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Believe 08-04-2006 06:36 PM

My Best Memory - Sa9+
 
Hey everyone! I'm Cai, and this is my second fic! But this one is a one-shot! I hope you like it! It's about Lily and James, but it's coming from James' point of view. My other fanfic is called 'What the Girls Think...' which I highly recommend you check out! I love feedback, whether it's good or bad. So please don't hesitate with it. And remember, this is a one-shot, so there won't be any more after this. Let me know what you think...

<3 Cai

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My Best Memory


The day was February 26th, and I was in my seventh year. I was standing by the lake, thinking of a certain someone. It was a Hogsmeade weekend, so the lake was deserted. I didn’t feel like going to Hogsmeade. After a while, it gets pretty boring. Especially when your best mate is off snogging some girl every time. Who the girls are is still a mystery to me.

Anyway, I heard soft footsteps walking towards me. I looked over to see Lily slowly making her way over, alone. This confused me, for she never comes near me alone. Actually, she never comes near me at all.

She stopped right next to me, looking up into my eyes. I continued to stare out at the lake, but I could still see her out of the corner of my eye.

“Lily,” I said simply. And yes, I call her Lily now. I’ve been calling her by her first name for a while.

“Hey James,” she said softly. You see that? No more Potter! It’s James now!

“Can I help you?” I asked plainly. Now don’t yell at me for the way I’m speaking. In a way, she sort of deserves it. Last night, I told her how I felt about her and she just ran away.

“I wanted to apologize,” she said slowly. Really? You want to apologize? For what? Hurting me? Breaking my heart? Making me look like an idiot?

I was waiting for her to finish, but she stopped there. I turned to look at her and our eyes locked. I could see sadness and guilt in her eyes. Good! Now she knows how I feel! “Continue,” I replied impatiently.

Her eyes slightly widened, I’m guessing because of my tone. Then, I saw a few tears in her beautiful green eyes. That’s when I felt guilty.

“James, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you,” she said quietly. Well then what did you mean to do, Lily?

I scowled lightly. “Well you did,” I said forcefully, then started to walk away.

She grabbed my arm to stop me. I slowly turned around to face her. Her tears were now silently falling down her cheeks. “James, please don’t do this to me,” she pleaded.

“Do what?! Run away like you did?! Well I’m sorry, Lily, but you really hurt me! So give me one reason why I should stay,” I shouted. And I’m sorry you had to see that, but she made me angry. She expected me to listen to her after what she did to me last night?

Her eyes were practically begging for me to just listen to her. “Because I have something very important to say,” she replied, her arm still holding onto mine and her eyes leaking out more tears.

I gave her a moment to tell me, but apparently, she was waiting for me to give her permission. “Well? Go on,” I said coldly. I didn’t mean to sound cold, I was just getting frustrated.

A few more tears fell. “James, I’m sorry for running away, but I was scared. I wasn’t expecting for you to tell me you love me just like that. I didn’t know what to think and I guess I felt like I was put on the spot. I never meant to hurt you; I just didn’t know what to do. I’m sorry,” she finished, looking away.

I thought about what she just said. It made me happy, but she still didn’t say what I wanted to hear. I did calm down a bit though. I looked at her, wanting to hold her, but I knew she would never feel the same way.

Though, I had to ask. “And how do you feel?” I asked simply.

She looked back up at me with questioning eyes. Her eyes killed me, especially now. I knew she had an answer, but I also knew she didn’t want to tell me. I figured it was an answer I didn’t want to hear.

I started to shake my head slowly and head back up to the castle, when she stopped me again. This time, though, I didn’t look at her. I continued to face the school.

“I feel upset that you won’t give me the chance to explain,” she started strongly. “I feel guilty for leaving you like I did. I feel angry about how I never listened to what my friends had to say about you. I feel happy because there is actually someone who cares about me.” She walked around to face me. I looked at her and I could see all her emotions through her eyes.

I slowly raised my hand to her cheek and gently wiped away her tears with my thumb. I noticed that she closed her eyes and slowly leaned her head into my hand, as if she didn’t want me to let go. I smiled slightly. “And how do you feel about me?” That’s what I meant to say at first, but I guess I didn’t word it correctly.

She opened her eyes and looked into mine. Her hand moved up to hold mine on her cheek. She smiled warmly. “I feel the same,” she said softly.

You don’t know how happy I was! She really made my day. No, she really made my life. I moved my other hand behind her neck and pulled her into a kiss. It was a long and gentle kiss, but it meant the world to me. Especially, when she started to kiss back.

From that day on, I knew that Lily was going to be my life. And she is. I could not be happier right now. I have the love of my life in my arms, and a child who will grow up to be exactly like us. Nothing could ruin this moment.

CRASH!

Maybe I spoke too soon…

ahshlyn 08-04-2006 08:52 PM

Aww!!! *cries* That was absolutely amazing!!! Too bad it was a one-shot... It didn't actually make me cry but it was so sweet.... :lol:

Oya 08-04-2006 09:05 PM

oowww! this FF is awso amazing!! you are god at this! But they will die now? NOOO! Voldie go back there is no one there!!!!

Believe 08-05-2006 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Ashlyn
Aww!!! *cries* That was absolutely amazing!!! Too bad it was a one-shot... It didn't actually make me cry but it was so sweet.... :lol:

Thanks Ashlyn! I'm glad you liked it!

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Originally Posted by oja
oowww! this FF is awso amazing!! you are god at this! But they will die now? NOOO! Voldie go back there is no one there!!!!

:lol: Thanks oja! And I think he knows that they're home...ha ha!

Agos* 08-05-2006 02:31 AM

Gosh! It was amazing! I loved it!
You are really god, hun!

Lillith_Evans 08-05-2006 03:01 AM

Great one shot! I loved how James was so sarcastic at points!

Really? You want to apologize? For what? Hurting me? Breaking my heart? Making me look like an idiot?


I looked over to see Lily slowly making her way over, alone. This confused me, for she never comes near me alone. Actually, she never comes near me at all.


James was just so cute through this whole story. I loved it ^.^

halfbloodprincess92 08-05-2006 04:26 PM

That was great, Cai! So, sad, though. So, so sad. Made me want to poke James for making Lily seem mean... lol *pokes him* But I guess I would be to...

Anyhoo.

It was fantastic! One of the best one shots I've ever read!

~Rose

carmu 08-05-2006 05:21 PM

wow that was really really really amazin!!!
it was soo sweet! n voldie has 2 ruin it!!!
congrats on a fantastic one-shot!

Believe 08-06-2006 04:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Agos*
Gosh! It was amazing! I loved it!
You are really god, hun!

Thanks Agos! :loved:

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Originally Posted by Lillith_Evans
Great one shot! I loved how James was so sarcastic at points!

Really? You want to apologize? For what? Hurting me? Breaking my heart? Making me look like an idiot?


I looked over to see Lily slowly making her way over, alone. This confused me, for she never comes near me alone. Actually, she never comes near me at all.


James was just so cute through this whole story. I loved it ^.^

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)!

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Originally Posted by Rose
That was great, Cai! So, sad, though. So, so sad. Made me want to poke James for making Lily seem mean... lol *pokes him* But I guess I would be to...

Anyhoo.

It was fantastic! One of the best one shots I've ever read!

~Rose

Rose! I'm so glad you read this! And I'm even more glad that you like it! You're so sweet!

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Originally Posted by carmu
wow that was really really really amazin!!!
it was soo sweet! n voldie has 2 ruin it!!!
congrats on a fantastic one-shot!

Thanks carmu! That means a lot to me! :loved:

Believe 08-06-2006 06:17 PM

*pokes Cai* You never told me you were making a one-shot! Therefore, I never knew. *pokes Cai again* Your fault! Anyway, I'm here and I have to say: This is the best one-shot fic ever!!!! I love it!!!! It made my emotions change all the time. I was sad when Lily started to cry and then I was mad when I found out that she ran away from him. But then I was happy when they kissed! And then sad again when Voldie came! Stupid Voldie! *pokes Voldie* You had to ruin it! Hee hee! It was great Cai! I would say PAMS, but it's a one-shot :(! Hee hee!

Believe 08-06-2006 08:54 PM

:loved: Thanks Laura! You're so sweet! I'm glad you liked it! And yes, Voldie ruined the moment! :lol: So many emotions Laura! Ha ha! I'm really glad you liked it!

<3 Cai

FLEUR 08-22-2006 10:40 AM

wow that is good

padfoot_gurl 08-22-2006 10:46 AM

brilliant!!!!loveddddddddddd it
post ASAP
-may

Katie Bell 08-25-2006 12:51 AM

Um i really liked it how you stared of like that it made for a really intersting starting!!

HPlover_09 08-27-2006 06:09 PM

That was amazing! Seriously, it was spectacular!

Believe 08-30-2006 07:05 PM

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Originally Posted by FLEUR
wow that is good

Thank you!

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Originally Posted by may
brilliant!!!!loveddddddddddd it
post ASAP
-may

I'm glad you liked it may, but it's a one-shot... I won't be posting again.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Katie Bell
Um i really liked it how you stared of like that it made for a really intersting starting!!

Thank you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Katie
That was amazing! Seriously, it was spectacular!

Thanks Katie! You're too sweet!

Oya 09-06-2006 02:20 PM

Common Post

Believe 09-06-2006 06:20 PM

I would oja... but this is a one-shot... sorry!

Lissydove 09-07-2006 05:58 PM

Moving to Finished :)


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