Abi! -tackles-
Welcome to Elevenbaskets, sweetie.

Glad to know you're enjoying ze updates. AND! You = the person behind the 200th post, here! Go youuu!

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AWWWWWWWWSSSSS!!!
That was too cute!!!
Gahhh, I want a Dylan Denver to be in my school. :xd:
Lovely chapter MaxieluffYAY! <333
PAMS!
Jess(:

Thanks, sweetie.
I want a Dylan, too! :xd:

Will try to update, later today.
^___^

Please delete. >__<

Dear Littleredhead,

Life is not very good.

It should be, you know, given that I am super-happy with Dylan, and we had an adorable first date, on Valentine's Day. This kid sneaked up on me from behind, when we were eating, and sort of clung to me. He was such a warm, little thing! I totally made friends with him.

His name is Aaron Rose, and he is now officially my favourite Keeper. He loves quidditch! We had a good talk about it. Of course, Dylan thought that plain ruined our time - his and mine - and was not too happy, and things got so heated up between the two of them - him and Aaron - that, in the end, I walked out and left them to bicker with each other.

But, even then, things ought to be awesome, because I am having a lovely time with Dylan. With my friends, too. Lori Louu gave me a pretty dress, and sparkly shoes for Christmas, by the way. Even Torin gave me a pretty present -- a Nemo plush toy. It's adorable. But the reason that all is not well, is Hogwarts. There is something wrong, in the castle.

What, you ask?

To begin with, Dylan woke up in the Hospital Wing, with a HUGE hole in his chest. Even the thought makes me want to shut my eyes tight. He says Healer Ashford tore off his shirt, because it was stuck to his chest. God, that must have been painful -- and he didn't even tell me, until later! When he did, he took off his shirt to show me the scar, and I... sort of noticed his chest more than the scar, because he has an amazing chest.

SUCH an amazing chest.

Which does NOT mean that I am not worried. I am, it's not normal -- and it's not just Dylan, either. Reese was found, badly injured, by Head Boy Fritzera aka Jackie. There have been other students, popping up all over the castle. Pretty badly wounded, all of them. To top it all off, Cela has just disappeared. The Ravenclaw Prefect. She's nowhere to be found.

I feel frightened, not for myself, but for my friends. There's something very, very wrong going on, and I wish I could do something to keep it at bay. Anything to make sure my friends stay okay, and -- and I still have to do homework, despite all of this. The only thing I can say, to make myself happy about that, is that most of it is fun, and gives me an opportunity to research, and delve into new things.

Turned in Muggle Studies, only yesterday.


A copy of the Muggle Studies Homework is stuck to the next page, with a permanent sticking charm.



Things to do:

♥ Try to worry less.
♥ Stick close to Lori Louu.
♥ Do homework.

Aww. Hope you enjoy.

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Oh. My. Gosh.

It's YOUUU! *tackletackles* Welcome to Eleven Baskets, bebeh. Glad to know you adore us. :P

Gold&&I love Brodydyy&&you.

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Teeehhee :D
I DO I DOO XD

PAMS Write abouutt her BFFFS

:shifty:

I am glad to know you ish enjoying ze diary entries. && LOL, I will. I plan to put this thread to RESSTTT, and open up a new thread, for her sixth year. It will have LOTS of Broldori, trust you me.

More suggestions are always welcome. :P
Ily.<3

Update!! I LOVE Update's :)
When i read this..is was like WOW!!
I didnt know that much was happening up at the school(if its set on the school RP)
Anywhoo..I thought this was a really good chapter...I LOVE Gold and her diary ^^same as the person above
And that boy Aaron...awww...cute! Although i agree..Rude to disrupt there date -nods-
Also..i thought Dylon was sweet not telling Gold about his injury..well maybe he should have...but its sweet he didnt want you to worry..awww
More soon Pretty pwease :)

Me, too! xD

It is set in the school RP. Stories in this section are normally either set in the School RP, or the Ministry one. ^__^

Gold and her diary feel loved!

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Gold finds him too cute for words. xD

Mmmm. Thanks for ze review!

Will try to update, soon.

=]

xD One step closer to the end of the story....WAIT what am i saying?? I dont want it to end -nods- butt alsoo -smacks head-

I didnt read the URL above telling me which section this is in. Ive subscribed to the story (andd your other story ;)) so i dont have to go through all the searching :)
Butttt....It's nice to hear what your character gets up to in the school RP...

Im glad you and your diary feel loved..I tryed writting a diary on here before...went horribly wrong!!

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Ohhh..and there i was hoping you could explain his cuteness -chuckle-
O Well..now i know he's MEGA cute :lol:

Your most welcome about the review...its always a pleasure to read your stories Maxie..Although i havent read many PAST stories, although i bet there ALL great...must go find them and read them sometimes :D

Ohhh Update...SOON!!!
=]

Ooh! It's not going to end. Not really. Since I will journal her sixth year, in a new thread. It should be up, soon.

=]

Aww. I love you.

&& I ish glad you likeyy ze stories. <3

Whyyy? *POUTS*

Past stories? -blink-

All the same, thank you VERY much!

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Ohhh a new one..SOON? im soo going to read it! I LOVE all the adventure -nods-
Anddd im glad its not going to end...yeshhh i am :)

Aww I love you too
& Im gladd i like them too...wait...id be stupid not to to be honest :D

I just havent got the knack of drawing the reader in, i mean i write a diary in RL, and thats not eve good! I find it easier writing normal stories are better...yeshhh i do!
-thinks-

Yeshh...i hear {or read} this is like your twentieth something story on here..am i correct? Or am i wrong? hmmmm.
:D
Anddd Your most welcome...as alwayss..:lol:
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Submitted it, earlier today.
It's called "Chocolate Truffle, and Chick-O-Sticks."

Aww. I think when you write a lot, people get drawn in by themselves. The real key is persistence. Keep writing, keep trying. GOOD luck with all your ventures, on and off SS. =]


I have a total of twenty-four, I think.

Stick around for updates.
Though there won't be many more in this thread, I think.

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Awwzz.

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This kid sneaked up on me from behind, when we were eating, and sort of clung to me. He was such a warm, little thing! I totally made friends with him.

Gold is so cute! Anyone else would have been mad! We luff her!!

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When he did, he took off his shirt to show me the scar, and I... sort of noticed his chest more than the scar, because he has an amazing chest. SUCH an amazing chest.

LOLZ! You make me wanna see it. :xd: :xd: :xd:

Great update!!

That esssay deserves a review too!

I'mma come back when I have more time!!

PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!!

Love,
~~Jay~~

Ohhh new one...yeshhh!!! Well i will defently be reading it! This is proof! :lol:

I see your point, and yeahh i will defently be writing more...when the story im doing now i finished...might start a new one -nods- yeshhh i might!
Anddd....thank you for the luck :)

WOW so many? Im on like my third fan fic..good for you!
Anddd This is going to end soon -cries- but im glad your carrying it on, even if in a new thread.
Butt its been a fantastic story Maxie...well don!
=]

She LOVES Aaron. <3

Thanks a big bunch, JayMay. =]

I shall be waiting. =]

Will try to update soon, too.
Stick around!

I love to write. xD

I needed to branch off, a bit. Needed something new. Soooo, that's why. =]
&& THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I LOVE to read, and i LOVE music...But writing is great..i love to do it too. Not very good though, i have all the ideas in my head, and even start writing it in my head {sounds weird} butt i can never get it down on paper the way i want it...sucks really! :(

Andd no im not being rude...i find it great that you have soo much ideas you write more then one at a time(thinks thats what you meant) andd i salute you for it {weird?}

&& Your welcome... :)

I found this an awesomethhhh start! It shows that she cares and of course that she's headed in a unqiue direction with the essay.

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Is that a big achievement? It might not seem so to many, for younger girls have proved their mettle, but delve deeper, explore Khan's background, and you will come to what there is in her that inspires, that wants one to speak of her in golden words.

Golden words. Nice phrasing! I told ya this essay deserves a review of its own. :xd: :xd: :xd: I enjoyed the read!!!

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There was no lack of people who verbally abused her, there were even people who wanted her hurt.

That's so mean! *pokesez them all* The part most remarkable is that this is all true and comes straight from RL.

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But Khan? She refused to back out.

I find this nicely worded. It sort of gives one that upsurge of strength and hope. It's like a play of words. Well done!!

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Sweat, passion, hard work, practice - she infused of all of this, into her love for swimming.

Another good bit since it not only carries the essay forward in a nice way but it also tells how swimming was more than just a sport for the girl and how she actually put her dreams and labour into it.

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She won sixteen gold medals at the South Asian Federation Game, and a heap of silvers at others, but she knew there was more she could do, and she strove for it with all of her might.

Right! She had talent but when put on a world-level it wasn't as good as it could have been. She lacked a lot of support but she was trying. That especially makes your choice of athlete unique since it shows she was a natural but not the best and she had to try to get what she wanted and work very very hard for it. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

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Because my story is about a girl who had only constraints, an absolute lack of funds, total opposition, not even a homeland that housed proper training centres, but who still continued to labour.

Go her!!

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Because my story is about a girl who sowed hope and faith in the hearts of the people she belonged to -- hope that a new world is possible, and faith in oneself, faith in the crystal dreams that we fashion.

That was gorgeously worded. 'Crystal dreams that we fashion.' It's true. We raise dreams but they're so delicate and it takes so little to crush them especially since we humans are so quick to give up.

:( :( :(

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-- a girl who held, in her palm, a tiny firefly that lit up a metaphorical night.

Once again nice wording!

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Because my story is about a girl who showed that, where there is a will, there is always, no matter how tiny, a way to the realms of candela.

And that was a very fitting end to a very fitting essay! It just summed up everything that the essay said - where there's a will, there's a way. I love the reference to candela which is the unit of light.

GREATTTTTTT work chicka!!

PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!!

Love,
~~Jay~~

Thanks, sweetie!

Exactly! That is what I enjoyed most, about this essay. =]

Yes. Her hard work is definitely praise-worthy.

Thank you bunches, sweetie. I'm happy to know that enjoyed the essay this much. You're right, too -- we are too quick, to give up. That's human nature, and it's so fickle and fragile.

Thank you for the lovely review.

*huggles you*