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My Poetry! Shadows in My Mind In my mind I am never alone I am never at peace I am always left in deep shadow Abondoned, lonely, deceased. Darkness swirls around my eyes Blocking out all the light I can not hear, I can not think I am trapped within the night Someone help me, someone come Are my cries falling on deaf ears? Can you see? I am here! But I am invisible among all my peers. You can not save me, can you? We can not turn back time All I know is that there is no escape Within the shadows of my mind. What do you think? |
This is really, really, really good. It's like, whoa. It even rhymes! I have trouble even doing that with my stupid poems. It's awesome. |
I love it. It is really great!! can't wait to read more! |
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