My HP Poetry Sa9+
 

heres the first one that I wrote about HP...just wrote it right now

The Veil

I hide behind these smiles that so many believe are true.
Those that know my true pain are very, very few.
My last remaining relative is dead and gone.
Sirius Black was his name, and his spirit still lives on.

He died at the ministry because he fell through a veil.
And, I just wish that this pain was not real.
I feel so responsible, like it is all my fault he died.
That’s what my nightmares tell me late, late at night.

No one has been the same since he died, but I have changed the most.
And his evil cousin Bellatrix, who killed him, feels like she should boast.
If it weren’t for those death eaters, and Voldemort himself,
I would have parents, and a godfather, instead of putting my life on a shelf.

The tears all fall, and I can’t stop them flowing.
But, these feelings are something I just hate showing.
I just try to convince myself that it’s all a dream and he never failed.
And that he’s not dead; that he’s just lost behind the veil…

by: Breana Steele (me)

a new poem!
 

Best Friends

Our friendship is so strong.
It has lasted for so long.
We are so different, but yet so alike.
We always come through, even when we fight.

There’s Hermione, she’s so smart and cool.
She never ever gets caught being a fool.
But there’s more than just the girl behind her studies.
Cause in reality, she’s one of my best buddies.

And then there’s Ron, the red headed goof ball.
But me and him have survived though it all.
Our friendship has lasted through the years.
Even through tears, and our worst fears.

Then there’s me,
Harry Potter, the celebrity.
Ron and Hermione were there through it all.
Even at the ministry when we watched Sirius fall.

They dried my tears;
Helped me live through my fears.
Laughed many laughs with me,
Solved a few mysteries.

We are inseparable until the sky falls.
Remember the memories in the Hogwarts halls.
The trio will exist until the world ends.
Because Ron and Hermione are truly my best friends.

By: Breana Steele (me)

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hope u guys like! if anyone even reads this! haha ok well ill post more later in the mean time check out my fan fiction "7th Year for the Marauder's and Me" (romance section), and "How do I live without you?" (romance section also) also in scribbulus everchanging ink, i have bannerz by bre and dollz made by bre if u guys wanna request! talk to you later!

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another new poem..kinda long but READ IT!
 

Scary

People judge me, so I hide behind my books
To avoid peoples’ annoyed looks.
Just because I actually care about my grades in school,
People act like I’m not even a little bit cool.

But I have two best friends who know the real me.
Their names are Harry Potter and Ron Weasley.
We have great times together.
Talking and laughing in any weather.

In our first year, we battled a three headed dog which was scary enough in the first place.
But then, Harry battled Voldemort, face to face.
He survived, but the battle was not through.
Because of what happened in year two.

Ron’s sister Ginny was possessed by The Dark Lord in year two.
I was petrified by a giant basilisk and Harry and Ron went into the chamber, its true.
Professor Lockheart lost his memory, and Tom Riddle’s diary is now gone.
Harry survived thankfully, and so did Ginny and Ron.

In our third year, Sirius Black broke out of jail.
People thought that he was going to kill Harry, which was just a tale.
Ron’s rat Scabbers was an evil little man and Sirius was Harry’s godfather, its true!
Sirius escaped and went into hiding, and oh he took Buckbeak too.

In our fourth year, Harry was a triwizard champ and faced many phases.
Like a dragon, merpeople, and long twisted mazes.
It was all a trap, and Lord Voldemort came back.
And we all kept in touch with Sirius Black.

In our fifth year, Umbridge came and she was a pain.
He was still out there, he-who-must-not-be-named.
We went to the ministry to hear a prophecy, this is not a tale!
That’s when Sirius died because he fell through a veil.

Finally, in our sixth year, there was a full fledged war going on.
Fun things were no longer fun.
Death was everywhere, even Hogwarts cried.
Because in the end, because of Snape, Dumbledore died.

The Death Eaters are still loose, and Snape is among them.
Harry has to battle Voldemort, and he intends to kill him.
So what will our 7th year bring? I can only guess as to what it will…
But in the end, who will end up being killed.

We will just have to wait and see
To find out our true destiny.
Everyone is scared as to what is going to happen to them and Harry.
What was once a peaceful world is now downright scary…

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hope u likey!! ill post more later!

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Nightmare by Breana Steele (me)
 

Nightmare

The veil waves through the air.
I see his long, black hair.
I reach for his hand to pull him back out.
But in the end, I just shout.
I see him battling Bellatrix saying, “Is that all you’ve got?”
Bellatrix soon showed him that it was not.
He fell through the veil, and I tried to catch his fall.
But he slipped through my hands, and I flew to the wall.
The tears fell, I was reliving it again.
He was dead, my godfather, and great friend.
We don’t even know where his body lies.
And it seems as though no one hears my cries.
The veil waves through the air.
And I wake up screaming, because of a nightmare…

By: Breana Steele (me)

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REPLY PPLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I LOVE THEM ALL!! ^_^ Especially 'Scary'.... Awesome job with all 6 years' events there! Keep up the good work!!

Oh, and am I the first to post?? Yay I'm your first reader!! :flowers: *hands you a flower*

thanks so much for posting and ill post more soon!!!

hehe sorry it took so long...im updating

Quidditch

I fly through the air, going as fast as I can.
My goal is to get the snitch securely in my hand.
The keepers are scoring.
The crowd is roaring.
Bludgers are flying through the air.
There is action everywhere.
Suddenly a glimmer of gold catches my eye.
It’s about 20 feet higher than I in the sky.
I pick up my speed, I pick up my pace.
I get serious, and put on my game face.
The other seeker is behind, yes I’m far ahead.
That other team might as well be dead.
I’m inches away from the tiny golden ball.
My speed gets higher, it just won’t fall.
My fingers grasp the golden glimmer of the snitch.
Now Gryffindor has won yet another game of Quidditch!

oohh... good one!! I love your poems!! They're so much fun to read! :) I write poems too, but I pretty much just focus on the HP 'ships... great job! keep it up!! Post another one soon!! ^_^

MMY SIRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LUFF THE FIRST ONE! I feel the exact same!
I knew we'd meet again. I could see you were too talented to fade away from my memory! They're all very good, like Lai's awesomeness said!
Take her advice, if not mine, she's one of my fav writers on SS!
PAMS! I'll come back!
~~Tina

thanx for the great comments u guys!! im glad that u think im so talented lol!!! haha yess well ill post more sooN!!

hey!! sry i havent posted in so long!!!!! imma write yall a poem right here...hmm it wil be about ron...

With all my siblings, I feel lost in the crowd.
I'm never heard, no matter if my scream is loud.
My red hair blends in with the rest.
Percy always did better on tests.
Fred and George are the funny boys.
Charlie acts like dragons are toys.
Bill has Fleur and Ginny is too popular to believe.
So where does this leave me?
I'm the second to the youngest, that's nothing so great.
I'm not so talented, and my works always late.
How do I stand out in a crowd of seven?
Just to get attention feels like heaven.
Harry understands me, and Hermione is always there.
Him with his celebrity status, her with her books and bushy hair.
Life is okay, but I know it could better.
I don't wanna be stuck in this crowd forever...


i dunno i liked it!! lol its how i would feel if i had so many brothers and sisters.. so yah

loved it!! that was great!! you mentioned my George... :loved: lol

Your pomes are really good. I loved the last one.

yay!!! new reader!! lol ya!! love yah bunches