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08-22-2006, 06:32 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
I'll post more later on tonight, or in the morning. I'm not feeling to good, but I want it to be on my 200th post, so the next time I post anywhere will be here. I promise.
Be back later on to post.
<3Jenn
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08-22-2006, 07:57 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump Well, here it is. Hope you like it, let me know what you think.Thanks to Cai<3 Its the longest one yet I think. But its 'Celebration' of my 200th post. ___________
Everywhere I went, I felt like someone was watching me. One couldn't help but feel that if they needed the famous Harry Potter to be the headmaster, something was wrong. Then again, one could always be wrong. Matt still seemed to be hanging onto Jocelyn everywhere he went. You could almost think that he wanted to change houses. He was never like this. Lyssa and Carly weren't as supportive as I would of liked, but I guess I can't do anything about that, and it also didn't help that it was kind of awkward between us three now... well me and them at least.
I wanted to at least have Matt back to talk to, but he won't talk to me. I'd be sitting in the common room, late at night, finishing homework because Brady Wood, our Quidditch captain, was always making us practice. At least he will be leaving this year. And who would just happen to walk in when I was the only one left? Matt of course. He'd just kind of glare at me, and storm off up to the dorms. Why was he doing this to me?
This kept going on for a few weeks. It was almost the end of September, and I already wanted to go home. Maybe dad would let me. So I went to talk to him.
I was going up the stairs to his office, and on the other side of the door I could here dad and my aunt arguing. That's nothing new, but it normally doesn't happen very often. My aunt was going on about me, and how he should talk to me. He was complaining saying that he didn't know how to deal with teenage girls. Thats when I decided to leave. I couldn't talk to him, he'd just have to talk to me, because he would know I overheard the conversation.
In the morning, I would work everything out. I'd talk to Matt and everything. I'd work on him first, because that's why it was weird between Carly, Lyssa and I at the moment. I think Lyssa might still like him. He was with her for two weeks last year. Then everything could go back to normal. Hopefully.
I was walking down to the Great Hall that morning when I saw Matt. I grabbed my chance and decided to talk to him then. I didn't know what I was going to say, so I just went along with my gut.
"MATT!"
Stopping, he turned around and looked at me, and as meanly as possible said, "What do you want??"
"I was just wondering why you were being so cruel and not talking to me. What did I do to make you not talk to me?"
"You turned me down! I told you how I feel about you, and you just turned me down."
"Its too bad you think that because you are seriously wrong. About everything, especially me," I told him.
"What's that supposed to mean?"
"Well, in case you didn't know, I did not reject you. Only minutes after I told you I'd go out with you, I find you making out with Jocelyn. It really hurt, to know that you just said you liked me, and then you were making out with someone you know I hated. I didn't even want to talk to you because of it. I have no idea if what you told me was ever true. How would I know, after what you did, and now that you always seem to be attached to her. And because of me being all upset about you, my two best friends in the world aren't talking to me."
He looked like he wanted to say something, but I cut him off again.
"... No, you are not my best friend, definitely not with the way you have been acting towards me lately," I said, walking away.
"KEELY! WAIT!!!" He yelled running after me.
_______________ Thats all for now!!
<3Jenn
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08-22-2006, 08:14 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hogwarts .. duh .. you didn't believe me when I told you i was a witch?!
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AW!! At least she talked to him!!!! I wonder what his excuse will be .. ::glares at Matt:: PAMS!!!!
Cat/Cait
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08-24-2006, 09:25 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
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great posts
i'm glad she talking to him
i wonder if he'll just go up to her and kiss her
PAMS
Roshni
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08-24-2006, 01:13 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Great post! i love this fic!
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08-25-2006, 12:49 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
This is great oh yeah by the way i'm jenns little step sister..........keep it up big step sis EDIT: ^^ thats my little sister amber-lee, thts who i names keelys sister after. But she wanted to read it so I let her. Thats all I wanted to add btw.
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08-25-2006, 12:54 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | Sorry bout this . . . I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump Quote:
Originally Posted by footballbabii15 AW!! At least she talked to him!!!! I wonder what his excuse will be .. ::glares at Matt:: PAMS!!!!
Cat/Cait ya...you'll just have to wait and find out. Dunno when im going to post....im really busy for the next week, gtg to get ready to go back to school. and fall fair stuff.... Quote:
Originally Posted by danismine great posts
i'm glad she talking to him
i wonder if he'll just go up to her and kiss her
PAMS
Roshni You too. but thanks! but your gunna have to wait too sorry for making you wait, i just dont have time right now.... Quote:
Originally Posted by Moxie Great post! i love this fic! Thanks!!! that means alot to me, like inspiration  Quote:
This is great oh yeah by the way i'm jenns little step sister..........keep it up big step sis
Thanks Amber-Lee, and thanks for reading it goof!
Ok, well I'll post more as soon as I can and all, but I'm really busy. I'm helping out at the fall fair so I can get my vollenteer hours for school, that I need to graduate. Anyone else need to get 40 hours of communtiy service before they can graduate??
And then on Monday and Tuesday, I think I'm helping babysit. Then on Wednesday, I have to go into the school that I am starting at this year, to get my courses and so that I know where I am going. And then at 2:30 ive got an orthidontist appointment. And at 5:30 I'm getting my hair cut [Short or long?] , we've got to get Amber-lee ready to go to her dads wedding on thursday, Friday we are going shopping for school. Saturday I'm going to my grandmas for the weekend. And ontop of that, my cousins are coming up from London this week, so I've got to fit them in, then im back to school on the 5th I'll try and post sometime in there I hope, Just if I can't I've told you why, I will post eventually though. If I can't, and I can get on, I'l PM one of you, and if you want to post it for me, you can.
But I've got to go, help set up for the fall fair.
<3Jenn I'm taking back my heart, because I still believe love was meant to be something you dont betray...
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08-25-2006, 07:45 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hogwarts .. duh .. you didn't believe me when I told you i was a witch?!
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Well, you're quite busy!! We totally understand though! I am going to be busy as well! Hope your schedule clears up a bit for you  ..
Cat/Cait
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08-26-2006, 11:51 AM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belfast
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wow i am really behind!
poor keely! matt was really unfair! i hope they get together!
harry is the headmaster?!?!?!? its gonna be fun!
great posts!
PAMS!
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09-02-2006, 02:26 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 8,662
Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Well, I'm not posting, but if any of you are still checking up on this, I'm gunna try and post on monday. I'm going away this weekend, and I'm gunna write up so more of it. I am also working on Drabbles too, so if you want to check them out they are on harry/hermione, not my favorite ship, but it was one that was left. The sad part is that you cant commet on them  but if you read them, please please let me know what you think.
Be back with a post on monday!!
<3Jenn
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09-03-2006, 07:28 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hogwarts .. duh .. you didn't believe me when I told you i was a witch?!
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^ Can't wait!!
Cait xxo
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09-04-2006, 12:17 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | New post!! I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Well, this is a little earlier then planned, but things happened, and it sucks, and this post I promise I didn't put depression into, but there might be a few depressing drabbles, or the next post might not be that good, when I'm down, I normally put it into my writing. ______________________
“What now Matt?” I yelled back, “don’t you think you have tormented me enough?” I asked him, not turning around to face him.”
“Maybe, maybe not” he replied.
“What’s that supposed to mean? What are you going to do now, dump me? Because go ahead, you were never really my boyfriend to begin with. You sure didn’t act like it, that’s for sure, didn’t even acknowledge me.” I said with my back to him, still.
“I don’t know what to say to you anymore, why I put up with you all these years is beyond me. Give me one reason I should still talk to you” I continued.
“This”
Walking up behind me, he gently touched my shoulder and turned my around. He was staring into my eyes with such a look of love and hurt all at the same time, slowly he leaned in, closer, closer, until we were finally only millimetres apart.
“Matt, don’t please. Don’t make this any worse” I muttered into his lips.
“I need you to know that you matter to me Keely…” he replied closing the gap.
I didn’t know I could feel this way. Everything was spinning. He was kissing me, but I was too shocked to kiss him back.
*Matt’s POV*
She had said yes? How could I of been so stupid? I’m just standing here in shock and she’s not even looking at me, all I heard was the last thing she said, this is my chance. I’ll show her what she means to me. I slowly walked up behind her and turned her around. I turned in to kiss her and I hear her mutter ‘Matt, don’t please, don’t make this any worse’ and I closed the gap.
Ever feel like its just right? Well for you, but not the other way around? What do you do when the girl of your dreams doesn’t kiss you back?
Sadly, I break off the kiss, turn around and walk away. Suddenly there’s a hand on my shoulder. Keely spun me around, and just kissed me. Her hand slipped up behind my neck and pulled me closer, deepening the kiss, I obliged and let her lead me wherever she wanted.
I finally had the girl I wanted, and it couldn’t be any better. The only thing that could screw this up was Jocelyn, I’d just break up with her later. All that matters to me now is Keely.
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There, that should be good for a few days, school starts on tuesday, so I cant promise another one soon.
<3Jenn
p.s. anyone have any neat icons? I really need to make a few siggy, the one i have is a constant reminder.
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09-04-2006, 12:45 AM
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| Formerly: AutumnSun  Kelpie
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: paperbin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maisie Travers Fifth Year | No fun tag! | Haha, Zombie! | Nyeaarr!
I lurved that post!!! I do that too.. or I just don't post... My stories.. if there is a made-up character in it, it'll be like how I act.. Kinda weird though... *frowns* SChool starts on tuesday for me too and I can't wait for the next post!!
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09-04-2006, 01:34 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hogwarts .. duh .. you didn't believe me when I told you i was a witch?!
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Awwwww, soo cute .. they are in wove!! hehehehe!! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!
Cait xxo
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09-04-2006, 02:38 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Thanks a lot!! I'll try and post as soon as I can, hopefully I will be feeling better by then, I need to get ahold of someone, then I'll be better, it works everytime. So, I'll post when I can, I've got it formed in my head, I've just got to put it on paper. this post has taken along time...its not long, but its really drawn out. So with that. I'll post as soon as I can, and feel up to it.
thanks guys, you guys are the best!!
<3Jenn
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09-04-2006, 03:00 AM
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| Forever Refreshing Porlock
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Next to Joe Jonas!
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Hey... that was great! Did you have someone else beta read it?  I really liked it... they're so sweet together... ha ha! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
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09-04-2006, 04:28 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
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kool u posted
i knew that wud happen
loved it
PAMS
Roshni
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09-04-2006, 05:43 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hogwarts .. duh .. you didn't believe me when I told you i was a witch?!
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Hope you feel better! Can't wait for the psot!
Cait xxo
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09-10-2006, 06:54 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump Hey.
I feel so much better, I talked it out with the person, and now we are good. Just not like before 
But with a new school and all I haven't really found time to post, but I can tell you this much, I've been working on it in school, but its not to where I want to leave it yet here, so I'm just gunna just keep writing for now, and you'll all get a really long post, I'm hoping by the middle of the week. If I don't post, someone pm me and tell me to hurry up, I'm not going to forget, but I might get side tracked. Just kidding, I'll get you a post by monday.
I'll give you a line or so now, of something I've gotten written, its in the post, but I'm not telling you where.
" ...I glanced back when I reached the door way, Matt was looking at me with such a look of hate on his face..." Thats all, I'll post by wednesday.
<3Jenn
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09-11-2006, 01:11 AM
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| Forever Refreshing Porlock
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Next to Joe Jonas!
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OMG! What happened? You have to post!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-11-2006, 01:28 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Id post now, but I cant, sorry, I don't have time. Maybe I'll make it tuesday instead. I wouldnt have time to to type it all up to that point. 
<3Jenn
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09-13-2006, 12:56 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Earlier then I said, but I'm posting.
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09-13-2006, 12:59 AM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Well, Here it is, hope you like it. Let me know what you think. ______________________
“What do you think you are doing?” someone yelled.
“Why does it concern you?” I retorted, not paying any attention to who it was.
“Why do you think it’s alright to make out with MY boyfriend in the middle of the hallway?” the person continued to shout.
“You’re boyfriend??!!” I said, finally pushing Matt off me, hoping he’d help me out here. “Well, the thing is Jocelyn…” I started again.
“No, Keely. I got you into this, it’s my job to get you out of it,” Matt said, interrupting me. “I don’t want to go out with you, and never did. It wasn’t something that I ever really wanted, just a tactic for getting my mind off Keely. You and me are over, and don’t ever think that I will take you back!!” He exclaimed.
“How can you do this to me? What did I ever do to you?” She said.
“Nothing, except cling to me, but I mainly was with you because Keely doesn’t like you. So I figured it was a great way to get back at her, but I don’t want to do that now. Turns out I was mistaken, she actually likes me,” He finished.
Jocelyn slapped Matt hard across the face and turned and stormed off, not watching out for many people in her way. Matt and I just stood there and watched her go through her little fit, until she got stuck in the stairs, when we turned around and walked away, laughing and holding hands.
Matt and I are officially a couple now. Nobody has even dared to go near Jocelyn, you might even say that she’s gone insane. At least that’s what most of the people in the school think. And when people know things, everyone knows about it. Even the teachers.
Weeks have gone by and everything couldn’t be any better. Before I knew it, it was a week before Halloween.
Monday morning, I’m in the great hall with Matt and Carly. Dad was sitting up at the front, when suddenly he stands up.
“May I have your attention please” he speaks out over everyone's chatter.
“I have some very important announcements for you all, so please listen carefully. First is a reminder to the Slytherins to stay to the dungeons, and stop taunting other students.”
A girl from the Slytherin table gave him a nasty look.
“Yes that means you Miss Malfoy!” he added.
Continuing he says, “This I think you are all going to enjoy. On Halloween there will be a dance for everyone above 4th year, unless asked by someone above 4th year. That is all, carry on.”
All of a sudden the hall was talking, ghosts were talking, and all the girls were going on continuously. It was so loud that I couldn’t even hear myself talking to Matt. With no idea what he was saying to me, I got up and left. I glanced back when I reached the doorway, Matt was looking at me with such a look of hate on his face. Not knowing why, I turned around and kept going.
Lunch came around and everyone had actually settled down, well as much as could be expected. I went and sat down next to Matt, he gave me a weird look, muttered something inaudible and got up and left.
“What’s the matter with him?” I asked Carly.
“He asked you to the ball this morning and you just got up and left!”
“It’s not my fault, I couldn’t hear anything. So I left and he looked at me like he hated me.”
“ He thinks he does hate you at the moment. He asked you if you would go to the ball with him and you just got up and left. He doesn’t get you, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t even want to talk to you,” Carly told me.
“I should go talk to him, shouldn’t I?”
“That might be a good idea, Keely. Good luck finding him, he seems to be pretty good at knowing where everything is in this castle,” she said.
Saying goodbye to her, I got up and headed to the 4th floor. I knew that he would be there.
Dad had given me his dad’s map, he figured I wouldn't cause too much trouble. So I could find out exactly where he was. The secret corridor on the 4th floor behind the mirror. So that’s where I headed.
Sure enough, when I pulled out the map, there he was sitting in the hidden passage way. I guess he didn’t think that I was going to go looking for him.
I took out my wand, muttered ‘Matata’ and it swung open.
He didn’t hear me enter, because he had his head down, it almost looked like he was crying.
Slowly and quietly, I went down and sat next to him. He still didn’t notice me, so I went to put my arm around him and that’s when he finally noticed me.
Quickly he turned to look at me and roughly shrugged my arm off him.
“Matt, why won't you talk to me? You’re acting like you hate me or something, do you?”
“I’m not sure Keel, you don’t want to go to the ball with me, but yet you like me?” he said tears streaming down his face.
“I didn’t know what you had asked me. I couldn’t hear, so I left. But if you’ll still take me, I’d love to go with you,” I told him.
“Of course I’ll still take you, but you missed them leaving for the village 15 minutes ago, they won't let you go now.”
“They don’t have to know. And just to prove that I’m smarter than you. I’ll let you come with me,” I told him.
Kissing him quickly, I stood up and took out my wand.
“Reparo,” I shouted.
“How’d you do that??”
“What?”
“Repair the tunnel…”
“Oh, my mom helped me one Christmas when she came to visit me instead of me going home. She used her brilliant charms, so that it looks like it's caved in to those who don’t know about it,” I said.
“That is so neat, does your dad know about this??” he asked.
“Nope! Mom said it would stay our little secret and anyone else I decided to tell, so far you’re the only one I’ve told, so you’re lucky!”
“So what are we waiting for! Lets go!” he exclaimed.
So, grabbing his hand, we took off toward the Three Broomsticks.
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I'll post more when I can, I've got school now, and I've just been writing this at lunch. Hope you like what I've got now.
<3Jenn
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09-13-2006, 08:26 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
Well, I'm gun a try and post again by friday, I'm starting to get bored with my classes, so I'll post something on Friday.
<3Jenn
p.s. then im away for the weekend at a wedding
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09-14-2006, 11:09 PM
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| Moke
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Oliver Dominic Evans Fifth Year | I'm.defying.gravity | true north strong and free | thumpity-thump-thump
this is the best story big sis........ did everyone now that my big sister jennifer is the best story writer oh ya i am reading her story...i am amber-lee jennifers step sister and i am on here once in a while so i can read her story.....but tell me if you think jennifer is a good story writer
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