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| | Candy Display Case (Finished Fanfiction) A dazzling showcase of fully wrapped-up stories, these sweet treats are polished and ready for your reading pleasure! | 
06-27-2007, 01:44 AM
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|  DA News OfficerPuffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sylvannas Quickspeed
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Hey! It's Katie! This is my first one-shot fanfic! It's called SOS from a song by Good Charlotte!
Hermione made her way onto the Hogwarts train for the last time. Ron and Harry were both dead, killed by Death Eaters. She had wanted to go and fight, but Lupin had given her a smaller, safer assignment. She could have saved them. She knew she could have.
She chose a car that was empty, and plugged in her Ipod, a cool muggle device her parents had gotten her. She knew it wouldn't work at Hogwarts, but she needed some music to match her mood. A muggle group by the name of Good Charlotte came on, and Hermione listened and let the tears flow.
Is anybody listening?
Can they hear me when I call?
I'm shooting signals in the air
'Cause I need somebody's help
I can't make it on my own
So I'm giving up myself
Is anybody listening?
Listening
I've been stranded here and I'm miles away
Making signals hoping they'd save me
I lock myself inside these walls
'Cause out there I'm always wrong
I don't think I'm gonna make it
So while I'm sitting here
On the eve of my defeat
I'll write this letter and hope it saves me
Is anybody listening?
Can they hear me when I call?
Shooting signals in the air
'Cause I need somebody's help
I can't make it on my own
So I'm giving up myself
Is anybody listening?
Listening
I'm stuck in my own head and I'm oceans away
Would anybody notice if I chose to stay?
I'll send an SOS tonight
Wonder if I will survive
How in the hell did I get so far away this time
So now I'm sitting here
The time of my departure's near
I say a prayer
Please someone save me
Is anybody listening?
Can they hear me when I call?
Shooting signals in the air
'Cause I need somebody's help
I can't make it on my own
So I'm giving up myself
Is anybody listening?
Listening
I'm lost here
I can't make it on my own
I don't wanna die alone
I'm so scared
Drowning now
Reaching out
Holding on to everything I know
Crying out
Dying now
Need some help
Is anybody listening?
Can you hear me when I call?
Shooting signals in the air
I need somebody's help
I can't make it on my own
So I'm giving up myself
Is anybody listening?
The train stopped with a jerk, and the song immediately stopped playing, shut down by the magic surrounding Hogwarts. She put it in her pocket, and left the train. She didn't hear anything, didn't see anything, and couldn't feel anything. She got into a carriage numbly and almost sat on someone.
"Hey! Watch it-oh, hey Hermione."
"Malfoy? What are you doing here?" Hermione whispered.
"My mother wanted me to finish out the year. She doesn't care if people hate me." Malfoy looked away and into the rain. "I suppose you wouldn't know how that feels, to have someone hate you."
"No, but I know how it feels to have lost someone dear," Hermione said quietly.
"How?"
"Listen." Hermione waved her wand to give her Ipod an extra bit of power, and let Malfoy listen to the song. His eyes widened.
"That's...that's me...." Malfoy started to cry. Hermione put an arm around him.
"Malfoy....Draco...I'm listening. And I'm here, and I can hear you when you call."
"I'll...I'll do the same for you Hermione. I promise. Just...I need a friend right now, please don't leave me?" Draco clutched at Hermione, and cried harder. "Despite what you said...you can't possibly know what it's like..."
"I'll never leave you." Hermione promised.
OK! That's it! How was it?
Katie
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06-27-2007, 08:12 AM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hogwarts School of W
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Oh...pity it's a one-shot. It's awesome! and sad...awesome like your other FFs. This story really would be a hit and a lot more people would come reading it if it wasn't an one-shot. They're just going to leave...anyways, you did an awesome job!
☆★☆★
Mindy
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06-27-2007, 12:43 PM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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Thanks Mindy! It's my first ever one shot! But I'm thinking of writing a fic that's based on this!
Katie
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06-27-2007, 12:50 PM
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| | Fwooper
Join Date: Jul 2006
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ooh Katie I loved it!
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06-27-2007, 01:54 PM
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|  Tonks' WerewolfPuffskein
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Summerr come soonn<3
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Alana Colarossi
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aww that was so cute
i loved it
awesome jobb!!!
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06-28-2007, 07:51 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Nice job =D
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06-29-2007, 01:53 AM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just being me!
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thanks everybody! I'm still unsure about the one-shots, but this idea just came to mee all of a sudden, and I just HAD to write it down!
Katie
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07-01-2007, 10:16 PM
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| | Grindylow
Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: California
Posts: 14,433
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Rishi Kapoor
First Year |  Film Addict! | ♥ Suraj Sharma ♥| TIGRESS!
Wow...that would make a wonderful fan-fic!! I really hope you make a fan-fic based on it, especially since this would serve as an awesome prequel. Love it!!
>>>Pooja<<<
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07-12-2007, 01:30 AM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In Muggle Studdies singing my head off to the song "Sieze the Day" for a class presentation.
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Ema Thoro
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that almost made me cry!!! pams!!
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07-26-2007, 03:33 AM
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| | Gnome
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 Awwww...Hermione and Draco are going through the same things. It's good that they can be going through this together. I have actually never heard the G.C. song,i'll have to listen to it.That was great! 
<3Danielle
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08-05-2007, 01:50 AM
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| DA News Officer Puffskein
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Thanks everybody! I hope you guys check out my other fics too!
Katie
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