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06-09-2006, 01:58 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Yay! I was wondering when someone was going to comment on this chapter
also, welcome new reader, I'm glad that you're loving this story, here's chapter 11
Chapter Five: Kidnap Part 1
During the next two weeks, Hermione and Lily helped Ginny take care of James and Lily. After the second week, Remus came to Godric's hollow with grave news;
"There has been a mass breakout in Azkaban." he said.
"How did that happen?" Lily asked.
"Well," Remus started to say, "after Snape broke out, they got saw how he did it and broke out too."
"Are we going to try and get the Death Eaters back into Azkaban?" asked Ginny.
"We are, but you and Hermione are not." said Remus.
"What?" Ginny asked, surprised "why not?"
"Because, you have a pair of twins that are only two weeks old and Hermiones eight months pregnant and her baby should be due anytime now."
"But, couldn't we have Hermione watch the babies and have my mum stay with her?" Ginny said standing up from the chair she was sitting in.
"Ginny," Remus said, firmly, "if we have Hermione and your mother stay here unprotected, then that will put them in danger."
"But-" Ginny started to say but Remus interrupted,
"I'm sorry, Ginny, but that's my final word." and he left Godric's Hollow leaving everyone in the living room staring at Ginny who was still standing.
sorry if that was short, I hope you enjoyed it
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06-12-2006, 05:01 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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okay, I'm gonna be gone for a few days, I'll post later, bye
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06-15-2006, 08:14 PM
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that was a great post!
poor ginny!
post as soon as u get back!
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06-15-2006, 08:58 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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hey, I'm back! Actually I got back yesterday but I didn't have enough time to post
Kidnap Part 2
Ginny and Hermione stayed at Godric's Hollow while the Order went to recapture the escaped Death Eaters. Harry and Ron also stayed home to protect their future wives and Ginny's twins. Harry and Hermione sat in the kitchen while Ron made some tea. Ginny was in the babies' room tucking in Lily and James. Harry was reading the Evening Prophet when he heard something; he heard hissing voices in the babies' room saying, "Come to me, small child, let me rip you, let me tear you, let me KILL YOU!!" Then Ron, Hermione, and Harry heard Ginny scream. Without hesitating, Harry ran out of the kitchen with Ron and Hermione at his heels.
"Ginny?!" Harry shouted as he ran up the stairs into the babies room. When Ron, Hermione, and Harry entered the babies' room, they saw that the room was the same way as it was the last time they saw it. Ron and Hermione walked in and looked for Ginny while Harry looked into the crib to see if the twins were all right. But when he looked in the crib, Harry yelled with shock; curled up in the crib, instead of James or Lily, there was a huge snake; Nagini. Then, Harry heard cruel laughter and looked behind him; there, standing by the window, were Bellatrix Lestrang, Draco Malfoy, and Fenrir Greyback.
"Looking for these?" asked Bellatrix.
"Or this?" asked Malfoy.
Harry, Hermione, and Ron gasped; Bellatrix had James and Lily in arms and Malfoy was holding onto a struggling Ginny, Harry saw that she was gagged so they couldn't hear her scream.
"Let them go!" Ron shouted.
"Certainly." Greyback said, and he grabbed Lily and held her out the window.
"NO!" Harry, Hermione, and Ron shouted in unision.
"Nice choice," Malfoy said, smirking as he held Ginny tightly as she started to struggle even more, "Now, if any of you try to stop us, the blood traitor and her brats," he nodded toward James and Lily who were now starting to cry, "will be snake food." Nagini slithered out of the crib and looked at the twins with a hungry expression in her eyes. Harry, Ron, and Hermione stood where they were, glaring at the Death Eaters as they climbed out of the window and Apparated.
Hermione cried in the kitchen while Ron went to tell the Order what happened, but Harry stood where he was in the babies' room still staring at where the Death Eaters were. Everytime he thought of what might happen to Ginny and the twins, he silently cried, he stood where he was, hoping that no harm would come to Ginny, James. or Lily.
I'm sorry if I made you cry, but I hope that you still enjoyed this chapter. bye
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06-23-2006, 09:41 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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okay then, here's chapter 13
Kidnap Part 3
With Bellatrix and Fenrir holding James and Lily and with Malfoy holding onto a struggling Ginny, the Death Eaters were able to do side-along Apparation to their hiding place; The Riddle house. Bellatrix, Fenrir, and Malfoycarried James, Lily, and Ginny into the house, up the stairs, and into a candlit(sp?) room.
"My Lord," Greyback said as he, Bellatrix, and Malfoy setted down Lily, James, and Ginny before bowing at the back of a chair, "We have brought the blood traitor and her brats."
"Excellent," said a high voice, "Leave them with me and go out to find the members of the Order of the Pheonix."
Lestrang, Greyback, and Malfoy bowed and left the room.
Ginny took the cloth out of her mouth, picked up Lily and James, and said to the back of the chair, "What do you want from us?"
"I wish to kill you and your childeren," said the cruel, high voice from behind the chair, "Because of what you did with my father."
The owner of the voice got out of the chair and turned around to face Ginny, the man was the same age as Harry but he looked almost exactly like the man that put Ginny in a trance in her first year and almost caused her death. The moment Ginny saw this man, she knew in an instant that this man was Lord Voldemort's son, Lord Voldemort II.
I'm so sorry that this chapter was short, but I didn't exactly think about what to say in this chapter, I'll post later on. Bye
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06-24-2006, 10:51 AM
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OMG!
there is another one!
the first one was bad enough!
come on Harry come to the rescue!
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06-24-2006, 04:36 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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here you go,
Chapter Six: Fight Against Voldemort II Part 1
Ron and Hermione were in the living room talking to Sirius, Remus, Tonks, Lily, and James(Harry's parents) discussing what they should do about Ginny and the twins while Harry stayed in the babies room.
"Where do you think they're hiding out at?" asked Sirius.
"We don't have a clue," said Hermione, "and we're sure that their not in their last hideout because that would have been too obvious."
Lily looked up at the stairs,
"Why is Harry still upstairs?" she asked.
"Because he's still upset about what just happened." said Hermione, she was also worried about what might happen to Ginny and her childeren.
"Well," said James, "Do any of you have any idea where they might be?"
"I do." said a voice from the doorway; it was Harry.
Earliar...
Harry walked around the babies room while looking for any clues about where the Death Eaters were until he thought of something; he remembered Nagini slythering around an old broken down house near a graveyard...Hang on, he thought, A graveyard! and he remembered, the night Voldemort returned, Voldemort pointed out a house that was his father's and in Harry's dreams, he saw Voldemort with Wormtail in that house, and it all came together!
"The Riddle House." Harry whispered to himself, and he ran down the stairs into the living room in time to here his dad say,
"Well do any of you have any idea where they might be?"
"I do." Harry said from the doorway so suddenly that almost everyone jumped.
"Where, do you think they might be, Harry?" asked Remus, facing him.
"I think, they might be at the Riddle House."
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06-25-2006, 02:04 PM
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ah ha! harry figured it out!
come on harry! hurry!
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07-01-2006, 08:03 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hey, thanks for the compliments! Here's the next chapter.
Fight Against Voldemort II Part 2
Harry, Ron, Hermione, Fred, and George Apparated over to the Riddle house. It looked the same way as it did in Harry's dreams.
"Okay, Hermione," Harry said facing Hermione, "You go and get back up, Ron, George, Fred," he faced them, "You guys go and take care of any Death Eaters that might be lurking around here."
"But, what are you going to do?" asked George.
"I'm going to find Ginny and the kids." said Harry.
"But you can't go by yourself." said Hermione.
"Hermione, you can't help me because your eight months pregnant and you're due any day now," said Harry, "And Fred, George, and Ron have to fight the Death Eaters here which might not be a problem since there might not be that many here, but still, their going to need as much help as they can get if they're more."
"But Harry-"
"Just go, Hermione."
Hermione hugged Harry and Apparated.
"Okay, let's go." said Harry.
Harry, Ron, Fred, and George quietly walked into the Riddle House.
"You guys better look around." whispered Harry, "And if anything happens, get yourselves out."
"You mean, without you?" asked George.
"Yes, just go." Harry whispered.
Fred, George, and Ron quietly walked around the house while Harry walked up the stairs. He walked up the stairs as high as high as they cold go until there was a landing with a bedroom door ajar where he heard voices coming from it, Harry quietly walked over to the door and listened in on what was going on.
"I'm going to kill you, Ginny." said a voice from a man that Harry hadn't heard in five years, "I'm going to make you and Potter pay for killing my father."
And unexpectingly, Nagini slithered past Harry's ankels and into the room.
"Harry Potter is outside the door, My Lord." the snake hissed
"And speaking of Potter, Crucio!" said the man's voice.
Harry felt an escrutiating pain going through his body, and he fell forwards towards the floor, knocking the door out of the way. The pain stopped and Harry saw that a Ginny and the babies were in the room and there was also a man that looked alot like Tom Riddle.
Earliar, before Harry was descovered...
Voldemot II raised his wand, aimed it at Ginny, and said, "Crucio!"
Ginny fell on the floor writhing and screaming. Voldemort II jerked his wand away from Ginny and her pain stopped. She layed on the floor, panting and struggling to get up.
"That hurt, didn't it Ginny?" mocked Voldemort II.
Ginny didn't answer, she wasn't going to play his games.
"I'm going to kill you, Ginny." He said, "I'm going to make you and Potter pay for killing my father."
A hissing sound filled the room
"And speaking of Potter," said Voldemort II, raising his wand at the door and saying, "Crucio!"
Harry's yell could be heard in the house and Harry fell through the door and ont the floor, writhing and yelling in pain until Voldemort II raised his wand away from Harry to stop the curse.
Ginny rushed over to Harry to see if he was okay and helped him up.
"Hello, Harry," said Voldemort II, "Remember me?"
"Lord Voldemort II." Harry said looking at him with the deepest loathing, "Long time no see."
"And I think you remeber your children?" Voldemort II asked gestering the corner, in the corner, Nagini was holding Lily in her coils, but Harry could tell that she wasn't squeezing because Lily was asleep.
"You wouldn't dare." said Ginny glaring at him.
"Oh, wouldn't I?" Voldemort II asked. He looked at Nagini and said, "Feeding time."
Nagini started to squeeze Lily and she woke up and cried along with James.
"Leave her alone!" Harry said as he pulled out his wand and pointed it at Voldemort II who laughed his cold murthless laugh. Nagini didn't stop squeezing until something happened; Nagini letted go of Lily and was thrown into a wall. Harry and Ginny looked around to see what was happening until they found James with his hands outstretched at Nagini. Harry knew at once that James was using his powers. James had Nagini thrown at Voldemort II, but he ducked so she hit the floor. Nagini hissed angrily and slithered out of the room.
"I'm going to kill your childeren once and for all!" Voldemort said, angrily raising his wand at Lily and James. Before Harry could disarm his, a jet-black dog ran into the room and attacked Voldemort II before he could say a spell. Then a stag and a fox entered the room, the fox ran in front of James and Lily to protect them and the stag did the same with Harry and Ginny. Harry recognised the animals and knew at once that the dog was Sirius, the fox was his mother, and the stag was his father.
There was a riot going on down stairs and a voice said, "Master, the Order of the Pheonix has outnumbered us!"
Harry's heart lifted, he was happy to hear that the Order was there and that they were putting up a terrific fight, but his heart sank when he saw that Voldemort II Apparated out of the room. Harry left the room and ran down the stairs to find that the Death Eaters and everyone in the Order were still fighting until he heard a voice saying, "It's over, the Dark Lord's left." and without a trace, the Death Eaters Apparated. Harry let out a sigh of dissapointment, he was upset that Voldemort's son and his Death Eaters were gone, but he was happy to see that everyone was okay, but he heard a woman scream.
"Harry!" Ron ran over to him, "Hermione's having her baby!"
And she was, Hermione layed on a dusty couch, her face wet with sweat.
"Does anybody know how to deliver a baby?" asked James as he quickly went down the stairs.
"I do, but I'm going to need help." said Mrs. Weasley running over to Hermione.
"I'll help." said Lily running down the stairs towards Hermione.
"So will I." said Tonks as she hurried over to Hermione.
"I'm going to need a cloth and some hot water." said Mrs. Weasley.
"Here," said Harry, taking off his cloak and handing it to his mom.
"Here's the water." said Fred getting out of the kitchen holding a bowl and filling it with warm water from his wand.
"Okay, Hermione," said Tonks, "Take some calm deep breaths."
After a few hours, Hermione gave birth to a pair of twins, one of them had a patch of red hair while the other had a patch of brown hair.
"Their adorable," said Lily, "What are you going to name them?"
"We're thinking of naming them, Rupert and Emma." said Ron as he putted his arm aroung Hermione.
"Those are great names." said Fred.
"Yeah," said Ginny holding baby James and Lily in her arms, "And let's just hope that they don't end up like Fred and George."
Everybody laughed, even Fred and George
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07-02-2006, 03:09 PM
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lmao! brilliant post!
harry saved ginny! wel kinda!
hermione had twins! yay!!!
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07-03-2006, 01:40 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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okay, here's the second to last chapter of this story.
Chapter Seven: Double Wedding Part 1
During the next few weeks, Mrs. Weasley, Fleur, Lily, and Cho helped prepare for the double wedding for Harry and Ginny.
"When are we going to have the wedding?" Harry asked Mrs. Weasley during lunch.
It was three weeks after Voldemort's II attack and Remus, Tonks, Sirius, James, Lily, Harry, Fred, George, Mr. Weasley, Ginny, Hermione, and Ron were at the burrow having lunch.
"I'm thinking, sometime in the fall." Mrs. Weasley said, warmly.
"That would be great." said Ginny as she fed Lily and James with great difficulty.
"Hey, Hermione," said Ron, "Can I have a word with you?"
"Sure." said Hermione and she and Ron left the dining room into the living room.
"You know," George said, frowning, "Ron has been acting really weird lately."
"Yeah, ever since Rupert and Emma were born." said Fred, returning the frown.
"It's probably nothing." said Harry quickly, he had a feeling that Ron was going to propose to Hermione, and he was right; when Hermione and Ron came back into the kitchen, Ron said, "Everyone, we have an announcment."
Everyone turned their attentions on Ron and Hermione.
"Hermione and I," said Ron, "Are getting married!."
"Excellent!" said Fred and George together.
"It's about time you both got together." said Fred smiling.
"Yeah, you both were in love since you were in what, fourth year?" said George jokingly.
"Fred, George." said Mrs. Weasley warningly.
"Also," said Hermione, "We were wondering, if it's okay with Harry and Ginny, if we could have a double wedding."
"We'd be happy to have a double wedding with you." Harry said, beaming.
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07-04-2006, 01:09 PM
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a double wedding?!?!?!?!
that is sooo cool!
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07-05-2006, 03:08 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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okay, I'm going to need help on the double wedding, if anybody knows about them can you please tell me how they work?
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07-12-2006, 09:46 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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never mind, I'll just geuss. Here's the last chapter everyone.
Double Wedding Part 2
The Harry and Ron were putting on their tuxedos, feeling nervous and excited about the wedding.
"You nervous?" asked Sirius, he was Ron's and Harry's best man for the wedding.
"Sorta." said Harry, he putting on his coat with great difficulty.
"Yes." said Ron helping Harry with his coat.
"That's normal," said Sirius, "Your mum and dad were also nervous for their wedding Harry."
"I guess it runs in the family." said Ron, smiling at Harry.
There was loud talking going on outside the room, Ron opened the door and said, "Look who crashed the party." Harry looked outside the door and saw Cormac McLaggen talking to Ginny's parents.
"Man, who invited that jerk?" Harry asked, frustrated.
"Who is that guy?" asked Sirius looking at McLaggen.
"He's just some guy we met in school in our sixth year." said Ron.
"He and Hermione went out once and it didn't go too well." said Harry closing the door.
"What happened?"
"All he did was talk about Quidditch and he never asked Hermione one thing about herself."
"That reminds me of James." said Sirius, shaking his head.
"What," said Harry, "Did he do that on his and my mum's first date?"
"Actually he did that with his old girlfriends before Lily."
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Ginny and Hermione putted on their wedding gowns feeling nervous and excied about the wedding.
"You nervous?" asked Ginny.
"Yes," said Hermione, "I can't believe we're finally getting married.
"I can't believe we're going to be sisters." said Ginny .
There was loud talking outside the room.
Hermione opened the door and said, "Oh my God, not him!"
Ginny looked outside the door and saw Cormac McLaggen talking to her parents.
"Who invited that idiot?" she asked.
"I don't know," said Hermione, "But I hope he doesn't do a Fred and George and disrupt the wedding."
"Yeah," said Ginny, "And I hope that Harry and Ron don't kill him."
"Yeah." sighed Hermione.
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Hermione walked arm and arm with her father up the ile while Ginny did the same with her father. Harry and Ron stood with the Priest and Sirius atching Hermione, Ginny, and their fathers walk over to them. When the brides and their fathers came to the end of the ile, Hermione held onto Ron, Ginny held onto Harry, and they listened to the Priest, occasionly saying, "I do." until the he said, "You may now kiss the brides."
Harry looked down at Ginny and kissed, and so did Ron with Hermione.
Afterwards, Brides, the Grooms, and everyone else danced to the music, "Reunited."
"Harry," said Ginny, "I love you."
"I know," said Harry, "Why else did you marry me."
Ginny giggled at Harry's joke.
"Just so you know," said Harry, "I love you too, and I always will."
"As long as be both live," said Ginny, "No matter what happens, we'll always protect eachother, agreed?"
Harry nodded and said, "Agreed."
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Fred, George, Ron, and Hermione watched Harry and Ginny dance.
"Great wedding." said George.
"Yeah," said Fred, "And it's gonna be much better after Ginny drinks her butterbeer."
"Why?" asked Hermione.
"'Cause I put a spell on it that'll make her tongue orange."
Are serious?" asked Ron.
"Yeah," sniggered George, "Look, she's drinking it now!" They looked at Ginnyt who just opened her bottle of butterbeer and was about to drink it.
"Ginny," Hermione warned her, "Don't drink-" but it was too late, Ginny drank some of her butterbeer with one gulp and looked at Hermione, "What were you just saying?" Hermione could see a bit of yellow on her tongue. Ron, George and Fred sniggered as Hermione said handing over her paocket mirror to Ginny, "You may want to look at your tongue."
Ginny stuck her tongue out at the mirror and almost screamed. Harry came over and asked, "What's going on?"
"What happened to my tongue?" Ginny asked, still looking at the mirror with a scared look on her face. Harry looked at Ginny's tongue and started to laugh, but stopped when he saw Ginny glaring at him.
"Fred and George put a spell on your drink to turn your tongue yellow." answered Hermione, she looked like she was trying not to laugh either.
Ginny pulled out her wand and pointed it at Ron and the twins who stopped laughing right away.
"Ginny wait," said Harry, "We don't want this wedding to be turned into a funeral!"
Ginny lowered her wand and said, "You're right, I think we'll have the funeral after the wedding." And she, Harry, and Hermione laughed at the looks on Ron, Fred, and George's faces THE END
That's it. I hope you all enjoyed my story, because I have a sequal called, If Only Sa9+ so I hope you'll read it and enjoy as much as you enjoyed Reunited. Good-Bye
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07-13-2006, 07:05 PM
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that was a brilliant ending!!
im sad to see it go!
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07-13-2006, 08:14 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Thank you, thank you,
I can't believe that I made a story that was only this long!! But I'm going to have If Only Sa9+ be longer than this. And by the way, carmu, I love your avvie and siggie
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09-03-2006, 12:59 AM
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I really like it but its been a while since you posted
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09-03-2006, 03:04 AM
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that's because it's over. Please pay attention to the ending of the last post
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09-05-2006, 07:59 AM
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Im sorry i didnt realize it but after re-reading I loved it sorry again
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