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03-07-2006, 01:23 AM
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| Porlock
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Hurry up and post! I can't wait to read more!
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03-07-2006, 05:18 AM
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| Jarvey
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we're not the only ones posting. There's also tatewin. But take ur time. a good writer must not rush a good story.
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03-07-2006, 03:32 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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okay, but I need some help for the next chapter, does anybody have any ideas?
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03-07-2006, 05:56 PM
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| Jarvey
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hmmmmm . . . . . . . . . . . You could tell us that Harry faked his death?!?!?!?!?! But that's only an idea, and i have no idea how you would write that out. But it's the best i can come up with. besides telling why you brought everyone else back.
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03-08-2006, 03:48 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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do you have any other ideas?
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03-08-2006, 03:56 PM
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| Jarvey
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nope sorry sirius. I'm fresh out of ideas.
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03-09-2006, 01:29 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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aw well, thanks anyway. I'll try to think of some things; that is, if no one else has any ideas for the next chapter
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03-24-2006, 12:01 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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I guess not. But don't worry, I'll post sometime tommorow or Saturday, I got a load of bloody homework
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03-25-2006, 04:16 AM
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03-26-2006, 06:12 AM
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| Jarvey
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Awesome I'll be here Sirius_Padfoot. I still love ur fic. Can't wait to read more.
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03-26-2006, 07:48 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maya Aqua First Year | chapter 6
sorry to keep you witing since I was really busy doing stuff. in this chapter, Harry fights Snape back in Boston after Snape revealed himself. So here's chapter six, enjoy reading!
Fight to the Death Part 2
Harry reached into his pocket for his wand, but Snape beat him to it. He pointed his wand at Harry's face.
"You don't know how long I wanted to do this Potter," he said, "and I've got nothing more to say to you, except, Avada Kadavra!" Green light shot out of Snape's wand towards Harry who ducked and missed the curse by an inch. Harry grabbed out his wand and pointed it at Snape
"Expelliarmus!" he shouted, and Snape was knocked backwards into the bathroom. Harry closed the door and locked it shut. Harry grabbed the mirror off the coffee table and said "Remus Lupin!" (let's just say that Lupin also had a magic mirror and he has it now) The mirror changed Harry's reflection to Lupin's ceiling.
"Remus!" Harry shouted sounding desperate since the bathroom door started to bang and the doorknob started to shake. Remus' and Tonks' faces came to view in Harry's mirror.
"Harry, what's going on? Are you okay?" said Tonks.
"Snape's here and he's trying to kill me!" Harry shouted.
"Harry, get out of the room! We'll get there as soon as we can!" Remus said sounding concerned. The bathroom door burst opened and Snape fired the killing curse at Harry again but missed. Harry pointed his wand at Snape again but before he could say anything, Snape shot the Crutiatus curse and this time it Harry. Harry writhed on the floor yelling in pain. Snape lifted up his wand, "Your filthy parents and Godfather would be proud," he sneered, "You have shown me that you are weak and pathetic like they were Potter!" At these words Harry got up at full speed and shouted, "Impedimenta!" but Snape deflected it
"Avada Kadavra!" he shouted and once again, Harry dodged it and said, "Expelliarmus!" and Snape was off his feet again at that exact moment, he shouted the killing curse again but Harry dodged it again. When Snape hit the ground outcold, Harry bounded Snape with non-apparation rope and looked at the clock, it was 8:40.
"So I fought Snape for five minutes." said Harry to himself. He wrote a note saying that he was going to check if Ron, Ginny, and Hermione were safe. Harry left the note on the table next to the mirror that still showed Lupin's ceiling since he forgot to clear it due to Snape's attack. So he Apparated to home, but when he Apparated, the note fluttered and flew under the table so the Order couldn't see it when they came at the exact same time Harry left. When Harry got home at 8:50, it was deserted.
That's all for now! see ya!
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03-28-2006, 04:36 AM
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| Jarvey
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Oh this is so excellent. Harry's not dead. YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY I hope the order will find the note Harry left. I love it. Sirirus_Padfoot. Keep posting more. I love it.
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04-02-2006, 02:49 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Don't woory, I'll post again soon, until I do, I need some more ideas, so do you guys have any more ideas?
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04-02-2006, 06:40 AM
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| Jarvey
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nope sorry sirius_padfoot. I have no new ideas. Sorry i couldn't help. But if i think of something i'll let u know right away. I love ur fic. it's awesome.
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04-02-2006, 05:33 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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thanks anyway, I'll post soon
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05-02-2006, 08:58 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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05-02-2006, 11:45 PM
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| Blast-Ended Skrewt
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05-03-2006, 11:28 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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sorry that I haven't posted lately, I was really busy studying for some tests at my school, I hope you guys don't hate me.
Fight to the Death Part 3
Harry walked around Godric's Hollow but he couldn't find Ron, Hermione, or Ginny anywhere in the house. Harry walked into his and Ginny's bedroom, sat on the bed, and put his face in his hands. "I can't beleive Snape got to them." he said to his knees. Harry knew what he had to do, he pulled out his wand, and tried to think of a good decision, either he can kill himself or he can look for them again to make sure that he was wrong. When Harry made his decision, he pointed his wand at himself, and said a spell that he hadn't used since he fought Voldemort, "Avada Kedavra!"
"We haven't seen you in five years," said Hermione, "Have you been living here all this time?"
"No," answered James Potter, "We've been actually moving from place to place every now and then."
"You never told, how can any of you be alive?" asked Ron staring at the living forms of Dumbledore, Sirius, Cedric, Lily, and James Potter.
"Well, it's kind of an interesting story," said Sirius, "when Voldemort and his followers killed us with the killing curse (I don't know if Bellatrix hit Sirius with Avada Kedavra I'm just guessing), our lives were sucked out of our bodies and were trapped into Voldemort's wand. But when he was destroyed, our lives were free once more to go into our bodies, and when we did, somehow are bodies looked whole and healthy."
"I didn't know that could happen." said Hermione,
"Neither did we." said Dumbledore.
"Where's Harry?" Lily asked Ginny. Ron, Hermione, and Ginny exchanged dark looks,
"We think Snape killed him." said Hermione.
"How did that happen?" asked James,
"From what the Order of the Pheonix said, Snape attacked him and killed him," started Ron, "but we think that it was just a mistake since they didn't find his body-"
"And we wanted to go and look for him," said Ginny finishing his sentence "but when a message from you came, we thought that we should go since it seemed important."
"Well it kind've was, " Cedric said finally, "and maybe we should all help you look for him, I mean, it's the least I could do since he brought my body back for my father."
"Only, I'm wondering something," said Sirius, "does Harry still have that mirror I gave him years ago?"
"Yeah, he did," said Hermione, "but he accidently left it at his hiding spot when he was hiding from Snape."
"Hang on," Ron said turning to Ginny, "did you leave your mirror at Godric's Hollow?"
"Oh right," said Ginny remembering, "maybe we can use it to check if Harry's at home or not."
"One slight problem though," Hermione said frowning, "how are we going to check if we don't have another mirror?"
"I have mine." said James taking his out.
"You had that all along?" asked Sirius.
"Yeah." said James handing Ginny his mirror. (Also, we can say that Pettigrew had a mirror too)
"Peter Pettigrew." Ginny said to the mirror,
Ginny's ceiling came into veiw,
"Harry?" called Ginny, there was no answer except-
"Avada Kedavra!" Hermione gasped,
"Someone got killed at the house!" said Ron.
"Let's just hope it wasn't Harry." Dumbledore said gravely
"Let's just Apparate and see if Harry's there and he's okay." said Sirius before he Apparated. The others followed suite and Apparated to Godric's Hollow, as soon as they got there, their worse fear had happened: Harry was lying dead on the bed.
Ginny slowly walked toward the bed, dropped on her knees, and started to cry on Harry's lifeless body.
Like I said, I hope you guys don't hate me for not posting
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05-08-2006, 01:48 AM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Port Angeles, WA
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even though no ones posting their opinions, I just want to let some of you know that I'll be very busy for a while
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05-14-2006, 08:19 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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No posts? Oh well, here's chapter eight
Fight to the Death Part 4
Lily and Hermione silently cried while they watched Ginny crying over Harry's lifeless body Sirius, James, and Dumbledore also had tears in their eyes wishing that this didn't happen.
Cedric walked over to Ginny and put his hand on her shoulder, Ginny looked up at Cedric and got up. Cedric always had feelings for Ginny, he didn't tell her about it because he was worried that if he broke up with Cho, then it would get ugly since Cho could get jealous easily.
Ginny hugged Cedric and cried even harder, Cedric knew that at the moment it wouldn't be a good time to tell Ginny about his feelings for her since he also knew that she loved Harry and that she might not love another man ever again.
Lily walked over to the bed where Harry was laying, held up her hand, and ran it across his cheek. Lily burst into tears when her hand touched his face since she hadn't seen him when he was a baby the night she and James were killed.
Ron couldn't beleive that his childhood friend was gone and out of his life forever. He held Hermione in his arms so that she could cry.
James walked over to his son and looked at him, feeling the same way Lily felt.
Dumbledore took out some vials of potion and started to mix the potions together. Sirius looked away from Harry to Dumbledore and asked, "What are you doing?"
"I am making a reviving potion." Dumbldore said not looking at Sirius.
"One drop of this, and Harry will be alive again." He walked over to Harry and put in a drop of reviving potion in Harry's mouth. After a complete moment of silence, Harry started to breathe. Lily hugged James feeling extremly happy that her only son was alive again. Ginny looked at Harry with a huge smile on her face and hugged Cedric. Harry was alive again
I hoped that you enjoyed that post, bye.
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05-21-2006, 12:45 AM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
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Wow.... Very cool post. PAMS please!!!!!!!!!
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05-23-2006, 02:48 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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thanks, here's my next post
Chapter Four: Surprise Part 1
After three days, Lily, James, and Sirius lived at Godric's Hollow with the trio and Ginny. Harry always felt nervous whenever he saw them because of Snape's trick back in Boston. Everytime one of them said something like, "Hi," Harry would do a Madeye and try to jynx them. It took Harry a while to calm down afterwards. After a week, Harry started to get used to seeing them around the house. Two weeks later, during the morning, Hermione and Lily took Ginny to St. Mungos, the reason was unknown to Harry but he knew that it was none of his business.
"How long do you think the girls are going to be at the hospital?" asked Ron while reading the Daily Prophet.
"It could be a while." said Harry drinking tea.
Ron and Harry were alone in the kitchen while Sirius and James were meeting Dumbledore and the Order. The news about Harry, Dumbledore, Sirius, Lily, James, and Cedric being alive freaked the Order out more than Ron, Hermione, and Ginny felt when they found out.
At twelve o'clock, James and Sirius came back from the meeting saying that Snape was still in Azkaban in a high security vault that was guarded dragons. Harry, Ron, Sirius, and James sat in the living room talking about the meeting. By one o'clock, Lily, Hermione, and Ginny came back saying that they have excellent news.
" I'm pregnant." Ginny said quietly and nervous.
"Well, congratulations." said Sirius holding out his hand towards Harry which he didn't hesitate to shake. He also shook James' hand. Ron however, stared horror strucked at Harry.
"Harry, Ginny, Hermione, " said Ron, still staring at Harry, "can I please see you in the bedroom?"
Harry, Hermione, Ginny, and Ron walked out of the living room into there room. When Harry shut the door and faced Ron, he saw that Ron was looking angry at him and Ginny.
"How can you get my little sister pregnant?!" Ron asked alomst shouting.
"Um, hello!" Ginny said loudly, "little sister standing right here!" But Ron ignored her.
"Well?" Ron said, reminding Harry of Mrs. Weasley.
"I don't know why you're mad, Ron," said Hermione sternly, "I mean, it's not like you didn't do that to me!" It was indeed, true that Hermione was a month pregnant, but Ron ignored her also.
"Ron," started Harry bracing himself in case Ron was going to punch him in the face, "not to be rude or anything, but I think you're being a little overprotective. I mean, Hermiones right, you also got her pregnant, and also its not mine or Ginny's fault, " Harry added, "its not like we planned for this to happen!" And at this point, Ron was starting to look alot less angry.
"I know, sorry." he said, "I guess I am a little overprotective."
"A little?" Hermione whispered to Ginny, but once again, Ron ignored them.
"Forget it." said Harry smiling which Ron returned.
Sorry if that was short, but that was all I can think of. I'll post later, bye
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05-26-2006, 01:33 AM
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| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
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Wow, awsome!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!! Now I think Ron and Hermione,Harry and Ginny too, should have a doubble wedding! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-01-2006, 01:36 AM
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| Jobberknoll
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Great idea, but I'm sorry to say that I'm not going to write about that in this chapter, but I will later. Here's chapter
Surprise Part 2
For the next six months, Ginny stayed at the house to relax. Everyday Lily and Hermione stayed at home to keep Ginny company and to help her around the house.
On July fourth, Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny went to the park to watch the fireworks. After about a half hour, Ginny suddenly said,
"Harry, I think it's time."
Ron, Hermione, and Harry stopped gazing at the fireworks and looked at Ginny,
"Are you sure?" Harry urgently asked.
"Yes!" Ginny said loudly.
"Oh man, we got to go to St. Mungo's!" Ron said, almost shouting, and with that, they all Apparated to St. Mungo's where the Healers had Ginny and Harry go into a room where she can give birth while Ron and Hermione waited in the waiting room. After a few minutes, James, Lily, Sirius, and everyone in the Order came into the waiting room after they heard about what was going on.
After two hours, Harry walked over to the group and said,
Hey, do you guys want to see the twins?" Then he, and the group left the waiting room into the room where Ginny was. Ginny was laying in a bed holding a pair of beautiful twins, one had bits of jet-black hair like Harry and the other had red hair like Ginny. Harry thought they reminded him of his parents so he decided to name them Lily and James.
"They look beautiful." whispered Lily.
"Congratulations." said Sirius shaking Harry's hand.
"Thanks." Harry said smiling. He was very happy to know that he was the father of a pair of beautiful babies, he had never felt so proud in years.
sorry if that was short, but that was all that I could think of. I hope you liked it
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06-08-2006, 05:40 PM
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hey new reader!
this is absolutely fabulous!
i love your ideas!
PAMS!
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