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Nikki's Poems These aren't very good. I just tried writing some one day and this is all I got. lol. I shut myself away. The door to my soul is locked. My heart is forever enclosed in a box Where no one can see The way I really feel. Not a soul can hear these trapped, deafining songs that I sing. When I scream, Not a soul can hear Even when my throat burns. All the pain, seems to never end. This bleeding inside me. I've come to realise that it wasn't even real It was all in my head... Here's another one. Forever lost in your eyes The windows to the soul. I see differently in a world of your own. You take all the fear and all the pain and lock them deep inside throwing away the key. Hmm... yeah, not very good... ah, well. It was worth a try. *tee hee* |
Aww... nobody likes my poems? Hah... just kidding.. I know the yare horrible. Here's some I did today for fun. This one is for my puppy Razzy: You Just a Razzle-Dazzle up my world. Razzy Dazzy You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world. When it seems that I'm down and grey You come wagging your tail happy as a sunshine ray Razzy Dazzy You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world. You are the joyful bliss in my gloomy tommorrow I love your wet kiss with not a trace of sorrow. Razzy Dazzy You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world. Haaha.. this one I did for fun: Golden Song Ding Dong The pendalum swings The whole world stops but the clock moves on. Singing that Golden Song. Hello time the arrow's pointing to you Giving our world It's rightful due. The wooden frame the stars will sing to the merciful abyss where the pendelum swings. Singing that Golden Song. Kinda stupid and corny. Ah, well.. This is for my fishies in my fishtank: Shining like stars covered in glitter they swim through the plants that never wither. The water tickles These sparkley fish and splashes about in their joyful bliss. Resting at the bottom of there peaceful dome are colorful pebbles making them feel at home. But even with the comfort they still wish to be on their own just like regular fish. They still feel trapped even with these plastic treasure chests they wish they were free, oh please... Books- I love books, so I wrote this. *tee hee* Their many pages, their glowing look makes me feel like I am a part of the book. When I read, I read for fun. There is no telling when I'll be done For reading puts me in an enjoyable state it takes me away to a different time and date The feel of all the pages puts a smile on my face I never want to finish in such a haste. Haha... hope you like! |
I guess I'm officially your first reader! :whistle: They're all very good Snooty Snitch, but it would be better if you gave them names. Keep posting! I want more! :lol: |
Haha, I gave, like, 2 of them names... I'm bad at that. Oh, well, I'll try. lol. Thanks for reading! I am very happy! Yay. I didn't think anyone was gonna reply. ha. |
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Ha. I guess I'm working on one, its not finished though. So, I'll tryyyyyyyyyy as hard as I can. Woo!! YEah, well, i need ideas. If you've got any, help me pleaseeee. <3 |
I really like your poems, you're an excellent writer, keep posting! I would try to give you some ideas but I've got a little case of writers block. Anyway, please post more soon! Edit: Oh no! my computer was on my friends username! :dunce: eh, anyways this is really from FireboltFreak not HocusPocus1313. :dunce: |
Hiya Firebolt Freak! So you and HocusPocus are frnds? Cool! Snootu Snitch, something on friendship plz. I'm tired of waiting. |
I love poetry and I really like these poems they're sooo cool I especially love the first one |
Wow it's been a while! Sooo Sorry! School and stuff, but heres that one on friendship. It's dumb... My Best Friend A helping hand in a time of need a shoulder to cry on when the world is full of greed. You're my best friend what would I do without you? You help me through the bad times and through the good ones too. You lend me a smile when all I have are frowns You help me through All of my ups and downs. You're my best friend. Here's another poem: It's almost like a fairytale it's happening, but it doesn't feel true a moment when the world stops and all i see is you. It's like a smile in a world of frowns A circle of life that has it's ups and downs. And then you fade away Away from existence, away from pain. You are no more to hold and it feels like I'm going insane. |
If only you'd wake up and see My love is breaking through climbing higher, reaching out just to take hold of you. I want you to see My love as it breaks free. Caressing you, touching you, without really meaning to... |
Well, Here's a love poem.. stupid guy. I've been writing these alot.. haha. Someday My Love Someday My Love The truth will break free and we'll be together Just you and me. Someday My Love You'll begin to realize That we were meant to be Just open your unseeing eyes. And then we can finally breath the words that were meant to be said We'll hold on to each other Until the very end. Someday My Love. |
Awesome updates! They're really good. Keep it Sweet and simple ;) ~~RQT |
My love for you is out of control I take a glance at you My breathing stops, my heart plunges My eyes linger onto your face hoping to stay My love for you is out of control. I look the other way Afraid of my feelings, but wanting to feel. I can't help it, I'm attracted to you. My love for you is out of control. Your personality is just right I laugh when I want to cry I find amusement in the strangest things you say anything you say. My love for you is out of control. Everytime I think of you My heart skips a beat I seem to float And I can't breath My love for you is out of control. |
Awwh, thanks xoxxtinaxox09!!! |
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