I have a few sonnets

Too long have I been crying
Can’t remember my own smile
I’ve given up on fighting
Thrown away my past lifestyle

I saw rain when there was sun
I saw the dark when it was light
The happiness? There was none
I was left alone in the night

I lift my head by instinct
To see a hand reaching down
The depression is extinct
A smile replaces my frown

A true friend had come to my side
A friend in which I could confide


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None nearby

There is not one single soul
That gives a care for her presence
Her one happiness grows cold
No one notices her absence

The small tear that falls goes unseen
The whispered prayer is stopped
A depressing touch to the scene
The dream is quickly popped

She sits alone in the night
The fears are again renewed
A longing to run and hide
And find a friend that is true

The taunts are taunted louder
The hope is crushed to powder

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The snow lightly drifts and falls
Whether in your mind or not
The time it seems to stall
On that very special spot

The lights brighten up your face
A smile you can’t hold back
It’s peaceful inside that place
Your thoughts won’t stay on track

A tune of songs reaches your ear
It sticks inside your head
Over and over it you can hear
Nothing else can be said

There are no tears not even a few
So now I say Happy Christmas to you


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I can feel the tears fall down
You have left me all alone
The once sweet smile now a frown
I can’t bare to let you go

All of the past memories fade
And all is swept away
Can’t remember good times made
There’s nothing left to say

You were always there beside me
But now where have you gone
Your face or smile I can not see
All is not right but wrong

I won’t be able to see the reason why
Nor able to stop the few tears I cry
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Lone

To her there is no one
She's all alone in the dark night
There is no place to run
Nor place for her hopes to take flight

Where she goes no one cares
What she says no one hears
To her no one compares
Friends? There is none but peers

She is lost in her own dream world
Secrets in her heart she keeps
To her she is the only girl
A tear falls down while she sleeps

There’s none that can help her find
A single normal right mind

These are great,Lyssa. Very emotional.

I like the fourth one best.

Gracias my mucho! lol here's nuther one

From the beginning we always said
We’ll be friends forever
A smile playing inside our heads
About spending time together

Later something happened to you
You treated me like dirt
Turned my world and self a dark blue
Left me to go and flirt

I watched you fall away
Until soon you hated me
Your promise you soon betrayed
Yet you could not even see

What happened scared my life from that day on
My best friend had left me and she was gone

brilliance shear brilliance ,i wish i could write poetry like that ,well i think my poetry talent is low but my drawing talent is high.

These are wonderful! You have some very awesome talent, keep up the good work!

Not bad;not bad at all. Quite brillant if you asked me. Keep it up the the more you write the better you will ultimately be. Oh and don't be afriad to show a little anger in poems anyways great job. :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:



P.S. I have poetry called Rally's poetry. So if you could take it out of the kindness of your heart to read it. I will be eternally grateful
:monkey:

Rally

Awwwwwwww thank you guys I really appreciate your feedback

Everything should be stopping soon
Everything should cease to be here
You’re gone and there is still a moon
How can I live with you not near

No one seems to notice you
I am the only one who cares
At least it seems really true
Now I’m just a half of a pair

Why must the stars keep shining
While you have gone away
I’d say this is bad timing
Why couldn’t you have stayed

Take me away to where you are
I can not stand it with you far

I'll write more soon thank you for your comments

this one was inspired by my new rp Someone's waiting for me

Someone’s waiting for me
I can feel it inside
Why can’t you see
There’s no where to hide

I am slowly dieing now
Can you realise
I don’t understand how
Nothing’s going right

Everything is fading to black
The stars dim away
And seems they won’t come back
I can’t hear what you say

Take my hand inside your own
Never ever leave me alone

HERES a comment! I think your work is wonderful.

That was my favorite part, the "fading to black" was really nice, it not only gave some imagery, but since it's a kind of theatrical phrase, it sort of gave the whole piece a sort of dramatic feel... very nice. Keep up the excellent work. :)

Oh thank you so much

just a note that sonnet didn't follow any of the rules cept the rhyming scheme! lol

Lost in the dark no one around
What she says no one shall hear
She wears not a smile but a frown
Face is covered by so many tears

She hasn’t laughed in decades
She can barely even survive
The glint in her eye continues to fade
As she waits for the end of her life

Where she goes no one cares
They all talk behind her back
Friends? There is none there
Happiness she continues to lack

No one notices her waste away
She hopes for at least one joyful day

that's from my book that I'm writing

Aww these are so good! Please write more. Talent is all I can say.

thankies right now I'm babysitting and the ten year old is giving the three year old a wedgie so I can't write! *yells at the kids to stop fighting as the two year old continues to pretend to be a puppy*

CAn you see me
Or am I invisible to you
Can you hear me
Or are you deaf to truth

I have screamed and cried in your face
Yet you still simply turn away
I told you death was near in this place
Your eyes were filled with hate

Now you yell to me to stay
But there's nothing left for me
You say wait another day
I only wanted to be free

You took my hand as I slipped into forever
Your tear fell while I left to return never

Those Sonnets are really good. Keep up the good writting. :flowersmile:

The sun never shines
Not a smile to found
The rain’s not kind
As it falls to the ground

As I look to you
Eyes are filled with fear
Nothing seems true
And hope is not near

Tears roll down my face
You don’t realise the change
My eyes are just a haze
Faith is now a smaller range

Looking further up to the sky
Asking questions why

I dunno about that one. What do you think?

Is anyone there? sorry I've got writer's block now

oh its good. lol it sounds like luna thou. lol. hello, keep going.

that's cause most of my poetry is centered around that theme you know

All I can see is my tears
You left me alone
Surrounded by fears
I can't let you go

Why can't I see
You're never coming back
My life will never be
Back on the right track

I'll never know your smile
Never hear you laugh or cry
You didn't leave for a while
I wonder why the innocent die

As I look up to the clouds and sun
And wonder if I'll ever have fun

That remindes me of my friend Mads... he was so nice... just looking at him made me happy...

Here's one about Ginny

She knows not of what she does
Yet sense something wrong
She doesn't mean to cause what she caused
Too late to change what is done

Dug herself a hole with no way out
All from a very foolish trust
A subtle move quiet not loud
To pour out her feelings she felt she must

She was concealed in terror's mind
Fearful unknown memories
A tear from her eye emits light
From her trance whe wanst to break free

Her life was then soon saved
The experience in her mind graved

GReat Great poems!