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05-14-2005, 10:20 AM
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#26 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| United
Crawling through the darkness nigh,
Death does creep to you and I.
It stops thy heart, it steals thy breath,
And freezes heart beneath thy breast.
Worry not, my trustful friend,
Together we'll defeat this fiend.
We'll stand together, so that we may,
Survive until the break of day.
For when day comes,
This death runs,
Fleeing the light,
It lives at night.
So come, stand over here with me,
We'll greet the day merrily,
But until then we must,
Stand together, each other trust.
~I'd like some feedback on this poem. I can't tell if it's depressing or not. And I want a better name for it too.
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06-08-2005, 10:21 AM
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#27 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Bad Day
Got nothin 2 say,
Had a bad friggin day.
My head hurts, my stomach too,
and I'm ****** off @ you.
I feel sick, wanna go go home,
Tear you from your plastic throne.
I just wanna go 2 bed,
or maybe rip off your head?
I'm sick, I'm sad I've had enough,
Get lost; go get f****ed.
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06-08-2005, 10:23 AM
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#28 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Rulers
Darkness rules the night
The night rules the earth
The earth rules my life
My life rules my heart.
Until my heart rules my life
My life rules the earth
The earth rules the night
And the night rules darkness.
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06-08-2005, 10:24 AM
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#29 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Chains of Society
You keep me chained,
As I scream for escape,
I chain myself
To this cold, cruel world.
Wearing a mask,
Faking my thoughts,
Not being me
As society demands.
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06-08-2005, 10:29 AM
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#30 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Double Standard
"Be yourself"
I am told.
Yet when I do
I'm put on hold.
"Do what you want"
people say.
And yet they want
things done their way.
Is it just me?
Or can you see?
The web of lies,
Beneath which society hides.
There's no way to win,
no way in.
Its an unfair world,
and society is cold.
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06-10-2005, 11:19 AM
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#31 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Truth
There is no such thing as truth.
We all believe the sky to be blue,
But if I were to say it were purple,
I may be right.
There is no such thing as real.
We all believe earth to be real,
But I were to say it never existed,
I may be right.
How do we know things are,
as they are?
Do we say these things,
out of our mind mind?
Or have we just been continioned
To believe these lies?
So what is the truth?
Or is it not there at all?
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06-24-2005, 12:50 PM
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#32 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
| Spazzy Kittens
Spazzy Kittens
4 U
Spazzy Kittens
go moo
Spazzy Kittens
tee hee
Spazzy Kittens
4 me!
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06-24-2005, 12:51 PM
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#33 (permalink)
| Horklump
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Um...maybe...I dunno?
Posts: 49
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