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The Day I Died - Sa13+ The Day I Died… It hurts. It hurts physically as bad as emotionally. It hurts. I can’t stand it. I want you so bad. But you belong to somebody else. Always and forever. You were meant for each other. Always and forever. Being friends when I had no one was the greatest thing you could ever do for me. It brought me hope for the future. Maybe I could be like you someday. Maybe it could actually happen between us, even though we come from two totally different worlds. Maybe I can change for the better. I want you. I need you. I can’t live with out you. Everyday I would wake up just because I knew I would see your radiant face in potions. Everyday I would get out of bed just so I could see your gleaming smile. Everyday your laugh would get me through the day. The day you came to me, happier than a blooming flower, was the day you broke my heart. You told me that you two were finally a couple. I don’t think the grin on your face could’ve gotten any bigger. Little did you know the patience inside me was growing slimmer. I wish things could be different. I wish you could look at me with those bright green, enticing eyes like you do to him. I wish I could hold you in my arms, every morning, every day, every night. I wish I could look at your smile and know without words that you love me. I wish things could be different. The day I tried to kiss you was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were with him and that you loved him. Little did you know, I loved you. But you choose him. After everything we have been through; the confusion and hurt he put you through and the crap he used to pull on me through my years. But you chose him. The day you came to me saying you were engaged was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were the luckiest girl in the world. Little did you know you were killing me in the inside. If only it was me and you getting married. I would’ve made you happier than you would ever be. If only we were together, you would be making me the happiest man in the world. The day you got married was the day you broke my heart. You were the most beautiful person in the would. It was like an angel had breathed on you. Little did you know I was growing uglier inside. I swear I saw an actual glow radiating from your smile. I swear I saw a halo forming around your lovely head. I swear I saw the angels kissing your face. The day you told me you were with child was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were scared, but you couldn’t hide the smile from you eyes. Little did you know I was more scared than ever. You were finally going to be a mother. A girl’s wildest dream, come true. To be able to answer to mommy. To be able to hold the bundle of joy in your arms at night. To be able to see a life grow before your eyes. To be able to say it was you, who made this miracle. The day the baby was born was the day you broke my heart. You were a mother. Finally! He was here. Finally! You could hold him. Finally! Little did you know a grudge was born with him. He looked like him. He had his father’s hair. He had his father’s jaw. He had his father’s hands. But he had your eyes. The day of your murder was the day I died… Ok this was a One Shot. I hope you all liked it! Please tell me what you think :) Banner=Emily (Pigwidgeon Took) *Steph* |
OH MY GOSH STEPHYKINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :woot: :glomp: That was absolutely amazing! That was soooooo great! I can't wait until you write another one! *glompsclingshuggles* You did an amazing job :yes: |
Blasted! Stephheh! :lmao: I kneeeeew it was a seVans from the start XD Since you requested that banner! Oh my. you make it slightly harder to hate Snape, as much as I do. :P but thats besides the point. Stephheh, this was AMAZING! Simply amazing, no other words can describe it. :yes: :glomp: As always, I LOVE your writing and mah long lost cousin!! <333 |
Oh my Gosh, Stephyness. That was Gorgeous! :xd: And I would have never guessed it was seVans. Thanks for ruining it, Grace! Pwahaha :lol: Anyway, You did A great job and I cant wait for you to write more! :D |
Omg! That was a SeVan?!? It took me a while to decipher it.. :lol: Wonderful! I loved it! |
That was really good i had to read the replies to tell who was talking not my fault im blond |
that was great |
ZOOOOMG :faint:. Stephers, that was beyond amazing. seVans honestly isn't my favorite ship, but I think I like it just a bit more than I did before ^_^. I didn't understand it was seVans until the bit about him having Lily's eyes, and then everything made sense. Anways, that was truely great though, Steph. :glomp: |
Ohmigosh. Steph, that was awesome! You're a wonderful writer! :glomp: |
HOLYSNAPSICKLES. ZOMGGG. FUDGESICKLES. GAHHHHHH. If I could continue, I would include more flaming due to my new-sworn love for your writing! You're uh-ma-zing! Seriouslyyy. A complete mushface, but we're all girls and we---> ADORE SEVANS! That was amazing. Have I mentioned that already? Get your tush to writing moreee! Please? Pweeety Pweety Pweez? With a Cherry on Top? <3 |
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Thank you so much Mah Lil Elephant shaped like an owl :loved: And Im not really a Snape lover either. But stories for him just float in my head and I just have to write them down. :lol: Well Im glad you liked it still Quote:
And yes Gracie Grace has to ruin it doesnt she :poke: (Just kidding Mah Long Lost Cousin!! :D) When I wrote it, I didnt really have any intention to make it clear that it was SeVans. (It is SeVans, but yeah :P) So if you didnt get that it was, its ok. :D I didnt really mean for you to figure it out :) But if you figure it out great :yes: Quote:
Its ok, if you didnt understand it was SeVans right away :D Read it a couple more times and maybe you will get it :whistle: :lmao: Thank you for readin!! Quote:
Yesh the Oneshot was a little deep, so I didnt make it real clear on who it was. I did drop hints though. :D And I know its not because your blond that you didnt get it :P I know your really smart ;) Quote:
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Yeah I guess a couple of people were having trouble figuring out it was SeVans :lol: But you are the only one (besides Gracie Grace that is, or Shan~Shan probably :P) who got the eyes thing. :) That was one of the main hints I threw in there to show it was SeVans :D Im glad you got it :yes: So glad you liked it :glomp: Quote:
Im glad you liked it! :) And I dont know about a "wonderful" writer...:blush: Ahhh you made me blush :P Thanx again!! *Ish smiling so big her face hurts* :D Quote:
Thanx!! Im glad you liked it. Heeeheee!! And the funny thing was, when this story came to mind, it wasnt SeVans. :lmao: But as I kept writing it, I changed a couple of things and made it SeVans. :P Ive wrote another SeVans before (the link in my siggie "Why?" ;)) I will so write again, just because you put a cherry on top! I love cherrys!! :lmao: |
that was great! I knew it was a seVans when it said he had her eyes. it was amazing! |
HEY! i thought you said you werent a SEVANS SHIPPER! hhaaahaa! for not being a fan that was AMAZING, STEPHYY! I LOVEDD IT! AND IM A HUGEE SEVANS FAN I LOVED IT! *dies* LOVED IT. WHOOT! *Kate* |
HeLlO mah sTePh!! :lol: It's your crazy friend who dropped in to read your amzing one shot!!!!! You really know the secret to make me cry, don't you? lol It took me a while, to figure it was a sevans. I was reading others people's comments and they were all talking about a Sevans and I was like, 'what? wait a minute'. Now it makes sense to me once I think about it. Well, I have to say I am soo much more serious here than I am in your ff! :lol: What happended to me? I guess you made it so deep that I was so in to it. I like felt what Snape was feeling. You really know how to describe his feelings really well. Great job!!!!!!!!!! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
Wow Steph, you've outdone yourself once again. That was really phenomenal writing. :) Loving the SeVans lol. oh yah and don't think I didn't miss you, cuz I did!!!! ;) :glomp: |
OMG!!!! This story was just wonderful and i loved it. would you write some more storys please. your a wonderful writer and i couldent moved my eyes from the screen until i finished teh story. Evangeline |
Excellent. Amazing. Touching. Can't find any more words to descaribe it. :( |
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Im glad you got the hint that I dropped that it was a SeVans :D Im happy that you liked it :P Quote:
I should of know you would of found this Oneshot! :shifty: I did say I would write another one one day :whistle: Well here it is Kate!! Heehee!! The more I write these, the more I begin to like the SeVans ship :lmao: And if that day comes, I can say it was all you who did it :P Quote:
:lmao: Im sorry! I always seem to make you cry! :( Im glad you liked it! :D Yeah I didnt mean to make it really confusing, but I never made it really clear. :P I did put some hints in there. Like Lily's eyes :whistle: Thanx again Shirel! Quote:
Im glad you are here!! :loved: And thank you!! :D And I missed you lots too!! :) Quote:
I do have a FF and another Oneshot (the links are in my siggie ;)) Im overjoyed that you all like it so much :D Thanx!! Quote:
Well I guess you did find words to describe it :P Heeeheee!! Thanx again!! |
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OMG Steph! :faint: that was awesome I never like Sevans that much but the way you wrote this was awsome! Kepp up the good work Steph and I can't wait intil you to write more love Ya! :glomp: ~Alexia~ |
I really liked it. You're a great writer. Well done. =D |
wow. this is amazing, Steph! It's so poetic and heart-felt. poor Snapey. that last line. it almost made me cry...but I held back coz mom was watching me. if she weren't I probably did cry!:loved: |
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It strange how I now have two Oneshots! :lmao: Glad you liked it! :) Quote:
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Thank you Zyra! :D It almost made you cry? Wow! I didnt think it was that good :blush: :glomp: *Steph* |
That was really good! It was so much like Snape well except the way that you'll never imagine Snape saying those exact sweet words. But nontheless I love it! Good work! |
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Thank you! :) Yes well he was feeling sweet that day ;) Im glad you read it and liked it :D |
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