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Hey guys.... :hello: I will post all my poetry in here... and please review! |
----------------------------------- She Lied... I don't care She's my nightmare She lied I cried I don't care what she says I hate her these days. ----------------------------------- |
---------------------------------------------------- Deceived You told me I wasn’t strong But I know that you’re wrong You’re the one who’s weak My advice you always seek When will you realise That I won’t compromise The person that I am You have nothing to say Think you’re in control day after day You had us deceived The lies we in believed Were is the girl I though I knew A soup of lies you always brew Who are you really? You think it’s your right to be mad But to be honest you’re really sad Your friends is running away They have seen the real you one day Now your sitting in the darkness With no one to bring you happiness So what have you become? ------------------------------------------------------------ |
Will someone please reply???? |
-------------------------------------- Poison You words are like poison They take away my senses You look at me like Life has no consequenses ------------------------------------- |
-------------------------------------- Free. Hope fills me up inside There is no need to hide I finally broke free I am all that I can be No longer under your spell It's just a nightmare from hell. -------------------------------------- |
these are extremely well written! i really really enjoyed them. you shoudl keep writng, because ill keep reading! |
Thanks... your the first one to reply so I was kinda scared.... |
------------------------------- Speechless. A big black wall I feel so small There's no way back Of spirit I lack I want to get out But can not shout I'm going speechless Swallowed by darkness. ------------------------------- |
well i nejoyed reading them, and i like that last one too, but i dotn see why you would be scared.... maybe you could read mine? (its called Alyonna's Poetry) |
Sure I'll go read them now... -------------------------------------- Big Brown Eyes He looks at me With his big brown eyes And I can see He will never tell me lies My heart beats so fast Does he like me? And would it last? Can he see? With him I want to be. ------------------------------------- This is my favorit of all my poems... |
ooh i like that one, and thanx for reviewing my stuff! |
i like ur poetry! keep it uP! |
Thanks... woaw... people are actually replying! yay! -------------------------------------- The Pain It hurts so much I can't hold on I feel out of touch It's been for so long The pain will win It always does i don't know where to begin And that's just because... ------------------------------------- |
very very very well written! but i love them ALL! |
-------------------------------- xxxxxxx He makes me feel weak His guidance I seek He completes me We are forever to be I am in love It is like heaven above -------------------------------- |
------------------------------------- Goodbye I'm going to cry Why do you say goodbye I'd miss you so I can't let go Stay with me And you will see The world through new eyes A world without lies --------------------------------------- |
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