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Fallon Chanel 06-02-2007 01:20 PM

CLIFFIE! ZOMG! *RUNS IN CIRCLES*
you had better not let anything bad happen to her!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

qoldenwonder 06-02-2007 02:41 PM

OoOoO! i liked the Harry adn GInny part,but the Hermione part is sad.
dont die hermy!

harrypotterbabe 06-02-2007 06:00 PM

AHHHH NOOOO :( hermy :'( ima gonna cry she better be ok or i am gonna be really really sad hahaha. aww harry and ginny are cute hahah. good job
post more

Anna<3

LyonLover417 06-02-2007 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Godric Potter (Post 5131768)
ahhhhh such a cliffie
pams pams pams pams

don't worry, I'll PAMS soon!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5133262)
CLIFFIE!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????

Pams please!!

Love
.:Adrienne:.

Well....I have an idea...but I can't tell you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5133338)
CLIFFIE! ZOMG! *RUNS IN CIRCLES*
you had better not let anything bad happen to her!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

o0o0o I'm being threatened! Eeek! *runs and hides, tries to write and hide from Tara at the same time*

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5133639)
OoOoO! i liked the Harry adn GInny part,but the Hermione part is sad.
dont die hermy!

Well, if you insist....you're gonna have to wait and find out!

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypotterbabe (Post 5134530)
AHHHH NOOOO :( hermy :'( ima gonna cry she better be ok or i am gonna be really really sad hahaha. aww harry and ginny are cute hahah. good job
post more

Anna<3

LOL Thanks Anna!

OK, I'm writing the last chapter now!

Katie

LyonLover417 06-02-2007 08:24 PM

Chapter 30
 
Hermione's eyes opened with a groan. She looked all around. Her eyes first landed on...Harry.

"Harry? Is that you baby?"

"Oh dear God....Hermione!" Harry took Hermione into his arms, tears falling fast. Ginny looked uncomfortable. "How are you sweetheart?"

"Sore all over...I feel like I got hit by a truck...what are you doing here?" She noticed Draco. Draco cleared his throat.

"I...I...I'm the one who helped take care of you Hermione." Draco said slowly. Hermione gave him a funny look.

"What? But I'm fine! Harry, what's he talking about?"

"Hermione, we need to talk about a few things." Ginny and Draco stood up.

"We'd better go and wait outside." Ginny said, and she and Draco left.

"Now...what's going on Harry? I feel as though...I lost time. Like jet-lag. What's been happening?"

"Hermione, you've had a bad case of amneisa for the past two months. You hit your head in a duel with Malfoy and I. Then Malfoy was taking care of you. I had extra classes, and I couldn't care for you. So Malfoy did."

"Ok..."

"Then you hit your head again, Hagrid I think was bringing in stuff. and you got back some of your memory, but not all of it. You and Malfoy...started going out, and seeing each other."

"Harry...I think I remember this...but tell me...what were you doing?" Hermione asked, slightly confused, trying hard to remember.

"I...I was seeing Ginny."

"You...cheated on me?" Hermione stared at Harry in disbelief.

"Hermione...you were seeing Malfoy. We cheated on each other." Harry reasoned, close to tears.

"So...Harry, how do you feel about me right now?" Hermione asked him.

"Hermione..." Harry started to say, but Hermione held up her hand.

"Harry, I think we lost it."

"Lost what?"

"You know what. The spark, the drive. Think about it. I dated Malfoy, cheated on you. You dated Ginny, cheated on me. Both of us were happy without the other, and we were happy with our new partners."

"But I still love you Hermione." Harry tried to convince her, all thoughts of Ginny forgotten. "We can't be lost...not after everything we went through."

"What Malfoy and I went through. You were hanging out with Ginny, remember?"

"That doesn't mean I suffered!" Harry yelled. "I would kill for you Hermione! Just seeing him with you put me in defense mode!"

"Harry, I don't blame you for anything." Hermione said calmly. "You were alone, and Ginny was there to care for you and treat you right. I would have done the same thing. Do you believe me?"

"Yes." Harry hung his head in defeat. "So...what do we do now?"

"I suppose," Hermione said slowly, shakily, "That we have to go our....our seperate ways." She broke down and wept. Harry held her.

"I love you Harry."

"I love you too, but you're right. This is the way to go. If we stayed together, we'd be miserable, Ginny would be inconsolable, and Malfoy...Draco...would be devestated."

"Then this is good-bye?" Hermione looked up from Harry's chest, tears in her eyes.

"Not as friends. Just as boyfriend and girlfriend." Harry assured her, tears falling thick and fast.

"Good." Hermione held him as well, sharing their last moment together as a couple.


Alright, two more chapters left people!

Katie and Bells
:techni: :pea:

Godric Potter 06-02-2007 08:45 PM

great post
i never really liked the h/hr ship in the first place

pams pams pmas

qoldenwonder 06-02-2007 09:28 PM

Oh no! one of my ships are separating! noooo!
Hermione and Draco still going out?
Is Ginny and Harry going to work ands till go out?
And is this the end?

AHHH! please don't leave me hanging! PAMS!

LyonLover417 06-03-2007 01:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Godric Potter (Post 5135028)
great post
i never really liked the h/hr ship in the first place

pams pams pmas

Yea...somehow, Harry and Hermione just aren't appealing!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanFan4eva (Post 5135205)
Oh no! one of my ships are separating! noooo!
Hermione and Draco still going out?
Is Ginny and Harry going to work ands till go out?
And is this the end?

AHHH! please don't leave me hanging! PAMS!

A good magician never reveals her secrets.....

Katie

harrypotterbabe 06-03-2007 01:55 AM

AHHH ONLY TWO :'( i am literally crying hehehe. aww this was cute poor hermy ahh well now she can be with draco!!! hahaha and harry can be with ginny. good job
post soon!!
-Anna<3

hp_lvr01 06-03-2007 02:02 AM

There's only two more chapters left guys! :xd:

hey guys I have an announcement! I have a new FF up. It's called Disenchanted. You can find it here

-Bells ♥♥

qoldenwonder 06-03-2007 02:43 PM

Two more chapter! Then lets get our fingers typing!! PAMS!

hp_lvr01 06-03-2007 07:09 PM

Chapter 31
 
Ginny's heart broke when she saw Harry hug Hermione. Soon after they began talking Ginny couldn't stand to watch. She went outside the door with Draco.

As soon as they walked out Ginny slid down the wall on to the floor. She buried her face in her knees. Hoc could this be happening?

Will he choose me over Hermione? Ginny laughed humourlessly as though the idea was the most impossible thing in the world.

Grief filled her up. She had lost Harry. The one guy she actually loved with her whole heart.

It started out as a school girl crush but blossomed throught the years. Now it wasn't her controlling it. She sighed.

What do I do if-when he chooses Hermione? Do I try to get him back? No, I couldn't. I give up.

Now Ginny started to think about Hermione's situation. What about Malfoy? Would she just leave him. After all they've been through?

She looked over at Malfoy, he was leaning against the opposite wall. His arms crossed, his expression calm, too calm, almost stoic. For the first time Ginny felt sorry for him.

*****

Draco walked out of the room. He looked calm on the outside but in his head, his life was falling down around him.

Everything was perfect and within minutes it had all came crashing down. Funny, what life can do to a person.

It can build them up, make them feel on top of the world, then tear their hearts out with full malice.

Draco closed his eyes, he couldn't take this. He had nothing now. Hermione was everything and now she was gone.

He heaved a great sigh, but deep inside him there was a spark of hope, that maybe she would choose him over Potter.

*****

Hermione and Harry let go of each other. They both had sad smiles on their faces.

"I guess we better go, they're waiting for us." Harry whispered.

Hermione nodded in agreement. She wanted to talk to Draco, to see what he was really like.

Harry suddenly wanted to see Giny. He wanted to apologize for everything. He lifted his hand and helped Hermione out of her bed.

With one last hug, they headed out the door.

One more post to go!

Katie & Bells
:techni: :pea:

qoldenwonder 06-03-2007 08:39 PM

EEK! one more! Cant wait for more. Pams!

Moxie 06-03-2007 10:11 PM

=(((((((((

ONLY ONE MORE????

NO!

IT'S NOT TRUE!

YOU'RE LYING!!

Lol, I spose you're prolly not lying =)

Love ya
.:Adrienne:.

LyonLover417 06-03-2007 10:57 PM

Awww.....tears are starting to fall...that was so moving Bells! I knew you had it in you! One more post, and it's MINE!!!

Katie

hp_lvr01 06-03-2007 11:17 PM

Thanks Katie! Hey send me the ending Chap before you post it please :yes:

qoldenwonder 06-03-2007 11:31 PM

Oh please post it soon! i want to see what happens.

Godric Potter 06-04-2007 12:03 AM

that was a great post
i cant wait for the next one
it was quite a story

LyonLover417 06-04-2007 01:07 PM

Chapter 32
 
Draco watched Hermione and Harry come out of the room. To his immediate relief, he saw they weren't holding hands. Hermione went to Draco.

"Draco...can we talk?"

"Of course Hermione." The two of them went off on their own. Hermione took Draco out into the corridor. "Something on your mind?"

"Yes...you. Draco...I remember everything you did for me. And it suprised me that you would help...a mudblood like me."

Hermione, I-" Hermione raised her hand.

"Please let me finish. Draco...I'm touched by what you did. I also....was made aware of what Harry and Ginny mean to each other. So Harry and I are breaking up."

Draco yelled with joy inside, but was tender in the outside. "Oh Hermione, I am sorry. Is there anything I can do?"

"Well, actually yes. You can say yes to the question I'm about to ask you."


*****

Harry went over to Ginny.

"We...didn't make it."

"Oh Harry..." Ginny took him in her arms. Harry held her tightly. "I'm so sorry."

"There was nothing we could have done. We...what we had....it was gone. Just like that. In two months, a lasting relationship was destroyed."

"Reminds me of something." Ginny muttered to herself, too low for Harry to hear. Harry pulled away.

"But...I realized something."

"Yes?"

"I realized...that Hermione and I were kidding ourselves. We were just too good of friends to try and date each other...do you understand Gin?"

"Yes I do Harry." Ginny assured him.

"Well...I now know that it's for the best if we break up...but, Ginny?"

"Yes Harry?"

"Will you officially get back together with me?"

"Oh Harry!" Ginny squealed and leapt into his arms. Harry kissed her and held her tightly.

"Ginny...it's going to be hard being my girlfriend. Lot's of danger and long weeks of being alone...can you handle it?"

"Harry...I can handle anything after this year!" She kissed him.

*****

Draco...knowing that we've hated each other since the day we laid eyes on each other...knowing that the whole school knows us as bitter enemies...will you risk your social status to be my boyfriend?" Hermione asked Draco shyly.

"Hermione....I will do anything you ask of me." Draco hugged her. "I love you."

"And I love you. And I never want us to be seperated again." Hermione said softly into his ear, then kissed him.


OK, That's the end! Love all of you!

Katie and Bells
:techni: :pea:

Fallon Chanel 06-04-2007 01:20 PM

yay! that was great! I'm so sad its already over!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

harrypotterbabe 06-04-2007 01:29 PM

AHHHH that was SO cute hahaah i loved it. Awww hermione is so sweet with draco ahaha. post ... more... soon :'( im gonna miss this story heheheh anyway, good job, i loved it!!

-Anna<3

LyonLover417 06-04-2007 07:21 PM

Thanks guys! Ok, Bells has a new story, and I'm following her example! Mine's called Dreaming of You Sa+13 in the Romance section! Please read and enjoy!

http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-...sa-13-a-46426/

Thanks for reading!

Katie

Moxie 06-04-2007 10:00 PM

OHMYGOSH!

HOW SWEET!

I loved it, I really did =)

Love you
.:Adrienne:.

hp_lvr01 06-05-2007 03:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanIsMyMan (Post 5143566)
yay! that was great! I'm so sad its already over!
XOXO,
Tara
:malfoy:+:hermy:

Thank you! I knoe it seems the time just flew by!

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypotterbabe (Post 5143599)
AHHHH that was SO cute hahaah i loved it. Awww hermione is so sweet with draco ahaha. post ... more... soon :'( im gonna miss this story heheheh anyway, good job, i loved it!!

-Anna<3

Thanks anna! I'm glad you liked iy ;)

Quote:

Originally Posted by LyonLover417 (Post 5145163)
Thanks guys! Ok, Bells has a new story, and I'm following her example! Mine's called Dreaming of You Sa+13 in the Romance section! Please read and enjoy!

http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-...sa-13-a-46426/

Thanks for reading!

Katie

ZOMG *runs off to read*

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moxie (Post 5145755)
OHMYGOSH!

HOW SWEET!

I loved it, I really did =)

Love you
.:Adrienne:.

I'm really glad you liked it annie! :D

THANK YOU TO ALL OUR WONDERFUL READERS AND THANK YOU TO MU WONDERFUL CO-WRITER KATIE! love ya girlie! :loved:

-Bells ♥♥

T.M.R. 06-06-2007 03:54 AM

New reader here, I guess I'm kinda late. I just read your whole story and it was great!
~Toni

P.S. What's the name of your new fic?


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