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Old 07-28-2006, 08:43 PM   #51 (permalink)
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Awesome! Post more soon, but tell Draco to lay off of the caffine for me, okay?
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This is an awesome story!!!! I love how Malfoy is acting nicer and so funny like a little kid with all that Mountain Dew! So that's all he needed all this time ... someone he can completely trust and some love. I can't wait for the next part of the story! I hope u Post more soon!
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Ok, I am on like, a HUGE SUGER RUSH! I just drank like, the hugest mountain due in existance, and for some reason, I'm like, really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really reallyReally really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really HYPER ok, here is more of the story

Chapter fourteen:

Draco sat in his bed, staring at the opposite wall. He wasn’t doing anything, really. Just thinking. The past week at Ellie’s house had been excellent, and there was still another week and a half until they had to go back to school.

Draco had gone sledding, decorated the house, picked out a tree, went Christmas shopping, and had also learned how to snowboard. All helped by Ellie, and occasionally Ellie’s old friends.

But the friends really weren’t that much help. All they did was giggle! All day. Quiet annoying if you think about it. Draco was also quit pleased that in America, the rule was that you could practice simple spells and charms while out of school.

It had been the best time of his life. He grinned to himself as he anticipated tomorrow. Christmas. All the decorations, the snow falling, the turkey that Ellie’s mother had been planning ever since she knew that Draco was coming. It all seemed to good to be true.

He walked to the window, and looked out. It was snowing. The star shaped flecks of snow gently falling to earth. He sat for a moment more, but then the peace was broken. He let out a yelp, and gripped his left arm. It was burning. Burning as if it were on fire.

He gently pulled up is sleeve, and there was the dark mark, jet black against his pale skin. He grimaced, and pressed his cool hand to the burning patch of skin, and looked around. It just had to have happened now. There was nothing he could do. He had to go.

* * *

Ellie jumped out of bed, and glanced at the clock. It was 7:30 in the morning. Time to wake everyone up! It had always been her self-assigned job on Christmas. She skipped out of her room, and ran into her parents.

“IT’S CHRISTMAS!” She yelled, and jumped onto their bed, and then catapulted herself off, and out the door. She then ran to the guest bedroom, and threw the door open.

“GET UP IT’S—“ But she stopped. No one was there. “Ah, come on Draco, I can’t wake you up once?” She looked under the bed, and then in the closet, trying to figure out were he was hidden, but he wasn’t in either of those places.

“Draco?” Ellie mumbled. Only then did she see the owl sitting on the desk, a note in it’s beak. She took it, and read…

-Ellie
Look, I’m really sorry, but I have to leave. It’s not your fault, but I won’t be coming back. Tell your parents thanks, for everything, and sorry that I bailed. I guess I’ll see you at Hogwarts
Draco

P.S. Don’t try and write. It won’t get to me.


Ellie couldn’t help it. She sat down hard on the bed, and began to cry.


Chapter fifteen

Draco was again sitting in his bed. This time the one in Malfoy Manor. He was extremely angry. His father had some how found out that he had not been spending Christmas break at Hogwarts, as he had been told, but off at a strangers house.

So now, Draco was stuck in his room. He wasn’t allowed out, and his windows were magically sealed so no letters could find there way in or out. He got up, and pulled out the poker for his fire place, and hit the large windows as hard as he could. It was a good way to get the anger out, or at least show it, since no one had come in for the past few days.

The poker just ricocheted of, leaving the window in perfect condition. He hit it again, and again, and again, and was drawing it back for yet another blow, when a high, squeaky voice spoke.

“Master is coming, young master. He is wishing to speeks with you.” Before Draco could utter a single word, the house elf had disappeared, and the door burst open. Lucius Malfoy stood in the door, and behind him was Draco’s mother, Narcisa Malfoy.

Lucius turned a cold eye on his son, and strode to the center of the room. Narcisa followed, keeping her eyes on the floor.

“So Draco. I have come to have some questions answered.” Draco just looked at his father, his face blank. “Join me in a drink?” The elf was back with a tray holding two goblets.

Latter on Draco couldn’t believe that he had been stupid enough to drink. It had been spiked with that stupid truth potion, and Draco had spilled it all.

“Who’s house were you at?” Lucius demanded. Draco was about to say it was none of his fathers business who’s house he was at, but instead his mouth said, “Ellie’s house.” Lucius raised an eye brow, and Narcisa tilted her head, almost as if to hear better.

“And who is Ellie?” With all his might, Draco tried to stop his mouth from saying the words, but it didn’t work. “My little sister.” Draco heard a gasp come from his mother, but he was watching his father, who’s facing was draining of color, his eyes glinting. ‘Uh-oh.” Draco said to himself.

“Y-Your sister?” Did I hear that correctly?” Draco nodded his head, his eyes on the floor. Draco expected his father to hit him, or at least continue the questioning, but instead his father said, not to him, but his mother,

“What have you done!”

Draco looked, and saw Narcisa’s eyes get big. “I-I didn’t Kn-Know that she w-was still al-live.” She stuttered. Lucius narrowed his eyes, but looked away. “the dark lord will find out about this. Mark my words.” And he was gone, along with Narcisa.

Draco mentally kicked himself. He should have seen that coming, but how did his father now he wasn’t at school? He threw himself on his bed, and then his thoughts went to the Slytherin on the plain. Could she have?

It made sense. They hadn’t watched her the entire time, she could easily have seen them, and thought it strange. Then he thought about what would happen to him. He was in for it. He was sure.

And his father wouldn’t just drop this new knowledge of Ellie. Something would happen, most definitely.


It was the day before he would be going back to Hogwarts, and there was a light knock on his door.

“What!?” he snapped. The door opened, and there stood his father. “Hello Draco.” Said Lucius. “The Dark Lord has a mission for you.” Draco slowly sat up in his bed, staring at his father. “And what might that be.”

Lucius took his time answering. “He is… going to see what this, Ellie, is made of, so to speak.” Draco narrowed his eyes. “How.” “That will be made clear, in due time. IMPEREO!” The unforgivable curse hit Draco before he could do anything.

He had never been good with it, and he knew he would never be able to shake it off. “Now get ready for school.” He could hear his father say, as if from a great distance, and he did.

Chapter sixteen

Ellie was bouncing up and down as she found a compartment to sit in with the trio and Ginny. Ginny and Harry were acting strangely curt, but Hermione and Ron were the same as usual.

Ellie glanced out the window and saw a blond head go by, and she jumped up. “I uh… forgot to say goodbye to my parents! I better go do it!” she said. “You already did. I was there, remember?” Ginny said, an eyebrow raised.

“Well, I’m just going to… do it again! Nothing wrong with that, is there?” she made to open the door, but Ginny stopped her. “Can I come with? I never really met your parents.” Ginny is being strangely persistent today. Ellie thought.

“I’d rather you didn’t.” was all she said.

“I think I’ll just come along anyway.”

“NO! I mean, no, that’s fine. I’ll just go alone.”

“No, I really want to come with.”

“It’ll just be boring, and I might take a while. Plus I need to use the bathroom.”

“I do to! Ironic, no?” Ellie glowered at her, but Ginny just smiled sweetly.

“Yeah, I think I want to come meet your parents too!” It was Harry now. What had gotten into them? “N-“ “Great! Lets go!” Both Harry and Ginny grabbed Ellie by the elbows and pulled her out. They walked a ways, until they found and empty compartment near the end of the train.

“in.” said Ginny, opening the door. “You guys, I really want to talk to my parents.”

Please don’t sound like your lying.

“We know that’s not it, Ellie. We know about Malfoy.” This was the last think Ellie had expected, and the surprise showed on her face.

“W…What are you talking about? I h…hate dracoimeanmalfoy.” Ellie could have punched herself. She had totally given it away.

“I really need to go now.” She said, and before they could stop her, she ran out the door. She ran up the hall, not looking were she was going, and she ran head long into someone.

“I’m sorry!” she cried, just stopping herself from falling on top of the person.

“Ah. Ellie. We need to talk. Meet me outside, but the broom shed at 8:00. Don’t be late.” Ellie looked up just in time to see Draco stalk off.

“That was weird.” Ellie said to herself.

Ellie stood by the broom sheds, and glanced at her watch. It was 7:58. Draco would be there any minute. “Ah, good. You’re here.” She turned, and there stood Draco. Ellie smiled at him, expecting a smile in return, but none came. The smile slid of her face like jelly.

“We need to go.” Draco said, and started walking. “Where to? What’s going on?” Draco was acting strange. He kept glancing around, and wouldn’t look at her, but the one time she caught his eye, she noticed there was something different about them. She stopped walking.

“C’mon Ellie. This is important.” Draco grabbed Ellie by the hand, as started pulling here towards the gates of Hogwarts.

“Draco, let go, c…come on, you’re scaring me, let go!” Without stopping, he gripped her hand harder, and answered back.

“No. I will not let go, and you know why? Because you are part of the Malfoy family, and you are going to face that responsibility. They know you’re here, Ellie. And they want you to come.”

“W…well maybe I don’t want to go!” Ellie said, but it was to late. They had reached Hogsmeade, And Draco had twisted on the spot, taking Ellie with him.

Ellie hated the feel of Apperating. It was a lot easier then some ways of traveling, but she hated the feeling of being dragged along even worse, especially when she didn’t want to go, because then there would be a slight drag on her end.

Suddenly, a room appeared. It was plain, with white walls, and two doors.

“W…Where are we, D…Draco?” Ellie stuttered, looking around.

“Ellie?” It was a soft voice, and Ellie found it strangely…familiar. But she didn’t know how. She turned, and found herself looking at a tall women, with long blond hair, and a slightly shallow face.

“Oh, Ellie, it is you!” she held out her arms, as if expecting a hug, but it didn’t come.

“I’m sorry if I sound rude, but do I know you?” Before the women could answer, Draco shoved Ellie aside, and approached the women.

“Father will be very angry when he sees all this!” Draco stated. The women stood up taller, and glared down at him.

“He is already very angry with you.” She said. Her voice had changed when she spoke to Draco. It was slightly more, cold.

“Draco, who is that? I feel like I know her.” Ellie whispered to Draco.

“You do know her.” Draco said scornfully. “That is our mother dear.” Ellie gasped, and looked up to see her mother, her real mother, smiling at her.

“Y…you mean, y…you are my mom?” Ellie asked slowly. She nodded. Ellie walked over to her mother, and hugged her. Narccisa Malfoy hugged Ellie back. She had thought she would never see her daughter again, yet here she was.

“I wish I never had to give you away.” Whispered Narcissa. “Why did you?” asked Ellie. “It’s a … long story. Maybe I can tell it latter.” Ellie nodded.

“Hate to break up the ‘daughter mother reunion’ but we have to go.” Ellie looked up at her mother, who nodded. Ellie followed Draco out the door, and felt Narcissa right behind her. They went out one of the doors, and where in a dark hallway. They went down a flight of stairs, and then turned right, left, right again, and then arrived at a large iron door, with a snake surrounding an ‘S’ on it. Ellie fingered at her necklace, and Narcissa noticed.

“She gave it too you?” she asked, and Ellie nodded.

“I never take it off.” She whispered, so only Narcissa could hear. She smiled, her eyes starting to fill with tears, but she whipped them away.

“We’re going in now.” Spat Draco, and he shoved open the doors. Ellie had to stop herself from gasping to loudly. They had walked into a very large room, filled with people in masks, and black robes. Ellie glanced at Draco, and noticed that he had just dawned his mask, and Narcissa had done the same. In the center of the room, there stood a man. He had his back to Ellie, but just the wave of fear that swept over her was enough.

It was Voldimort. She stopped in her tracks, staring at the man that her best friend wanted to kill. Narcissa nudged her gently in the back, and she started walking again, but much more hesitantly. When they had reached the inside ring surrounding Voldimort, they stopped. Ellie looked around, not sure what was going on.

“Ellie Malfoy.” A cold, high voice had come from the figure with his back to her. He turned, and Ellie made a face. He was pale, or more, white. His eyes were red, and in all, he looked like something out of a nightmare (a.k.a, the dude at the end of fourth movie!)

“Come up here, Ellie.” He hissed. Every part of Ellie was screaming at her, telling her to turn around and run, but she couldn’t, she just stood there. As if stuck to the floor.

“I said, come here!” he said again, in the same high pitched voice. It seemed almost un natural. He beckoned to her, and against her will, Ellie put on foot before the other, and slowly made her way up to the center.

“Put out your arm.” He hissed. Ellie just stared up at him, fear bubbling inside of her, telling herself to run. He smirked suddenly, and Ellie heard a voice, a high, cold voice, in her head.

“I know you are afraid, Miss Malfoy.” It said, scornfully. “So what if I am, Tom?” She replied boldly, again in her head. Voldimort just looked at her, and then struck her across the face. It was strange. Ellie didn’t even feel the blow, it was as if he hadn’t really touched her.

Voldimort didn’t seem to notice this, but just grabbed her left arm, and pulled up the sleeve. Ellie tried to pull away, but she couldn’t. His long, spider like hand gripped the inside of her arm, and suddenly, there was a burning pain.

Ellie couldn’t help screaming, it hurt that bad. It felt like her arm was on fire. Voldimort watched her scream. Anger evident in his eyes, and then he let go, but the pain did not leave. Ellie looked down at her arm, and screamed again. There on her arm, was the ugly dark mark. He had marked her as a death eater.



Ellie woke with a start. She was in her bed, in the Gryffindor tower. She had just had the worst dream in existence. What was it again? She tried to think, but her left arm was throbbing painfully, and she couldn’t concentrate. What had she done to her arm? She couldn’t remember.

She pulled up her sleeve, and examined her arm. Nothing there. Then she turned it to the under side, and screamed. Everything came back to her as her eyes landed on the dark mark.

She looked around, still screaming, but no one was in the dorm. They were probably down at breakfast already. Ellie jumped out of bed, to find herself still in the clothes she had been wearing last night. So it was all true.

She ran down the stairs, and into the common room, to find a few people still there, looking at her. “Was that you screaming?” On asked. She just looked at the boy, and then shot out of the portrait hole, down to the great hall. She had to tell Dumbledore.

Right before she ran into everyone having breakfast, she stopped. Would he believe her? She fingered her sleeve, trying to stop herself from looking at the ugly thing again. She couldn’t tell Dumbledore. What if he accused her? What if he sent her to Azkaban, with all those Dementores? She couldn’t risk it, she would have to come up with something else, and were long sleeves.


Ok, I'm on a role, or something, cause i have the ending! I think, so, keep reading! oh, and I am sooooo exited! I just got the POTC soundtrack, and it is AWSOME!
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Thanks for reading it! Ok, I would be posting right now, excpet I don't have anything to post. I must say, and I think you all will agrea, that that's a slight set back. Yes, oh well. Whatever. Wait, it E.T. How douse the bicycle fly? Is it just because the E.T dude is in it? Plus, what douse E.T. stand for? I've always wondered. Have you ever seen America's got Talent? I just watched part of it, and a guy was catching eggs in his mouth. It looked like it would taste nasty. I also saw so you think you can dance. I like that show. Well, got to go!

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This is a really good story! I like when Draco was hopped up on sugar and it was hard for me to not laugh but I couldn't cause my brother is still sleeping...lazy bum! PAMS PAMS!!!! Go You Go You Go You


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Chapter seventeen

The next week was awful for Ellie. Draco no longer paid attention to her, not that she wanted him to, and Ginny and Harry seemed angry with her. Ron had begun to ignore Ellie to, because if he talked to her, Harry would get mad at him.

Hermione was to busy to talk to anyone, and Ginny stuck with Harry and Ron. So Ellie was on her own. She was deathly scared of someone seeing the dark mark, and she kept waking up in the middle of the night, screaming, as she relived that horrible night in her head.

Ellie was slowly making her way down to dinner, completely depressed, when a hand caught her arm (thankfully her right) and she whipped around to find herself facing Draco.

“WHAT?!” She screamed. A few heads turned, but she didn’t mind.

“There is a meeting tonight, and you should be there.” Ellie just stared at him blankly. He pointed to her left arm, and she understood.

“Well, I’m not going!” She said, staring him straight in the eye.

“You have to, you’re one of us.” Draco said quietly, not wanting to attract attention.

“NO I AM NOT ONE OF YOU!” She screamed at the top of her lungs. Everyone who was already eating looked up. They were standing in the doorway, so everyone had a clear view of them.

“Yes, you are.” Draco sad, looking slightly nervous, with all the eyes on him.

“NO I AM NOT! JUST BECAUSE I GOT THIS STUPID THING, DOUSN’T MEEN I’M ONE OF THEM! YOU FORCED ME TOO, AND YOU DIDN’T EVEN TELL ME WHAT WAS GOING ON!” Draco was loosing his temper, and he started to shout, not thinking of what he was saying.

“YES YOU ARE! YOU ARE A MALFOY, AND THAT MEENS YOU HAVE THE SAME RESPONSOBILITY’S AS ANY OTHER MALFOY.” People started to whisper “Malfoy, did he say? What douse that mean?” but soon, Ellie was yelling again.

“I MAY HAVE BEEN BORN A MALFOY, BUT GUESS WHAT, I’M NOT ANYMORE. VOLDIMORT MADE SURE OF THAT!” A few people screamed when she said the name, and no less the 10 people fell out of their benches.

“YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY THAT ABOUT OUR MASTOR. HE MARKED YOU AS ONE OF HIS!” Even more people gasped at this. “I DIDN’T WANT TO BE!” Ellie screamed, tears now flowing down her face. “AND GUESS WHAT? I’M TELLING DUMBLEDOR!” And with that, she broke into a run, through the hall, with Draco racing after her.

Ellie reached the head table, and thrust up her left sleeve, the brand new mark clear on her arm. Many of the teachers were looking at her and Draco very disapprovingly, and when they saw the mark, gasped. But Ellie only had eyes for Dumbledore, who looked as calm as ever.

“I’m sorry sir, I didn’t mean to. I didn’t know what was going on. I wanted to run, but I couldn’t, and then he put this…this stupid thing on my arm. I’m sorry!” And she dissolved into tears.

Before Dumbledore said anything, the entire castle began to rumble. The students, who had been finding all this rather exiting, began to panic. Some screamed, and many wolfed down the last of their cake before it would be lost.

As if this was a signal, Draco grabbed Ellie by the wrist, and swiftly turned on the spot. Ellie tried to yank herself out of his grip, but it was to late. Hogwarts had disappeared, along with her friends, and Dumbledore, the one person she thought would be able to help her. They were all gone.

They landed in the same room as before, but this time they went out a different door, and up at least three flights of steps. They started down a long hallway, the entire time Ellie struggling to get away, tears streaming down her face.

As they walked by one door, Ellie could hear pounding on the other side, and Narcisa’s voice screaming, “NO! DON’T! PLEASE DON’T!” Ellie glared at Draco as they passed, as if he was the cause of it.

“Dear mother didn’t agree with what was going to happen, so father was forced to restrain her.” Was all he said. And then opened a door, forcing Ellie in.

“Ellie. I’ve been expecting you.” It was Lucius. “The Dark Lord had decided to give you a chance, to see if the Mudbloods, and Mudblood lovers had rubbed off on you yet, and it seems that they have. We can’t have one like you poisoning are ancient line of Malfoys. We have decided that you have to go.”

Ellie just stared at him, not sure of what was happening. “the Dark Lord gave me permission to do it, and I am very thankful to him. He understands the un want of poison in a perfect line. So, any last wishes?” Ellie finally understood what was happening.

She didn’t know what to do. She knew that it would be no use, begging Lucius not to do it, but what about Draco? Maybe he could help. “Draco! Come one, you don’t want me dead, do you?” She cried, the desperation clear in her voice.

“Come on Draco! I’m your sister, remember?” Lucius laughed. “He’s under the impereouse curse, girl. He can’t do anything, even if he wants to.” Ellie began to cry. She didn’t want to die, as if anyone did at the age of sixteen.

DRACO’S POINT OF VIEW.

Draco was fighting with himself as hard as he could. Of coarse he didn’t want Ellie dead! She was his sister, and he loved her! But the curse was to strong, and all he could do was stare coldly at her.

“He’s under the impereouse curse, girl. He can’t do anything, even if he wants to.” Draco looked at his father, who was laughing as he raised his wand, pointing it directly at Ellie.

This couldn’t be happening! Ellie can’t be killed, with him there. He’s her big brother, he was supposed to protect her, it was his job! He fought with all his might. He had to do something.

ELLIE’S POINT OF VEIW.

The tears were blurring her vision. She couldn’t see anything, but she didn’t want to see it. She clenched her eyes shut, waiting for the green light to flash through her.

“AVADA KADAVRA!” She heard Lucius screech. Ellie couldn’t help it, her eyes opened, and as if in slow motion, she watched the green light approach her. She heard a cry, and looked to Draco, he was leaping towards her, and shoved her out of the way.

“I’m sorry.” He whispered, and then the light hit him, and he fell to the ground, dead. “DRACO!” Ellie cried, and knelt down next to him. “Why did you do that?” she whispered, sobbing.

“IT’S YOUR FAULT!” She looked up, and there was Lucius with his wand again pointed at her. ‘it was no use, Draco. He’s just going to kill me now.’ He raised his wand.

Ellie closed her eyes again, this time telling her not to open them.

“Avada Kedavra!” As much as Ellie didn’t want them to, her eyes opened. It hadn’t been Lucius Malfoy’s voice, it had been, Narcissa’s! The killing curse flew over Ellie’s head, and hit Lucius squarely in the face.

Narcissa gasped, and dropped her wand as if it had burned her. Ellie could only stare at her brother, half not believing that he could be dead. “D…Draco? C’mon. This isn’t funny Draco, wake up!”

She had seen it happen, but she wouldn’t let herself believe it. Half of her brain was telling her, ‘he’s gone. He’ll never come back, He’s dead.’ ‘NO! NO HE ISN’T!’ Said the other half. She so wanted to believe it, and yet she couldn’t.

“Ellie, dear. Come here.” It was Narcissa saying it. Ellie made herself get up, and walk away from Draco. She sniffed, whipping her eyes on her sleeve. She looked up to see tears in Narcissa’s eyes too, as she looked down.

“Ellie, you need to listen to me. I know how you feel about l…loosing someone close to you l…like this, b…but we don’t have time stop right now. HE will be coming soon, and we have to get you out of here.” “But…!” “No, listen to me! If he finds you, he will kill you. He’ll do it in the blink of an eye. Take this. It’s a letter to Dumbledore, explaining everything.” Ellie nodded, whipped away more tears, and sniffed again.

“H…how will I g…get back to H…hogwarts?” Narcissa looked around, and then pulled a picture frame out of the folds of her robes. She tapped it with her wand, and muttered under her breath. The frame glowed gold for a moment, and then went back to it’s normal state.

“Portkey, (NOT PORKATY ERIN!) and please keep the picture. I think you’ll like it.” Ellie nodded, and was about to take the picture when she stopped.

“But what about you?!” She whispered. “They’ll now you helped me somehow! Why don’t you come to?” Narcissa shook her head. “I couldn’t. I just couldn’t. If I go with you, they will probably try and come after, even if it means to go straight into Hogwarts.”

“But…” Ellie never finished the sentence. The pop of a wizard or Witch aparating filled the room, and figures in long black robes appeared, closing in on Ellie and Narcissa. “GO!” Screamed Narcissa, and shoved the frame into Ellie’s hand. The last thing Ellie saw before being taken to Hogwarts, was the door banging open, and Voldimort swooping into the room, wand pointed directly at Ellie. And then she was standing outside of the Three Broomsticks.

Ellie almost fell over, but just caught herself. She stood still remembering Draco, lying on the ground, completely still, and she completely broke down. She fell to the ground, hugging herself, and sobbing. The sudden burning in her left arm brought her back to what was happening, and she looked down at her left arm. The mark was on fire.

She had to get to Dumbledore, she had to tell him what had happened, and had to get him the letter. She stumbled up. the pain was horrible, and she could hardly see where she was going, but she stumbled on. She had almost reached Hogwarts gates, when she heard the swish of a cloak. She whipped around, and there, standing as if he owned the place, was Voldimort, followed by five death eaters.

Ellie screamed. She screamed like she had never screamed before. Voldimort grinned evilly, and raised his wand, but Ellie decided to not give him an easy target, or a target at all, for that matter. She took off in a mad dash towards the castle, and heard Voldimort and his followers start after her.

‘don’t look back, don’t look back, just run. Faster would be nice!” it was just getting dark, so maybe someone would still be awake, looking out the window. Hopefully.
Run, run, run, OH GOSH!” Green light had hissed past her, hitting the ground slightly ahead of her. She stumbled, but kept on going. Another curse swooped right above her head, and she screamed again. Louder this time, and again as a curse landed right between her feet.

“HELP!” She shrieked. “PLEASE HELP!” She looked up, and saw four figures leap up from a spot by the lake. They looked familiar, but the tears in her eyes blurred there faces. All she could make out was two heads of vibrant red hair, a blob of jet black, and a fuzz ball of brown.

GINNY’S POINT OF VEIW

Ginny, Ron, Hermione, and Harry were all sitting in the grass, around the lack. No one was talking, each were deep in thought. Things had gone crazy after Malfoy disaperated right in the middle of Hogwarts. Dumbledore had ordered everyone to their common rooms, and had taken the teachers to his office.

No one knew were Malfoy had taken Ellie, and had no idea why. If they had known why, they could have used it, maybe to help, but they were left in the dark. The trio plus Ginny had sneaked out, not wanting to be a part of the common room gossip, that they knew was going on.

They would be bombarded with questions, since they were Ellie’s friends. Ginny had finally told Hermione and Ron about what they new, and was feeling awful. She should have been there for Ellie! She was her best friend, and everyone had noticed Malfoy going back to his old self, so why hadn’t she at least confronted Ellie, given her another chance?

Ginny whipped away a tear, and watched as the giant squid roamed the waters, just below the surface. Ginny was about to turn in, saying she was tired, when they heard a shout.

“HELP! PLEASE HELP!” They all jumped up, and turned, to see Ellie running as fast as she could, six figures running after her. Ginny heard Hermione give out a shuddering gasp as flashed of green light shot by there friend.

“We’ve got to do something!” Ginny cried, starting to run to her friend. Right then, Ellie tripped, and hit the ground hard. She tried to get up, but before she did, they all heard a high, cold voice hiss, “CRUCIO!” Ellie began to scream.

ELLIE’S POINT OF VEIW AGAIN

Ellie ran as hard as she could, keeping her eyes on the figures. She was about to cry out for help again, but her foot caught, and she was sent tumbling to the ground. The fall knocked the air out of her lungs, and she gasped for breath.

‘UP! get up ellie! If you don’t he’ll kill you.’ Ellie tried to get up, but before she could, she heard a high, cold voice hiss, “Crucio!” the pain was to much, and it was everywhere. Ellie screamed, as if in this way she could make it stop. But nothing would make it stop. Only HE could.

Everything that had happened came crashing down on her, and with the crucio curse, it just got worse. She was sobbing, and trying to get away, but she couldn’t move. And then, all she knew was darkness.


Ok, Yeah, I know it's kinda out there but...whatever! Now, I am off to watch She's the Man with my sisters. They insist on watching it up stairs so I can't use the computer. Rather stupid, really. Oh well, hope you like it!
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Thankyou! She's the Man is a really good movie! I don't know if you like Amanda B... can't spell her last name, but this is one of the few that I like. Oh my gosh! School starts really soon, and I am freeking out! I mean, it's so big! my middle school, was like, one hall way, and my new school is, like, four floors! It's going to take a while to memorize. Plus I have to wear a uniform, but it isn't to bad. I can get used to it. Well, I hope you all like the story so far!


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Wow! No way! My one true love has died!!!!!!! Draco Malfoy! At least he died trying to save his little sister! And Narcissa killing Lucius!!!!!!! Wow! I love the story! PAMS! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She's the Man is a good movie. I saw it, it's pretty funny.
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ME!? What about YOU!? You need to post more, Erin! By the way, have you read any new good fan fics? I can't find any good ones. I'm on the vollyball team for school, only the nine B squad, but hey, I'm still on the team! The jerseys are REALLY tight though, and they're so stupid, but I have to wear them. Ok, I'll try and come up with the next part of the story, but I'm out. School starts in like, a week. This isn't cool, at all, and I still need to get all of my stuff! Except for clothes, and I have to wear uniforms!

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Ok, this is the very last post! I really hope you like it, and, here it is!

Chapter eighteen:

Everything hurt. Her head especially. Her eyes felt puffy and raw, from crying. Why had she been crying? Why did everything hurt? And why did she feel like she was in a deep rut of depression? The answer came to her in a rush.

Draco dead. Lucius dead. Running from Voldimort. The dark mark burning. Killing curses being thrown at her. Falling, and then the torturing curse. Her eyes snapped open, expecting to see Voldimort, leering over her, wand pointed at her heart. But all she saw was a high ceiling, and whit sheets. What was going on?

She should have died about seven killing curses ago. Why was she alive? Wait, she recognized this place. She was in,

“HOGWARTS!” Ellie sat up, pillows flying everywhere. Madam Pomfrey burst out of her office at the end of the hospital wing. “Ms. Malfoy, there is no need to yell. And yes, this is Hogwarts. Don’t you remember?”

“Dumbledore, I need to see Dumbledore, I need to tell him… DRACO!” “Mr. Malfoy has been recognized as a death eater, and will serve the consequences when found. There is no need to worry, we don’t suspect you for anything.” Ellie stared at Madam Pomfrey as if she were crazy.

“NO. You don’t understand! I need to talk to Dumbledore!” “He is in the middle of lunch, with the rest of the school. Now rest!” But Ellie wouldn’t listen. She threw back the covers, and jumped out of bed. She was still in her school robes. She dug her hand into the folds, and pulled out the letter addressed to Dumbledore.

“I need to give this to him!” she cried. “It can wait!” Madam Pomfrey insisted, trying to push her back into bed. “No, NO! It can’t I need to tell him what happened!” and before anything more could be said, she dashed out of the hospital wing, charging down towards the great hall.

She ran up through the tables, much like she had done the night before, only now no one was chasing her, well, except madam Pomfrey, but she was still two floors up.

“Professor Dumbledore!” Ellie gasped when she reached the head table. She noticed many of the students watching her, and many of the Slytherins glaring.

“Draco, he didn’t mean to! He was under the impereouse! But, h…he… oh, he’s dead!” There was a gasp from the students, and a few teachers looked rather taken a back. “Narcissa wanted me to give this to you. She said it explains everything.” Ellie handed the letter over to Dumbledore, and looked down at her hands. Not wanting to look at Dumbledore.

Tears slowly started to leak out of her eyes, still damp from her last cry.

“Ah, yes. Ms. Malfoy, if you would please accompany me to my office, I would like to get a few things straitened out before Cornelius gets here. He was ever so persistent, and for a short time considered putting you away in Azkaban.”

Ellie’s eyes widened, and she began to gasp for breath. She had heard all about that place, and she never wanted to go there. Never.

“P…Professor, please, no! Please don’t make me go there!” Dumbledore chuckled slightly.

“Oh, my dear ms. Malfoy, I would never send a student of mine to such a place! Now come. We only have little time.” Ellie nodded, sniffed, and whipped her eyes, then followed Dumbledore to his office.

“Now, I need you to tell me what has happened.” Ellie nodded, and began her story, starting with the sorting hat, and ending with waking in the hospital wing. Dumbledore listened in silence the entire time. When Ellie was finished, he sat for a moment more, saying nothing.

“Um, professor? I’m finished.” Ellie mumbled.

“Of coarse you are, now I would very much like to see the letter one Narcissi Malfoy asked you to give to me.” Ellie just nodded, and handed it over. Dumbledore began to read. It was a long letter, and Ellie thought it would take ages to read, but Dumbledore finished it surprisingly fast.

“I suspect you do not know everything of your past, and how you ended up here?” Ellie just shook her head.

“Then I shall inform you in the area’s I think necessary.” Ellie just nodded again.

“Wonderful. Lets start here.” And Dumbledore began. “When you were born to Lucius and Narcissi Malfoy, a prophesy was made to Voldimort himself. It stated that a Malfoy unlike any other before her would become a traitor to the Malfoy family, and to Voldimort. It also said that Voldimort would know the child, and he did.

“It was said that you were the traitor, and it turned out you were. Voldimort decided that the only solution was to have you killed, so you would be out of the way. We have found that Voldimort has a habit of letting prophecies come back and nip him in the but, as did this one. He gave the job to Narcissi Malfoy, thinking she would not dare go against an order.

“But she did. Instead of killing you, as everyone thinks she did, she sent you to an old friend of hers, who took you in. Narcissi requested that you be sent to Hogwarts at some point in time, as you were. Young mr. Malfoy did not remember any of this, because not only was he very young when these events came to pass, but also his father, not trusting the memory of a young boy, had his mind erased, thinking that would do. It did not, for mr. Malfoy believed you when you said you were siblings. Lucius Malfoy came to learn this, and as you have told me, put young mr. Malfoy under the imperius curse, that as I am guessing, he shook off in the end, and saved you.”

Ellie sat for a moment, putting this new information with what she had already known, and making a complete picture of it. She sighed, and then remembered something.

“Sir, what happened to Voldimort? And how am I still alive? Last night I…”

“Ah yes. Last night, there were four students who decided to ignore the rules there elders had set down for them, and decided to sit at the lake. They heard you, as I am guessing it would have been impossible not to, and saved you. No one really knows why. Harry took on Voldimort, and the rest had ran to you. Harry had apparently threatened to stun any one who decided to go after Voldimort, so they stayed away, as they knew that Harry had to do this, and he did. Now, Madam Pomfrey is most likely out for my head, as I have deliberately refused to let you back to bed. I suggest you do, and if Madam Pomfrey inquires as to were I am,” he paused, glancing around, “Tell her you have no idea!” he whispered, actually looking a little frightened.

Ellie giggled, and nodded. She left the head office, and headed towards the hospital wing. She slipped in, without being confronted by the nurse, and snuggled under the covers, and drifted of to sleep.

Chapter Nineteen:

“You are going to visit over the summer, right? And your writing to me, and were going to play quidditch, and all that, right?”

Ellie laughed. “Yes, Ginny, of coarse. You know I will. And you should visit my house for a week, or something. It will be great!”

The two friends were getting of the train, and were about to go home with their families.

“I’m going to miss you so much!” Ginny dropped her stuff on the ground, and hugged Ellie tightly.

“Gin, Ginny, let go, I can’t breath!” Ginny did let go, and the two said goodbye. Her flight went well, but she couldn’t help remembering Draco on the plain, and ordered a Mountain Dew, crying and laughing at the same time as she drank it. When the plain landed, she gathered her things, and was one of the first out. Her parents were waiting for her, huge smiles on their faces.

“Well? How was the year?” Her mother asked pulling her into a hug. Ellie thought for a moment, before answering.

“Interesting.” She finally said. “It was a very interesting year.”


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