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11-30-2009, 01:49 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated |  Mourning - Sa13+ ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Mourning
-the act of sorrow for a person(s) death
Made by Jess, Of S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread].
Dedicated to Marcy, you've been there ever since my first fanfiction. 
Hello! My name's Jess or Jessica. This is my 6th fanfiction in the romance section.  Please read and review. I also update people in messages, if you would like me to update you, please message me. I hope you like it!
Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling.
Jess's Other Stories:
Love is in the Air, Mission Pureblood, Desperate, Wizard POV's and S.O.S. [Jessica's Request Thread]
Posts:
Chapter 2/Chapter 3/Chapter 4/Chapter 5/Chapter 6/Chapter 7/Chapter 8/Chapter 9/Chapter 10/Chapter 11/Chapter 12 /Chapter 13/Chapter 14/Chapter 15 Prologue It had happened. Yes.
The battle has happened.
I have cut myself off from everyone I know. It has been 2 years and all the contacts from my friends I've been ignoring. I need this, a new life. Something new to start with. If I take one look at anybody that I knew before I will break down and I did that for a year. Now after 5 years I've started out new.
I moved out of my parent's old house and I have a flat in London. I've began to work as a waitress at Cafe Le Rose. I barely use magic anymore, unless I'm at my house. This is my story, the story of my Mourning...
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I was walking down the old brick stairs of my flat porch out into the crisp, cool morning. I breathed out and saw my breath in the air, like a fog. I hugged my warm red, fuzzy coat closer to me as the cold wind blew against me. I crossed the cross-walk on the street, avoiding cars, and walked for two blocks. I saw the blue and white sign, Cafe Le Rose. I took out the key from my pocket and unlocked the door to the Cafe.
As I walked in I surveyed the area, white, circular tables all around, except for the gray square tables right by the windows looking out the lake. I sighed and switched on the lights. I put on my apron which was blue with the Cafe's name printed upon it. I started up the cash register and sat down behind the counter, waiting for the other employees to come. Ten minutes later my friend Emma came in.
"Hey Emma." I said smiling, standing up, straightening out my apron.
"Hey Hermione." Emma said, hanging her coat up on the hanger and switching the sign to OPEN instead of CLOSED.
Fifteen minutes later more and more people were hanging up their coats, getting behind the counters or sitting at tables. I grabbed my pen and notepad and walked over to a man with auburn - red hair and a woman with brown curly hair.
"Welcome to Cafe Le Rose. What can I get for you?" I said smiling at them.
The two were looking down at their menus. The auburn-red haired man spoke first.
"Erm..I'll get the Mocha Latte." He said taking a quick glance once more at the menu. "Oh and a blueberry muffin to go."
I looked down and started to write his order down. The brown-haired woman spoke next.
"Oh I'll have a Strawberry Fruit Smoothie and a blueberry muffin just like my Ronniekins." She said in a squeaky voice.
I wrote that order down then paused. I looked up and gasped. It was Ron and Lavender. Ron had changed quite a bit. His face looked more mature. Then Lavender had become quite beautiful but still the same. How did she live that blasted war.
"Erm...hello?" Ron asked waving a hand in front of my face.
I cleared my throat and shook my head.
"Oh coming right up." I said walking over to the counter and yelling, "Order."
Emma came up and said, "One Mocha Latte, One Strawberry Fruit Smoothie, and two blueberry muffins!"
I could see one of the other employees, Scott, handling with all the drinks and muffins. He got it in five minutes too soon.
"Thanks Scott." I said nodding my head.
I walked over to Ron and Lavender's table and sat down their orders.
"Enjoy." I said faking a smile.
I began to walk away but Ron's voice startled me.
"Have I met you before?" He asked. ----------
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11-30-2009, 02:03 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: At the close.
Posts: 12,424
Graduated
Diagon Alley Proprietor:
Amadeus Alfred Kipling
Owl Post Office Assistant  x7
|  Lady Lem|DJ Melfoy|Braedeus ♥ Stumble|Bebé Melón|B2|Andee & Melsse|Melephone
First Reader! Jess, I love it, so much potential!
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11-30-2009, 02:11 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GMT -5
Posts: 5,385
| Mootabulous | | I ♥ Draco
AHH!!!
I love the plot, seems familiar to me! 
But totally loved it, can't wait for more!
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11-30-2009, 02:15 AM
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|   X-treme Horcrux Slayer!Doxy
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: London Institute!
Posts: 6,063
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ruby Cynthia Ciao
Fifth Year | Gleek in Disguise ll Doctor Who! Daughter of Hades ll Leslie-loo-whoo ♥
Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!!
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11-30-2009, 02:37 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: NYC
Posts: 1,899
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aria Leahy
Graduated | NinjasRule!|I♥Gissel| LEARCE♥ImissyouLOVEEE♥
Hey Heyz!!!! I luv it!!
__________________ Went outside and saw the moon
And it made me think of you
And the rain it came, and came
There you were inside my brain
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11-30-2009, 03:06 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USSEnterprise/GMT -5
Posts: 1,082
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kiana Desiree Remora
Fifth Year | two sides of the same coin
I loved it!
it seems really interesting!
PAMS!!!
-Chrissy
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11-30-2009, 03:13 AM
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| Formerly: DracikinsLuver4321   Mooncalf
Join Date: Oct 2009
Posts: 6,971
| JALIA♥|| Pat&Vanessa♥ ||DAN CER|| [The future Mrs. Efron] || Miss OCD chick
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11-30-2009, 04:53 AM
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|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
Lovely start. && I have to say Jess... YOU HAVE IMPROVED! You have always been a good writer, but this story is even more well-written than usual. Lots of potential here, too! GOOD job, and good luck! <3
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11-30-2009, 06:24 AM
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| Formerly: Lily Lupin Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: New Zealand <3
Posts: 7,987
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ava James
First Year | Facinelli<3 RP Sweetheart
Woooooooow. I agree, lots of potential. It's an interesting start of a plot, too. Even though it doesn't have Malfoy.  | |
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11-30-2009, 06:28 AM
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| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
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Originally Posted by JesshLuffYAY  [CENTER]Mourning
-the act of sorrow for a person(s) death I find this funny, JesshLuffYAY. Not because of the meaning - definitely not, that would be terrible - but because it reminds me of how I ask you for meanings plenty of times, and you look them up on the net and stuff, and then we laugh over all sorts of wacky words like Wowza.
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11-30-2009, 08:22 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name:
isabella Macmillan
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Heya Jess...nice start hun...but hadnt Ron noticed Hermione?god!want to know more...
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11-30-2009, 12:24 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Very intresting...
and i may say also you really have great potential....
yes indeed...
you are becoming a great author...
I want more hun 
-Xavier
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11-30-2009, 03:59 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tilly C. Richards
First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
JESSY! Woah! That's amazing!
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11-30-2009, 09:10 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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First Year | Abby(:
beautiful jess!!!!!!!!! luv it PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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11-30-2009, 11:13 PM
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| Formerly:CaleyShoutCaley<3  Mountain Troll
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 23,670
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lennox Harper
Fifth Year |
Holy Smokes !
This is amazing for suree.
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12-01-2009, 12:17 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
Posts: 277
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Great start
I can't believe Ron is with Lavender!!! Why doesn't Ron recognise Hermione?!?!?!? Did she use magic to change her appearance?!?!?!?
keep writing please
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12-01-2009, 04:36 AM
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| | Lobalug
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Forks,Washington
Posts: 196
First Year |
the post was great and this is goin to be as good as the others cant wait for more
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12-04-2009, 08:34 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 400
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Monica Brennan
First Year | RED VINES!! * AVPM
OMG!!! Jess this is soooo good!! I can't wait to read more from your wonderful mind!! PAMS!!!!
Sammy
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12-05-2009, 10:00 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Behind a book
Posts: 797
First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
OMG! EEP! PAMS! CONTINUE PLEASE!!! *ahem* sorry about that. I was a bit excited.
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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12-06-2009, 12:39 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2009
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Oh I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great writing, great idea, and great cliffhanger! Keep it coming | |
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12-06-2009, 09:05 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated |  Replies To Comments(: ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Replies To Comments:
Hey everyone!
I just wanted to say thank you for all the lovely comments!
You have no clue how much I appreciate them all!
Jess(:
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Originally Posted by Mel<3 First Reader! Jess, I love it, so much potential!
- Love, Mel Yay!  My first reader!!
Thank you so much, I had no clue this story was going to be this good...so far.
Thanks for commenting!
Jess(: hermione9495 (Love Will Hurt & Love Is Dangerous) Quote:
Originally Posted by Marcyluff<3 AHH!!!
I love the plot, seems familiar to me!
But totally loved it, can't wait for more!
Whens the next chapter going to be up? 
 How is it familiar?
Thanks Marcy!
It's nice to hear that you liked it.
Wow, already eager for the next chapter, huh? xD
I should be posting the new chapter later today after I put up some Christmas decorations.
Jess(:
lathelawyer0128 Quote:
Originally Posted by Leslie<3 Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!!
Thank you so much!
*gives a cookie to Leslie*
Jess(: XxSkaterJonasxX Quote:
Originally Posted by Lucy<3 Hey Heyz!!!! I luv it!! Haii! 
Thanks!
<3
Jess(: RoseMalfoy Quote:
Originally Posted by Chrissy<3 I loved it!
it seems really interesting!
PAMS!!!
-Chrissy  
Thank you!
I hope it continues on to be interesting for you.
New chapter should be up later on today.
Jess(: DracikinsLuver4321 (Bring Your Kid to Work Day & Time Heals) Quote:
Originally Posted by Thalia<3
I'm glad you liked it!
Hope you like the rest of it as well!
Jess(: SenoritaMaxie (The Second Road to Death) Quote:
Originally Posted by MaxieluffYAY<3 Lovely start. && I have to say Jess... YOU HAVE IMPROVED! You have always been a good writer, but this story is even more well-written than usual. Lots of potential here, too! GOOD job, and good luck! <3
-clingsfordearlife-
Awww Maxerzzz you're so nice!! <3
Thank you soo much, this comment brightened my day.
Jess(: Quote:
Originally Posted by Maxerzz<3 I find this funny, JesshLuffYAY. Not because of the meaning - definitely not, that would be terrible - but because it reminds me of how I ask you for meanings plenty of times, and you look them up on the net and stuff, and then we laugh over all sorts of wacky words like Wowza.
WOWZA!
I hope you didn't mean the meaning.
I didn't really notice that once I put it up. xD
Looking up words on the internet is funner than you actually think it is.
<3
Jess(: Lily Lupin Quote:
Originally Posted by Ana<3 Woooooooow. I agree, lots of potential. It's an interesting start of a plot, too. Even though it doesn't have Malfoy.
Thanks!
I guess I was really hyped up when I wrote this chapter. xD
Glad to know you liked it!
I was waiting for someone to say that!
Actually....Draco will come soon....
Jess(: harita (Life Post Wizard War) Quote:
Originally Posted by Harita<3 Heya Jess...nice start hun...but hadnt Ron noticed Hermione?god!want to know more...
Thank you!
Well it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war was over.
So Hermione probably has changed since she is 5 years older than what she was during the war.
Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Jess(: ##Hermione&Draco## (I Open At The Close) Quote:
Originally Posted by Xavierluff<3 Very intresting...
and i may say also you really have great potential....
yes indeed...
you are becoming a great author...
I want more hun
-Xavier
Wow lot's of potential, I'm not known for that. xD
Aww thank you, but I don't think I'm becoming an author when I grow up. 
Will do!
Jess(: LilyLunaGinnyPotter (My Story & As the Sun Sets) Quote:
Originally Posted by Lilyluffeh<3
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
JESSY! Woah! That's amazing!
Wow! I mean I thought I was excited about it, but Lily you have shown me that I was wrong. xD
Thank you soo much luff!
Jess(: draco'sgirlraquel! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! beautiful jess!!!!!!!!! luv it PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aww thank you so much!
Jess(: CaleyShoutCaley<3 Quote:
Originally Posted by Caleyluff<3 Holy Smokes !
This is amazing for suree.
PAMS xD
Ahh Caley is herrrreee!!! <3
I'm glad you like it!
I bet you'll see me at school later writing more chapters...
Thanks!
Jess(: norenchen Quote:
Originally Posted by Shell<3 Great start
I can't believe Ron is with Lavender!!! Why doesn't Ron recognise Hermione?!?!?!? Did she use magic to change her appearance?!?!?!?
keep writing please
Shell
Ron is with Lavender...I didn't know that...
No it's been 2 years since they've seen each other and 5 years since the war.
So Hermione has gotten older and has changed.
Thank youu!!
Will do!
Jess(: POTTER128 Quote:
Originally Posted by POTTER128 the post was great and this is goin to be as good as the others cant wait for more Awww thank you!
I'm glad you like this story as well as my other ones too! <3
Jess(: potionsmaster22 (The Love of My Life) Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy<3 OMG!!! Jess this is soooo good!! I can't wait to read more from your wonderful mind!! PAMS!!!!
Sammy
Wonderful mind? xDD
Will do hun!
Jess(: cursedkatie (Love Will Find A Way) Quote:
Originally Posted by Katie<3 OMG! EEP! PAMS! CONTINUE PLEASE!!! *ahem* sorry about that. I was a bit excited.
Tons of people are excited!
I'm happy you are liking it so far! <3
Jess(: cait bragg Quote:
Originally Posted by cait bragg Oh I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great writing, great idea, and great cliffhanger! Keep it coming I think everyone is by now.
Awww thank you for the lovely comment!
Jess(:
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12-06-2009, 01:46 PM
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| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
*shnuggles you*
Nuuuu, I no mean the meaning.
&& you put in a link to my fiiiciiieeee.
=O
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12-06-2009, 03:35 PM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | MaxieluffYAY's Comment(: ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
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12-06-2009, 06:15 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Hehehe...
Well,I think you will be a great author if thats
what you want to pursue in life...
Every fanfic you do...You get simply
More astonishing....
and you also put a link to my Poetry thread...
Thanks....
Im going to post a poem right now...
Thanks again<3
looking forward to the next chapter...
Love you!!!
-Xavier
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12-06-2009, 06:30 PM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | Xavierluff's Comment(: ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
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