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LyonLover417 05-28-2007 01:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypotterbabe (Post 5100043)
ahhh oh no. please stay together :( ahhh Harry leave them alone!! hahaha good post! loved it post more soon!!!

-Anna<333

Bah, only time shall tell what Harry shall do! Me feeling evil!

Quote:

Originally Posted by H/G4eva (Post 5100901)
those were awesome posts!! I've missed alot cuz i went away for the weekend!!
Post more soon!!! and nooooo Harry has to stay with Ginny, and stop beating up draco...
PAMS!!

LOL We haven't even gotten to that scene yet....:shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Freds Pirate Girl (Post 5100992)
*pokes Harry* Leave them alone!!!! :lol:Awesome post Bells! I'm stoked to read more! PAMS!!!

Taylor
xxx

Yea, I like where she took the story while I was at work. Kudos to Bells!

Posties by me later on!

Katie

hp_lvr01 05-28-2007 01:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypotterbabe (Post 5100043)
ahhh oh no. please stay together :( ahhh Harry leave them alone!! hahaha good post! loved it post more soon!!!

-Anna<333

lol well we shall see what happens :shifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by H/G4eva (Post 5100901)
those were awesome posts!! I've missed alot cuz i went away for the weekend!!
Post more soon!!! and nooooo Harry has to stay with Ginny, and stop beating up draco...
PAMS!!

but you have to admit it is entertaining :yes:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Freds Pirate Girl (Post 5100992)
*pokes Harry* Leave them alone!!!! :lol:Awesome post Bells! I'm stoked to read more! PAMS!!!

Taylor
xxx

haha thanks Tay ;)

-Bells
:pea:

Fallon Chanel 05-28-2007 01:55 AM

great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

LyonLover417 05-28-2007 02:10 AM

Chapter 24
 
Draco watched Harry step into the coffee shop with the Weasley with narrowed eyes. How he could still show his face in public after cheating on Hermione like that was beyond him. Well, if he didn't want Hermione anymore, Draco wasn't holding back.

"C'mon Hermione, give us another kis, will you please?" Draco said, just loudly enough to make Harry's head turn.

"Of course." Hermione gave Draco a kiss on the cheek. Harry's face flushed.

"You know what I mean love." Draco gave Hermione a wink. Hermione's eyes widened, and she smiled. She turned her head sideways and gave Draco a more passionate kiss. Draco pulled out his tongue, and Hermione, suprised and intrigued, gave it up as well. Harry was about ready to kill.

"Ginny sit on my lap, will you please?" Ginny was happy to oblige. Harry put his hands on her hips and, began to kiss her stomach. Ginny looked around and saw Hermione and Draco. This was carrying it a bit too far! But, Ginny sensed Harry and Draco were competing, and was happy to take part.

"Anything else I can do you you?" Ginny whispered in his ear. Harry tongue-kissed her, and Ginny almost fell over. This was better than before they were dating.

Draco looked over and watched HArry and Ginny. Rage filled him, and Hermione mistook it for passion. She took his hand and slid it under her shirt. Draco caught Harry's eye and smirked. He continued to kiss Hermione, ignoring the waitress that came up to their table.

"Well, I never! This place get's worse and worse." She tried at Harry and Ginny's table, but they were getting heavy, and she tossed her notepad in the air. "I give up. Feast on each other, why don't you?"

"Good idea." Harry said, and Ginny giggled. The waitress stormed away. Ginny took Harry's hands in hers, and put them on her legs. Draco lost it.

"Hermione, will you be my GIRLFRIEND?" Draco asked, right in the middle of the shop. Harry and Ginny stopped their antics, and watched.

"Of course Draco." Hermione said happily.

"Then please wear this necklace?" Draco took out a black velvet jewelry box. Hermione opened it. Inside was a silver necklace with a diamond in the middle. Hermione gasped when she saw it.

"Oh Draco, it's beautiful? Please put it on me?"

"Yes Love." Draco clasped it behind her neck, and Harry lost it. He threw Ginny off him and raced over to their table. "What the-"

Harry pushed Hermione aside, and she fell to the floor, crying out in pain. Harry started to pummel Draco, cursing at him with every punch flown. Draco punched him in the head, temperarily knocking him out. Draco went to Hermione's aid.

"Are you ok Hermione?" Draco helped her up.

"Y-yes...who was that?"

"That," Draco said as he led Hermione out the door, "Was your ex-boyfriend."


Katie and Bells
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Fallon Chanel 05-28-2007 02:16 AM

great!
pams! pamsoid!
xoxo,
tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Fire Eyes*Tayzer* 05-28-2007 02:22 AM

Haha competition... LMAO. Great post Katie! PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! :pfd:

Taylor
xxx

qoldenwonder 05-28-2007 10:49 AM

I love when story tellers have competitions in their chapters between characters! Love the chapter!!

hp_lvr01 05-28-2007 06:49 PM

Propz to Katie for that awesome chappie! :woot: post coming up soon guys :yes:

-Bells
:pea:

harrypotterbabe 05-28-2007 08:10 PM

ahhh SO good hehehe
i can't beleive how public these people can be hehehe
ooh Draco gave hermione a necklace *swoons over draco* hehehe i love him hehehe
anyway, post soon i loved it!!!
-Anna<3

hp_lvr01 05-29-2007 12:25 AM

Chapter 25
 
"Y-yes...who was that?"

"That," Draco said as he led Hermione out the door, "Was your ex-boyfriend."


Hermione gasped, "Oh wow I had bad taste." she whispered.

Draco cracked a smile, "I'll have to agree with you there." he slipped his hand aound her waist and they walked out of the shop not looking back.

The fight was soon forgotten by the couple as they spent the rest of their day with laughter and love.

*****

Ginny watched as Draco and Hermione left, envy clear in her eyes. Why are they so perfect?? It's not fair. She heard Harry groan.

She went down and bent beside him, "Harry, are you okay?"

"Ugh. Yeah I think so." he said with another groan as he sat up feeling blood pouring down his nose. He was pretty sure he had a black eye too.

"Harry let's go to the Hospital Wing. You look terrible." Ginny said helping him up.

20 minutes later...

Madam Pompfrey was cleaning up Harry's wounds and using various spells to patch him up.

She was muttering things along the line of, "Honestly can't stay out of fights... No respect for each other...Good gracious kids these days..." and so on.

Harry was sitting at the edge of the bed wincing as Pompfrey did her work. Ginny was sitting on a stool by the window staring out the window, thoughts of the fight swirling in her head. She started arguing about it in her head;

Why did he get mad at Malfoy?

Because Malfoy was with his girlfriend.

But he shouldn't care about that he's with me!

Well apparently he does.

I have to get him to forget about Hermione, but how??

Ginny sat there and thought about it, "Man, I wish I had my book." she muttered to herself trying to remember the next chapter after He's almost Yours, Now Reel Him In.

"What book?"

She turned around quickly to find Harry standing there, "Oh- um - Potions! I lost it." she lied, "So are we going?"

Harry gave her an odd look, "No I have to talk to McGonagall. I think I'm getting another detention. I think it was worth it. Bloody Malfoy."

Ginny had a spark on inspiration, "Well if you want Harry, i could serve those detentions with you." she smiling.

"Oh no. I couldn't ask you to-"

"No really! It'll be just fine."

Harry smiled, "Thanks Gin you're the best!" he said giving her a huge hug.

Ginny wore mysterious smirk the rest of that day.

sorry this wasn't that good :xd: I've been busy because of Memorial Day

Katie & Bells
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LyonLover417 05-29-2007 01:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hp_lvr01 (Post 5107513)

"Good gracious kids these days..." and so on.

Bells, that is the greatest invention ever! Great post!

Katie

hp_lvr01 05-29-2007 01:21 AM

Thanks Katie ;)

Fallon Chanel 05-29-2007 03:45 AM

GREAT!
and thanx 4 putting me in your siggy, Katie! :glomp:
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

qoldenwonder 05-29-2007 10:12 AM

Greats post! PAMS.

Moxie 05-29-2007 12:51 PM

Nice posts guys!!

Just so you know: I submitted my new siggie, and I put a link to this fic in there...I dunno when it'll be up, but...yeah!

Love ya
.:ADrienne:.

DestinyLies 05-29-2007 03:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LyonLover417 (Post 4989728)
Hermione was still in shock when Ginny came running up to her.

"Were you just talking to Malfoy?" Ginny asked as though she hadn't been eaves dropping. She fell into step beside Hermione.

"No-well...yes, err...kinda. Have you seen Harry?"

"Yes just now he was that way," Ginny pointed in the direction where she had left him, "so about Mal-"

"Great I should go catch up with Harry." Hermione said cutting her off, "Thanks Gin, talk to you later!" and with that she hurried off.

"She's hiding something and I'm going to find out what." Ginny muttered to herself and walked off with a devilish smile.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Hermione was still trembling when she reached Harry. She had a million questions swirling in her head. Why was Malfoy so civil to her? Will he keep it up or was it a one-time thing? Did he mean it when he said she was pretty? Now that she thought about it she did find Draco quite attractive.

"All you alright love?" Harry asked. She didn't look too good.

Hermione jumped. She forgot he was there, "Yes I'm fine."

It was then she started wondering what Harry would think of all this, "Umm Harry," he looked at her expectantly but she changed her mind, "we best be off to class."

"Yeah," Harry replied, "I can't believe we have Potions with Slytherins all morning!"

"W-what?" Hermione stopped dead in her tracks. "What did you just say?"

"We...have...Potions...with...the...Slyth-" Harry spoke slowly. Hermione cut hi off with a sigh.

"Arrggh! I know! I was just...it didn't register. Are you sure?"

"Positive. Are you sure you're ok? You look....pale."

"Fine, fine. But I'm not going."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Harry had to drag Hermione to Potions. She kept insisting that she was ill, on the verge of death. But Harry just shook her head and attributed it to nerves. Hermione sat grumpily next to him, her cauldren empty. The rest of the class filed in, laughing and chatting among themselves.

"Good morning students!" Professor Slughorn came bustling in, holding a sheaf of papers. "As a morning excersize, I want you all to whip me up a Sleeping Draft. Not too difficult for a morning warm up, eh?"

The students got to work, heads bowed over their books, mixing ingrediants and stirring. Hermione's focus wasn't on her potion. It was on a certain blonde who had chosen to sit right...behind....her.

"Hermione! Use these roots, you've....erm...well..." Harry couldn't bear to point it out, and Hermione gasp. For the past ten minutes, she was cutting nothing! And their time was almost up! Harry quickly switched roots with her, and began to chop hastily.

Hermione barely finished her potion in time, but at least it looked like it was supposed to. But she could still hear Malfoy's soft laughter. Then she realized that Malfoy was laughing. At her!

"And what, pray tell, is your problem?" Hermione hissed at him while Slughorn was grading their potions.

"OH...nothing. Only-"

"Back off Malfoy." Harry cut him off. "Leave her alone, she's having a rough morning. Turn around 'Mione." Hermione turned around, Harry's arm around her shoulder. Malfoy sniggered again, then fell silent as Slughorn came their way.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"Ugg...that was brutal...." Seamus sighed heavily as the class left. Harry fell into step beside him, Hermione's hand in his.

"You're telling me. Gosh, my arm hurts from all that stirring. I didn't even know what I was making...." Harry groaned. "What about you love?"

"Huh?" Hermione stuttered. She had been watching Malfoy again. He was leaving the room, and she couldn't help but notice his muscular arms, or his tight legs....or-

"Earth to Hermione!" Seamus whispered loudly in her ear. "Harry, I think she should take it easy. Seventh year is a killer, and she doesn't look too good."

"He's right. Wanna go back to the Common Room?" Harry asked Hermione, concerned.

"Yea...that'd be good." Hermione agreed softly.


Katie and Bells
:techni: :pea:

WOW Kat I've read up to the 5 chapter. Great so far. We ned to sooo catch up with ours girl. :D Where am I?

LyonLover417 05-29-2007 06:37 PM

OMG KITT!!!! I'm so glad you saw this FF! You're in my other one, Sometime in the Morning! Trust me, you're shmexy in THAT one! :lol: So glad you found it! PS. You're in my SIGGIE!!

Katie

DestinyLies 05-29-2007 06:45 PM

Word Kat! Thanks I saw them! I read it. HEEHEE I'm sweet! What [be jealous Jaden] lol.

love ya Kat!

Forever
Kit

harrypotterbabe 05-29-2007 07:55 PM

ahh that was good hehhee. SO good. Post soon!!!

-Anna<3

LyonLover417 05-29-2007 11:51 PM

Chapter 26
 
Hermione and Draco were together constantly. People began to whisper behind their hands about Hermione and Harry, and what they used to be. Harry, in retaliation, continued to allow himself to be seen with Ginny, but anyone could see he was pining for Hermione. Ginny was the one to breach the subject.

"Harry?"

"Hm?" They were sitting in the Gryffindor Common Room, Ginny on Harry's lap, looking a bit uncomfortable.

"I want to talk to you."

"I'm listening." But she could tell he wasn't. Ginny slid off his lap and sat in front of him, his hands in hers.

"Well....it's about Hermione, and Draco....and me."

"I don't want to talk about that right now." Harry looked away. Ginny let go of his hands and took his face in her hands instead.

"Harry....I want to talk about it. People are starting to talk...about us, about you and Hermione...Hermione and Draco..."

"I know. I'm not deaf!" Harry got up and walked around nervously. The few people that were in the Common Room left quietly, sensing a commotion.

"Then why won't you discuss this? Can't you see that I have to? I don't want to be called a boyfriend stealer. Or a sl*t. But that's what I'm being called. Don't you understand?"

"Ginny...if anyone called you a sl*t, I'd knock his teeth out. You know that." Harry came back over to the couch. Ginny turned away. "I thought you wanted to talk about this?" Harry said, getting angry.

"Well, what do you plan on doing about it?" Ginny still refused to look Harry in the eye.

"About what?" MEN! So slow! Ginny shook her head in disbelief.

"Harry, you're cheating on your girlfriend-"

"Now, wait just a-"

"Please, let me finish. You are cheating on Hermione. And I'm being used. Not that I don't mind. Harry, I've missed you since the day you broke up with me. I want to get back together. But you and Hermione are only broken up for the time being. If she get's her memory back, do you honestly think she's gonna want to stay with Draco Malfoy?"

"I guess not..." Harry mumbled.

"Then don't count Hermione out now. I...I have to go now." Ginny raced from the room and ran into the dorms. She flung herself on the bed and cried.


*****

Ginny cried until she couldn't cry anymore. She picked up her head and her eyes fell upon a book. It was the book she was using to get Harry back. She picked herself up off the bed and strode across the room.

"Heya!" She yelled, and tossed the book out the window. The window broke with a SMASH and the book fell onto the rocks below and into the Lake. Ginny could see the Giant Squid's tentacles reach out and grab the book. Ginny's face was streaked with tears.

"That's the last time I try to not be alone....I'm sick of boys." Ginny flopped down on the bed, and thought of what she had done...for Hermione.


Katie and Bells
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qoldenwonder 05-29-2007 11:57 PM

A bit short but awesome!

Fallon Chanel 05-29-2007 11:57 PM

great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Moxie 05-30-2007 12:37 AM

Very nice post!

Quite melancholy, though, if you ask me...

*SIGH*

WHEN IS MY NEW SIGGIE GOING TO BE UP????

Love ya
.:ADrienne:.

LyonLover417 05-30-2007 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5112805)
A bit short but awesome!

Yea, I know...Bells and I are discussing the ending...so yea, not exciting, I know. I'm sorry.

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5112809)
great!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

LOL Well, at least SOMEONE liked it! Thanks Tara!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5112973)
Very nice post!

Quite melancholy, though, if you ask me...

*SIGH*

WHEN IS MY NEW SIGGIE GOING TO BE UP????

Love ya
.:ADrienne:.

Melancholy! I've never felt more insulted.....:lol: more later by Bells!

Katie

Moxie 05-30-2007 01:19 AM

NO!!! Don't feel insulted, I just meant that Ginny's whole talk with Harry was really sad!!! It was a LOVELY post, lovey, so don't EVER feel insulted by me...

Love ya
.:Adrienne:.


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