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06-19-2009, 03:34 AM
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| Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
Loved it.! How'd i know it was Draco? Hmm...cuz he's a not very nice person most of the time, i guess. Haha Abi, I'm gald you're back. Your stories are great.
And i reallly like the first two. As for the color...whichever one looks better on you.
PAMS, okay?
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06-19-2009, 07:08 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| im glad u posted them on here lol i cant see them on my fic yet !
ok first things first what colour hair do you have? blonde hair look better in red, as do those with black hair, if brown then you should stick to blue... but depends on your skin tone too lol if your pasty with dark hair go the red, cause blue make ur veins stand out and u end up lookin sick .. if your not pasty and not orange go the blue no matter what colour hair you got lol .. and then we get to spots and no spots lol i think blue spotty most people wear red polka dots so blues different ... what are u doin to ur hair ?
wow u can soooo tell im a clothes freak... i'll say PAMS so its not completly irrelevant lol x oh yeh and im not sendin u subliminal messages cause there only 3 reds and 5 blues lol xLillyx
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06-22-2009, 11:11 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Originally Posted by lilly_luna im glad u posted them on here lol i cant see them on my fic yet !
ok first things first what colour hair do you have? blonde hair look better in red, as do those with black hair, if brown then you should stick to blue... but depends on your skin tone too lol if your pasty with dark hair go the red, cause blue make ur veins stand out and u end up lookin sick .. if your not pasty and not orange go the blue no matter what colour hair you got lol .. and then we get to spots and no spots lol i think blue spotty most people wear red polka dots so blues different ... what are u doin to ur hair ?
wow u can soooo tell im a clothes freak... i'll say PAMS so its not completly irrelevant lol x oh yeh and im not sendin u subliminal messages cause there only 3 reds and 5 blues lol xLillyx Right...
This is me... I was thinking of putting my hair up in a 50's style...
IF ANYONE HAS ANY ADVICE PLEASE LET ME KNOW!
Oh, btw, The blue pencil dress is the dress Alicia's wearing now!! So thats like Number four... ~*~
Malfoy backed away from Jamie slightly and pointed his wand at him. Alicia froze and Jamie stumbled backwards.
'' Go on then, curse me... I dare you to try it'' Jamie said as he reached for his wand. Alicia stared at him with wide eyes. She didn't notice Harry revive Ginny.
'' That's not what I was going to do... I'll cause you pain so much you'll want to die...'' Malfoy said as he started walking to the left. Jamie copied and moved to his right. The two boys were circling each other now.
'' And how exactly do you expect to do that Ferret?'' Jamie said as he stopped walking. Instead of Alicia being behind him she was now behind Malfoy.
Draco smirked and turned quickly. He grabbed Alicia by the hair and pushed her to the floor. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled something out that was metallic. Jamie went to step forwards but Malfoy held the knife's blade to Alicia's throat.
'' Move and I will...'' Malfoy threatened and Jamie glared at him.
'' Big mistake...'' Jamie growled and raised his wand. Malfoy pushed the blade into Alicia's neck and he lowered it again.
'' Draco... Please...Draco...'' Alicia said through deep breaths. Jamie could tell she was panicking.
'' Shh... Calm down sweetie... You'll be fine.Well, only if your husband does what he's told...'' Malfoy said as he looked down at her. Her midnight blue pixie hair had changed into shoulder length red curls and her black eyes were a shocking blue.
Jamie looked at her and his heart broke. She was beautiful. He wanted to help her but he didn't know how. Alicia was staring at him and he watched as a single tear ran down her cheek.
'' Anything... I'll... Do... Anything... Draco...'' She whispered, her eyes still on Jamie. He closed his eyes and kept them shut tight.
Malfoy pulled Alicia to her feet and let go of her hair to place a arm round her stomach, pinning her arms to her sides and her to him. '' Don't play games with me Alicia...'' He said in her ear and she winced slightly as he tightened his grip round her.
'' Please...'' She begged as she felt the blade put more pressure on her throat.
Ron, Hermione and Luna watched with horror in their faces as a single bead of crimson rolled down Alicia's neck to stain her dress.
'' Draco... Please...'' She pleaded but Malfoy ignored her.
'' Starlight...'' He said and Jamie opened his eyes slowly. The first thing he saw was the pain on Alicia's face. Then he cast his eyes down to the thin line of blood that was dripping down her neck.
'' NO! Malfoy, let her go'' Jamie said as he fell to his knees, dropping his wand and letting it roll away. Harry hugged Ginny as she hid her face into his chest.
'' Any last words Alicia... Say as many as you want... Anything you want'' Malfoy said as he kept his eyes on the broken Jamie in front of him.
'' Harry... Dont... Give... Up...'' Alicia said automatically. Hermione, Luna and Ginny let their tears fall. Harry stared horror- struck at the girl as she spoke. Jamie hid his face in his hands, knowing Alicia was giving up, sacrificing herself to save the others. '' Look... After... Ginny...'' Harry hugged the crying girl in his arm closer when Alicia said her name.
'' Alicia...'' Jamie whispered but she carried on speaking over him.
'' Luna... You're... In... Control... Now...'' Luna shook her head, tears pouring down her face as Alicia looked at her.
'' Please...'' Jamie whispered again but still Alicia passed over him.
'' Hermione... You've... Beaten... Me... In... Ancient... Runes... By... One... Mark...But... I'm... Still... Smarter...'' She said, managing a small smile towards Hermione who was biting her lip.
'' Don't do this...'' Jamie looked up at her as he pleaded but Alicia moved her gaze to Ron.
'' Ronald...Learn... Some... Table... Manners... And... Look... After... Hermione... Oh... And... Maybe... Some... Anger... Management... Sessions... Would... Be... Good'' She took a sharp breath as Malfoy put more pressure on her throat.
'' Alicia...'' Jamie begged as he let tears form in his eyes but Alicia looked over at Ginny.
'' Ginny...'' Ginny pulled her head away from Harry to look at her, causing more tears. '' You're... So... Beautiful... Don't... Let... Anything... Happen... To... You... And... You... Two... Will... Be... Together... Forever...'' Ginny shut her eyes and hid her face back into Harry's chest.
'' Ali...'' Jamie said and Alicia looked over at him. She let the tears in her eyes run as she tried to fight herself out of Malfoy's grip but all that happened in that he pushed her to her knees again with a fistful of her hair.
'' Jamie... I'm... Sorry...'' She said as she tried to breath through the tears and the pain from her throat where the thin line of blood had become thicker, now staining her neckline and shoulder strap of her dress. '' So... Sorry... I... Love... You... With... All... My... Life... I... Have... Done... Since... I... Was... Eleven... And... I... Saw... You... In... That... Vision... I'm... So... Happy... To... Be... Married... To... You...'' She tried to take a deep breath but it hurt too much. '' Since... The... Second... Week... Of... The... 3... Month... Honeymoon... I've... Had... That... New... Power... Well... I... Know... Why...'' Everyone looked over at her, surprised that she hadn't said anything before. '' I'm... Pr-'' She said but cut off with a cry of pain.
At first, everyone thought that it was Malfoy hurting her more but they noticed her hands clutched round her stomach.
'' Alicia?'' Ron said as he went to step forwards but Malfoy grabbed her hands and held them with the fist of hair he still had, applying even more pressure on the knife.
'' I'm... Pregnant... Jamie... I'm... 3... Months... Pregnant... I've... Been... Using... A... Illusion... Charm... To... Hide... The... Bump... So... I... Don't... Scare... You...'' She said and Ron's jaw dropped.
'' A baby...?'' Jamie said as he looked up at her. She nodded very slightly but winced as the blade cut deeper.
'' A... Little... Girl... She's... Got... Your... Temper... And... All... My... Powers...'' She said as she closed her eyes against the burning pain in her throat.
'' This is sweet and everything but we have places to be after this...'' A voice echoed round the floor. Everyone looked over apart from Alicia, Jamie and Draco.
'' Bellatrix, let the girl say goodbye to her friends...'' Draco looked up at his fathers voice. Alicia and Jamie looked over then.
'' Draco... Come here and leave the Mudblood there'' Bellatrix said as she looked round the room. Her eyes fell on Harry who was shaking with anger.
Malfoy walked towards her, dropping Alicia who collapsed on the floor. Jamie scrambled over to her.
'' Put pressure on it Jamie!'' Hermione said as she hurried over to them. He pushed his hand firmly on the cut and lifted her head with the other hand.
'' Everything's okay now... Hermione will fix it'' Jamie said and Alicia smiled at him. Hermione knocked his hand away from her neck and pointed her wand at the cut. Alicia waved a hand over her stomach which seemed to expand like a balloon, her dress seemed to move with it. She reached for Jamie's spare hand and placed it on her stomach, cupping his hand on her cheek with the other.
'' Tasha Starlight...'' Jamie mumbled as he looked at her. '' I love it''
'' Tasha... Hermione... Ginerva... Rosalie... Luna... Alice... Sophie... Starlight... A... Long... Name... That... Includes... Everyone'' Alicia whispered as Harry and Ginny walked past. ~*~
I'll post the next chapter when I write it
Abi... xox
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06-22-2009, 04:11 PM
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#279 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Noooooo!!! Bad Malfoy!!!! Alicia's pregnant!! Better not die!!! Harry get Bellatrix!!! Post next chapter soon please!!!! |
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06-23-2009, 10:41 AM
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#280 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| AWWWWWW! YEY!
OMG ABBI JUST WEAR THE BLUE SPOTTY DRESS BUT IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DO EENY MEENY MINY MO ! LOL
xLillyx
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06-23-2009, 06:40 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Originally Posted by JackW092 Noooooo!!! Bad Malfoy!!!! Alicia's pregnant!! Better not die!!! Harry get Bellatrix!!! Post next chapter soon please!!!! LOL ^^ You sound confused... Is there too much going on? Quote:
Originally Posted by lilly_luna AWWWWWW! YEY!
OMG ABBI JUST WEAR THE BLUE SPOTTY DRESS BUT IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DO EENY MEENY MINY MO ! LOL
xLillyx LMAO ^^ I might just wear the blue dress... It is nice... XD ~*~
Ron stood next to Harry and Ginny as they watched Malfoy walk towards his father and Auntie.
'' You know... I'd watch out'' Ginny said as Malfoy reached his family. He turned and saw that Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny and Luna were pointing their wands at him while Jamie moved Alicia behind a pillar.
'' Really? Shame that you're not going to do anything'' He sneered as Jamie came back round the corner to stand in front of them all.
'' You ever go near her again... I swear it'll be the last thing you'll do'' He said as he pointed his wand at his face.
'' You curse Draco and it'll be the last thing you'll do'' Bellatrix said as she pulled her wand out.
' Harry...' Harry jumped and looked round as Alicia's voice echoed in his head. ' Basilisk here in 5'
'' You shouldn't threaten people Bella... You should just do what you say'' Lucius said as he pointed his wand at Jamie. Everyone was too immersed in pointing wands at each other to notice Alicia come round the corner, clinging to the wall for support.
'' Go on then Malfoy... Do your worst'' Harry said as Jamie spun round to see Alicia slip slightly. He hurried towards her and pulled her arm over his shoulder to support her weight.
Bella, Draco and Lucius watched the two of them stumble forwards and stand behind the other five students.
'' Mmmm... I can smell her now'' Alicia's head shot up and she stared at the hooded figure watching her. '' You smell exactly like your brother, Daniels'' Greyback lowered his hood as Alicia's eye narrowed.
'' Now, now Fenrir. Behave yourself'' Lucius smiled as Alicia's eyes turned black.
' Carefully Ali...' Jamie concentrated on not letting Alicia fall but still managed to point his wand towards the deranged werewolf.
' Always am...' She said as she glared towards the man.
'' You can have her Fenrir, just like her brother'' Bellatrix said as her eyes fell on Harry again. Alicia's hair dissolved into a mixture of black and red. '' The Weasley girl and Potter are mine though'' Her eyes moved to Ginny, who stuck her tongue out at her.
'' The Blood Traitor and Mudblood Granger are mine'' Hermione looked up as Lucius picked her. '' Same with the Lovegood'' Luna swapped confused looks with Hermione as Draco spoke.
'' That leaves me Starlight then'' he smirked at Jamie as Alicia's eyes darted down as she saw Greyback take a step forwards.
' Its starting... Back away and Draco and the excuse for a human will follow' Alicia thought and Jamie done what he was told. Harry moved towards the left with Ginny behind him while Ron, Hermione and Luna moved to the right.
'' Alicia? How long until the Basilisk arrives?'' Harry said over the top of Lucius shouting curses at the three opposite him.
'' Wrong turn... About half hour'' Alicia said quickly, ducking to the left to avoid being pinned to the floor as Fenrir threw himself at her. ~*~
THANK YOU NAY! LOVE YOU!
Hope you enjoy...
Abi... xox
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06-24-2009, 09:23 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Abi sorry I missed some posts!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way your story is going!!!!!!!! So great!!!!! Hope they'll by okay, because ALICIA IS PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I gotta say it....Alicia and Jamie remind soooo much of Naley from OTH, so sweet!!!!!!!!!! Oh, and I'd go for the third dress because red is totally my colour but I think the others look nice too...
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Angie-
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06-24-2009, 03:48 PM
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#283 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Great chapter! Basilisk took a wrong turn!!! lol!! Next chapter soon please!! |
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06-24-2009, 08:42 PM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Neverland
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Oh, I hope they kick their miserable behinds!!!!!!! Lol!!!!!!! Though I gotta say that I'm a huge fan of Draco, I can't help it but go with Jamie in this one!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S: I like the first dress!!!!
Maria
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06-25-2009, 11:09 AM
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#285 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| hehe 'wrong turn' stupid big snake lol
loving in can't wait for more ! yey i was of help ! xLillyx
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06-25-2009, 01:29 PM
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#286 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Originally Posted by onar Oh, and I'd go for the third dress because red is totally my colour but I think the others look nice too... Thanks for the help... Red is my colour too but then again so is blue...!! Quote:
Originally Posted by matsa P.S: I like the first dress!!!! Maria, I saw this dress first and fell in love... Quote:
Originally Posted by lilly_luna yey i was of help ! XD
Just a note, Jamie and Alicia are linked more than marriage... Its as if Jamie can read Alicia's thoughts and feelings when really she's letting him know without meaning to. ~*~
Alicia stumbled sideways as she tripped over her own foot. For an hour Fenrir had been launching himself at her and now she was stiff, tired and angry.
'' See this baby, it's getting in my way!'' She moaned as she braced herself to dodge another attack. '' Oh!'' She saw the werewolf step forwards before she lost her vision. Jamie spun round and pulled her out the way at the last second.
'' PICK A DIFFERENT TIME TO SEE THE FUTURE!'' He shouted as he ducked under a stunner Malfoy shot at him. A couple of seconds later, Alicia tore herself out of his grip.
'' DON'T STAND THERE SHOUTING AT ME! I DIDN'T CHOOSE TO BE ATTACKED BY A LUNATIC! I DIDN'T CHOOSE TO BE ABLE TO SEE THE FUTURE!'' She shouted as she glared at him, dodging an attack from behind so that Greyback flew over her shoulder and into the wall.
'' Look,I love you both to pieces but can you argue later? We're too busy right now...'' Ginny said as she passed them, shooting curse after curse at Bellatrix.
'' Right... Sorry Ginny...'' Alicia said, her voice soft and gentle again. She turned and dodged another attack. '' You know, you've really ****** me off now!'' She said loudly as she pointed a finger at Greyback. '' Come near me again and I swear I'll kill you with one hand!'' She threatened, wiggling the fingers on her right hand as she held it up to him.
He stared at her fora second before laughing. He leapt at her again but this time she was too slow at moving out the way. Pinning her to the floor, he sniffed deeply at the large bandage on her neck that Hermione had conjured up to stop the bleeding.
'' I was wrong, you have a kind of sweet smell about you, like a rose...Your brother, Emmett I think, was more of a oaky smell...'' Alicia's eyes narrowed as he mentioned her brother.
Fenrir lent in again to sniff at her cut neck. Alicia struck out with her hand and hit him in the chest, right above his heart. She see the electricity jump from her fingertips and felt his body slump against her.
'' Don't say I didn't warn you...'' She muttered as Ron rushed over to help her up. Hermione and Luna were slowly getting pinned into a corner.
'' Alicia, maybe you should sit out now...'' He said at the same time a loud bang echoed round them. Alicia turned and watched as Jamie flew backwards into the wall. Malfoy's top lip twitched slightly as she ran to Jamie. '' Or not...'' Ron added on.
'' Jamie?'' Alicia whispered as she grabbed his face. Something behind her caught her attention and she stood up. ~*~
Next part very soon!
Abi.. xox
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06-25-2009, 03:54 PM
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#287 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Ohhh Jamie!!! Better be okay!!! I wonder what is behind Alicia!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
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06-26-2009, 08:01 AM
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#288 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| arghhhhh you cant just leave us hanging like that !!! they better be ok !! xLillyx
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06-26-2009, 08:48 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Turning round, Alicia watched as Draco turned towards Ron.
''DRACO!'' She shouted, trying to grab his attention. It worked, Malfoy turned to look at her and Ron returned to help Hermione and Luna out of the corner they were in. Ginny ran forwards to stay with Ginny while Harry blocked another curse from Bellatrix.
''Alicia, I see you won against Fenrir... I never liked him'' He said as his eyes looked her over twice. ''Sorry about your neck... Desperate times call for desperate measures you know...'' He said as he let his eyes rest on the stained dress and bandage. Alicia didn't speak but stepped towards him. In a blink of an eye, Malfoy stepped back and pointed his wand at her.
''Really Draco, does it look like I can attack you? I'm as big as a house!'' She pointed out.
''Your not...'' He corrected her as he stowed his wand away. Alicia's eyes followed it and her lip twitched very slightly. ''The bump is only tiny, you can hardly see it... So, what do you want?'' He said as he looked her in the eyes.
Alicia checked behind her to make sure Ginny was busy and Jamie hadn't come round yet. Turning back round, she walked towards Malfoy. She wrapped her arms round his neck and pulled his ear down to her level.
''You'' She whispered. He pulled away to stare at her for a second. Her eyes were a dark blue now while her hair was a dark red. He hesitated for a minute before leaning down to her face. Ginny looked up then.
''ALICIA! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?She shouted as she went to step forwards but someone grabbed her arm. Looking down she saw Jamie looking round.
''[COLOR="Red"]Whats going on?[COLOR]'' He said quietly as he watched Ron and Hermione cast the same spell at Lucius who shot backwards into a wall with force. He saw Harry use the reflection Charm Hermione had showed him to deflect Bellatrix's killing curse and watched as it hit her in the chest. Then he saw Alicia place a hand on Draco's cheek as he pulled away from her. ''ALI!''
His shout echoed round the now silent Chamber as Malfoy hit the floor. She spun round and stared at him.
'I swear it wasn't what it looked like! I was leading him on! It means nothing... You can look back at the memory if you want! I swear it was only to trick him!' She thought as quickly as she possibly could as she ran at him. She stopped short at the look on Ginny's face.
''What were you thinking?'' She said as soon as Alicia stopped.
''I believe you...'' Jamie said as he scrambled to his feet. 'Did you kill him though?' Alicia looked astounded at him.
''No. Just knocked out... By the way, we have five minutes to leave this place before we have a visitor...'' She said suddenly, looking at a tunnel to the left of Ron, who crossed over to the other side of room.
''Lets go the- Alicia?'' Luna said as Alicia shut her tight. Jamie turned and placed a hand on her stomach as she gasped in pain. She placed a hand over the bandage on her neck before swaying and collapsing into Jamie's arms.
''Right... Time to go!'' Harry said and Jamie carried Alicia over to the door where Ron helped him get her up the metal ladder.
''How are we getting out?'' Hermione said as she looked behind her again.
''Same way we did last time...'' Harry said and Hermione stared at him. ''FAWKES''
15 minutes later, Jamie was sitting beside a green curtain in the Hospital Wing. Ginny and Hermione walked round the curtain and told him everything was okay and Alicia had just passed out from the blood loss. ~*~
He he... I'll post again soon
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06-26-2009, 12:00 PM
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#290 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| You better lol !
the way she tricked Malfoy lol -boys- they allways seem to follow there other brain rather then the one in there head hehe xLillyx
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06-26-2009, 04:06 PM
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#291 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Yeah, Post soon!!
Great Chapter!! |
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06-26-2009, 10:21 PM
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#292 (permalink)
| Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Haha I so totally agree with Lilly on this one...some boys are easy to trick....great chapter, PAMS!!!!!!!
-Angie-
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06-29-2009, 07:49 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
i...am a bad reader.  I'm sorry, Abi!!
but anyway, your posts are amazing! i love your story...does this mean its almost over? thats would make me very sad.
my thoughts: Malfoy is a retarded boy...Alicia is pregnant yay!...Jamie is sweet...Ginny makes me laugh...fawkes is the best bird in the world...i would hate to get cut across the neck.
i have an interesting mind.
PAMS!!!
~Amelia
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07-13-2009, 06:07 PM
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#294 (permalink)
| Snidget
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| yes u do have an interesting mind Amelia. post next chapter soon please! |
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07-14-2009, 08:11 AM
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#295 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Right... I was going to post today but I've lost my note book...
So I'm going to update my FF site... Come and look! 3uzz3ee
If there's something you like just comment on it! Or if you want to add anything just tell me and I'll add it up!
Abi...xox
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07-15-2009, 10:31 AM
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#296 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| ff site lookin good still can't believe i'm on it lol! so tell me how was prom? i forgot to ask oh and what dress did u wear in the end hehe ! xLillyx
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07-18-2009, 02:32 AM
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#297 (permalink)
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[COLOR="Red"]ive read no matter what and its a great story! so you better find your notebook! lol
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07-21-2009, 02:55 PM
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#298 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Originally Posted by JackW092 [COLOR="Red"]ive read no matter what and its a great story! so you better find your notebook! lol Thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by lilly_luna ff site lookin good still can't believe i'm on it lol! so tell me how was prom? i forgot to ask oh and what dress did u wear in the end hehe ! xLillyx OMG! It was so good! There's pictures as well! Login | Facebook
Check them out if you want!! ~*~
'' So she's okay then?'' He asked again as Madam Promfrey drew the curtains back.
'' For the last time Mr Starlight, yes!'' She said as she walked away. Jamie looked down at Alicia, who was sleeping, and placed a hand on her pillow. Her hair had returned to the red from earlier that day but it wasn't as bright. It was like the sun had gone down and the rays wasn't shining on them. The only thing that couldn't be fixed was the thin scar that circled half her neck. Malfoy had used a knife that had been charmed using dark magic.
'' At least I'm not the only one with a scar now...'' Harry had said when he heard this. Alicia rolled over in her sleep and placed a hand on Jamie's. At that moment, she vanished from his eyesight. Jamie watched as he saw himself standing in the middle of the Hogwarts Express corridor.
'' Hey, do you want to sit with us?''
'' Sure... I'm Alicia by the way'' ~*~
Look, I'll have to finish later as I'm being moaned at... Someone doesn't like me writing here... Moany pants!
Love you
Abi... xox
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#299 (permalink)
| Snidget
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| good so far! harry's not the only one who has a scar! lol. post next part soon please
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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''So she's okay then?'' He asked again as Madam Promfrey drew the curtains back.
''For the last time Mr Starlight, yes!'' She said as she walked away. Jamie looked down at Alicia, who was sleeping, and placed a hand on her pillow. Her hair had returned to the red from earlier that day but it wasn't as bright. It was like the sun had gone down and the rays wasn't shining on them. The only thing that couldn't be fixed was the thin scar that circled half her neck. Malfoy had used a knife that had been charmed using dark magic.
''At least I'm not the only one with a scar now...'' Harry had said when he heard this. Alicia rolled over in her sleep and placed a hand on Jamie's. At that moment, she vanished from his eyesight. Jamie watched as he saw himself standing in the middle of the Hogwarts Express corridor.
''Hey, do you want to sit with us?''
''Sure... I'm Alicia by the way''
Jamie smiled as he remembered this as the first time he had spoke to Alicia. The scene changed and he watched as he stood in Hogsmeade and punched Malfoy in the jaw. He remembered that this was the day that Emmett had been murdered. The thing that surprised him was the amount of love in both visions even though one was her nightmare. Then the scene changed again.
'' Do you, Jamie Starlight, take this woman to be your parnter forever?'' A young man stood opposite, waiting for an answer.
'' I do'' He heard himself say and the love in the vision over powered everything else.
Alicia moved in her sleep and the pictures, faces of the dead, now flashing in front of his eyes, vanished. All he could see was two shocking blue eyes watching him.
'' Hey'' Alicia said, her voice a bit hoarse. Her eyes dimmed in colour slightly. Jamie didn't answer her. As she looked away from him, he caught her chin and turned her face towards him,before bending down and kissing her softly. '' And may i ask what that was for?'' She said with a smile playing on her lips, her hair shining and her eyes sparkling.
'' I need a reason now?'' Jamie answered back as she tried to sit up. '' Er... you need to rest. Madam Promfrey- '' Jamie said as he pushed her back onto the pillow, and Alicia spoke over the top of his sentence.
'' Would hang you from the ceiling upside down so that all the blood rushed to your head, making it explode, if she found out you had set my heart beating that fast and disturbing my rest'' She said and Jamie stared at her.
'' I have no idea what you just said'' He said and she laughed.
Her laughter cut short as she looked down. '' Am I forgiven then?'' She said quietly. Jamie went to hold her hand but she pulled it away from him.
'' Forgiven? What are you talking about Ali?'' Jamie said, confused.
'' About hiding the baby from you...'' She still refused to look at him as she spoke.
'' I was never angry about it! There's nothing to forgive Alicia! Understand me!'' He said, moving from the armchair to the edge of the bed.
'' Really? Your not mad at me?'' Alicia said, snapping her head up to look at him. There was doubt in her voice.
'' NO! Never have been, never will be! Well... Execpt from, well...No- rest'' He said awkwardly as she tried to sit up again.
'' Ugh! What's the point of me staying here anyway? I'm fine!'' Alicia said angrily as she threw her head back into the pillow.
'' Lets think about that... You nearly died by a ferret trying to cut your throat. You lost a lot of blood then spent an hour running round fighting off a deranged werewolf who wanted the rest of your blood. Then I nearly give you a heart attack by hitting that wall and you suduced the person who gave you the scar on your neck. You also used all your will power to shock two people... Not tomention just returning from a three month honeymoon... I think a rest would be a good idea for you'' Jamie said and Alicia giggled.
'' When you put it like she sounds worse than me'' Harry said as he walked up the ward with Ginny, Ron and Hermione following. '' Dumbledore wants to speak with you two... My guess is- '' Harry started but Alicia shook her head.
'' It's not the baby... I owled him as soon as I found out to ask what would happen if I kept it... It's something else'' Hermione gaped at her.
'' You could of told me!''She said and Ginny coughed loudly. '' Us! I mean,now what are we supposed to do! We've got six months for everything to be sorted!'' Hermione turned to whisper something to Ginny before the both of them grinned and ran off.
'' I guess we follow them... See you later'' Ron muttered as Harry pulled himself out of the chair he had just sat in.
'' See you...'' Jamie said, stifling a yawn. Alicia glared at him.
'' Sleep. You've just come back as well you know, to fight off some crazy boy who was trying to kill me... Sleep'' She said as she moved over slightly and patted the pillow. Jamie didn't even argue with her. He rested his head next to hers on the pillow and stretched out on top of the quilt, wrapping his arm round Alicia and tucking the quilt round her tightly as he pulled her close. Within 5 minutes, he was asleep.
'' Love you'' Alicia whispered as she kissed his cheek. Another 5 minutes, she too was alseep. ~*~
Ta- da! The end of the chapter! He he he he! I can't believe how hetic my life is right now! I'm posting here, on my other story and trying to keep up with the ministry topic... And to top it all off my BF doesn't like me typing on SS at all!
Abi... xox
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