Spinning in Slow Motion - Sa13+
 

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This idea came to me while I was listening to a song the other day. And I just had to write it down. Its after Harry and Ginny are finished school. Read on to find out what its about.

*Note* I do not own any of JKR Characters. I give full credit to her for that. Only the ones that I have come up with are mine.


"You make me feel out of my element like I'm walking on broken glass Like my worlds spinning in slow motion, I'm going to fast"



That is that song that has really been bugging me lately, it has been making me think about my boyfriend and my relationship lately. I don't know how I ever thought the whole distance thing would work.
You see the think is that I am a witch at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. I am going to start my 6th year tomorrow, and the amount of attention I got has finally gone down, and I am sure glad that nothing about my dad ever hits the muggle papers because then Ray would know that I'm not just an ordinary girl, I'm far from ordinary. There has been so many times that he rants on about how much he doesn't like the thought of magic. Interupting my rant. There's a good reason to dump him, how can I of been so oblivious to that until now. First thing in the morning I'll do it before I head off to school.
Mom and dad thing that telephones are stupid, but with ray they came in handy.
The phone started ringing at 6 this morning. It's only in my room since mom, dad, my little sister Amber, and my older brother Ian all think that its stupid to have muggle things in the house.
"Hello?"
"Morning, Keely!"
"Oh, hi Ray. Why are you calling me at six in the morning?"
" I just wanted to talk to you babe. Is that so wrong?" he retorted.
Maybe I'm gunna have to be a little bit mean to get rid of him.
"I've got a name you know! And I wanted to get some sleep. I leave for school for the year with Ian and Mom in 4 and a half hours. I didn't need to be woken up by a jerk who thinks he owns me. Well let me tell you something! You have gone to far and annoyed me for son lone and we are OVER!" I yelled
"But babe..." he said slowly
"My Name is Keely. Not babe!!" And I hung up.

The rest of the morning my phone kept ringing but I never once answered it. I didnt want to talk to Ray again. Not now, not so fast.

SCORE ONE FOR KEELY!!! Woot woot!! That jerk, he's so...jerk-like! This is awesome!!! Totally continue!!!

Love,
Adrienne

thanks for reading it!
 

posting
 

As I said, heres a post, I know its short, but more later.

It's finally 10 o'clock. Dad said we were supposed to be leaving because he refused to use magic to get to the train station. First of all, because the train station is too crowded and second of all, since I won't answer my phone, Ray has been knocking on the front door all morning. Ian was ready to blow him up because he got woken up from his 'beauty sleep'. But mom stopped him and put a silencing charm on the door instead.

"Keely Potter! Get down here! We are going to be late, and you know your aunt doesn't tolerate lateness. Now HURRY up!!" Mom shouted from down stairs.

"Coming."

My mother is really quite pretty, just not when she's mad. I've got her red hair and dad's emerald eyes. According to my best friend Matt, it makes me look quite stunning. He shouldn't be talking with his gorgeous blue eyes eyes though. It makes him look so cute. Did I just think about him like that? I couldn't of.

We ended up being really late leaving so dad put a memory charm on Ray. All he remembers now is me breaking up with him. We apparated to the station with 4 loud 'pops'.

Now why 4 'pops'? Well, I side apparated with dad, Ian passed his test this summer, mom, and Uncle Ron apparated with Carly along side. Out of all my cousins (and I've got a lot) she is my favorite. She's in my year and one of my best friends. Her hair is brown, like Aunt Hermione's, but straight and long, like Uncle Ron's. She has got a brother, a year older then Ian so he's already out of Hogwarts.

"Hey, Keely!"

"Hi, Carly."

"It seems like forever since I last saw you!"

"You just saw me yesterday at lunch Carly, can you not go that long without your beloved cousin?" I said laughing.

"No I can't as a matter of fact, " Carly said.

It's a good start. Keep up the good work... Sorry, this is short, I need to go to sleep. Night!
~Aria~

hey this is a great start!!!
im glad keely broke up with a jerk like him!!
keep up the great work!
PAMS!

just a little bit...
 

"Oh, look theres the train lets go say bye and find an emty compartment before Matt this time!"

Carly and I found a compartment and Matt quickly found us, we sat and talked for about half an hour or so until Carlysuddently stood up and as good as shouted 'I ALMOST FORGOT' and raced out the door.

She came rushing back in a few seconds later, grabbed her prefect badge and took off saying that she would see us at the feast, leaving me and Matt alone.

just adding this, just to make the next part easier....
*Jenn

Love it, Keely did the right thing! Keep writing!

Post
 

I'm dedicating it to Cai...thanks for all your help. <3

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We were playing cards and every time I looked at him, my stomach felt like it was spinning, but very slowly. It was queezy and yet welcoming at the same time.

Out of the blue, Matt asked, "Why didn't you answer my calls this morning? I had something I really wanted to say, but you wouldn't answer the 10 different times that I called."

"Sorry, I thought you were Ray."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"I broke up with him. I got 50 different calls and I just ignored them. He showed up on my doorstep, but mom wouldn't let him in, and then she silenced him."

"Oh, I see, now."

Half an hour of silence later...

"So why were you calling? What was it that you needed to tell me so badly?" I asked.

"Can I have a hug?" Matt asked.

"That's what you needed to tell me??"

"Partly, yes. The hug though?" he half pleaded.

"Okay, fine." So I went over and gave him a hug. When I went to go back to my seat on the other side, he whispered, "No please, don't go, stay here and sit with me?"

I gave in and sat with him, mainly in silence. Surprisingly, I enjoyed it. For the last year, whenever I was left alone with him it always felt kind of weird and awkward. Now it feels kind of nice.

"Do you ever feel like some things are meant to be?" I asked to break the silence.

"Yes, but there's something I wanted to talk to you about..." Matt said.

"What? You know you can tell me anything, right?"

"Yes... Well, um, I was wondering if you would, um... like to... be my girlfriend?" he stumbled.

I was extremely shocked when he asked me this. I didn't have any idea that he felt this way. For the last 2 years he didn't go without a girlfriend for more than 2 weeks. Now he was looking at me with a shimmer in his eyes that I have never seen before with any other guy that has liked me. My stomach and my head felt like they were moving in slow motion. Maybe I actually do like him.

Yes... but why? You never seemed interested in me before. Why now?" I replied a little strictly.

"This is kind of hard for me to admit... but, it was all to make you jealous. But this year I decided that I'd just tell you. It feels better just to be open about it. Everything about you makes me feel good. I can't stand it when you are mad at me. Nothing ever seems right when you are upset, or mad," he said. Then, he abruptly got up from beside me and stormed out of the compartment.

Sorry, just HAD to leave it like that....:P

:D Love it! Thanks for the dedication too! It really was a great chapter... post more soon... PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!

<3 Cai

I'll post more tomorrow hopefully. I've got to get things ready for school too. I've only got like less then 3 weeks left :( But I'll try to post tomorrow.
<3JC

That was awesome!! I just sent the next part back to you, so COOL! I LOVE IT!! Pams
Adrienne

. . . as promised
 

Great so now he's mad at me. What did I do? I answered what he asked me and I don't think he asked to be rejected, but I didn't reject him. So why is he mad at me? I better go and find him...

I walked out of the compartment and since we had been at the very end I started glancing in every compartment I passed. I had about five compartments left when I spotted him. He was making out with Jocelyn from Ravenclaw. I opened the door pretending I hadn't seen anything.

"Sorry wrong compartment," I muttered. I slammed the door and ran quickly to the back of the train. As soon as I got in back to the compartment I slammed the door and locked it.

here it is, just a little earlier then I thought.

<3 Jenn

Oh, wait, so Keely is GINNY AND HARRY'S DAUGHTER!!?!

Got it now.

lol, yes, that would be where the red hair comes from, and the green eyes.
<3 jenn

Hi Jenn!! Promised I would read it!! It was very good!! So much drama already!! Wow!! I like how you didn't tell who Keely's parents were, it was like you had to figure out the obvious!! :lol: If that makes sense .. My mom and sister's name is Jocelyn .. I was like "whoa" when I read it, because not many people use that name!! Well I can't wait for more!!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!

Cat/Cait

I used jocelyn because well, um, there was this girl in the old school that I went to, and well we didnt get along. And anyother names I could think of were ppl that I am friends with, and that just seemed weird. Just thought Id say that.
<3 Jenn

hi new reader. i saw the link in your siggy and it made me wanna check your fic out. and it is awesome so far. but i cant belive matt asked her out and then was makin out with someone. that's horrible for keely.
PAMS

Roshni

haha, oic, I am the same way. Except I would use the name Annie .. Goodness I hated her .. :shudders: .. lol

Cat/Cait

Well, this is the last post that you're gunna get for awhile, If you have any ideas, let me know. I'm just kinda at a spot that I can't write anything. I've been not all that great lately. And I'm super tired. My friend went home at 2 in the morning because she wasn't feeling that good, and didn't want to keep me up. so It kinda really sucks.. I hadn't seen her in a long time.

But here's your post, and its not all that good. but it was just something that i had to put in. I'm still half making introductions.

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I was so upset. What did I ever do to make him go and make out with someone he knows I hate? And right after he asked me out. I had said yes. Hadn't I? Yes, I'm sure I did.

I needed to talk to Lyssa. She's my other best friend. I grew up with her too. Her mom Luna is one of my moms friends. Luna Longbotton, is quite extrodinary. She always seems to know what's wrong before I even tell her. She has a habit of finishing my sentences. I could use her smile right about now, to bad she's at the prefect meeting with Carly and my brother, who also happens to be her boyfriend. They never seem to fight and they've been together for over a year now. How I wish Matt and I could be like that and we wouldn't fight. I wonder if they would let me into the prefect meeting. Nah, I'm not that desperate, just really upset.

For the rest of the train ride I sat in the compartment by my self, leaving the door unlocked incase Carly and Lyssa came back. Matt came down near the end but I just pretended that I was asleep. He came over and kissed me softly and I faintly heard him whisper "Hopefully one day you'll know how much you mean to me Keely."

We arrived at Hogwarts for the feast but there was noone in the Headmistress seat. Instead my Aunt(she's headmistress) was sitting in the muggle studies chair. Once everyone had settled down she stood up.

"I know that normally I would be sitting that that seat, but I've decided that it too much for me to handle. Starting this year we will have a new Headmaster. All the staff know that he will do an excellent job and are very pleased that he has finally accepted the post. Please join us in welcoming my best friend, Mr. Harry Potter!!" she said then sitting down.

Cheers erupted from the whole hall, except for those wearing silver and green. I was just shocked. Why didn't dad tell me. Normally he tells me everything about school. Maybe it was just something so that he'd be able to keep a watchful eye on me. Wait, he already had my aunt to do that.
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There you go, hope it you like it, I'll post when I get another idea to go with.
sorry, just not my self lately.
<3Jenn

this is great! i love it! its got soo much drama and it makes me want to read more!!

Well, you're gunna have to wait :P because I dont have any clue on what to write next. I'll post as soon as i can though.
<3 Jenn

OMG!! It's up!!! Yeah!!!! It's really, really good so far. Can't wait for the next post!!!
~Ashlyn

OHHH .. Harry is the headmaster .. He's gonna have a close watch on his daughter!! :D

Gahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! I mean, having a parent for a teacher is one thing, but as the HEADMASTER?!?!?! (grins evily) This will be interesting.

-Happy

I'll post more later on tonight, or in the morning. I'm not feeling to good, but I want it to be on my 200th post, so the next time I post anywhere will be here. I promise.

Be back later on to post.
<3Jenn

Well, here it is. Hope you like it, let me know what you think.Thanks to Cai<3 Its the longest one yet I think. But its 'Celebration' of my 200th post.

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Everywhere I went, I felt like someone was watching me. One couldn't help but feel that if they needed the famous Harry Potter to be the headmaster, something was wrong. Then again, one could always be wrong. Matt still seemed to be hanging onto Jocelyn everywhere he went. You could almost think that he wanted to change houses. He was never like this. Lyssa and Carly weren't as supportive as I would of liked, but I guess I can't do anything about that, and it also didn't help that it was kind of awkward between us three now... well me and them at least.

I wanted to at least have Matt back to talk to, but he won't talk to me. I'd be sitting in the common room, late at night, finishing homework because Brady Wood, our Quidditch captain, was always making us practice. At least he will be leaving this year. And who would just happen to walk in when I was the only one left? Matt of course. He'd just kind of glare at me, and storm off up to the dorms. Why was he doing this to me?

This kept going on for a few weeks. It was almost the end of September, and I already wanted to go home. Maybe dad would let me. So I went to talk to him.

I was going up the stairs to his office, and on the other side of the door I could here dad and my aunt arguing. That's nothing new, but it normally doesn't happen very often. My aunt was going on about me, and how he should talk to me. He was complaining saying that he didn't know how to deal with teenage girls. Thats when I decided to leave. I couldn't talk to him, he'd just have to talk to me, because he would know I overheard the conversation.

In the morning, I would work everything out. I'd talk to Matt and everything. I'd work on him first, because that's why it was weird between Carly, Lyssa and I at the moment. I think Lyssa might still like him. He was with her for two weeks last year. Then everything could go back to normal. Hopefully.

I was walking down to the Great Hall that morning when I saw Matt. I grabbed my chance and decided to talk to him then. I didn't know what I was going to say, so I just went along with my gut.

"MATT!"

Stopping, he turned around and looked at me, and as meanly as possible said, "What do you want??"

"I was just wondering why you were being so cruel and not talking to me. What did I do to make you not talk to me?"

"You turned me down! I told you how I feel about you, and you just turned me down."

"Its too bad you think that because you are seriously wrong. About everything, especially me," I told him.

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"Well, in case you didn't know, I did not reject you. Only minutes after I told you I'd go out with you, I find you making out with Jocelyn. It really hurt, to know that you just said you liked me, and then you were making out with someone you know I hated. I didn't even want to talk to you because of it. I have no idea if what you told me was ever true. How would I know, after what you did, and now that you always seem to be attached to her. And because of me being all upset about you, my two best friends in the world aren't talking to me."

He looked like he wanted to say something, but I cut him off again.

"... No, you are not my best friend, definitely not with the way you have been acting towards me lately," I said, walking away.

"KEELY! WAIT!!!" He yelled running after me.
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Thats all for now!!
<3Jenn

AW!! At least she talked to him!!!! I wonder what his excuse will be .. ::glares at Matt:: PAMS!!!! :)

Cat/Cait

great posts
i'm glad she talking to him
i wonder if he'll just go up to her and kiss her
PAMS

Roshni

Great post! i love this fic!

This is great oh yeah by the way i'm jenns little step sister..........keep it up big step sis

EDIT: ^^ thats my little sister amber-lee, thts who i names keelys sister after. But she wanted to read it so I let her. Thats all I wanted to add btw.

Sorry bout this . . .
 

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Originally Posted by footballbabii15 AW!! At least she talked to him!!!! I wonder what his excuse will be .. ::glares at Matt:: PAMS!!!! :) Cat/Cait

ya...you'll just have to wait and find out. Dunno when im going to post....im really busy for the next week, gtg to get ready to go back to school. and fall fair stuff....

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Originally Posted by danismine great posts i'm glad she talking to him i wonder if he'll just go up to her and kiss her PAMS Roshni

You too. but thanks! but your gunna have to wait too:P sorry for making you wait, i just dont have time right now....

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Originally Posted by Moxie Great post! i love this fic!

Thanks!!! that means alot to me, like inspiration :)

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This is great oh yeah by the way i'm jenns little step sister..........keep it up big step sis

Thanks Amber-Lee, and thanks for reading it goof!


Ok, well I'll post more as soon as I can and all, but I'm really busy. I'm helping out at the fall fair so I can get my vollenteer hours for school, that I need to graduate. Anyone else need to get 40 hours of communtiy service before they can graduate??
And then on Monday and Tuesday, I think I'm helping babysit. Then on Wednesday, I have to go into the school that I am starting at this year, to get my courses and so that I know where I am going. And then at 2:30 ive got an orthidontist appointment. And at 5:30 I'm getting my hair cut [Short or long?] , we've got to get Amber-lee ready to go to her dads wedding on thursday, Friday we are going shopping for school. Saturday I'm going to my grandmas for the weekend. And ontop of that, my cousins are coming up from London this week, so I've got to fit them in, then im back to school on the 5th :( I'll try and post sometime in there I hope, Just if I can't I've told you why, I will post eventually though. If I can't, and I can get on, I'l PM one of you, and if you want to post it for me, you can.
But I've got to go, help set up for the fall fair.
<3Jenn
I'm taking back my heart, because I still believe love was meant to be something you dont betray...

Well, you're quite busy!! We totally understand though! I am going to be busy as well! Hope your schedule clears up a bit for you :) ..

Cat/Cait

wow i am really behind!
poor keely! matt was really unfair! i hope they get together!
harry is the headmaster?!?!?!? its gonna be fun!
great posts!
PAMS!

Well, I'm not posting, but if any of you are still checking up on this, I'm gunna try and post on monday. I'm going away this weekend, and I'm gunna write up so more of it. I am also working on Drabbles too, so if you want to check them out they are on harry/hermione, not my favorite ship, but it was one that was left. The sad part is that you cant commet on them:( but if you read them, please please let me know what you think.
Be back with a post on monday!!
<3Jenn

^ Can't wait!! :D

Cait xxo

New post!!
 

Well, this is a little earlier then planned, but things happened, and it sucks, and this post I promise I didn't put depression into, but there might be a few depressing drabbles, or the next post might not be that good, when I'm down, I normally put it into my writing.

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“What now Matt?” I yelled back, “don’t you think you have tormented me enough?” I asked him, not turning around to face him.”

“Maybe, maybe not” he replied.

“What’s that supposed to mean? What are you going to do now, dump me? Because go ahead, you were never really my boyfriend to begin with. You sure didn’t act like it, that’s for sure, didn’t even acknowledge me.” I said with my back to him, still.

“I don’t know what to say to you anymore, why I put up with you all these years is beyond me. Give me one reason I should still talk to you” I continued.

“This”

Walking up behind me, he gently touched my shoulder and turned my around. He was staring into my eyes with such a look of love and hurt all at the same time, slowly he leaned in, closer, closer, until we were finally only millimetres apart.

“Matt, don’t please. Don’t make this any worse” I muttered into his lips.

“I need you to know that you matter to me Keely…” he replied closing the gap.

I didn’t know I could feel this way. Everything was spinning. He was kissing me, but I was too shocked to kiss him back.

*Matt’s POV*

She had said yes? How could I of been so stupid? I’m just standing here in shock and she’s not even looking at me, all I heard was the last thing she said, this is my chance. I’ll show her what she means to me. I slowly walked up behind her and turned her around. I turned in to kiss her and I hear her mutter ‘Matt, don’t please, don’t make this any worse’ and I closed the gap.

Ever feel like its just right? Well for you, but not the other way around? What do you do when the girl of your dreams doesn’t kiss you back?

Sadly, I break off the kiss, turn around and walk away. Suddenly there’s a hand on my shoulder. Keely spun me around, and just kissed me. Her hand slipped up behind my neck and pulled me closer, deepening the kiss, I obliged and let her lead me wherever she wanted.

I finally had the girl I wanted, and it couldn’t be any better. The only thing that could screw this up was Jocelyn, I’d just break up with her later. All that matters to me now is Keely.
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There, that should be good for a few days, school starts on tuesday, so I cant promise another one soon.
<3Jenn
p.s. anyone have any neat icons? I really need to make a few siggy, the one i have is a constant reminder.

I lurved that post!!! I do that too.. or I just don't post... My stories.. if there is a made-up character in it, it'll be like how I act.. Kinda weird though... *frowns* SChool starts on tuesday for me too and I can't wait for the next post!!

Awwwww, soo cute .. they are in wove!! hehehehe!! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!

Cait xxo

Thanks a lot!! I'll try and post as soon as I can, hopefully I will be feeling better by then, I need to get ahold of someone, then I'll be better, it works everytime. So, I'll post when I can, I've got it formed in my head, I've just got to put it on paper. this post has taken along time...its not long, but its really drawn out. So with that. I'll post as soon as I can, and feel up to it.
thanks guys, you guys are the best!!
<3Jenn

Hey... that was great! Did you have someone else beta read it? :D I really liked it... they're so sweet together... ha ha! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!

kool u posted
i knew that wud happen
loved it
PAMS

Roshni

Hope you feel better! Can't wait for the psot! :)

Cait xxo

OMG! What happened? You have to post!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Id post now, but I cant, sorry, I don't have time. Maybe I'll make it tuesday instead. I wouldnt have time to to type it all up to that point. :P
<3Jenn

Earlier then I said, but I'm posting.

Well, Here it is, hope you like it. Let me know what you think.

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“What do you think you are doing?” someone yelled.

“Why does it concern you?” I retorted, not paying any attention to who it was.

“Why do you think it’s alright to make out with MY boyfriend in the middle of the hallway?” the person continued to shout.

“You’re boyfriend??!!” I said, finally pushing Matt off me, hoping he’d help me out here. “Well, the thing is Jocelyn…” I started again.

“No, Keely. I got you into this, it’s my job to get you out of it,” Matt said, interrupting me. “I don’t want to go out with you, and never did. It wasn’t something that I ever really wanted, just a tactic for getting my mind off Keely. You and me are over, and don’t ever think that I will take you back!!” He exclaimed.

“How can you do this to me? What did I ever do to you?” She said.

“Nothing, except cling to me, but I mainly was with you because Keely doesn’t like you. So I figured it was a great way to get back at her, but I don’t want to do that now. Turns out I was mistaken, she actually likes me,” He finished.

Jocelyn slapped Matt hard across the face and turned and stormed off, not watching out for many people in her way. Matt and I just stood there and watched her go through her little fit, until she got stuck in the stairs, when we turned around and walked away, laughing and holding hands.

Matt and I are officially a couple now. Nobody has even dared to go near Jocelyn, you might even say that she’s gone insane. At least that’s what most of the people in the school think. And when people know things, everyone knows about it. Even the teachers.

Weeks have gone by and everything couldn’t be any better. Before I knew it, it was a week before Halloween.

Monday morning, I’m in the great hall with Matt and Carly. Dad was sitting up at the front, when suddenly he stands up.

“May I have your attention please” he speaks out over everyone's chatter.

“I have some very important announcements for you all, so please listen carefully. First is a reminder to the Slytherins to stay to the dungeons, and stop taunting other students.”

A girl from the Slytherin table gave him a nasty look.

“Yes that means you Miss Malfoy!” he added.

Continuing he says, “This I think you are all going to enjoy. On Halloween there will be a dance for everyone above 4th year, unless asked by someone above 4th year. That is all, carry on.”

All of a sudden the hall was talking, ghosts were talking, and all the girls were going on continuously. It was so loud that I couldn’t even hear myself talking to Matt. With no idea what he was saying to me, I got up and left. I glanced back when I reached the doorway, Matt was looking at me with such a look of hate on his face. Not knowing why, I turned around and kept going.

Lunch came around and everyone had actually settled down, well as much as could be expected. I went and sat down next to Matt, he gave me a weird look, muttered something inaudible and got up and left.

“What’s the matter with him?” I asked Carly.

“He asked you to the ball this morning and you just got up and left!”

“It’s not my fault, I couldn’t hear anything. So I left and he looked at me like he hated me.”

“ He thinks he does hate you at the moment. He asked you if you would go to the ball with him and you just got up and left. He doesn’t get you, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t even want to talk to you,” Carly told me.

“I should go talk to him, shouldn’t I?”

“That might be a good idea, Keely. Good luck finding him, he seems to be pretty good at knowing where everything is in this castle,” she said.

Saying goodbye to her, I got up and headed to the 4th floor. I knew that he would be there.

Dad had given me his dad’s map, he figured I wouldn't cause too much trouble. So I could find out exactly where he was. The secret corridor on the 4th floor behind the mirror. So that’s where I headed.

Sure enough, when I pulled out the map, there he was sitting in the hidden passage way. I guess he didn’t think that I was going to go looking for him.

I took out my wand, muttered ‘Matata’ and it swung open.

He didn’t hear me enter, because he had his head down, it almost looked like he was crying.

Slowly and quietly, I went down and sat next to him. He still didn’t notice me, so I went to put my arm around him and that’s when he finally noticed me.

Quickly he turned to look at me and roughly shrugged my arm off him.

“Matt, why won't you talk to me? You’re acting like you hate me or something, do you?”

“I’m not sure Keel, you don’t want to go to the ball with me, but yet you like me?” he said tears streaming down his face.

“I didn’t know what you had asked me. I couldn’t hear, so I left. But if you’ll still take me, I’d love to go with you,” I told him.

“Of course I’ll still take you, but you missed them leaving for the village 15 minutes ago, they won't let you go now.”

“They don’t have to know. And just to prove that I’m smarter than you. I’ll let you come with me,” I told him.

Kissing him quickly, I stood up and took out my wand.

“Reparo,” I shouted.

“How’d you do that??”

“What?”

“Repair the tunnel…”

“Oh, my mom helped me one Christmas when she came to visit me instead of me going home. She used her brilliant charms, so that it looks like it's caved in to those who don’t know about it,” I said.

“That is so neat, does your dad know about this??” he asked.

“Nope! Mom said it would stay our little secret and anyone else I decided to tell, so far you’re the only one I’ve told, so you’re lucky!”

“So what are we waiting for! Lets go!” he exclaimed.

So, grabbing his hand, we took off toward the Three Broomsticks.
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I'll post more when I can, I've got school now, and I've just been writing this at lunch. Hope you like what I've got now.
<3Jenn

Well, I'm gun a try and post again by friday, I'm starting to get bored with my classes, so I'll post something on Friday.
<3Jenn
p.s. then im away for the weekend at a wedding

this is the best story big sis........ did everyone now that my big sister jennifer is the best story writer oh ya i am reading her story...i am amber-lee jennifers step sister and i am on here once in a while so i can read her story.....but tell me if you think jennifer is a good story writer

This is really good I simply love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here's a new post for anyone thats still reading.

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It took a long time to get through the tunnel. It seemed like it had expanded. It also seemed a lot wider than I remembered. Beside me, Matt had his wand out, he wasn’t using it to light the way though, I was doing that. I didn’t think anything of it at the time, but the longer we walked, the more it began to bug me. How were we walking all this distance and not getting anywhere?

*Matt’s P.O.V.*

Sure I was glad that she hadn’t said no, but was the 'just to prove I’m smarter' comment really necessary? Well, she thinks she’s smarter then me, I’ll just have to show her! So, we were just walking along and I set off a few of the spells that I had come up with myself, but she didn’t notice me mutter them. At one point, she looked puzzled and was glancing at my wand. I think she wondered why I had it out but didn’t have it lit.

Awhile ago, I had figured out how to freeze time, well just make it so that it stopped and it was very easy to catch back up with another spell. The only problem was that if you wanted time to stop for you, you weren’t able to go anywhere, and whoever was around you would also be stuck as well. I’d been using it so I could get all my homework done this year.

I’d have to tell her eventually what I’d done, but it wasn’t like she had to get dress robes. I’d snuck out the other day when her dad let me know about it before hand. He had given me money and a port-key to go and get her something really nice. That’s exactly what I did. I think she’ll love it.

*Keely’s P.O.V.*

Okay. I’ve walked through this tunnel many times and it’s never taken this long before, why?

Matt had a really mysterious look on his face, I can’t quite understand what it’s about but my gut says that he has something to do with this. What though, is the question.

I really don’t want to ask him, it just seems a little odd. I can just imagine now how it would sound. ‘I’m sorry, but I was just wondering if you had anything to do with the fact that we haven’t been getting anywhere for the last while?’ Yup, that sure does sound a little odd.

“What’d you say, Keel?” Matt said suddenly.

“I said something?”

“Yeah, you did. You were muttering on about something, I just couldn’t catch it.”

Oops, I guess I hadn’t said that in my head.

“Oh, I was just thinking about why we weren’t seeming to get anywhere, doesn’t it seem a little odd to you?” I asked.

“Ummm…”

“Do YOU know anything about this??” I almost yelled.

“Just thought I’d prove that you weren’t smarter than me,” he muttered so quietly that I had to lean really close to him just to catch it at all.

“What are you talking about, Matt?” I asked quietly.

“Uh, time spell, I made it,” he said.

“WHAT!! How are we supposed to get out of here? You made it!?”

“Yeah, awhile ago, I was behind on my homework, so I froze time so I could finish it all and not get detentions all year,” he said.

“So we are walking but aren’t going anywhere… is that right?” I asked.

“Yeah, everyone else doesn’t know we are and can’t see us.”

“Is there a time limit that we have? Or does it matter how long we stay. And, I’ve got to get dress robes for Saturday night,” I told him.

“Accio dress robes!” Matt shouted.

*Matt’s P.O.V.*

I knew that the dress robes would be able to reach me, because I’d left them sitting in a box all wrapped up. I’d hid them in my dorm after she didn’t answer me when I asked her to the ball.

I took out my wand again and started conjuring up tables, and a few candles, so that it wasn’t so gloomy in the tunnel. I had decided this all back when I was putting on the first spell that I used.
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Let me know what you think.
<3Jenn

Great post!

NEW READER ALERT!!!!! Great story... i loves it... can't wait for more and more and more... PAMS!!!

~Sama~

Just to let you know that i love your story. I havnt read much yet but i promise that in a few minutes or so i will read it i need to update stuff! Luv ya xxx

Ok, I need help, I'm having trouble with the next post. So I'm opening it up. I'm looking for what you think the dress should look like. If you have anyideas, please just post them here, or pm me to let me know!!! thanks soo much!!!
I'll post when I have an idea for a dress in mind, I'm also looking for a poem, so if any of you have anyideas, ill try to find one like it.
THanks!!
<3Jenn

Hey Jenn, I would like to take on the job, I already sent you a PM with the description of the dress and help with the poem.

Let me know if you like the design,
Draco's Darling

Eee!! I :loved: that post... And you know, now thatwe've come to a dress.. Me has this odd want to draw one.. :lol: Yes, I'm random. But it would be fun!! Ooooh. I can't wait til you post the next bit!!

Thanks, I'm so glad that you like it:loved:

I'm gunna try and get the post up by either tuesday or wednesday, I won't be on much after that until after thanksgiving because my brothers coming home, so if I don't post, I just didnt get time, and I will try to get on sometime during that 6 days, but I've also got like 3 thanksgiving dinners to go to.

One thing, is that It is going to be a LONG post, I can promise that.

Thanks for your help on the dresses!!! And thanks for the wonderful poem Dracos Darling...
<3Jenn
p.s.

Please Post Soon. PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!

New Post!!
 

Well, I'd like to welcome the new readers first. I really like it that you like my story.

I said that I would post, and I will. But first, I would like to give credit, A millions times, to Draco's Darling for writing the first poem for me. I love it. And for everyone else, you'll just have to read on to see.

And many thanks to harrypottersummer for helping me out with the dress plan.

I started it with a little bit of the last part, because it made more sense.

So here it is.

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*Matt’s P.O.V.*

I knew that the dress robes would be able to reach me, because I’d left them kidding in a box all rapped up. I’d hidden them there after she didn’t answer me when I asked her to the ball.

I took out my wand again and started conjuring up tables, a few candles, so that it wasn’t so gloomy in the tunnel. I had decided this all back when I was putting on the first spell that I used. So, maybe I lied, I had planned this out a lot before hand. I wanted it to be just right. This isn’t exactly the way I wanted it, because I didn’t think that we would have to be in this predicament , but I’m going to make it work just the way things are now.

Everything was great, I’d even gotten some help from her mom on a really nice poem, I’m hoping that she will love it. The tunnel is almost finished. In the centre of where we are standing there is a table covered in lace and a vase of roses in the middle. Along the walls I conjured up so icicle lights, I know it’s not winter or anything, but they just seem to fit. Off in the corner I lit a small fire for light. Last but not least, I added two really comfortable arm chairs, the ones like the ones in the common room because I know how much she loves those chairs, except this time, I made them a blue-ish colour, her favourite.

Putting my wand in my pocket I walked over to the edge, the dress what just getting here, but there was no way I was letting her see this yet. It was something really special. Walking back over to her chair, I pulled it out and offered her the seat, once she took it, I went over to the other side of the small table and sat down.

I slowly put my hand in my pocket and pulled out two little pixels, knowing that they accomplish what I had in mind I let go of them, sending them up to the ceiling with a shot of light and glitter. I slowly looked at Keely, the look on her face was on of utter amusement , she opened her mouth to say something, but I quickly stopped her by placing my finger over her lips and whispering another spell.

Slowly on the wall came the words that I hoped that she would love.

To some you may not be special, but to me you’re everything,
Your joy, your smile, your laughter, it’s given my wings,
You’re someone who is beautiful, no matter what you do,
And in a crowd of millions, all I see is you.

You’re that little ray of sunshine that brightens up my day,
And when my life is cloudy, you’re always there to stay,
I am amazed at what you’re doing, and I’m amazed by who you are,
You fill my world with happiness like a brightly shining star.

And when you are in danger, when you need a place to hide,
I’ll be your friend and helper, always by your side,
A treasure with high value, an angel like no other,
And if apart, I will return one way or another.

When I look into your eyes, I always see your soul,
It’s always great and beautiful, and it always makes me whole,
You are the one that’s had my back, and saw me through and through,
There’s no easy way to say this,
But I’ll say it… I love you

The pixels that I had enchanted slowly began to sing this in a cannon, it sounded better then I could ever of managed my self, and trust me when I say that I can’t sing.

*Keely’s P.O.V.*

I can’t believe that he has done all this. Everything just looks so romantic, I had no idea that he could even come up with something like this. I stand here in wonder just merely thinking about how lucky I am to have him.

He’s walking towards me again. He slowly pulls out my chair and I sit down, he soon after does the same thing. Once he’s sitting something flies into the air spinning in slow motion surrounded by light and sparkles. Its absolutely beautiful. I love it. I start to thank him, but he stops me, whispering something that I can’t here. The next thing I know there are words slowly appearing on the wall, and soon after whatever it was that went up in the air begin singing as well.

“Wow, Matt. How did you come up with all this?” I asked quietly.

“Well, there’s something that I have wanted to tell you for awhile now, but I never got the time, I’ve been thinking about this for a long time and I can’t wait any longer, it’s eating me up inside.”

“What is it, Matt?”

He’s silent for a few minutes and just sits there and watches the words flowing around the walls slowly. Suddenly he speaks again.

“Keely, I’ve known you since I came to Hogwarts 6 years ago. From the very beginning we got along better then I ever imagined I could with anyone, out of all the friends I had had before I started you were by far the best. You just know when something’s wrong, you never had to ask. I couldn’t help but falling in love with you. I never thought that I stood a chance because you were always telling me how I was so much like you’re brother, but so much nicer. I tried to get you out of my head by going out with other girls, but it never worked, slowly we grow apart. Finally I realized what was happening because I was going out with different girls all the time. I was losing the one person that I truly love, that means more to me then anyone else. I guess what I am trying to say, and show you, is that I love you, Keely. I have for along time now, and I always will love you.”

This just struck me, I knew that he did, but I didn’t think that he would actually tell me. I love him too, but I’m kind of scared to actually. I love him for everything. I think I have for sometime, but maybe I should actually tell him instead of thinking it.

“Now would be a good time to say something” he says, quietly, he sounds a little let down.
“Matt, I love you too, I have for sometime, but I never knew how to say it.” I slowly told him.

Slowly, the words on the wall began to disappear, only to be replaced with new ones.

In rain or shine; in any case,
I'll be waiting with my heart in hand,
And kill myself at your command
Just to prove what love can do.


If you go, I'll miss your face,
And miss your smile, since we're apart.
Your eyes to me are like a dart:
A piercing gaze of life and blue.


Never leave; you're my happy place.
Without you all things are bland,
But when you're here the world seems grand,
Because you're the sole to my shoe.


If we leave, it'll be in stride for pace.
We'll walk hand in hand until we part,
Keeping hugs and kisses always at heart.
Because I'll be there for you.


I love you, it's as clear as space.
I'll be with you until the end;
Trying to be your everything, from a helper to a friend,
Cause when we part, I want to still be with you.


I have no idea how he does this. But he just makes me feel so warm inside. Getting up again, he goes over and gets the box that he had. Handing it to me he motions for me to open it. Slowly I begin to unwrap it. Gently I take out what’s in side of it, it’s the most beautiful thing that I’ve ever seen, holding up I realize why he said that I didn’t have to worry about getting dress robes. They are a amazing colour of gold silk, and wrapped around the middle and the top is a white ribbon, over top of the gold silk is a shimmering sequin covered material. It’s absolutely beautiful.

“It’s beautiful, I love you so much” I told him quietly.

“No, its not nearly as beautiful as you are, and it ever will be. I love you so much, more then you can ever imagine.”
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This is the Dress, Just please keep in mind the changes in color and fabric.
Keely's Dress>>Check it out<<

<3Jenn

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!! This post was way better them I had imagined!! I really want that dresss... :lol:

Somebody gave you a five star rating!!!! ;)

New Post!
 

Here's a post, It's not that long because I'm on the phone and all, and it's all I can think of right now. I've edited it myself, so if there are any mistakes, I'm sorry, I just wanted to post it.

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Slowly, I got up from my chair and went over to him and sat in his lap, for the longest time I just sat there and looked into his eyes. We sat there in silence. I slowly moved my hand up behind his neck and pulled him closer to me, once again, I just gazed into his eyes. Suddenly I kissed him, shivers went down my spine, and he kissed me back. Slowly we pulled apart, and he held me close as if he was scared to let me go.

“Don’t ever leave me..” he whispered.

“I wont, I promise. I love you” I said, kissing him again quickly.

Picking me up, we moved over to the couch that was there, courtesy of Matt. The chair was a little crowded. Placing me down, he sat down next to me and put his arm around me, leaning up beside him I closed my eyes. Everything about this just felt right.

“Keely…”

“Yes Matt?”

“Marry me?” he said, reaching into his pocket.

“Yes!” I said without thinking, then it hit me as he was placing the most beautiful ring on my finger that I’d ever seen.

“Matt, we are only in sixth year….I’m too young to get married, dad wouldn’t like it.” I said slowly.

“Okay” He said, looking kind of hurt.

“Can I re-phrase it then?” he added

“I love you, will you promise to marry me when we are done school?”

“Yes!!” I said, kissing him with so much passion , this couldn’t of been more right…I just wonder what everyone else will think…but wow, this ring is beautiful.
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Let me know what you think, and I'll post again when I get the chance, I'm debating whether or not I should let my boyfriend read it or not, because I know that he likes reading, but I'm not to sure if he's read the Harry Potter books. Let me know what you think about that too, and what you think I should do.
<3Jenn

AWESOME POSTS!!!!!! He asked her to marry him!!! That's sooooo good!

Love,
Adrienne

Love it!

Wow great posts.

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Hey,

Thanks.

And, it might be awhile before I post, I'm thinking about really shaking it up, and I am also working on an idea for another FF at the same time too. If you think that I should post another one, let me know.
<3Jenn

yes! most definitely!

this is wonderful
how romantic
PAMS

Roshni

Well, I promise that I will post soon. I'm writing the next post, but I want it to be longer then what it is before I put it on here.

Nothings been good lately, so I'm gunna post when I can, hopefully in the next few days.

Sorry for the wait.
<3Jenn

Well, Here's my post. Thanks to emma_rlz for checking it through. Hope you like it.

A few hours later we were heading back to the castle, we had really lost track of time. That’s not normally anything that happens to me very often but when I’m with Matt I’m different. I don’t really have a care in the world about anything. Now, even more because nothing else is happening, everyone else is still doing the same thing they were doing a few hours ago.

Back at school Matt left, saying that he had something that he had to take care of. So now, I’m on my own…I wonder if dad is around, maybe I should tell him about Matt asking me to marry him and more importantly what I said. Turning around and heading in the other direction I headed to the headmasters office. I hope this goes okay, the whole idea of telling him something this big when I’m only in my sixth year is a little scary. Maybe I’ll luck out and it wont be that bad.

I finally reached the entrance but realized that I didn’t know the password.

“What are you doing here, Keely? I heard my dad say behind me.

“I came to talk to you actually, I’ve got something to tell you,” I said.

“I know,” he says heading up the stairs to his office.

“So,” he says motioning for me to sit down, “What is it that you need to tell me?” he finished with a look on his face I couldn’t quite understand.

It might be easier if I just tell him straight out, I thought.

“I know that I’m only in my sixth year, but Matt asked me to marry him, and I said yes! But not till after I was finished school. He bought be a dress for the Halloween dance too, its so pretty,” I said, extremely fast.

“I know,” dad said slowly, again with that look on his face.
“What do you mean you know?”

“I got Matt to buy you a dress, I figured I’m allowed to do something for you every once in awhile,” he said.

“Where’d you send him to? Because he wouldn’t of been able to get something that pretty in the village,” I said.

“New York”

“Wow, really? And you knew about him asking me to marry him too?” I asked.

“Yes and yes, Keely. Now if you don’t mind I’ve got work that I’ve got to get done. You should tell your mother the news. She’s with Hermione right now, she’ll be until after the dance, so if you aren’t ready to tell her that will be ok as well,” he said dismissing me.

Leaving his office, I walked off in deep thought.

Wow sorry I haven't posted in a while.
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Happy Hallow's Eve!!

man harry knows everything
can't wait to kno ginny's reaction
that shud b interesting
lovely post
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Roshni

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I will not be able to post for awhile, my computer is broken, due to a broken keyboard. I was going to post by friday, but now, I can't. I will have a long post for you next time I can get one. I promise. I will most likely end up going to grandparents to type it up sometime soon. It is 10 pages long in my hand writing, and I'm still typing.

I have to go, because I am writing this from school.

I'm sorry about this, but I have a long post coming as soon as I can get it on here.

<3Jenn
p.s. sorry

Ok, great news, I come home from school, and we have gotten a new keyboard.

I'll post later because I'm going to work on a project, and I still have to type the whole thing up.

<3Jenn

Hey! I finally got around to reading your fic! And I said I didn't mind not having any credit! I would make this longer, but I have to go. PAMS!

Posting soon. And thanks to harrypottersummer for the help on this one...
<3Jenn

New Post!
 

Here it is, hope you like it. Let me know what you think.
<3Jenn

No one really knew about me and Matt yet and it is already the night of the dance. I'd gotten a charm put on it so that no one would really know, so I wasn't asked hundreds of questions. I don't know if or what Matt has told anyone, but I don't think he has or I would've been asked questions.

The ball is tonight. All the girls are rushing to get ready. It's really quite a mess. They are all doing each others hair and everything. I've just got a few spells that Aunt Hermione showed me. They're actually pretty cool. I was overly surprised that my aunt knew anything about spells to do with beauty. I know she knows a lot of spells but that didn't really strike as something she'd know.

I told my mom the other day when I went to ask Aunt Hermione about spells. At first she seemed mad that it had come about in such a short time. But Hermione said something to her and she seemed okay with it then. I'm not sure what it was but she has been a lot quieter since then around me.

Guys really are weird. They are still all sitting in the common room like nothing is going on at all tonight. The girls know what they are doing too because every once in awhile numerous howlers start screaming while I'm sitting down here with Matt. He keeps asking me why I'm not getting ready, I just keep telling him that I don't need to. He's not going to quit asking so I might as well just go and get ready.

Upstairs is chaos. Everyone is rushing around trying to get ready. There is only about an hour left until the ball starts, so quickly grabbing my stuff I and taking a quick shower. When I was done I dried my hair and found my dress. Slipping it on, I began to work on my hair with numerous spells. With my hair still curling and putting its self up, I began to apply my makeup making sure that it matched my gold dress. Once I was finished all this it was half an hour later and I only had about 20 minutes left. Digging through my jewelry I found a necklace that went well with my dress and a matching bracelet. Finally taking the charm off my ring I was ready to go.




*Matt's P.O.V.*



I'm really nervous about tonight. I haven't seen much of Keely over the last few days. Whenever I have she's been sitting in the common room working on homework. I haven't seen the ring on her finger since I gave it to her, I don't know why she would want to hide it. I thought she'd be happy about it, but she doesn't seem to want anyone to know, she hasn't said anything about it though.

There's a new guy that transferred to this school yesterday. He got sorted into this house but I haven't seen him yet. I've only heard about him. It's puzzling me that very few seem to know who he is. He's in my year though and also all the girls seem to like him and I've never seen him before.

I should probably go and start to get ready, Keely wont be very happy if I just go the way I am now. I can't wait to see her.

Half an hour later I am back downstairs with the rest of the guys. Most of them have already left with their dates so there are only a few of us left. I'm standing looking down at the ground when one of the guys taps me on the shoulder. Looking up to see what he wanted, I see Keely walking down the stairs. She looks absolutely gorgeous. I'm so lucky. She is actually wearing the ring, I feel a lot better now.

She's standing right in front of me now. I seem to of lost my voice...

"Matt, you ready to go?" Keely asked, breaking the silence that had filled the common room.

"You look beautiful, Keely," I said, finally finding my voice.

Blushing, she took my arm and led me towards the great hall.




*Keely's P.O.V.*

Matt amuses me sometimes. I walked down the stairs and he just went quiet for a few minutes and didn't say anything . In the end I broke the silence, it needed to be done.

The great hall looks so nice. It's scary though as well for Halloween. This should be a fun night. I have this feeling that nothing is going to go wrong. Hopefully I'm right.

The first few songs were all slow songs and after that I left Matt to go dance with Carly because she asked me to, and I haven't told her about Matt and I yet either.

While Carly and I were having fun dancing she was asking me questions about what I'd been up to lately when suddenly she stops, looks at me and all of a sudden says.

"What's that ring for??"

"Matt," I said.

"What's that supposed to mean?" she asked.

"He asked me if I'd marry him when school was over"



"And you didn't see the need to tell me?" she almost yelled.

"I didn't get a chance, I've been so busy lately..."

"You're gonna marry the Malfoy boy... Wow, what does your dad have to say about that??" she said.

"He asked dad first I guess, because dad already knew. You know he doesn't like to be referred to as a Malfoy. He's totally different then the rest of them. He wouldn't be in our house if he wasn't. You know that," I told her.

"I know, just still. That's like wow. You're only in your sixth year. You're way too young to get married, but I guess it's okay if its not till after school," she concluded and we went back to dancing.

A few minutes later I heard a voice behind me. Carly gives me a weird look and walks away leaving me with whoever the voice belongs to.

"Keely Potter, is that you?" someone said, surprised.

Turning around to look at the person, I gasped.



"What are you doing here, Ray??" I asked hurriedly, hoping he'd leave.

"I just transferred here from a school in America, wanted to be closer to home. I didn't realize you were a witch though," he said.

"I'm a Potter, kind of daft if you didn't realize I'm a witch, even if you were in America. My dad defeated Voldemort. Are you stupid?" I almost yelled at him.

"It never really crossed my mind...I didn't even think of it that way. I'm not stupid. All you've done the last few times I've talked to you is yelled at me. What's with that anyways?"

"You are a pest, you don't seem to get it that you can't make me like you," I told him firmly.

A slow song began again and he grabbed hold of me and started dancing with me. Hs grip was really tight. Almost making it impossible to fight against him. So instead of fighting I began frantically looking around for Matt. I need help here. Suddenly he moves his hand, moving fast to try and get free he pulls me closer and starts to kiss me. Doing the only thing I can think of, I bite his lip as hard as I can and push him away while he is still recovering from the shock. I quickly turn around run away as fast as I can, trying to look for Matt as I go running by everyone. By now the slow song has ended and I can't find Matt. Running outside, I went to sit down and get away from everything. Hoping that if Matt cared enough and realized I was missing he would come and find me.




*Matt's P.O.V.*

I asked Keely to come and find me when the next slow song came on. She didn't show up and someone else asked me to dance. I couldn't find her anywhere when I was looking around while I was dancing. As soon as the song was over I went to sit back down exactly where I was before so that she would know where to find me incase she came back while I was dancing. She still wasn't there.

A few songs later Lyssa comes running up to me with Ian and asked me if I knew where Keely had gotten too. She was going about and saying that they said she was dancing and then that they saw her running out of the hall towards the front door of the castle.



Not bothering to listen to the rest of what she was saying I took off, heading for outside as fast as I could.

Looking around frantically for Keely, I ran around quickly in the dark. Finally I slowed down and heard someone crying. Heading towards the sound I finally found Keely laying on the ground crying. Going over and kneeling down beside her, I slowly sat her up and wrapped my arms around her and held her tight. I noticed quickly that she was shaking and I turned her around to face me.

Still holding her tight, I asked, "What's wrong, Keely?"

"Ray...here...dance...kiss...me..." she said slowly, shaking almost uncontrollably.

"Ray? Ex Ray? The one you dumped this summer?"

"Yes, that one," she said a little calmer but still crying.

"How did he do that? He isn't a wizard! He can't be at this school! Can he?" I asked.

"He transferred from America, I guess," she muttered.

"HE'S THE TRANSFER?? THE ONE THAT'S IN OUR HOUSE?" I yelled.

"Shhh! Not so loud. Yes, that's him," she told me.



"If he is a wizard, how could he have not known you were a witch?" I asked.

"I guess he just didn't put two and two together."

"Oh, I love you, Keel, remember that. I think you're wonderful."

"You don't know what he did. He kissed me. I need to come up with a way to get him back. I think I've already put a hole through his lip," she said, laughing a bit now.

"Good for you. I'm proud of you," I told her.

"I love you, too, Matthew Alexander Malfoy," she whispered in my ear, before she kissed me.

The rest of the ball went by considerably fast. Eventually Keely and I went back inside to the hall and danced occasionally. Ray seemed to be sitting by himself now, as it turns out quite a few people has seen him and Keely and news travels fast at school so now no one is talking to him. Really shows how much everyone will stick up for the people they've known their entire life.

By the morning, no one was talking to Ray. Everyone in our house was shunning him, and everyone else was just ignoring him.

Word seemed to of spread very fast about mine and Keely's engagement as well. Everyone seemed very happy about it as well, everyone that is except my sister. And Jocelyn, but honestly I couldn't care less about what she thought.

I was sitting in the great hall eating lunch without Keely. She was off saying good bye to her mother who was going home to look after her little sister, before she got into to much mischief from staying with Fred and George.

I'm sitting eating my sausages when Ray comes up to me and punches me. Straightening up, I ask him what that was all about.

"That's for holding hands and kissing my girlfriend last night," he said.

Everyone stopped what they were doing, everything goes quiet as they then all turn to look at me and Ray.

"You're girlfriend?" I yell.

"Yes, mine, I'm her boyfriend from home," he replies.

"No you aren't," I said, calmer then before.

"I believe the proper term is 'ex' boyfriend," Carly and Lyssa both say at the same time from the other end of the table sitting with Ian, who looks furious.

"I am her boyfriend," he says, finality in his voice.

Ignoring his tone of voice I say, "It's impossible for you to be her boyfriend, considering she's my fiancée!"

"WHAT?!!" he yells.

"Yes, she is. Learn to live with it!" I told him, just as Keely walks in for lunch.

Quicker then I've ever seen before, everyone that was looking at us, turned around and looked at Keely before turning back to look at Ray and I, all in complete silence.

I barely noticed when Keely came up to me and stood right between Ray and I. I hadn't even noticed that I was standing up. She stands up straight and kisses me right in front of everyone. She the proceeds to turn away from me to face Ray. She slaps him and tells him to never come near any of her friends ever again. I'm beginning to think that she heard the whole conversation, she sure is acting like it.

After Ray is gone, Keely glanced up at her dad and he smiled, as if he knew that she was going to tell Ray to get lost and slap him. The teachers say that Harry Potter is exactly like Dumbledore. That is also as Dumbledore was, and that he's also learned most of it from him. What you here most about him though is that he is Dumbledore's man through and through.

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Over the next couple of months nothing exciting happened. Ray left me alone and Matt and I were good. Nothing had come between up and going home for the Christmas holidays was something that was on everyone's mind. Almost everyone was heading home for the break.

Matthew was coming to my place for Christmas. Something happened with his parents so he had no where to so I convinced dad to let him stay at our place. He finally agreed saying that he'd have to set up the other magical room, so that he couldn't be traced.

We all leave tomorrow. And then we have a few days before Christmas. We have a feast tomorrow night and then we are heading home on the train so that we will be home by Saturday morning and then Christmas is on Wednesday.

Heading to bed I dreamt about what was going to happen over Christmas break.

It felt like I'd only closed my eyes for a few minutes and Carly was telling me to get up. Well, I better get me that I've got to go to class in 10 minutes. WAIT!! Oh-my, I've only got 10 minutes. Rushing to get ready I jump up and get dressed, running out the door, I grab my bag, and the toast Carly and Lyssa and were holding out for me.

OMG! What did Keely and Matt do to deserve Ray coming? ERGH! KILL HIM OFF! I'm glad he got slapped! Thought he deserves more! PAMS!

omg!!!
great post
i didnt kno matt was a malfoy
so he cant go home for christmas nemore coz he will marry a potter
kool
PAMS

Roshni

Awesome so far! I'm kinda confuzzled, but I'm gonna read over everything and then it'll probably make sense :) But I love the story!
Sarah

Hey, I know its been along time since I posted, I've been so busy lately, and then, well my boyfriend broke up with me, so I havent felt like doing much, I'm going to finish something up tonight, and then post it in the morning, it wont be long, but I'll post more not long after, Promise.
<3Jenn

I just faced a break-up, so I know how you feel! Take your time posting!

XOXO
Lea

So sorry, I know I promised I'd post last weekend, but I didn't have time, I got asked to go out with friends, and then was up till 4 in the morning, and up at 7:30 a few hours later. So I was too tired. But here's a short post I'll write more, because I've got some good ideas for it. I'm going away in about a week, for just over a week, for right after christmas, till right before school starts back up. So I'm going to try and write some then as well, because I know that I will get sick of my mother and I will most definatly write some then. So look forward to a long post during the week of the 8th.

Hope you like it, and sorry again for the wait...and it's just edited by me, so I apologize for any mistakes.
<3Jenn


The train ride was very uneventful, it seemed to go by very quickly and I can’t really remember what we did for most of the time, all I really remember is sleeping.

Dad and Mom were waiting for us when we got there. Crossing my mind for a minute I wondered how dad had got there before us. I thought that he had gone on the train, that’s why I stayed in the compartment the whole time, because I didn’t want to run into my dad. Then again, who would? They rushed us quickly out of the station, yelling at Ian on the way, telling him he could see his girlfriend tomorrow because they were all coming over for the holidays. It’s funny to listen to him get into trouble, because it normally ends up being about him wanting to spend time with Lyssa. Normally, I’d argue with them about that as well, but not this year, Matt’s staying with me, and I really can’t wait. His sister tried to drag him with her when he got of the train, but he pushed her away and came with me. I don’t even want to think about what might of happened if he’d gone to the Malfoy manor.

As soon as we got home, all I could see what lights. It had never been so colourful at home before on Christmas. I wonder why this time.

“Hey, why are there so many lights?” I asked, not really talking to anyone in general.

“Umm,” dad started, glancing at mom quickly as if for reassurance that it was alright to say anything.

“What your dad is saying is that your grandpa got a little carried away with the muggle lights this year. He had fun doing it though,” mom said.

“Yes, you should of seen him, it was really funny” my little sister added. Then quickly shut up after the look she got from our parents.

:lol:
nice post
Merry Christmas
PAMS

Roshni

I'm so sorry.

This is the first time I've been on here since I posted last. And I'm really sorry that I can't think of anything. Somehow I lost all train of thought. Perhaps it has something to do with exams and things. And just not being allowed on the computer all that much. I've got nothing else on this really right now...Once the sememster starts up again I might start again, I've got another idea as well, don't know if I'll make it into a Harry Potter story, thought about just writing it down like it was a book, I've just got to make it long enough though....

I'll be back soon with a final few posts.
<3Jenn

Heyy,
I said I'd be back wayy before this, but well. I got help up with school and everything else.

Id like to give credit to Draco' Darling for the idea behind this post. Sadly though I don't have time time right now to make the story go one any longer, so this is the final post. I may though sometime soon, begin another one. But for now, He're the post.

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The Christmas holidays passed in a blur, everything seemed to go by so fast and before we knew it we were heading back to school. The holidays were pretty good except for one small thing.

It was Christmas eve, morning, and we were all sitting down eating breakfast in the kitchen when Matt said that he had to go out to town, he said he had some last minute shopping that he had to do and that he’d be back in a hour or so. I noticed that Ian gave him a knowing look, smiled and went back to eating while Matt got up and left.

It was around 4 hours later that I finally began to worry, I’d been away from Matt for this long before, but I always knew where he was, or had a general idea. This time I was really worried because he said that he would be back by now. I went and found dad and asked him what he thought.

“Oh, he just most likely got held up and its taking him long then he anticipated.” Dad told me.

Well that really didn’t help me at all. Around supper time I began to get frantic. I had no idea what had happened to him. Lyssa told me that it was nothing that I should worry about, he just probably ran into someone he knew. Everyone else seemed to agree with her.

“WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT?” I yelled.

“Nothing, don’t yell at her” Ian told me coldly.

“Well, she thinks I shouldn’t worry about, he’s been gone all day when he said he’d only be gone for a couple hours at the most. Of course I’m going to be worried.”

After no one said anything for a few minutes I said “I’m going to look for him, it’s Christmas eve. What happened if his dad got to him or something?? Anyone want to come help me look? If not, I’m going on my own!”

“We’ll come help,” my friends all said.

So we left the house just before supper and headed to town looking for him. We looked in all the shops and no one said that they had seen them. Ian came out of one of the stores and told us all that they storekeeper said that he had been in there in the morning, but he hadn’t been back since. So we continued on, walking up an down the alleys, when suddenly we heard someone screaming. It sounded really faint, but awfully familiar.

I took off running down the alley, slowing as I came nearer the sound. It was Matt, laying on the ground, with Ray hovering over top of him, muttering off different curses with his want.

“STOP!” I yelled.

Ray looked my way, and for a moment it looked like he was going to turn on me, but then he said, “No, he needs to realize that you are not his girlfriend!”

I’m his fiance, Ray, not his girlfriend, that counts for more. Let him go now,” I said, slowly drawing my wand.

He looked startled, and I quickly glanced behind me to see that my friends had also all drawn their wands. When I looked back at Ray, he had lowered his wand, like he was admitting defeat. Ian shot off a spell at him bounding him, grabbed hold of him tightly, and told Lyssa to hold on to him tight and he Apparated back to our place. Now there was only Carly, Matt and I left. Carly leaned towards me, and said that I had to get Matt back on my own, and that she was going back to my place, with a loud pop she was gone. As soon as she was gone, I ran over to Matt to help him up. I told him I was going to get him home the same way as my friends just went, even if it was illegal for me to do so.

He looked up at me, and said, “No, not yet. I have something to give you, I don’t think Ray destroyed it. He’s going to regret this by the way. It’s your Christmas present. I’m sorry I didn’t get home, Ray just came up from behind me and surprised me.”

He took a little box out of his pocket and told me to open it. When I looked inside I saw a really pretty necklace, it was on a silver chain and had two hearts on it. He looked at me and told me that he had only come in to have it repaired, it had belonged to his mother and once she heard about our engagement she sent it to him. Very gingerly, I gave him a hug, and we slowly started home.

What happened to Ray? Well, dad mad sure that he got what he deserved, he was expelled from Hogwarts for torturing a fellow classmate and we haven’t heard from him since. This year looks looks like it’s going to end good after all. With a wedding to look forward to in the summer, and then one final year of school, Matt and I will be living together in a different common room in school, that has been there for a long time for married students. We get to chose how we decorate it and everything, dad said, because it hasn’t been used in a very long time. All I can say is that this has been a very eventful year, and I’m sure Matt and I will have many more to come together.

Hope you liked it!
Jenn

Hi, thanks for PMing about this fic. Great way to end it. Let me know if you start something else.

Roshni

thanks, I will. and I posted a new one, it's not up yet, but it's called Following Instincts.

This is such a great story! I hope FI will come out soon!