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02-14-2009, 11:06 AM
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Originally Posted by onar Oh, okay, few! Lol...Great post! Maria will be thrilled when she sees that she got to have a conversation with Malfoy! Lol! PAMS!
-Angie- Yeah, I am!!! I'm so happy  !!!!!! That was great...PAMS please!!
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02-14-2009, 12:07 PM
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| yey im bonkers too! were safe here were at the bottom of aus on the peninsula of the little sticky out bit of aus on a map across from tasmania, its basically the whole of vic above us thats gone up in flames so im not sure if u can get in and out of vic by car any more... i think u can... im going to have to check... oh and wow this has nothing to do with ur story... soz abbs, u know i love ur ficand u so im waitin for more lol x xLillyx
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02-14-2009, 08:06 PM
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I'm really sorry but there's no post today... I can't find my notebook with the chapters...
But I do have a message... HAPPY VALENTINES DAY! Well... Here anyway!
Love you all
Abi... xox
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02-14-2009, 08:13 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee I'm really sorry but there's no post today... I can't find my notebook with the chapters...
But I do have a message... HAPPY VALENTINES DAY! Well... Here anyway!
Love you all
Abi... xox Happy Valentines Abi! Hope you'll enjoy the day...I totally hate it because I broke up with my boyfriend last week, so I'm kinda miserable today...but you know whatever!!!!!
-Angie-
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02-14-2009, 11:48 PM
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Originally Posted by onar Happy Valentines Abi! Hope you'll enjoy the day...I totally hate it because I broke up with my boyfriend last week, so I'm kinda miserable today...but you know whatever!!!!!
-Angie- Don't worry... I hate the day too. It's a long story and it still upsets me sometimes, making me burst out crying for no reasons while I'm in school...  Long story short, I broke up with my ex the week after today coz he cheated on me with my best friend and now I like him again... Even certain words make me cry coz they remind me of him...
Anyway... A short chapter as I can't see properly coz I'm starting to remember things I hid away since last year... This is a bridge chapter of the battle, meaning only the one battle scene left now... Chapter 31
Alicia and Jamie were backed against the wall. Bellatrix laughed and stepped forwards from the group of around 10 Deatheaters surrounding them.
'' Now, Your coming with us Daniels... Someone deal with Starlight...'' She spat as she waved a hand at him. Two large figures stepped forwards and then hit the wall behind them.
'' Don't touch him...'' Jamie had never heard so much anger and hatred in Alicia's voice before. He stared, shocked, at her as she stood protectively in front of him, hands raised, palms forwards.
'' Bingo... I think we've just found Daniels' weak spot...'' Lucius placed a hand on his sister- in- laws shoulder as she went to step forwards.
'' Calmly Bella... We don't want to act too swiftly... She has a choice after all'' She smiled evilly as he turned towards the couple against the wall. '' Alicia, come along... There are three choices, life, death or losing the last thing you care about''
Alicia's eyes darted to Jamie as she moved back to the wall, him forcing her of course. She closed her eyes and hung her head as Lucius' words hit her. When she looked up, her eyes were clear.
'' Fine... You leave him alone though'' She said, her tears starting to form in her eyes.
'' Alicia... What?'' Jamie whispered as she walked forwards, towards the group in front of her.
'' I can't loose you... I'd rather you live and be happy without me than not live at all'' She said quietly as he caught her arm and turned her round.
'' No... Don't do this... Please?'' He begged, his own tears starting to fall down his pained face.
Alicia flung her arms round his neck and pulled him down to her level. She looked him n the eye before speaking. '' I love you. Never forget that... You are all I care about now'' And with that, she kissed him, her own tears pouring down her cheeks. When she pulled away, he pulled her close again, burying his face into the waist length blue curls.
'' I love you...'' He whispered as she breathed deeply.
She nodded and turned. Walking away from him seemed the most difficult part for her. Bellatrix's face showed amusement when she looked up again.
'' Let's go then...'' Alicia's voice had lost all emotion now. It sounded dead.
Lucius and Bellatrix lead the group out of the Hall, Alicia following behind them with Harry by her side. He had put up more of a fight. He was now levitating unconscious again while Hermione tried to get Ginny on her feet.
She had suffered at least 5 different torture curses at once trying to protect Harry. She couldn't stand properly and jumped at anything that moved too quickly. ~*~*~
Abi... xox
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02-15-2009, 12:12 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Oh, that chapter was so sad! Wow Ginny had five crucios on her? Ouch! PAMS soon!!!!
p.s.: about your ex...well, boys always come back at some point don't worry. But I agree this day sucks...most of my friends are out on their dates and I'm here eating ice-cream in the middle of winter... And the crazy thing is that I dumped him...
-Angie-
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02-15-2009, 05:39 AM
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#157 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| ohhh poor Harry & Gin and Jamie & Alicia, that was a great post, Happy Valentines day to you Abi and of course Angie and remember no matter what someone in the world loves you ! xLillyx
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02-15-2009, 11:28 AM
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aah shame poor jamie, ginny, harry and Alicia... Can't wait for next post!
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02-15-2009, 12:05 PM
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#159 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by onar And the crazy thing is that I dumped him... Same... My mates think that I'm mental for liking him again though... Probably am.... Quote:
Originally Posted by lilly_luna ohhh poor Harry & Gin and Jamie & Alicia, that was a great post, Happy Valentines day to you Abi and of course Angie and remember no matter what someone in the world loves you ! xLillyx Would that someone be you by any chance? He he... I love you too Quote:
Originally Posted by Tisha aah shame poor jamie, ginny, harry and Alicia... Can't wait for next post!
P.S:
hope you all had a good valentines day.... Well at least one that was better than mine!  I spent all day locked in my room... Until I got bored and found the computer...
Another post (Longer this time) will be up soon...
Abi... xox
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02-15-2009, 02:00 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
LMAO at all you guys...my valentines day (i can't even spell it) consisted of homework, and TV...i was watching movies all day. Pretty good day, unless you count my friend trying to get me a boyfriend...name all these random guys that i know but find immature and annoying...like most of my class. And then i had to babysit, and one of the boys wouldn't stop crying. *sigh* so im sure SOMEONE somewhere had a better day than me
but, onto things that matter...like the post!! It was soooo sweet...Alicia loves Jamie, awwww. Self-sacrifice is an interesting thing...also very adorable when written right. Good job Abi! *continues to be impressed*
Now, id babble more, but i have to go to church (and in thier heads, they are thinking "thank goodness")
PAMS
~Amelia
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02-16-2009, 02:48 PM
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#161 (permalink)
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Haha LOL.. I just think Valentines is too overdone! LOl...
Anyway.. glad to here it will be a long post... I can't wait!
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02-16-2009, 09:10 PM
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| Chapter 32
Jamie slid down the wall with his face in his hands. The large oak front doors closed with a slam as Hermione and Ron looked over.
''I don't know what to do...'' Hermione whispered as she glanced at the boy. ''I don't think Ginny has realised about Harry yet...'' She added on as she looked over Ron's shoulder at his sister.
''What can we do? She chose this... We change it'' Ron said, causing Hermione to stare at him.
''How though?'' She said, dropping to the floor and crossing her legs.
''I have no idea... I was hoping that you would have one'' Ron answered as he copied her.
They both looked over towards where Jamie was. Ron swore loudly and Hermione looked round.
''JAMIE? JAMIE! WHERE ARE YOU?'' She shouted,standing up and looking round. ---
Alicia didn't look where she was being lead until the light from the moon disappeared. She looked up and saw the forbidden forest surrounding her. She was shocked that she was this close to the school.
The Deatheaters were laughing and talking now that they knew what was going to happen. Alicia didn't hear what they were saying. She was listening to the shouts echoing towards them from the castle.
''JAMIE! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?'' She recognised Ron's voice. She looked back towards the castle and another wave of laughter rolled through the group.
''Second thoughts?'' ~*~*~
I'll carry on later... Wanna leave you hanging!
Abi... xox
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02-16-2009, 09:36 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Ohhh, you're mean Abi, plain mean!!!! (though I'm not probably the right person to say this...) What happenned to Jamie? PAMS!!!
p.s.: I just took a test online about which Harry Potter character I would be and I was really happy to see that I'm Ginny!!! Yay!!!
Haha, Maria is Bellatrix Lestrange!!!! Can you believe it?
-Angie-
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02-16-2009, 11:26 PM
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Originally Posted by onar p.s.: I just took a test online about which Harry Potter character I would be and I was really happy to see that I'm Ginny!!! Yay!!!
Haha, Maria is Bellatrix Lestrange!!!! Can you believe it?
-Angie- Are you gonna keep rubbing that in? I took the test again and if you have to know I was Luna the second time, plus I'm sure you fixed your answers in order to be Ginny!
Anyway to the topic...That cliffie was amazing, but don't go around posting cliffies girl;I already have Angie and Lilly doing it and it's driving me crazy! Where's Jamie? I hope he's okay! PAMS!!!
Maria
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02-16-2009, 11:49 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
*jaw drops* WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *starts beating Abi* HOW DARE YOU MAKE JAMIE GO MISSING!!!!!!! Ohhhhh...you are....
*is still speachless*
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PAMN!!!!
~AMELIA *still speachless*
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02-17-2009, 12:16 AM
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Haha I missed two posts...the Valentine's one and this one that made everyone mad...hmm. Not that I was busy Valentine's Day..although it was interesting. Amelia knows...*grrr* Anywho! Great, but in the great words of Alicia, WHERE THE HELL IS JAMIE?!
Pams!!! Like, right now. NOW! xD
-Emily (:
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02-17-2009, 04:54 AM
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#167 (permalink)
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| i think i'll just agree with Amelia on this one LOL ! xLillyx
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02-17-2009, 08:57 PM
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#168 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee ''Second thoughts?'' '' Second thoughts?'' Bellatrix said as Alicia turned back round again.
She shook her head and returned her gaze to the floor. She was pushed forwards again and Harry crashed into her side. Laughter echoed round her again.
Ginny's shouts were carried to her and she turned again. '' HE'S GONE OUTSIDE! HE WOULDN'T FOLLOW HER, WOULD HE?'' Alicia stared, horrified at the small square of light just in sight through the trees.
'' JAMIE! JAMIE, COME BACK YOU IDIOT!'' Ron shouted and Alicia's lips twitched slightly. One of the men surrounding her clocked on and spoke, making her jump and cling to Harry.
'' Bellatrix, the Starlight boy is following us...'' Alicia glared at him as Bellatrix turned to her.
'' Carry on. Wait in the clearing. I'll take her to meet him'' Alicia ignored her and continued to look back. She felt a strong hand grip her arm and pull her backwards, towards the voices she wanted to be with.
Bellatrix never loosened her grip on Alicia's arm until they had reached the edge of the forest again. They both saw the dark figure running in the other direction.
As Alicia went to call out, Bellatrix turned her wand on her. '' Crucio'' Her voice was bored and she didn't even watch Alicia fall to the floor screaming. The figure stopped, turned and ran towards them.
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02-17-2009, 10:05 PM
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#169 (permalink)
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Oh, Bellatrix is a real super b****!!!!! You should definitely kill her off!!!! Hope Jamie won't get hurt trying to help Alicia....PAMS!!!!
-Angie-
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02-17-2009, 10:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 1- Ang Ohhh, you're mean Abi, plain mean!!!! (though I'm not probably the right person to say this...) What happenned to Jamie? PAMS!!!
p.s.: I just took a test online about which Harry Potter character I would be and I was really happy to see that I'm Ginny!!! Yay!!!
Haha, Maria is Bellatrix Lestrange!!!! Can you believe it? You have to send me the link for that!! And I'm not mean! *gets stared at* Okay... Maybe a little bit. *gets stared at again* Alright alright! A lot! Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 2- Maria Are you gonna keep rubbing that in? I took the test again and if you have to know I was Luna the second time, plus I'm sure you fixed your answers in order to be Ginny!
Anyway to the topic...That cliffie was amazing, but don't go around posting cliffies girl;I already have Angie and Lilly doing it and it's driving me crazy! Where's Jamie? I hope he's okay! PAMS!!! I'm sorry about the cliffie... Just remember that I had to cut the end off the post... Now theres another cliffie and now I feel bad...
She probably did fix the answers...  I shall poke her! Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 3- Amelia *jaw drops* WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *starts beating Abi* HOW DARE YOU MAKE JAMIE GO MISSING!!!!!!! Ohhhhh...you are....
*is still speachless*
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*still speachless*
Ookay...  Thats a lot of PAMS... Did you sit there and write them all out or did you copy and paste?
And beating hurts! Please stop! I'll post again in a minute!! STOP! PLEASE! OW! Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 4- Ems Haha I missed two posts...the Valentine's one and this one that made everyone mad...hmm. Not that I was busy Valentine's Day..although it was interesting. Amelia knows...*grrr* Anywho! Great, but in the great words of Alicia, WHERE THE HELL IS JAMIE?!
Pams!!! Like, right now. NOW! xD Yes sir! *salutes*  Er... Not saying your a man though Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 5- Lils i think i'll just agree with Amelia on this one LOL ! LoL... All I can say... Again Quote:
Originally Posted by Angry Sister No. 1- Ang (Again) Oh, Bellatrix is a real super b****!!!!! You should definitely kill her off!!!! Hope Jamie won't get hurt trying to help Alicia....PAMS!!!! I thought I wasn't allowed to kill anyone else off?!
I'll post after I post in the other one... I can't be bothered to type the name... It's too long!
Abi... xox
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02-17-2009, 11:15 PM
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Originally Posted by 3uzz3ee Yes sir! *salutes*  Er... Not saying your a man though Hahahaha  I officially LOVE you. Just thought I'd let you know!
Sooo anywho...PAMS!
-Emily (:
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02-18-2009, 12:45 AM
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Originally Posted by ginnyxweasley Hahahaha  I officially LOVE you. Just thought I'd let you know!
Sooo anywho...PAMS!
-Emily (: Ha ha... Right, I'll post this then I'm off to bed. It's 12:45 in the morning right now and I is very tired!
XD Chapter 33
Jamie stood slowly as Hermione and Ron spoke in the center of the room. He walked round the edge of the Hall and out the doors. He threw the front doors open and ran out across the grounds, searching for anything.
He slowed down as he neared the Lake, not wanting to get any closer than h was in the dark when the grass round his feet lit up in a yellow light from behind him. He heard the screams he knew too well. He spun round and picked out the tall shadow at the edge of the forest, a figure on the floor at their feet. Without thinking, he ran towards them.
'' Alicia! Ali!'' He shouted and the screams ere suddenly mixed with laughter. '' Bellatrix! Let her go!'' He yelled, anger pulsing through him as he drew his wand. The woman just laughed harder and intensified the curse, causing Alicia to scream louder.
He didn't know what happened next but he stood rooted to the spot in the ringing silence. ---
All she could feel was knives attacking her body. They didn't stop as she screamed. She heard someone call her name but she couldn't answer. The knives seemed to double in number then, stabbing her over and over again. Then, a bright green flash erupted through her eyelids and the pain disappeared. She lay still, panting as if she'd run the marathon, in the silence that followed.
After a couple of minutes she opened her eyes and blinked a few times, trying to dislodge the leftover tears. She didn't sit up as she was still in too much pain, but sh recognised the figure in front of her head.
'' Jamie?'' Alicia whispered and he spun round to look at her. '' Jamie! I'm so sorry...'' She breathed as she waited for the final words from Bellatrix. But they didn't come. Then it hit her. '' Jamie, what have you done?''
'' I didn't... It just happened'' He said, staring down at her with a shocked expression on his face.
'' I believe you...'' She whispered as she tried to get up. Jamie seemed to wake up then and stretched out a hand for her. She flinched slightly but took it anyway. He pulled her right up into his arms and buried his face into her shoulder.
'' Never. Do. That. Again! I thought I lost you forever!'' He whispered, a million emotions clouding his voice.
'' A promise I'm happy to keep... I thought that I'd never see you again'' She said as she closed her eyes. An image flashed up against her eyelids and she gasped.
'' What?'' Jamie said, pulling away to look at is face. A smile was spreading slowly across it and her clear eyes were fading to a bright blue as her hair straightened and turned scarlet.
'' When that happened,'' She said, glancing at Bellatrix's body at their feet, '' Harry and Voldemort were fighting in the forest... Harry's won!'' She said the last bit and Jamie's face split into a grin as well. He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the forest.
'' Come on... Lets go meet him and then tell the others!'' She laughed and thy ran into th forest, Jamie's wand tip lit, Alicia leading the way to the clearing she had seen. ~*~*~
I did have permission from Amelia to kill her off so I thought I'd use it before I forgot about it... I was going to deal with her anyway...
Abi... xox
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02-18-2009, 01:05 AM
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#173 (permalink)
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Good post! I liked it 
Goooodbye Bellatrix 
Pams!
-Emily (:
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02-18-2009, 03:29 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| loved it, byebye Bellatrix Lol yey Harry beat Voldie, its all over ! or is it ... xLillyx
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02-18-2009, 09:41 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Yey! Well done Jamie! May she rest in peace!!! Harry won! Great chapter! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Angie-
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