oooooooo lol I feel rather dumb now but what the hey. http://rpland.conforums2.com << go there I'm in charge of the Green Day boards *feels proud* its new so there aint many members

here's one I just did, rather mixed up {and poor quality. sorry}

I've crashed back into reality
I've landed hard
My throat is burning
My tongue is charred.
The whole world's spinning
Round we all go
No clue what I'm doing
Hate to say I told you so.
Don't ask me what I'm saying
I have no clue
The only words that make sense
Are I need you.

Didn't join, but I read that thread and...are you BillieObsessor? lmao. That poem is pretty good. Sounds like something I would write. But, in a good way mind you. You should put the "I need you" in quotations, though. Because I'm a grammar freak like that. But anyway the poem is no more mixed up than anything else I've written lately...

lol yes I am billieobsesser howd you guess lol

OK I stole the 'I don't care' from Green Day but it's a common phrase lol I even have my own little tune to this one but I can't write it down. Maybe I should try it on the guitar and write it in tab form....

I don't care if you went without me
I don't even care if you had a great time
I don't really care what you all say about me
And I don't ****ing care if not caring's a crime.
Hate me all you like cos I don't ****ing care
I know I'm repeating I'll repeat it all day
I don't care I don't ****ing care I don't care
What the **** you say.

Clue about the ****'s.... rhymes with truck lol

rhymes with truck.... is it LUCK?? or maybe BUCK?? What about STUCK?? lol

i get it... you don't care! i like that one!!

That's great. Not caring is fun. Well no it isn't but you know what I mean. It reminds me of that one I wrote...caring feelings...the lamest name in the world but I felt like being ironic. Anyway I don't have the guts to swear so much. I'd probably feel a lot better if I did.

tyty *feels proud* is it possible to swear too much? do i do it? oh well.
sorry I was trying to write something good but I've been nicotine free for 3 days and I'm dying lol- is that bad? So this is all I got

Typing to occupy my fingers
Tapping the keys
Tapping the desk
My lungs need the filth they take in best.
Give me a cigarette or two or three
I'm chewing my fingers desperately.
Don't tell me I shouldn't do it
Don't tell me it's bad for me
Don't tell me what it's doing to my body
Just give me a cigarette or three!!
I know I could die younger but I don't really care
My paradise isn't no-smoking- maybe you could meet me there?

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH!! Gurl, I feel ya!! I feel ya!! I'm so meeting you there!!! LoL!!! THIS, I can relate to! Sorry, I'm bad... wait, how old are you??

Heh, that's why I'm glad I've never smoked. There's one thing I'm not sorry about. And it's not one of those things I've reserved for starting as soon as I'm 18, either. That's for tattoos and piercings. Both of my older sisters smoked for a couple years but quit. The smell of smoke just makes me sick. I mean, I'm one of those *good girls* who doesn't get involved, if for no other reason than it doesn't interest me. Anyway, I'm hyper enough, nervous energy, without craving nicotene. And btw, when you say you've been nicotene free for 3 days, it makes me think of 'I haven't drank or smoked or **** in over 22 days so get off of my case'. Lol. Anyway I think that's all the talking I need, so....yeah.

sorry its been a while but ive been ridiculously busy and ill :violin:

this one was inspired by dumbledore saying 'I acted as Voldemort expects we fools who love to act'

We fools who love.
To care too much about a friend or lover
To risk everything because we love one or the other,
To leave your heart open for anyone to take
We fools who love suffer much heartbreak.
We fools who love.
To love a brother, a sister, a mother, a father
We fools who love just make our lives harder;
To be willing to give your life to spare another
We fools who love can do no other.
We fools who love.

It's just a Phase


I'm just another misunderstood
Misheard teenager.
Don't listen to me or what I say
Its only a phase I'm in anyway.
I'll grow out of soon
I'm only young
Take no notice of me or what I do
I'll soon grow up and be just like you.
I don't know how to think for myself
Hey wait a minute
I'm already there
I'm just like you I'm all grown up
Can't think for myself I'm all ****ed up.
I'll take back my mind please
I'll think for myself
Nothing has changed much from what I can see
It's still me V the world the world against me.
It's just a phase.

Very TOO true. I know not what else to say. Beautiful.

ty i thought you'd forgotten me *tear* lol

Short one - 'Leave me Alone'

Why can't everyone just leave me alone
If I want my music on so loud
You can't hear me fighting with the walls
Then that's just what I'll do.
I don't need you to ask if I'm OK
My hearts still beating I seem to be breathing
That's all you need to know so just
Get out of my face and leave me alone.


Just to say how much it annoys me when just because I'm not jumping around like tigger on speed everyone thinks I'm depressed.

Again, true. Yeah, I hadn't forgotten you, I was away for a week. Camping, of all things. And it was "just for fun." My ****. Anyway though I did read Catcher In the Rye and now have one more thing in common with Billie Joe but...I missed my computers. Anyway, the whole thing now with the poems having to be Potterrelated...********, I say. I mean it makes sense and all but...d@mn. It sucks anyway. You should read Catcher. So....[/end me ranting]

noooo that sucks! having to post hp poetry! but.. but... noooo! o well i suppose i'll have to post on another site :erm:

Yeah I know. Pfeah.

a paint a picture one with its deadly twist! maybe in my wirst or crave it in my skin! iii grin and see the sight of red my promblems gone forever i wish!

hey u guys i know iam not a good poet but heres a happy one! that i worte ages a go i my notebook plz dont laugh! its listen to your heart!

if u can live the life that you believe in you will have everything you need to reach your dream.
Just look into your heart and you'll find confidence in yourself that will make each challenge easier to face!.

you'll discover the hope that will keep u believeing you'll find inner strenght that will help you past obstacles... and you'll see the happiness that's waiting for you if you keep trying.. struggle for ur dream its worth trying for struggle lie strenght and fullfillment... listen 2 the heart and u will reach the dream and suceed!


ok people what do u think i know the short little poem i worte above was quick and kinda stupid! plz tell!

hey
:hello: Woah. Your poetry is so dark. :faint: I love it. Every time i try to darken my poetry it ends up murderous or suicidal. :bye:
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