Hey!!! This is just some poetry I've worked up the courage to post. Don't get me wrong, by all means, Constructive critizizim is...well..constructive!!!

Fairy Tale Dream

You go to bed at the end of a long day,
Letting the darknessand your dreams take you.
You dream of the perfect life, family, friends and all.
Perfect life, perfect dream.

You smile, thinking it's true.
It's diferent than your defective life.
Everything's perfect.
But it's not

It's just your fairy tale dream

Bad, or what? Pleasse R&R!!! I'll have more up soon as soon as I find my notebook!!! Thanx!!! :online2long:

Ohh!!! Ohh!!! Don't email me. Just, Pm me if you like it!!!! Why can't we be friends??? :bouncepea:

SPAM!!! (love it!!!)

Somemore!!!

Dialated

So Ill walk the plank
And I'll do it with a smile
If I'm gonna go down
I'm gonna do it with a style
and you won't see me surender
You won't hear me confess
cuz you've left me with nothing
and I've worked with less.


Bold Move

track each trickle
back to its source
then scream up the faucet
till your face is hoarse
cuz your surrounded by a lifes worth
of things you just cant excuse.

I like these. hope you do too!!!

Heres ONE more. I wont post no more till anyone else posts.

A Toast

Heres a toast to all the nurses and doctors
who daily provide women with a choice
who stand down a threat the size of oklahoma City
Just to hear a young womens voice.

Okay, maybe two.

Once Upon a time...

Once upon a time
we were a happy family.
We sang our songs in key
We lived in perfect harmony.
Until something destroyed that.
Once upon a time
We were a happy family.
Or were we?

This ain't mine. It's a song by Evenescence called MY IMMORTAL. i love it. It's my second fave after wheres the Love by Black eyed peas.


I'm so tired of being here
supressed by all my childish fears
And if you have leave
I wish that you would just leave
because your presence still lingers here
and it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
this pain is just too real
Theres just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
when you screamed I'd fight away all of you fears
I held your hands through all of these years
but you still have all of me.
You used to captivate me by your most resignating minds
now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts my most pleasent dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
these wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
Theres just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I've tried so hard to tell myself that youre gone
and though youre still with me
I've been alone all along.

Hey, it's nice! Great work!

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Merry/Happy Christmas!!!!! :snowman:

Um, this is gonna be hard since I don't have my notebook.I'll post some rough stuff and when I find my notebook, I'll put the real ones up.

Alone

Alone at night,
with only you
beside me

I have to leave
This is one time too many

No one should feel this alone.

Okay,


Oh this is soooooo hard without my notebook!!!! I'll have more up X-mas day. Sorry!!! :online2long:

I have too much free time!!!


You

When I was down
you helped me up
When I was hurt
you nursed me back to health
when I was happy
You also rejoyced

You were my eyes
You were my ears
You are my heart.

One word. Talent.

Its GREAT!! Your really talented!

Omg! You have so much talent you are incredible!

Thanxs!!! You love me!!! You really love me!!!
Here's some more!!!

Life

A bloody moon
a singing love
a smeared sky
a black rose
an easy picture
a delerious sleep
a sweet dream
a misty light
a bitter recall
a tiny lie
an enormous ache
a smooth shadow
a void moment
a lucious petal
a replusive moan
an essential shine
a vivid vision
a delicate whisper
a frantic storm
an elaborate cry
a white winter
a top road
a rusted summer
a wet sound
a manipulated death.


Smooth Blood, Black and White

What I said will hit you,
" smooth blood, black and white
I cannot escape
and I cannot forget"

You were strong,
I was weak
you picked me back up off the floor
and set me up on my feet
I trusted you,
But you stabbed me in the back.

What I said will hit you,
" smooth blood, black and white
I cannot escape
and I cannot forget"


You Can't

You beat me down
and put me in chains
but you can't rip me of my pride

I was foolish to believe you
I was stupid to trust you
But I never let you hurt me
Inside or out.

You beat me down
and put me in chains
but you can never rip me of my pride


Always and Forever

Through thick and thin
Through dark and light
In sickness and in health
You loved me
Always and forever

When I was down
When I was hurt
You loved me
Always and forever




I'll have more up later!!! Thanxs to all of those who replied!!!

Rock on!!!
















:music_band: :music_band:

Had to get away from all the cameras!!! Ugh!!!

Why Discrimonate?

Why Discrimonate?
Disease, terrorism, fate
knows no color, no race
no look, no face.
Why hurt, kill
and fill
the world with destruction
emptying our hearts
making our view tart?
Why should we descrimonate?

Lost

The feet of my heart
know no path
while my body's feet
just trudge on.
My heart is lost
looking for you
while my body wanders
aimlessly along
I am completely lost.

Snow

The sweet frosty powder
thrown on the earth
like icing on the pie
Sprinkled from high above
gently
each one helps
form the intricate blanket.

Blue Sky Masterpiece

Streached out over an easel
a masterpiece
repleaced at night by G0ds own fingers
with black canvas
splattered with white spots, and blotsnight and day
The blue sky masterpiece.

Like I said, I'll post more later!!! Thanks for
R&R!!!

If any of you are members tell others to please check this out!!! I would really like people to read my poetry!!!

Sorry, none today, I'm way too tired. Sorry!!!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!



SPAM!!! Sorry!!! Just can't be helped!!! (me)

Thank you all for reviewing my poetry. It means so much to me that you guys like it!!!

YAY for angst!!!!! It's so nice to see someone else on this site who appreciates the dark, depressing, and disturbing! I was beginning to think only Harry Potter stuff was appreciated But great job, keep up the good work

I'll post one more poem for the night!!!

Letters to a No-Where-ville

My eyes blurred,
my voice raspy
from crying
I throw myself down
and write write write.
I start out
thinking they'll go to someone
somewhere
Thinking, somewhere
someone knows my pain
reading these letters.
Letters,
Letters to someone.
Letters
to a nowhere-vile.

Rock on and keep writing your talents could be songs just so ya know! :music_band:

Great!

You seriously have some major talent.

One word: Excellent!

Thanxs!!! : wipes away invisible tear: You really do love me! I'll try to get somemore up. If you like this, check out my story called Essence Divided. Thanxs again for reading my poetry!

I'll check out your story the title seems cool!