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02-24-2004, 12:34 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: My Own Mind
Posts: 502
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These are just some poems Written by yours truely (<--- AKA. Me) Well, here goes....
In The Shadows
Down in the Shadows
Hidden from Light,
You hear the Dark things,
Others just not Might,
Want your Tentive ears,
To hear along the Way,
Can't you see me Crying,
Weeping all the day,
Stay away from here,
Your words have stained my heart,
Drilled a little hole, Torn it all apart,
Now you try to fix it, sew it up again,
That won't ever happen, but maybe just right then,
A little dove will save me, Take me from this world,
Help me to my feet, Help this little girl,
Whose been a victim all her life, Stop being the lonesome pray,
Maybe just right then, The little dove will say,
Hold on just a while, Then we'll help you out,
Until that fatefull day, You must learn about,
How to stay awake, how to lean away,
How to build your walls, and how to hide the fray,
So the other ones who pick, wont find the single way,
To tear apart your world, steal you from yourself,
To make you hurt the ones, you love above all else,
Stay alive, Stay awake,
Stay apart, Please dont make,
Me come for you too early, To come before is planned,
I'll try to help you save yourself, Help you up to stand. | 
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03-01-2004, 01:14 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 1,060
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thats really good! usually the poems on here aren't like this...it's very unusual, just the way i like it!
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03-01-2004, 03:57 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: My Own Mind
Posts: 502
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Thanx, I'm really surprized someone read this, but in a good way. I'm just the sort of person to write 'unusual' things. It's the way I am, no use hiding it, I'll be posting some more later. Thanks for reading!!!!  | |
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03-04-2004, 03:31 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Somewhere on the Isle of Madness, sleeping under a palm tree...
Posts: 250
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Nicely done! Very well written and deep. :rose:
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03-04-2004, 11:05 AM
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| | Abraxan
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Perth, AU (GMT +8)
Posts: 25,070
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jasper Hart
First Year
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wow, thats really good it show's character and emotion
congrats on such a great poem :flowersmile:
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03-14-2004, 04:54 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: My Own Mind
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Wow, Im shocked at how many people have actually read this :unsure: But whatever...  Heres another one....
Through Me
See through my eyes
Hear through my ears
Speak through my mouth
Breathe through these tears
Scream through my lungs
Hear the sly tounges
Listen so close
then maybe those
times that you said
'Then she'll be dead'
you might regret
Won't hold my breath
Maybe just then
Maybe just when
Those words that you spoke
They may prevoke
A feeling inside
Deep down within
Maybe just then
You and maybe them
Will begin to pretend
To feel my heart
The jagged and sharp
Points that were made
Just like the blade
That made the great gap
I've learned to adapt
Maybe just then
You will pretend
To understand
This lone, one command
To leave and go far
O're the mountains
Maybe in the car
I pleed you go fast
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03-14-2004, 05:27 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck!
Posts: 489
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these are extreemly well written! i loved them!
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03-15-2004, 09:05 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: My Own Mind
Posts: 502
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Koolieo! People are actually still reading?  go figure, *shruggs* o well! as soon as i write a new poem, ill post it, 'Vibe' ya later, ok that was beyond lame.... forget that!
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03-15-2004, 11:48 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain
Posts: 435
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Those peoms are really good :sorcerer: :flowersmile: magical flowers
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