Year | Bassoons galore!
[We're almost at FIVE HUNDRED posts. OMGOSH!!]
So you guys rule...
and I'm writing.
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04-27-2006, 12:03 AM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeBatty Bella Knarl
Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dancing in the rain.
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yeah i cant wait for the next chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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04-27-2006, 12:20 AM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: avvy by linda hagrid
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Hogwarts RPG Name: melany Second |
awwwww what a great post. it's so scary though. every time you post i have to read your siggy. it gives a clue to the story doesen't it?
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04-27-2006, 12:48 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rose |
Yay!! A post!!!! hehehe *spins in computer chair* A post, a post ,a post!!!! Yay!!! heck yes!
p.s. I updated IGIGtH just for you. I was going to keep putting it off 'cause I didn't know what to write. I was happy today, so the post was a happy one.
All this talk is makin' me hungry...I might have to go get some chocolate ice cream....lol
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04-27-2006, 03:35 PM
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#500 (permalink)
| Ashwinder
Join Date: May 2004 Location: USA
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| Ultimate Potterite Original original Great updates, I can't wait for more! I'm back from vacation 
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