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08-31-2006, 04:42 PM
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#426 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
Posts: 1,306
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will check in the morning for a new post
Roshni
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08-31-2006, 05:24 PM
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#427 (permalink)
| Murtlap
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In a world where nothing makes sense..
Posts: 64
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted Fifth |
Oh this ff is soo good! keep it up!
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08-31-2006, 07:02 PM
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#428 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth |
Thanks for your lovely comments! By the way, I'm participating in the Drabbles SS activity. Please check my drabbles on Lucius/Narcissa in the SnitchSeeker 100, but don't post any comments in my thread; it's against the rules.
Anyways, here's the post: Hermione
I was mad. No, I was infuriated. I wanted to rip Draco’s head apart. How could he have done that to me? He was such a dirty player. I didn’t know if I’d ever forgive him. He was beyond forgiveness. It would take a very kind person to absolve Draco Malfoy for what he did to me. And I wasn’t an amazingly kind person, to tell you the truth. At least, I didn’t feel like one now.
That brought me to another thought: why did he care? He was just some guy who did anything with any girl he wanted. Why did he want me so desperately?
I refused to talk to him or even look at him for the whole week. I noticed him at the corner of my eye, craning his neck to try to catch my eye. During class, I saw him scribbling furiously on pieces of paper, only to glance my direction and scratch them out angrily.
Making myself believe that he was hopeless, I occupied myself, even obsessively, with studying for OWLs that were coming up…in about five months. Draco
I decided that I’d make it up to Hermione. The hard part was, I didn’t know how. The more I thought about it, the more distressed I became. The first thing I did was write her a note. It was corny and cheesy sounding, I know, but I had no other idea of how to say how I felt. In the end, I decided on a simple inscription. It read:
Hermione,
I’m sorry for what I did. I promise you it won’t happen again. Just please forgive me and give me a second chance!
Draco
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During transfiguration, I slipped by her and dropped a note into her book bag when she was looking. I gave her a slight smile (I hope it didn’t turn out as a smirk) and slid into my seat across the aisle from hers.
Out of the corner of my eye, I watched her intently as she unfolded the note behind the textbook. She turned to look at me (subtly of course), and gave me a hardened expression. Then she crumpled the piece of paper.
She might as well have crumpled my heart. This doesn’t sound like me at all, but that’s how it really felt like. I gave her a hurt, questioning face, which she glared at.
Hermione
I didn’t want to forgive him. I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of another girl conquered. He was such an evil git! As I crumbled his note, I felt a pang of guilt when he looked at me. I only glared.
I mean, what else could he expect me to do? I’d have to teach him the consequences for his actions, since no one else was going to do it for me.
A note just simply wasn’t enough, you see. I wanted at least a face-to-face apology. Maybe I’d make him sign a contract. Yeah, that’s what I’d do. Just like for the DA. If he went back on it, he’d be overcome with pimples on his forehead spelling the word git. Perfect.
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08-31-2006, 07:14 PM
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#429 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: May 2004
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but don't post any comments in my thread; it's against the rules. What do you mean? How is it against the rules? Quote: Maybe I’d make him sign a contract. Yeah, that’s what I’d do. Just like for the DA. HAHAHA
Great post; I like how you didn't make Hermione just like any other girl who just forgives the guy who treats her like crap.
PAMS
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08-31-2006, 08:54 PM
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#430 (permalink)
| Plimpy
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: In the TARDIS
Posts: 15,341
| Aw Draco you silly, cute and stupid boy. Serves him right though. PAMS!! |
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08-31-2006, 09:13 PM
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#431 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Texas
Posts: 39
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted |
haha i think she should sap draco with some zits just for fun...you all know the saying payback is a ..pain. he deserves it but in the end i hope they end up back together. please post more soon!
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08-31-2006, 11:22 PM
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#432 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 47
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Pams!
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09-01-2006, 01:43 AM
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#433 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
What do you mean? How is it against the rules?
In the SS 100, it is, because they give you a comment thread in that section that you can post on. That's all I can say as an explanation because, alas, I did not make that rule up! Quote:
HAHAHA
Great post; I like how you didn't make Hermione just like any other girl who just forgives the guy who treats her like crap.
PAMS
Ha ha...I think she'd stand up for herself, so that's what I made her do. Quote: Aw Draco you silly, cute and stupid boy. Serves him right though. PAMS!! Ha ha..yeah. Quote:
haha i think she should sap draco with some zits just for fun...you all know the saying payback is a ..pain. he deserves it but in the end i hope they end up back together. please post more soon!
Not sure when!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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09-01-2006, 06:59 AM
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#434 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
Posts: 1,306
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Maybe I’d make him sign a contract. Yeah, that’s what I’d do. Just like for the DA. If he went back on it, he’d be overcome with pimples on his forehead spelling the word git. Perfect.
i'm glad she didn't forgive him yet. contract sounds awesome. i wonder if he will ever get GIT pimples on his face late in the story. hehe
PAMS
Roshni
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09-01-2006, 04:05 PM
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#435 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
Posts: 3,535
| Hahaha, awesome post. Crumpling the note up was kinda mean, though. PAMS!
Amie |
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09-01-2006, 05:16 PM
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#436 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 585
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good for hermione. as much as i adore draco, what he did was totally wrong and hermione and i won't stand for it! little note's don't cut it, they were cute when he wanted to take her places, but to ask for a second chance, in a tiny note is just unacceptable. he has to do somethng big for hermione, something to show her how much he really cares. and by doing that, let the whole school now!
anyways, pams
Lauren
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09-01-2006, 06:04 PM
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#437 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere in the USA
Posts: 115
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that was a really good post! pams!
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09-01-2006, 08:09 PM
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#438 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
i'm glad she didn't forgive him yet. contract sounds awesome. i wonder if he will ever get GIT pimples on his face late in the story. hehe
PAMS
Roshni
 You'll see! Quote:
Hahaha, awesome post. Crumpling the note up was kinda mean, though. PAMS!
Amie
Thanks! Quote:
good for hermione. as much as i adore draco, what he did was totally wrong and hermione and i won't stand for it! little note's don't cut it, they were cute when he wanted to take her places, but to ask for a second chance, in a tiny note is just unacceptable. he has to do somethng big for hermione, something to show her how much he really cares. and by doing that, let the whole school now!
anyways, pams
Lauren
Ha ha...I'm not sure if he's that brave! Quote:
that was a really good post! pams!
Thankies!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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09-02-2006, 03:09 PM
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#439 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 21,641
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OMG OMG OMG COOKIE!!!!!!!!! U POSTED!!!!!!!! AND IT WAS AMAZiNGLYAWESOME!!! PLEZ POST AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!
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09-04-2006, 03:55 AM
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#440 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
Posts: 995
| lol that was so perfect. so hermione. sign a contract. omg. lol more soon! *Danielle* |
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09-04-2006, 04:51 AM
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#441 (permalink)
| Flobberworm
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: listening to my ipod
Posts: 13
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Oh my gosh
PAMS PAMS PAMS
I LOVE HOW THIS IS GOING
please post soon
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09-04-2006, 05:02 AM
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#442 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
OMG OMG OMG COOKIE!!!!!!!!! U POSTED!!!!!!!! AND IT WAS AMAZiNGLYAWESOME!!! PLEZ POST AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!
I like your enthusiasm for the story Quote:
lol that was so perfect. so hermione. sign a contract. omg. lol more soon!
*Danielle*
 Thanks! Quote:
Oh my gosh
PAMS PAMS PAMS
I LOVE HOW THIS IS GOING
please post soon
Thankies!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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09-05-2006, 04:09 AM
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#443 (permalink)
| Billywig
Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: In Draco's dreams...
Posts: 3,636
Hogwarts RPG Name: Fancy Taylor | Devoted to Tom Padfoot's Psychiatrist Draco, Draco, Draco. What am I going to do with you? He needs to do a lot better than that silly little note to get forgiveness for what he did! I can't wait to see what he does do!!! PAMS!!! |
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09-05-2006, 06:34 AM
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#444 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I'm not sure... *shifts eyes nervously*
Posts: 275
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Boys are so stupid... LOL
Great post! I can't wait to see what happens!!
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09-05-2006, 02:09 PM
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#445 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
Posts: 1,898
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
You Go Hermione! That's right Draco, she only want's a verbal apology!
Poor Draco, you can tell he feels really bad, and he's probably never really had to apologize before!
__________________ And someday, when the night is over and the dawn arrives, we'll reach up to the sky withour eyes turned toward our Lord, and all will become good and whole |
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09-05-2006, 06:45 PM
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#446 (permalink)
| Mackled Malaclaw
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: USA
Posts: 11,152
Hogwarts RPG Name: Stuart Kynaston Ravenclaw Sixth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Rome Keller Drechsler Gryffindor First Year | Sardine VIP || Shark Attack! || D A R T E R || Captain Oblivious
haha, hermione is priceless. "I'd make him sign a contract."
lol, you always have such the BEST lines.
PAMS
~Amy~
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09-05-2006, 08:38 PM
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#447 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
Posts: 6,879
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eunice Murray Fifth | Quote:
Draco, Draco, Draco. What am I going to do with you? He needs to do a lot better than that silly little note to get forgiveness for what he did! I can't wait to see what he does do!!! PAMS!!!
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Boys are so stupid... LOL
Great post! I can't wait to see what happens!! Ha ha, they can be. Quote:
You Go Hermione! That's right Draco, she only want's a verbal apology!
Poor Draco, you can tell he feels really bad, and he's probably never really had to apologize before!
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haha, hermione is priceless. "I'd make him sign a contract."
lol, you always have such the BEST lines.
PAMS
~Amy~
 Why, thank you!
__________________ White shores are calling... You have entered the realm of the Lady of the Wood. We are proud to fight alongside men once more. ...You and I will meet again I <3 you, all my SS friends. Namarie! |
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09-05-2006, 10:05 PM
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#448 (permalink)
| Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 21,641
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hey cookie, can't wait 4 the next post
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09-06-2006, 08:17 PM
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#449 (permalink)
| Guest |
ha...pimples...hahaha! funny stuff! *pimples..haha* ahh...good times!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
~ Sarah
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09-06-2006, 09:24 PM
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#450 (permalink)
| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
Posts: 1,898
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth |
I Need More!!! Pamsoid!
__________________ And someday, when the night is over and the dawn arrives, we'll reach up to the sky withour eyes turned toward our Lord, and all will become good and whole |
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