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05-23-2009, 03:09 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year |
Poor ginny she is again stuck in the chamber of secrets!!
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05-23-2009, 10:49 AM
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#252 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| Ohh sooo good !!! i've missed this ff so much hehe, its great your back and don't worry bout Jamie, my gf says i waste my time on here to, i love writing and reading others fics, shes my other love lol ... better not let her read this... anyways glad ur back my ss sister and i can't wait for another fantastic post and see how this twist goes, so PAMS PAMS PAMS ! x xLillyx
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05-23-2009, 05:47 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
Posts: 263
Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
ABI'S BACK! YAYYYYYYY!!!  i've missed you, my dear friend.
Anyways, you better post soon because I can't believe Ginny is stuck down there AGAIN!!!! I would have such a phobia of snakes, and underground places afterwards if that was me. We've missed you, SS sister, So PAMS!!
~Amelia
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05-23-2009, 08:42 PM
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#254 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| Chapter 42
''Please...'' Hermione and Luna said as Harry opened the Chamber entrance.
''Alicia?'' Ron said defeated, finally giving in to their pleas. Hermione looked at Luna quickly.
Alicia closed her eyes for a couple of seconds before speaking. ''We all go'' She said suddenly.Ron gave her a confused look but walked towards Harry.
''Ready?'' Harry muttered as he heard an echo of Ron, Jamie and himself travel through the years separating them.
''As ready as I'll ever be... Lets go'' Ron muttered back and Harry turned round to speak to the others.
''All ready?'' He asked, not noticing the silent conversation between Alicia and Jamie. ~*~
I'll finish this later... See, a reason to come back!
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05-24-2009, 07:39 AM
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#255 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
Posts: 416
Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Oh, come on Abi you can't leave it there! Poor Ginny getting stuck down there again! I rather think that would be...traumatic! But hey Alicia's got a new power! So let me get this straight though, this new power of hers makes her a little vicious, Malfoy-like? Anyway....please now that you're back to us PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Angie-
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05-24-2009, 11:30 AM
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#256 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year |
Omg!!! Pls Post Soon !! Poor Ginny!!
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05-24-2009, 01:07 PM
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#257 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| yey! what you need more of a reason to come back then just to talk to your fabulous sisters across the seas! i wonder if i'll get this post up before your next one... anyways if not i loved the last one and you'd better not leave us in suspence much longer lol x
Pams! xLillyx
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05-27-2009, 12:03 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Jamie broke eye contact with Alicia and turned to Harry. ''What did Alicia say in the common room?''
''That Ginny was in the Chamber of secrets again...'' Harry said and Jamie shook his head.
''What else?'' Something in his voice caught Hermione's attention.
''You can't say it can you? Nor can Alicia... Why?'' She said but both Jamie and Alicia continued to look at Harry.
''Something about a friend and a pet...'' He said and then it hit him. ''That can only understand me... The Basilisk... But-'' He said to himself as the colour in Hermione's face drained away.
''There's another one...'' She whispered as she clung to Ron's arm. Alicia nodded and then stiffened.
''Come on... Ginny-'' Was all she had to say before Harry jumped into the dark hole.
''See you at the bottom...'' Ron muttered as he stepped towards the hole.Hermione followed him, then Luna, leaving Alicia and Jamie in the girls toilets.
'I'd rather you stayed here Ali...'Jamie's voice echoed round Alicia's head as she watched him steady himself for the jump.
''I can't... You know that... I'm sorry but that's how these things work round me'' She said, stepping towards him as he turned to look at her. He opened his mouth to say something but a voice echoed round the room.
''Alicia? Can you give Harry a message for me?'' Moaning Mrytle appeared out of a cubicle with a cold breeze.
''Of course... What is it?''
''The offer from last time is still open'' She said and Jamie let out a loud burst of laughter which he covered as a bad cough.
''Sure thing... See you later Mrytle'' She said, smiling kindly before disappearing into the gaping hole at her feet. Jamie rolled his eyes and followed.
A dim light appeared at Alicia's feet which she fell through and into Harry. ''Sorry... You know, a warning of how dirty that pipe was would of been nice'' She said as she looked at the green and gray slime covering her blue cotton dress. She shook her head as Jamie appeared out of the pipe and landed on his feet, causing her red curls to bounce slightly.
'Show off...' Jamie smiled as Alicia's comment swam though his head. ''This is too annoying...'' Alicia said as she waved a hand over the blue fabric which cleaned itself. ''Much better...'' She said as she followed the others. ''Oh Harry, Moaning Mrytle says that the offer from last time is still open...'' She said, allowing herself to laugh along with the other four. ~*~
This is all I can write... The doggie just stole my book!
Abi... xox
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05-28-2009, 11:35 AM
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#259 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| hehe great post... still not really sure about whats being said between Alica, Harry and Jamie, the moaning myrtle bit was funny hehe im sure Harry would take her up on it NOT ! lol doggie stole your book that old excuse is it hehe x xLillyx
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05-30-2009, 11:03 AM
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#260 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Originally Posted by lilly_luna hehe great post... still not really sure about whats being said between Alica, Harry and Jamie, the moaning myrtle bit was funny hehe im sure Harry would take her up on it NOT ! lol doggie stole your book that old excuse is it hehe x xLillyx What is thats confusing you? I'll explain everything!
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05-30-2009, 01:51 PM
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#261 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| LOL its all good i read it again a few times and i got it, i just had to read it as one uninterupted chapter... the breaks in convo had me wondering who was saying what but i know now hehe they going down into the chamber to fight another Basalisk and Ginnys down there its all good, only one thing though could you be a bit clearer in who says what, thanks love xLillyx
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05-30-2009, 03:00 PM
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#262 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Neverland
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Come on!!!!!!! Post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a great chapter!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!1
Maria
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05-30-2009, 06:59 PM
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#263 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Please post the next chapter Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the story!!! |
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05-30-2009, 08:50 PM
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#264 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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''What offer?'' Harry said, looking at them as if they had sprouted antlers.
'''If you die down there Harry, you're welcoming to share my toilet...''' Ron said, bent double with laughter as he copied Mrytle.
After a while, the six of them had calmed down and turned a corner.
''Harry, the tunnels blocked'' Luna said as they reached a wall of fallen rock.
''There's a hole at the top we can-'' Harry said but Jamie cut in.
''Can't get through anymore... Ron and I dug that during second year'' He said as Harry examined the hole in question.
''Right... What if we made the hole bigger?'' Harry questioned and Alicia stared at him.
''So you want us to dig through that? You've had one too many adventures on your own with them too...'' Alicia said as she stepped forwards, raising a hand, palm out towards the rocks. After a couple of minutes the rocks lifted off the ground and back into the ceiling. ''Sorted... Now where?'' She asked, pointing towards a dark pipe tunnel and a rocky pathway.
''There, through that door'' Harry said stepping up to the gray metal door that blended into the rocks.
''Are they real snakes?'' Luna asked Hermione quietly as she moved her head from side to side.
''I don't know...'' Hermione whispered back as Harry took a deep breath.
The door creaked open and Harry looked round once before jumping down onto the Chamber floor. ~*~
End of Chapter 42...
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05-30-2009, 10:21 PM
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#265 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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Awesome post.. PAMS!
I hope Ginny is ok and they all get out fine!
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05-30-2009, 10:26 PM
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#266 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
Posts: 416
Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Oh I sure hope Harry will find Ginny!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
-Angie-
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05-31-2009, 09:26 AM
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#267 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Great chapter!!! please post more! |
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05-31-2009, 10:02 AM
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#268 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| great chappie !
pams x xLillyx
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06-12-2009, 08:24 PM
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#269 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
They better all be fine.! I think harry would have to find a way to commit a second death if he had to share that toilet with Moaning Mrytle.!
PAMS!!
~Amelia
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06-15-2009, 03:52 PM
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#270 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Hurry up and post next chapter!!!!! I want to know what happens to Ginny!!!! Post soon!!! |
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06-17-2009, 02:53 PM
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#271 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| Chapter 43
''Gin...'' Harry whispered as he stared straight ahead. His worst nightmare seemed alive again. Ginny lay at the base of the monkey- faced statue of Salazar Slytherin, her hair spread out in a fan behind her, unconscious.
''No Harry, wait'' Jamie said, grabbing Harry's arm and pulling him back. Alicia's deep blue eyes changed to shocking pink and then pitch black as they started darting round the room. Her shoulder length light blue curls faded into a midnight blue and shortened into a pixie cut.
''Alicia?'' Hermione asked, holding Ron's hand tightly. Jamie held up one finger.
''WHERE ARE YOU?'' Alicia shouted suddenly,her eyes focused on Ginny.
'Harry, when I say,' Her thoughts intruded Harry's head as a voice echoed round the Chamber.
''That would spoil all the fun, Starlight'' Jamie glanced at Alicia as they mentioned her new surname. Her eyes narrowed slightly but a smile spread across her face.
'Go to Ginny and cast a shield charm round the two of you. If anything is shot at you while your running duck behind the skeleton of the Basalisk' Harry nodded his head once to show her that he understood.
''Hmm... Have we had a change of heart? Calling me by my proper name? Are you trying to tell me that you still like me or am I just like Harry in your eyes now? No offense'' She added on as she turned to Harry.
''Not at all... If anything, I'd say that your more important than Potter... Pretty too, especially for your heritage'' Jamie's back tensed and Alicia placed a hand on his shoulder.
''Thanks... I guess that a compliment'' She said as she stepped forwards. Jamie hung close to her arm. Harry followed as well.
''Good guess... I'm surprised though, your appearance doesn't match your outfit... That's a first'' Ron's eyebrows mashed together as he tried to put a name to the voice. ~*~
Sorry about the wait... And I'll apologize now as your gonna have to wait for the second part of chapter...
Abi...xox
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06-17-2009, 08:36 PM
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#272 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| Chapter 43 Part 2
'Guys, find somewhere to hide and help from there... Hermione, use that Reflection Charm on anything and everything if you see the Basilisk...' Ron, Hermione and Luna hung back and glanced round them. Hermione drew her wand quietly. Barely 5 seconds had passed.
''There's something about you that just puts it out of balance, I'm afraid'' She said, narrowing her eyes as she focused on a pipe to the right of her, Jamie and Harry as they stood in the middle of the Chamber.
''I'll take that as a compliment from you, shall I? Potter, not scared about your little girlfriend are you?''
''No, not really. I know she's going to be safe'' Harry said absent- mindly as his eyes darted from the pipe, to Ginny,at Alicia and then back to the pipe again.
''I'm disappointed in you Alicia,'' The voice sounded smug as they said Alicia's first name and Jamie's eyes narrowed even more. ''Bringing a bodyguard... Too scary?''
''Not really... He wouldn't listen to me when I told him to stay up in the castle'' Alicia said calmly. Jamie shook with anger.
''My my... Somebody looks mad don't they?''
''I guess your talking to me then?'' Jamie said slowly, trying to keep the anger out of his voice. Alicia uncrossed her arms and let them drop to her sides, her hands resting on her legs palms forwards.
''Who else in this room has an anger problem? Who else wouldn't let her out of his sight when there's danger close by? I'm surprised she married you...''
''Danger close by? I hope you don't mean you? And most of the people here wouldn't let either of us out of their sights... What's it got to do with you anyway?'' Jamie bit back, causing Harry to grin.
''Nothing... I just wanted to know'' The rest of the sentence was cut of as the tunnel filled with a bright light.
''NOW!'' Alicia screamed and Harry dived towards Ginny. Ron, Hermione and Luna headed for another pipe entrance that Hermione blocked with rocks.
''You shouldn't of done that, you filthy-'' The voice said but Alicia lost her temper.
''MUDBLOOD?! IS THAT YOUR ONLY COMEBACK FOR ME? YOU NASTY, EVIL LITTLE COCKROACH! YOUR NOT EVEN WORTH MY TIME! YOUR JUST A LITTLE BOY WHO LOST HIS MASTER BECAUSE OF US AND NOW YOU THINK THAT KILLING ME AND HARRY WILL BRING HIM BACK-'' She screamed as a dark figure ran towards her. Jamie flung himself forwards to meet him.
''KEEP OUT OF MY HEAD!'' Malfoy shouted at her but she carried on screaming over the top of him.
''BUT IT WON'T WORK! WHAT YOU DON'T REALIZE IS THAT THE WAR IS OVER NOW DRACO! GO HOME AND STOP TRYING TO MESS WITH OUR LIVES!'' Alicia watched as Jamie tackled Malfoy to the floor.
'Great... Thanks Jamie, just start a fight... Good idea' She thought as Jamie turned to grin at her while dodging a punch. ~*~
TATDA! A whole chapter done in 1 day! I hope this is not a fluke and that I'm back!!
Abi...xox
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06-18-2009, 08:47 AM
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#273 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| YEY! I HOPE SO TOO!!!
Great Chappie my sister lovin that it was Draco x xLillyx
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06-18-2009, 12:10 PM
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#274 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| Help Me!!!
Right, I know I've already mentioned this on your story Nay but it has to be done...
I'm going to Prom on the 3rd July and I have a list of dresses which I narrowed down from 50... They have all been mentioned in this story as the ones that Alicia wears... And now they've come to life and I need to choose one to become my prom dress...
Dress One=
Dress Two=
Dress Three=
Dress Four=
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06-18-2009, 06:59 PM
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#275 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: May 2009 Location: I don't even know
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| Bad Malfoy!!!! They better get out okay!!! as for the dresses, I have no idea. |
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