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03-08-2009, 11:45 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Forks, Washington :)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amanda Alice Lloyd First Year |
Awww, a post partially dedicated to me. I feel so loved (:
Great post!! 
Pams!
-Emily (:
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03-09-2009, 07:23 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Oh, so I'm getting married? That's great 'cause it doesn't seem like I'm really gonna get married anytime soon (because I don't want to...ever!) so it will be good getting married in fiction! Thank God you're back Abi, I was missing you like sick! LoL!!! Seriously though...I was kind of worried! Anyway you're back now!!!! YAY!!!! PAMS!!!!!!
-Angie-
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03-09-2009, 10:21 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| That was brillant ! loved it ! yet again your posts make my day lol Alicas so funny, and now nervous... hehe anyways great post and i would have replied when i read it this morning but i wasn't logged on my comp lol x xLillyx
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03-09-2009, 01:27 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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Aww that was brilliant.. so sweet.. PAMS!
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03-14-2009, 06:55 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Right... I WILL post soon but I'm so busy with coursework right now that I'm surrounded by books...Even my feet are...
Abi... xox
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03-14-2009, 07:44 PM
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#231 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
Haha, awww, its ok, Abi. We still love you. Take your time. We all know school sucks.
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03-15-2009, 12:47 AM
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#232 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| its all good, im back at school after a year off and it sucks theres sooooo much to read and write and its not even as interesting as Hp or Twilight lol x xLillyx
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03-15-2009, 08:48 PM
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#233 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Originally Posted by lilly_luna its all good, im back at school after a year off and it sucks theres sooooo much to read and write and its not even as interesting as Hp or Twilight lol x xLillyx A year and a half?? What have you been doing!?
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03-16-2009, 12:43 AM
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#234 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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Quote: Originally Posted by lilly_luna
its all good, im back at school after a year off and it sucks theres sooooo much to read and write and its not even as interesting as Hp or Twilight lol x xLillyx
A year and a half?? What have you been doing!? ... i spent a year looking for work i've finished school, its a year less here - i couldn't find a job... so now im at a tafe (college), stoney broke lol - i finished school in 2007, i've been so bored writing the only thing keeping me sane and now its back to learning again lol
and so this isn't completly irrelevant to your fic PAMS !!! LOL X xLillyx
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03-27-2009, 10:42 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Right, I know I haven't posted in aggggges... I am sorry about that... I have something to tell you as well...
Jamie asked me out! AHHHH! We've been together for 2 weeks now and that's why I haven't been posting sooner... I've been out...
And now... Chapter 39
Hermione put the book down on the arm of the sofa as Harry and Ron walked down the stairs, carrying boxes of decorations.
''Has anyone seen Ginny?'' Harry asked as he set down a small pile of boxes in front of Hermione. She shook her head as she started rumaging down them.
''Last time I saw her she was helping Luna move her stuff back to Ravenclaw Tower...'' She said, pulling out a large tablecloth which she set over the tables at the back of the room.
''Maybe their getting ready?'' Ron said as he unfolded the banner Dean had made earlier. 'Welcome home Alicia and Jamie' flashed brightly across it as he levitated it up over the fireplace.
''Maybe...'' Harry said but he didn't stop checking his watch.
A few hours later, the common room was finished and everything ready. Hermione and Ron had brought up food and drink from the kitchens while Harry sat and waited for Ginny and Luna. When the portrait door opened and Luna walked through, he jumped up.
''Have you seen Ginny anywhere?'' They both said together.
''No, I thought she was with you?'' Harry said as lUna sat down.
''No... She helped me move back and then she was supposed to come up here...'' Luna said as she tapped her fingers against Hermione's book.
Ron walked downstairs with Hermione carrying the last of the presents that had been owled that morning.
''5 minutes'' Hermione said as she rocked on her heels slightly.
''She can probablly hear us now...'' Luna said, her voice distracted. Ron glanced at Harry as his face slipped into a smile.
Then voices could be heard outside the door. ~*~
Alicia and Jamie apparated outside the winged gates and Alicia stepped forwards impatiently.
''Wait, will you? You know there's a party... Just calm down...'' Jamie said, grabbing her arm and pulling her back.
''Somethings wrong though... I just know it'' She said, twisting out of his grip and running forwards. Jamie sighed and run after her.
Alicia threw the doors open and fell slightly stepping into the Entrance hall. Jamie grabbed her hand.
''Alicia, calm down... You've just come back off your hooneymoon... You're not supposed to know whats going on here...''
''Yeah, but I do and I don't like it!'' She yanked her hand away and hurried up the stairs.
Jamie caught up with her outside the common room. The fat Lady started to speak but Alicia ignored her.
''Jamie, please... Somethings wrong and you know there is... Something weirds been happening for a few weeks now...'' She said as he caught her shoulder and turned her round.
''I know that... We'll sort that out later... But for now can you please just relax...''
The door opened and Hermione's coonfused face appeared behind them.
''Are you okay?'' She asked and Alicia smiled at her.
''Of course... Just excited to be back... I missed you all'' Her voice was believable but her eyes gave away her worry.
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03-27-2009, 07:32 PM
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#236 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In a house...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Amelia Whitewater Second Year |
YAY ANOTHER POST!!!!
It was great! but i do not like this feeling of foreboding in the air...i thought everything was fine now! Ohhhh...Abi...you better PAMS....
hahahahaha and CONGRATS ON THE RELATIONSHIP! I just got slapped today.  My "friend" George back-handed me across the face. Needless to say, I am not very happy with him...off topic, that was. Anyway congrats! And its okay, keep having a life. Its all good....
PAMS!
~Amelia (the one with a red face and is furious with her "friend")
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03-28-2009, 06:41 AM
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#237 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
Posts: 887
| great post - bit ominous - i really like that word lol
Congrats on getting ur man Abi lol PAMSx
p.s oh and ouch poor Amelia x xLillyx
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03-28-2009, 06:50 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
Posts: 416
Hogwarts RPG Name: Angie Palimor First Year |
Hey sorry I haven't post for a bit here too....great chapter!!!! Seriously loved it but where's Ginny? What's happening? What's wrong? Ah well I guess we're gonna wait until you post again...
Anyway...have fun with your man (I know I do!!!!!!!) !!!!!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!
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03-28-2009, 06:36 PM
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| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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Awww... I loved it!!!
What is Alicia worring about and is it connected with Ginny?????
PAMS!!
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04-01-2009, 11:06 PM
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#240 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: with albus potter...
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Pierce Sixth Year |
Where is Ginny? congrats and if thats the reason you havent been writing ...WE FORGIVE YOU!!!
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04-04-2009, 12:53 PM
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#241 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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Howdy! This is my free time right now... Jamie's gone on holiday for the easter break and I'm bored... I know I haven't posted in a while and I'm terribly sorry about that... I will post either Monday, Tuesday or Wednesday!
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04-04-2009, 01:14 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| yey a post is on its way ! I still got to do mine but i have easter break and not much college work so ill have a few more chappies posted, hehe my gfs away so im bored to it sucks lol i have to rely on annoying my cousin instead lol x xLillyx
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05-17-2009, 05:21 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| Chapter 40
Jamie climbed through the portrait hole after Alicia and noticed her hair change from the midnight blue to deep black. Not a good sign.
''Alicia? Is everything okay?'' Luna said as she stood up for her to sit down.
''Yes... Everything's fine... What could be wrong...'' She glanced round the faces looking at her and sighed. ''Ask Jamie...''
''Well...Ever since we left, Ali's visions have been working overtime... It was weird. One minute she'd see you lot laughing and straight after she'd see someone crying... Her mind reading is stronger as well...Same with this new power she's gained...'' He glanced at Alicia before continuing.
''New power?'' Ron said, sitting forwards in his seat. Alicia nodded at him. ~*~
I am so sorry about how long it's been since I last posted! I just forgot all about it! I swear I'll post again soon!
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05-18-2009, 01:37 AM
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#244 (permalink)
| Fire Slug
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Neverland
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Ok Ok but do post soon Abi!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what's her new power!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maria
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05-18-2009, 09:35 AM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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''Yeah... New power... I don't like using it though... Its more of a offensive power than a defensive one...'' Alicia said as she looked at Ron. ''No. I don't think I can show you... I've only used it by accident... It's like a high electric shock... Like a stunner'' She explained and Jamie sighed quietly to himself.
''Whats the matter with you Jamie?'' Hermione said, turning round to look at him.
''I was the first person to notice the new power... It knocked me out for about five minutes...'' He said as Alicia grinned innocently at him.
''Right... Now you either explain or show us because I'm totally confused'' Ron said sitting back into his chair and folding his arms across his chest.
Alicia narrowed her eyes and stood up. ''You wanna see it? Are you perfectly sure about that?'' She motioned for him to hold his hand out flat and she touched it with her index finger. Ron locked into place, jumped about five foot in the air before collapsing into the chair. Hermione rushed towards him.
''Alicia!'' She said as she rested a hand on his cheek. ''What... Why did you do that?'' Hermione glared at her as she stood in the middle of the room.
''He wanted to see it... Now he has'' She said, folding her arms across her chest. ''Why are you moaning at me about it? Wait until he wakes up and moan at him...'' Something was different about Alicia. Everyone could see it. Her whole attitiude had changed.
''Alicia, are you okay?'' Luna asked again, this time with suspsion in her eyes.
''Of course I am... Why?'' Alicia relaxed as Jamie rested his hand on her shoulder. Harry felt the atmosphere change signalling that Alicia was back to normal.
''Just the fact that you're acting exactly like Malfoy...''
''Well... You were acting like him...'' Harry said trying to calm the argument before it even started.
''Sorry... I know that it happens when I do that... I can't help it... We've talked abo-'' Alicia cut off mid- word and her eyes jumped from blue to bright pink.
''Vision...'' Ron muttered as he came round. ~*~
And this is the end of Chapter 40
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05-18-2009, 10:54 AM
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#246 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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| hehe new power - i think i'd like to be able to shock people.. yey posts ! i thought i was seeing things lol nah, just don't forget us lol x xLillyx
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05-20-2009, 07:26 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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That was good! PAMS!
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05-21-2009, 07:53 AM
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#248 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year |
New reader !!! ur story is awesome!! what a twist !!
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05-22-2009, 05:09 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Playing God <3
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| I owe everyone an apology!!
Okay... I can't say how sorry I really am for forgetting about this story... Oh, and the other one! I can safely say that I have a way of making sure it doesn't happen again... One of my best friends are a ff writer as well and she reads over what I write... She sat me down at the computer for ages trying to get me to write chapter 40... And it worked. I am writing whenever I have paper and pen now... THANKS GEMMA! Anyway, we've figured out the problem... I was letting Jamie stop me from writing. I know it sounds mean but he said I was wasting my time on here... It was a waste of time apparently... Well... I'm back and we're still together Quote:
Originally Posted by driveunit1 New reader !!! ur story is awesome!! what a twist !! Hi! It's great to have new readers! Welcome to the group! Quote:
Originally Posted by Tisha That was good! PAMS! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Chapter 41
Ron sat up and Hermione gripped his hand tightly.
'' I have something to tell you...'' Alicia said quietly andJamie just looked at her patiently. '' I know that you were planning a party and we're all amazed by the new power but...'' She broke of and looked down at her feet. Harry heard a painful intake of breath next to him while Luna went to Alicia's side.
Jamie's face froze Harry. It was a look of pure terror and pain. Harry wanted to ask what was going on but suddenly he didn't want to. He understood two things at once. First, Jamie and Alicia were linked more than marriage. Second, Alicia's vision wasn't a good one.
'' Alicia, please tell me what you saw... Was it about Ginny?'' Harry said slowly as he turned back around to look at her. At the sound of Ginny's name two things happened. Everyone sat up straighter in their chairs and watched as Alicia looked up at Jamie and then Harry. Jamie was beside her in two seconds and Harry closed his eyes. Alicia's clear, trasparent eyes were enough to say it was bad news.
'' I've got to go... Please Jamie... I can help'' It sounded like a one- way conversation, as if she was talking on a phone. '' Yes I know that... But I think I can help him! You can as well! You've been down there before... That's not the point... He can't go down there alone again! I can't let that happen! It is though! I know that! I was there too you know Jamie!'' She had started shouting now, tears pouring down her face as they stood opposite each other.
'' I didn't say that you wasn't! I just said that it can't happen again! He's the only one who can control it! That is if it even listens to him... The other one only listened to Voldemort remember!'' Jamie shouted back, finaly using his voice.
'' Wait, what? Voldemort? What's he got to do with this?'' Harry said as Alicia hit Jamie in the arm. '' Alicia, whats Voldemort got to do with Ginny?''
'' Harry.... Ginny's in the Chamber of Secrets...'' Harry's face blanched. SO did Ron's and Hermione's. '' With a friend who wants to speak to us and his pet...'' Alicia said carefully.
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05-22-2009, 05:15 PM
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#250 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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Originally Posted by lilly_luna hehe new power - i think i'd like to be able to shock people.. yey posts ! i thought i was seeing things lol nah, just don't forget us lol x xLillyx Have faith in me please! I'd love to be able to shock people as well.... All of Ali's gifts I'd kill for! I'd never be able to forget you!
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