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hp_lvr01 05-30-2007 04:55 AM

Chapter 27
 
Harry sat there in awe, playing the discussion he just had with Ginny over in his head.

Suddenly the situation seemed so complicated. Who did he really love? Hermione, the one who's always been there. Who's kind and loving and smart like crazy?

Or Ginny, the girl who seems to be made for him. They both liked the same things and seemed to get along wonderful. Not to mention she would always be close by, she's his best friend's sister.

Harry tried to sort through this mess he called his life. He groaned and came to a conclusion, he had to talk to Ginny.

As he trudged up the stairs he began to get nervous. What do I say to her? What can I say to her?

He stopped.

*****

Ginny sat up and wiped away some of her tears. She was convinced she did the right thing...for Hermione.

But then why did it hurt so much? She thought she heard someone coming up but the sound stopped and she forgot about it.

I understand the right thing is sometimes hard to do but this really seems wrong. She shrugged lamely and layed down on her bed face down.

That's when she heard the footsteps again.

*****

Oh come on Potter you can do this! It's Ginny!

Harry took a deep breath, "Okay I can do this."

He began to walk up the stairs again. harry reached her door. He was about to knock when he stopped. Why is this so hard? Again, he summed up some courage and knocked on te door.

"Ginny can we talk?"


I know these last chapters haven't been very eventful but believe me it'll get better :yes: this is setting up for it

Katie & Bells
:techni: :pea:

LyonLover417 05-30-2007 10:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5113136)
NO!!! Don't feel insulted, I just meant that Ginny's whole talk with Harry was really sad!!! It was a LOVELY post, lovey, so don't EVER feel insulted by me...

Love ya
.:Adrienne:.

Don't worry Adrienne! I still love you!

OK, yea, next couple of posts are the 'clearing everything up so it works' posts, so please don't worry about the dullness...things shall get better!

Katie

Moxie 05-30-2007 12:26 PM

YAY!

NIce postie!! Can't wait for mooooooooooooore!

Love Adrienne

PS Check out the siggie!!

Fallon Chanel 05-30-2007 12:45 PM

great! cant wait 4 more!
although I wish yall would make me up as someone that goes to the school and maybe breaks up Draco and Mione but they get back together.... its a good drama twist lol
but dont listen to me! I aint the author!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

LyonLover417 05-30-2007 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5115574)
YAY!

NIce postie!! Can't wait for mooooooooooooore!

Love Adrienne

PS Check out the siggie!!

WEEE! Me and Bell's fanfic is in the siggie! AWESOME!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5115614)
great! cant wait 4 more!
although I wish yall would make me up as someone that goes to the school and maybe breaks up Draco and Mione but they get back together.... its a good drama twist lol
but dont listen to me! I aint the author!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

:lol: Tara, I'm going to write a story just like that, just for you, ok? It'll be called Tara's Intervention, ok?

Katie

Fallon Chanel 05-30-2007 02:45 PM

lol ok!! :lol:

harrypotterbabe 05-30-2007 07:42 PM

ahhh those were good posties!!! loved 'emm poor ginny :( and harry JUST GET TOGETHER AND STAY TOGETHER heheheh
anyway, cant wait for the next post!!

-Anna<3

qoldenwonder 05-30-2007 10:00 PM

Loves it! can't wait for more.

hp_lvr01 05-31-2007 12:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5115574)
YAY!

NIce postie!! Can't wait for mooooooooooooore!

Love Adrienne

PS Check out the siggie!!

ZOMG! That's so awesome!! :woot: I feel special!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5115614)
great! cant wait 4 more!
although I wish yall would make me up as someone that goes to the school and maybe breaks up Draco and Mione but they get back together.... its a good drama twist lol
but dont listen to me! I aint the author!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Hey that's pretty good :lol: I say write a one-shot for it! :yes:

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypotterbabe (Post 5117583)
ahhh those were good posties!!! loved 'emm poor ginny :( and harry JUST GET TOGETHER AND STAY TOGETHER heheheh
anyway, cant wait for the next post!!

-Anna<3

well I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens :shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5118354)
Loves it! can't wait for more.

You won't have to wait long ;)


I just want to thank Katie publucly for tham UBER AWESOME B-day PM she sent me. LOVE YA!

-Bells ♥♥

LyonLover417 06-01-2007 01:15 AM

Any time Bells! Any time! OK I'm posting now!

Katie

Fallon Chanel 06-01-2007 01:18 AM

I sent you a B-day PM, too Bells! *pouts*

hp_lvr01 06-01-2007 01:24 AM

you did? :blink: I only got one from Katie and Angel. Well I'd like to say

THANK YOU TARA!! :heart2: I feel the love :loved:

-Bells ♥♥

qoldenwonder 06-01-2007 01:52 AM

Hey bells our b-days are on the same and our years too! O_o creepy yet cool. *sad* no one sent me anything...lol.you guys didn't know anyway.

sorry for being out of topic here.

LyonLover417 06-01-2007 02:00 AM

Chapter 28
 
Draco had prommised Hermione that they would go swimming in the Lake, but he hadn't had time.Finally, one morning, Draco awoke to find Hermione waiting at the foot of his bed.

"Yea babe? What are you doing here this early? It's Saturday." Draco rolled over and tried to fall back asleep.

"You said we'd go swimming." Hermione pouted. Draco shook his head.

"When did I say this?"

"I don't remember, but you promised. Please? Can we go?" Hermione climbed onto the bed and lay down next to him, and tickled his side. Draco gave a little half scream of laughter.

"Stop, that tickles!" Hermione persisted. Draco flailed, and fell off the bed. Hermione looked over the side of the bed.

"So...now that you're out of bed, wanna go swimming?"

"Fine, fine. Just...gimmie a moment to change, ok? You'd better get changed too."

"Wee!" Hermione squealed, and raced out of the room. Draco groaned and looked at the clock. 7:30.

"Good lord." Draco sighed and got up. He pulled off his clothes and pulled on his swim trunks. He came out of his room, carrying a towel. "Hermione, are you ready?"

"I'm coming!" Hermione stepped out of her room, carrying a towel and wearing a tank-top and shorts. "Can we go now?"

"Yes yes, we can go!" Draco laughed, his good spirits returning. "Let's hurry."


*****

Hermione stood by the edge of the Lake, shivering. "Draco? Maybe this asn't such a god idea."

"Actually, now that I think about it, it's perfect. You need to get your memory back, and swimming will help. Now, take those chothes off and get in the water." Draco watched from the Lake.

Hermione pulled off her shirt and shorts to reveal a sparkly blue bikini. Draco admired her flawless figure. Hermione tentitively walked into the water, She laughed at the coldness and tried to ealk to Draco. She gasped when her feet didn't hit the floor. Draco swam over to her.

"That's right, now, first thing, I want you to lay on the water, and place your tummy on my hand." Hermione obeyed. Draco let his hand leave her stomach.

"Draco! I'm going to sink!" Hermione panicked. Draco calmed her down and put his hand back under her stomach.

"Relax. Let your body loosen up. Let it drift on the water." Hermione loosened up, and Draco once more pulled his hand away. Hermione began to float.

"Draco! Draco, I'm doing it!"

Draco's eye caught movement. It looked like a Ravenclaw and a Hufflepuff. They were holding rocks. Draco watched them throw rocks into the Lake, a past activity Draco thought was relaxing. He turned his attention back to Hermione. She was slowly swimming around.

"Good Hermione! You're really coming along." Draco praised her. Hermione grinned. "Hermione, you're swimming out a little too far!"

"What?" Hermione said. She was swimming towards a swirl of water in the middle of the Lake. A tenticle flew up over the water.

"HERMIONE! LOOK OUT!" Draco shrieked. The tenticle grabbed Hermione, and the Giant Squid loomed over the Lake, Hermione in it's tenticle. It waved her around, and flung her across the Lake and into the sand.


O0o0o0o0o pretty cliffie!

Katie and Bells
:techni: :pea:

hp_lvr01 06-01-2007 02:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5125977)
Hey bells our b-days are on the same and our years too! O_o creepy yet cool. *sad* no one sent me anything...lol.you guys didn't know anyway.

sorry for being out of topic here.

I tried sending you a PM but his thing pooped up
Quote:

DanFan4eva has chosen not to receive private messages or may not be allowed to receive private messages. Therefore you may not send your message to him/her.


so here you go:

:techni: !HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY FAVORITE BIRTHDAY BUDDY! :techni:







hey Katie I liked that it was very creative ;)

-Bells

Moxie 06-01-2007 12:17 PM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BELLS AND DANFAN4EVA!!! YOU GUYS ROCK MY SOCKS!! LOL

Nice postie...ooh, Hermione got DISSED BY THE GIANT SQUID

LOL, using my gangsta terminology...but not really =)

Loved the post
.:Adrienne:.

Fallon Chanel 06-01-2007 12:36 PM

well that was creepy!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

LyonLover417 06-01-2007 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5128066)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BELLS AND DANFAN4EVA!!! YOU GUYS ROCK MY SOCKS!! LOL

Nice postie...ooh, Hermione got DISSED BY THE GIANT SQUID

LOL, using my gangsta terminology...but not really =)

Loved the post
.:Adrienne:.

LOL Gansta terminology is word G! Keep it real homey! Keep it alive in the crib yo! :lol:

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5128094)
well that was creepy!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Yea, I know.

Thanks Bells! I love being creative!

Katie

qoldenwonder 06-01-2007 07:47 PM

AHHH! A squid caught Hermione. Whats shall we do! *panics and runs around like a crazy person*

hp_lvr01 06-01-2007 11:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5128066)
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BELLS AND DANFAN4EVA!!! YOU GUYS ROCK MY SOCKS!! LOL

Nice postie...ooh, Hermione got DISSED BY THE GIANT SQUID

LOL, using my gangsta terminology...but not really =)

Loved the post
.:Adrienne:.

Thanks Annie! [is it okie if I call you annie?] chyea you're a stright up G! yo!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5128094)
well that was creepy!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

haha yess katie and her skeeming [sp?] mind :shifty: lol

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5130073)
AHHH! A squid caught Hermione. Whats shall we do! *panics and runs around like a crazy person*

LOL. *starts jumping up and down*


ok guys I'm going to post now :yes:

-Bells

Moxie 06-02-2007 12:49 AM

YAY for posting, and of COURSE you can call me Annie =) I've aquired quite a few nicknames here: Adge, Addie, and now Annie! I'm excited!

Loved it
.:Adrienne:.

harrypotterbabe 06-02-2007 12:51 AM

AHHHH NOOOO HERMIONE!!!!!!!!! :( hurry upppp (sorry if im a little forcefull) hahaha i need to know whats happening!!! ahhhh hehehe
Post soon!!

-Anna<3

hp_lvr01 06-02-2007 01:17 AM

Chapter 29
 
"Ginny can we talk?"

Ginny got up and looked at the door. Should I open it?

"What do y-you want?" she said cursing to herself as her voice cracked from crying.

"Ginny I need to talk to you, open the door." he said softly.

Ginny forced herself off the bed and walked over to the door. Her hand hesitated over the door just like Harry's had moments earlier. Just open it! She swung the door open, suddenly face to face with Harry.

"What?" she asked in a -I-have-better-things-to-do voice.

Harry walked pass Ginny and ignored her glares as he sat down on th bed. He looked at her and noticed her eyes were red.He realized she must have been crying and felt horrible.

"Ok," he began but then stopped short.

"Well?" Ginny asked impatiently. Just looking at him brought tears, she looked away.

He took a deep breath, "I just want to say I'm sorry. I'm sorry for being a jerk, I'm sorry for using you, I'm sorry for not caring. Ginny I'm sorry. But I missed Hermione, you know she means a lot to me. She's the best friend I 've ever had," Harry was speaking quickly now, realizations occuring, "but I think that's all she's ever been because there's been someone else who I relate like we were made for each other and that was you, Ginny I love you." he said looking up at her as surprised as she was.

Ginny looked into his eyes and saw pure sincerity. She sat down on the bed next to him and kissed him. Harry kissed her back.

"I love you too." she whispered.

Suddenly there was a POP!

Dobby was there looking traumatized, his face suddenly turned slightly pink, "Oh I didn't wish to interupt sir," he said quickly, "but it's Miss Granger sir, she's been hurt again. This time it's severe." he said urgency back in his voice.

Harry hopped off the bed. He took a hold of Ginny's hand and rushed off to the Hospital Wing.

*****

Hermione was laying in the bed unconcious, Draco sitting in a chair next to her with a worried look. Madam Pompfrey was bustling around looking at various potions for Hermione. They had been like this for nearly an hour.

Harry and Ginny came in quickly, "Oh no." Harry said sadly.

He walked with Ginny up to her, not acknologing Draco's presence.

Ginny as worried as Harry carefull brushed some hair off of Hermione's face. She looked down at Hermione, so fragile.

Suddenly there was a flicker of movement across Hermione's face. Her serene expression turned into a pained one.

Madam Pompfrey noticed, "Oh no!" she cried.


Hope you liked it ;)

Katie & Bells
:techni: :pea:

Godric Potter 06-02-2007 01:50 AM

ahhhhh such a cliffie
pams pams pams pams

Moxie 06-02-2007 12:34 PM

CLIFFIE!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????

Pams please!!

Love
.:Adrienne:.


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