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Old 10-03-2003, 09:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Poem #1

What is Dark?
A sky without the Lark,
Sitting there, Resting,
A 12:00 Blessing
Nowhere to go,
Nothing to show
Supporting the stars,
planets and Mars,

But it is more than that...

It's the feeling of empty,
With no one near,
The depressing fact,
That you dread to fear,

Experienced daily,
On a casual basis,
The thought comes to you,
Its your own little stasis,

But it is even more than that...

The corrupting mind,
Against the Will and Heart,
Sending the Good away,
And Freindships Apart

Poem #2

Where is it?
What is it?
What do you know?
What should i do?
and Where should I go?

Poem #3

Casting several Charms...
Chanting many Curses ...
This poem is about Harry,
All of the Verses

One day he wakes up
Scar on his head
Not knowing what happened
His parents are dead

The lighting bolt burns
Still clueless, is harry
But his life will change
And it gets a little scary

He finds out hes a wizard
It comes as a shock
Uses Alohomora
To open a lock

Meets up with freinds
Such as Hermione and Ron...
They help him recoup
With his parents gone

Thousands of adventures
A lot of stuff to do
Meets up with his enemy
Numerous times too

Fearless, and Brave
Harry Changes
Encounters more bad guys
Such as Lestranges (That was a really bad rhyme...Forgive me)
 
Old 10-03-2003, 11:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, I like it. The rhyming scheme is pleasing. The first stanza is nice, the whole content is clear. :up:
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Old 10-08-2003, 09:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you Noseinabook
 
Old 10-08-2003, 09:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wow, very nice job, keep up the work!
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Old 10-09-2003, 02:41 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you Nsyncrockerchic
 
Old 10-11-2003, 12:28 AM   #6 (permalink)
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its...interesting. sort of different, but thats cool.
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