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01-06-2010, 10:25 AM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by HereticSaint Wow!! This is innovative. I've never actually read song fiction before. Nice work. thanks Archie... Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie THAT TWO-TIMER!
I will ... throw him in a cauldron. >__<
But such a sweet story there, Harita.
Me liked it LOADS. <3 thanks Maxie...
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Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione Aww the Love story one was really cute. i loved it 
And the short story was really nice....
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01-06-2010, 10:26 AM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Your welcome Harita
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01-11-2010, 01:38 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hello, everybody i am back with a oneshot again...
This particular one was an entry for A Very Wolfie Christmas One Shot Competetion put up for the members of Remus Lupin Fan Club during the Christmas time....
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DISCLAIMER: All the characters belong to J K Rowling and the plot is my imagination about the life of Remus and Tonks during the Second Wizard War.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Last Christmas… ‘Pop’ and a grayish black robed man materialized out of thin air in front of a porch. He turned and looked around at the garden surrounding the stony house. The garden was a mixture of greens and white with snow. the fountain had a bit of snow cover over it and the water seemed to look chilling cold even if it hadn’t frozen completely. He looked up at the starry sky.
Remus sighed and turned back to face the door. His wand out and after a complex hand moment the door clicked opened. He stepped in but then was stopped by the protections of the house. A stern voice came over “What did McGonagall tell you The Night in the hospital wing”
Remus calmly replied but with a hint of sadness “Dumbledore would have been happier then anybody to think there was a little more love in the world”
And then he was allowed to enter. The night Dumbledore died had obvious importance and it was named and referred to as The Night. “Remus!” and he were engulfed in a bear hug. Remus hugged her back. “I am so glad you came. I doubt you would come” a pink faced and pink haired Tonks exclaimed her hands still around Remus’ neck and his around her waist. “I thought I should pay a little visit to my wife and my ch-child” he said looking down at the small bump. Tonks smiled “Aw…you should pay a little more then just a visit Rem” she said. She took his work robe of sorts and coat from his hands but she knew he couldn’t, she knew he has work to do not something normal but very dangerous work that Dumbledore left him to carry on. She knew had it not been for her baby she too would have been in the thick of the deadly battle taking place outside this reasonably safe and confined place which she called it her home. She took him by his arm and led him to the living room. “I’ll be back in a moment” Tonks chimed in and left him at the entrance of the living room.
The room was wonderfully lit and decorated. No one after seeing this would believe that there was complete darkness outside this little home literally in terms of the night and the distant future of this little family. He looked around and saw Andromeda sitting there on a sofa with the crackling fire from the fire place on her side and her hand holding the stalk of the glass with red vine in it. “Hello Andromeda” Remus said with a tone full of respect for the old lady in front of him and his wife’s mother. “Hello Lupin” she said curtly and went back to sipping her drink and staring in to the nothingness. Lupin nodded and stood there with his hands on the head rest and took in the delightful and colorful decorations of Christmas. The room was small and wooden paneled and thickly carpeted. It had every bit of the Black grandeur what with Andromeda being the black sheep of the Black family marrying a muggle who was right now on a run from the Ministry. The room had the class of pureblood family lineage with chandeliers and heavy curtains and beautiful antiques and also the modesty and cheerfulness of the muggles with photographs of the family and paintings donning the walls. The room was lit up by the warm glow of the fire and a soft music being played on the gramophone. The Christmas tree was just few feet away with all it holy decorations and to Remus’ surprise he did find a stack of over half a dozen gifts. A small smile crept up his face and he shook his head “what?” “nothing, I didn’t know there would be gifts” he said “well I guess its Christmas” “yeah but seeing the scenario I doubted that we would be celebrating Christmas with gifts” Remus replied his mother-in-law. “there is no Christmas without gifts” she reminded him. He nodded and walked over the empty couch and sat down facing the fire “How are you doing?” he asked. Ted her husband was on a run since quite a few months. He hadn’t registered himself as a muggle born wizard under the new policy of the Voldemort run Ministry. “How do you expect me to be?” she gave a cold reply. Remus looked down and nodded. His relation with his mother-in-law wasn’t the best. After all who would want their daughter to get married to a werewolf? “I know how it is” he said thinking about Harry. Though he wasn’t his god-son but he was as good as for he was his best friend’s son.
Andromeda just nodded “what’s going on outside?” she asked “you know Ginny and few of the students who were about to steal a sword?” and Andromeda nodded as she heard the Weasley daughter’s name. “one amongst them was Luna Lovegood. She is been kidnapped.” And Andromeda was stunned.
She had known the weird family who ran the Quibbler and knew that the owner had a daughter named Luna who was in the prophet two years back as she was one of the students with Harry in the Ministry the fateful night when Voldemort was exposed. “they took her as the kids were returning for Christmas back to Xenophillis” Remus continued. “so there is obvious no chance that any one will be searching for her as it were the Ministry workers themselves who kidnapped her” she said
And Remus nodded.
Tonks came in a small smile up on her face. She walked and placed another gift on the stack under the tree and went and sat next to Remus her hand on his knee.
She sat quietly. “is it because of his outright rebellion on You-Know-Who?” she asked and Remus nodded again “the Quibbler, yes.”
“Xenophillis what happened to him?” asked Tonks now in a complete auror tone “Luna, kidnapped” he said and Tonks went as white sheet and then her eyes turned cold
Tonks hand balled up in to a fist on his knee. Remus looked at her and just put his hand on her fist and squeezed. “is Order doing anything about it?”
“Order already has quite a lot up its sleeve” he said
She sighed. She had met that girl at Bill’s wedding “sweet girl she was, a bit weird like her dad but witty nonetheless” she said her tone sad “I know what you are feeling Tonks” he said looking at her “but we can’t do anything about it.” “Arthur was dead worried when he heard this news. Now he is re-thinking if he will send Ginny back”
“can he do that?” asked Andromeda and Remus just shrugged. “This is just so terrible” said Tonks her eyes tearing up. “I feel so helpless” she said
Remus looked up at her wide eyed and the said “help-less? You call sitting here and protecting our baby being helpless, Tonks?” he asked “you are doing probably the most helpful thing and the only thing a mother can do for her child, Tonks” he said. Tonks looked up at Remus teary eyed. “listen we don’t know how or what our a child would be like, and I am sorry”
“no don’t ”
“no listen to me”
Andromeda looked from Remus to Tonks as she witnessed another we shouldn’t-have-this-child discussion but this time she found something different in his voice. “Really I told you this before and you are right we have been through this many times before too, but that’s the reality. We don’t know what our child will be like, we don’t know who will he be called but all I know that he is a child and our and we must save and protect him.” he said looking at her in her eye.
Tears began running down Tonks cheeks “I-I am sorry” she said and hugged Remus. He hugged her and held her close. Andromeda slowly got up and left her daughter and her husband alone. “Tonks, you are doing the most helpful thing for all three of us” he said looking over Tonks’ shoulder as he saw her mum leave them. She nodded in agreement with Remus and had a small smile on her face. After all the kid will be her grand-child. “I wouldn’t want anything to happen to our kid and I promise I will try coming and meeting you as much as possible” he said.
Tonks nodded and Remus leant against the couch and his eyes closed. “any news about Harry?” she asked looking at her tired husband. “nothing”
“you reckon he is doing alright on Dumbledore’s mission?” she asked him and Lupin’s discussion with Bill about Ron’s arrival without Hermione and Harry came back to his mind. His heart started thumping faster but he kept quiet. “I don’t know Tonks” he sighed. “I just hope You-Know-, wait just a minute does Harry even know that a trace is set up on You-Know-Who’s name?” she asked knowing that Harry had the habit of calling You-Know-Who by his name. “I guess not, I am sure that is the reason why they were tracked down in the beginning after the wedding when they were on the run” he said and Tonks shuddered at thought that Harry would be captured somewhere. “Don’t worry he will be alright” Remus said noticing Tonk’s reaction, though he wasn’t convinced himself. Tonks just shook her head. “and what about the werewolves?”
“I have quite a few people with me, but that wont suffice as Greyback is rounding up more and more of them as we speak” he said staring up at the ceiling and Tonks hissed “but the people who are with us are for sure are going to stick with us” he said and Tonks nodded “we are trying to do our best” he said about him and Bill “I know” she said her hand going through his hair. He looked at her and then spoke “Tonks, if anything, anything happens to me or us I want to know that I love you and our kid. I was just upset and worried” he spoke but was cut as Tonks kissed him. He kissed her back. Nothing could describe the feeling and the effect it was having on them. After they broke Tonks spoke “I know it Remus, I know you are worried for everyone of us. And that is why I love you so much” she said looking into his eyes. He leant in and kissed her again. “Dora?” as he kissed her. “hmm” she said looking into his eyes as she broke the kiss. He took his time “I want Harry to be our kid’s godfather” Remus said softly and Tonks beamed “I will never be much more happy then Harry being our kid’s god-father, Rem” she said smiling and hugged him. He smiled and hugged her. “Come on up, up for presents” she said getting up taking her hand out for him to take. Remus followed her, his hands in hers to the Christmas tree. The couple went over the stack of small presents and laughed and talked as excited kids. “hey what is this?” asked Remus as he looked at a very small present in his hands “open it” she said. Remus opened it and saw a small baby woolen sweater. “Molly, for our kid” she said
Remus looked up and smiled “that is so sweet of her and it is not even maroon. I am glad” he joked and Tonks laughed “yeah, it is pink and grey just like the two of us” she said and Remus nodded in agreement and the smile never fading the entire night as they spent their time together snuggling up by the fire and thick blankets around them…little knowing that this will be their first and last Christmas with their son Ted…….
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01-11-2010, 02:42 PM
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Guenevere 'Gwen' Olivia White Graduated | ♫ Gotta Get Back to Hogwarts ♫ | That makes me your Mama. | I'm Team Dumbledore! ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by harita asked Sirius who was completely opposite to what his name would suggest ^^ that was my favorite line ever!!!
This was absolutely amazing! Great job!!!
EDIT: Ooooh, you have another. Well my above comment referred to the James/Lily one, I'll read you other one now!
EDIT again:
Your Tonks/Remus story is beautiful! You are a very great writer! I can't wait to read more one-shots from you!
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01-11-2010, 03:02 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Harita, that is so sweet! You know, I realize this is fiction, but all over the world people are loosing loved ones to the war against terrorists. I think this story is true to a lot of people. I'm glad you wrote this. You are very good Harita. Quote:
This particular one was an entry for A Very Wolfie Christmas One Shot Competetion put up for the members of Remus Lupin Fan Club during the Christmas time....
Did you win? If not congradulations to whoever did. It would have had to be beyound spectacular to beat this. Very nice. And by the way, I love that you did this. Makes me feel better towards her. Quote:
She nodded in agreement with Remus and had a small smile on her face. After all the kid will be her grand-child.
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01-11-2010, 03:11 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by veggie_potter ^^ that was my favorite line ever!!!
This was absolutely amazing! Great job!!!
EDIT: Ooooh, you have another. Well my above comment referred to the James/Lily one, I'll read you other one now!
EDIT again:
Your Tonks/Remus story is beautiful! You are a very great writer! I can't wait to read more one-shots from you! thanks...i am glad you liked the oneshots... Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Harita, that is so sweet! You know, I realize this is fiction, but all over the world people are loosing loved ones to the war against terrorists. I think this story is true to a lot of people. I'm glad you wrote this. You are very good Harita. Did you win? If not congradulations to whoever did. It would have had to be beyound spectacular to beat this. Very nice. And by the way, I love that you did this. Makes me feel better towards her. no, Connie i didnt win.but the people who won, their one shots were awesome...
and honestly speaking, i still have a long way to go...but i am glad you liked it...
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01-11-2010, 09:20 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Awww that was soo cute 
its was really good too
I love it!!!
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01-11-2010, 09:49 PM
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| Bugbear
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
So cute!
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01-12-2010, 12:08 AM
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| Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Elena Petrova Gryffindor First Year x8
| not throwing away my shot | Slytherpuff | roll for initiative | woof you ❤ Quote:
Originally Posted by harita “yeah, it is pink and grey just like the two of us” she said and Remus nodded in agreement and the smile never fading the entire night as they spent their time together snuggling up by the fire and thick blankets around them…little knowing that this will be their first and last Christmas with their son Ted……. "That line is awesome! But it's so sad.  They never get to spend a real christmas with Teddy.  It's a great line though... I like ending stories with lines like that.
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01-12-2010, 12:12 AM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Doxy
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01-12-2010, 04:05 AM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione Awww that was soo cute 
its was really good too
I love it!!! thank you hun... Quote:
Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 So cute! thanks... Quote:
Originally Posted by EmilyMalfoy "That line is awesome! But it's so sad.  They never get to spend a real christmas with Teddy.  It's a great line though... I like ending stories with lines like that. yeah...i know...but thanks for reading... Quote:
Originally Posted by lathelawyer0218 I loved it soooooooooo cute!  i am glad you loved it... |
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01-12-2010, 04:06 PM
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| Formerly: leov  DMT Mooncalf
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Great one Harita, Keep writing in
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01-14-2010, 01:03 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
thanks VJ...  ...glad you liked it...
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01-15-2010, 02:17 PM
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| Jarvey
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woaaah.. <3 adore them!
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01-15-2010, 06:00 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
thanks Dora...  ...
i simply adore them too...guess we need to thank J.K a ton for making such adorable character... |
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01-18-2010, 02:54 PM
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| Formerly: leov  DMT Mooncalf
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Hey Harita waiting for a new one!
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02-04-2010, 05:09 PM
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| Mooncalf
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Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
Hello everybody...here i am with one more one shot...
i was just feeling like posting so i thought i would post in this light hearted one shot which i had written sometime back...
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DISCLAIMER: All the characters belong to the world of Harry Potter created by J K Rowling and this one shot is just one of my imaginations and one of my favorite shipper...have a look...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Family Dessert!
A little girl of age 11 entered her room in a puffy white and pale yellow summer frock. Her brown curly hair tied in two pony tails bobbing as she hopped in excitedly and went around the room to search for a quill, ink and a parchment and then she settled down on the study table her feet dangling from the chair. She carefully started to write… Dear Dad, she began but then her excitement took better of her and she no longer wrote slowly… Guess what! I got the letter! I am coming with you this year to Hogwarts! I am so excited! Mum had taken it for me as I had got up late and was having my breakfast late today. I am so happy dad. When are you coming back we need to go and get my school stuff from Diagon Alley and dad, mum talked to Mrs. Potter and even James got his letter today morning, isn’t that cool? I am so happy…and since I got my letter today mum’s making pudding!!! Double treat!!! yay!...and dad if you aren’t coming the pudding will be for me…hahaha…all for me dad…so you come fast…
Love,
Alice. “Alice! Come down” called her mum and
Alice Longbottom hurriedly sealed her letter “coming mum!”
and then called her mum’s owl and gave it to send it to her father who was busy in his work house somewhere deep in the forest behind their house in the Celestial Avenue.
Neville Longbottom along with Luna and their daughter Alice have stayed in the
Celestial Avenue since Neville and Luna got married. Neville is currently the Herbology Professor in Hogwarts but during his free time and during vacations he carries out his own experiments and discoveries of new plants and herbs. At the back of the Longbottom Residence there is a forest. Neville had loved the idea of greenery around his house and so did Luna because that would give her more opportunity to find many more magical creatures. Neville had set up his small work shed of sorts in the thicket of the forest where he would work his summer holidays here searching for new herbs and plants and discovering and experimenting their products and affects.
Alice hurried down the steep spiral wooden staircase without tripping and walked into the spic and span kitchen cum dining room of their house. “yes mum” “oh, there you are. What were you doing?” asked the serene voiced Luna, her radish ear- rings still dangling from her ears, her long blonde hair loosely tied in a bun and was kept their with the help of her wand, few strands of hair framing her face and her hands busily working over the lunch. “um…well, nothing” “sent for dad?”
And a sheepish smile spread over Alice’s face. Luna looked up at her and then smiled. “I hope he comes” Alice said excitedly “he has been gone for 3 days now!” she said and she walked around her mother and peeped in to see what she was making. “mum, James said he is going to his uncle’s joke shop can I go with him?” she asked “oh, but you better be careful, I have gone there many times and seen the people standing there blankly. I bet there are hordes of warkspurts over there” Luna said concernedly and Alice giggled at the very fact that her mum would make the look of awe for the Weasley products by the kids look like a symptom of Wrakspurt attack! “mum?” “yes dear” “is the pudding ready?”
Luna smiled as she putting the pan on the stove and she said “hm…what comes first lightening or thunder” “Lightening” came the immediate answer to the question ‘you answer this and you get what you asked for’
And Luna nodded “Well it needs time to set.” She said, “It would be done by the time we are done with our lunch but you will get it during tea time” Luna said and Alice moaned and then went and sat heavily on the dining table chair. “Come on, get up and help me with setting the table” her mum said and Alice got up and slowly helped her mother still thinking of the nice pudding which her mum wouldn’t give it to her till it was time for tea.
Luna and Alice were done with their lunch and were cleaning of the table and Alice was slightly disappointed that Neville didn’t come around for lunch. Then there was a knock and Alice literally jumped standing as she was putting the dishes in the sink. She ran out of the kitchen and then through the living room and then she opened the door and saw Neville standing there with a huge smile “Congratulations Alice dear” “Thank you dad!” and exclaimed as she hugged her dad around his waist and he patted her head. Luna walked out of the kitchen and then came into the living room and leaned against the couch and saw her husband and daughter hugging on the porch. She smiled as she saw them together talking and laughing and the Neville bent and whispered something in Alice’s ear.
Alice looked at her dad wide eyed and then a huge mischievous grin crept across her face and she ran into the house and started to shout “no, I am not giving you”
Neville walked into the house and Luna walked towards him and hugged him, as he hugged her back he said “I am going to take it anyway. It is for me!” “no” called out a girlish scream, “no its for me” and there was laughter from within the kitchen. Luna kissed Neville and he smiled at her “did you find anymore Nargels?” she asked curiously “Well I couldn’t. When have I found one without you?” he asked and chuckled. Luna was still her weird self and Neville had got used to it. But sometimes Luna did find interesting animals that were sent to Magical Creatures Department for further research and acknowledgement of such creatures in the magical world which later made their way into the Quibbler and then various Magical Creature books. “dad! I am eating” called out a sweet teasing kid voice “oh no you aren’t honey” Neville called over from Luna’s head “oh yes I am dad” “oh no, you aren’t” he said as he and Luna walked further into the house “oh yes I am” “you are so in trouble Al” called Neville as they reached the kitchen and there was a squeal as Alice saw her dad and her mum there. She was holding the plate on which the pudding was placed all set properly only waiting to be cut and eaten…Alice took the plate and ran in the opposite direction. “you cant run from me” called Neville and ran behind her and Alice ran around the huge dinning table in the kitchen to stay away from her dad and keep her pudding safe. “you didn’t come on time so no pudding for you” “oh well you didn’t tell me the time and I think I am on the right time, the pudding is set!” “no its my pudding” she squealed and continued to doge her father around the table careful enough to see that the pudding doesn’t fall.
Luna just stood there leaning against the kitchen door frame and saw the scene in front of her not worrying about the fate of the pudding, whether it will go down the stomach of Alice or Neville or will it vanish away on putting a cleaning spell when it falls on the ground. She smiled and laughed as the dad and daughter continue to fight for the pudding and Luna thought of her own time when she remembered saying to Harry I hope they have pudding… she chuckled
and in the end Neville caught hold of Alice with one hand and she struggled “dad, let go…that’s my pudding” and Neville laughed. “hun, that’s still your pudding. You are still holding it, while I am holding you” he clarified. He picked his daughter up and made her sit on the kitchen platform and took out a spoon and both the father and the daughter happily dug in…
have a nice day...:-)
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02-04-2010, 05:36 PM
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| Formerly: leov  DMT Mooncalf
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Awesome one Harita, you're a great writter! keep writing! |
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02-04-2010, 06:00 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohh i  that post...it was well sweet!
Ohhh cant wait for more
And i love the way you wrote it!
xx
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02-04-2010, 07:18 PM
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| Jarvey
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
What a sweet little story! Harita, you bring such joy to my heart when I read your stories. You write so real, it's just beautiful. Keep it up. I'm so glad you told me this was up, cause the page that shows the threads doesn't show any new post for it. Catch ya later. I can't wait till you post your next work.
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| Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by leo Awesome one Harita, you're a great writter! keep writing!  thanks VJ... Quote:
Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione Ohh i  that post...it was well sweet!
Ohhh cant wait for more
And i love the way you wrote it!
xx thanks Evangeline...i am glad you  it... Quote:
Originally Posted by Zodiac524 love it  thanks... Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie What a sweet little story! Harita, you bring such joy to my heart when I read your stories. You write so real, it's just beautiful. Keep it up. I'm so glad you told me this was up, cause the page that shows the threads doesn't show any new post for it. Catch ya later. I can't wait till you post your next work. thanks so much Connie...i am glad you liked it...actually i liked this father/daughter thing a lot myself...i had thought of this quite long time back...and when i thought...about the entire scene the words were much better...but i wrote this after quite a long time so i had to struggle a bit in getting the right words ...actually i thought i could do much better with the ending but anyways...i am glad you all liked it...
and do tell your friends to check this thread out...  ...thanks once again...
and have a nice day:-)
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Your welcome x
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I'm waiting for some new posts Harita!
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ZOMG!
Harita, I can't believe I haven't seen this fabulous piece of words yet! xDD
These are adorable song ficcies!
Love them!
PAMS!
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