hiaku, short, long, anything! :mrgreen:

do a haiku

hmm....come to think of it...I haven't written anything about any Marauders. :ermsmile:

i'll do one:

the marauders are four best friends
friends that every one wishes they were
They eac knew each other
to be loyal to the other.
Lupin was ones name,
very smart he was
sirius was another
was all about mishchiouf and mad a fuss
james potter was always loyal
did not betray his friends
peter on the other hand
would put all his friends at dead ends.
He said he would hide them
thepotters, he said he would
In the end he rated them out
and messed up someones life for good.
He blamed sirius for their death
said he told on them
sirius sment most of his life in prison
the prison of azkaban.
He did not nothing to lupin
except make except confuse him to believe it was sirius
lupin trusted him
instead of his real friend that was almost lifeless
Lupin found out the truth
Went to help surius
Tried to kill peter
but did not get him.
Now we have to see what will really happen
If he will get him in the end
we all hope he will
to get revenge for the real freinds

ooooooooooh i like that one!

Marauders they were
Friends until the end of time
But the world fell apart


you like?

How do you like this:

So there were these friends
4 friends
Who trusted each other
Loved each other
James, the athletic
Sirius the funny and shrew
Lupin-the clever one
And poor stupid Pettigrew

Friends they were
Till one dreadful night
When James was betrayed
Lupin confused
And Sirius blamed
The reason?
A rat of Pettigrew

Now Prongs is no more
Padfoot saluted us too
Moony works against the Dark Lord
And Wormtail?
He`s waiting for his due
PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!


Like it?

yeah i like it - waht did you think of mine?

I like all of your poems in this topic :sorcerer:
What about mine??
~*~

He's Gone

There was a gang in the mist of Hogwarts
a good gang made of four,mind you.
They were the best of friends
Potter,Black,Lupid and Pettigrew

In school they were inseparatable(sp)
No one could set them apart
Not even Sirius's mother
who was dreadful and dark.

After school was just the same
After Harry's birth as well
but someone had run amuk
and Peter was quick to tell

The Potters were killed that night
and only Harry lived the nightmare
Remus Lupid was in shock
and Sirius was full of despair

Sirius cornered Peter
Peter faked his death and ran
The blame fell on Sirius
and he was sent to Azkaban

After he escaped
he told the tale
Though he was innocent
The ministrey was on his trail

He helped Dumbledore's army
He fought to protect his last loved one
He is behind the veil now
and he won't come back,he's gone

The harsh truth was never said
though it is just the same,unturned
Though few understand this tragity
those few cry for his impossible return
~*~

You guys are probably are going to kill me because it is
so long,but there was a lot to go over.
Sorry.I get caught up in detail.

That was good, mine was just as long, but i like, i like..alyonna, yours was good, but i think that you should make it loger, cause u are good at ryming. how did you guys like mine?

i really cant rhyme when I'm writing poetry, that was a haiku, but I'll make it longer if you want me to. looneylovegood, I really liked yours - nice job!

thanks alyonna,call me eowyn. i wish that this thread would move a lil faster, i really like this one, and i could make so many peoms of hte marauders, i love to write peotry, more than i like to read it, well..please people read this thread more often so it can get running, bye

There were four wizards in school,
Who'd disreguard every rule,
They cursed and they hexed,
Their teachers they vexed,
But to kill them off is still cruel,
lol.

I love limerics but I hate Edward Lear. How twisted is that?

hey!! i love all this peotry!! i normally post stroies in ff, but i have also written poetry.... uhh, im gona try one here too!!! all you are soo good, but i'll have a try. it a mix of a poem and a ballad and a lyric

hello, my name's sirius black,
my life is a real slack.
i'll gladly tell you my tale;
but with enthusiasm, i might fail...
so you better stay off my back.

it started back at school;
where i made friends with a fool.
he tricked me to believeing;
it was trust he was retrieving.
but only liked me for i was cool.

along with Prongs, wormtail and moony,
we found him cowardly looney.
we didnt bother
to blow his cover
so now you can call us looney.

____________________
i'll finish it later.. im tired... lol

Oh these are all good poems I could never write nething like that- I'm so jealous but hey I'll try.

Once upon a mournful night,
the friends of four became the three,
ones fate was gone,
the other to flee,
one was left confused but spared,
another cast to sea,
it was to Azkaban he went,
he was both brave and true.

A boy was cast a shadow,
no parents had he,
the one who spoilt his dear life,
was a git a man-
called Pettigrew.

No one understood this act,
of cowerdess and plea,
but Voldermort has risen,
his powers back and all,
but we all know this already that he is fated to fall.

hope you like it- its long I know but its the best I can do- its bad eh

So do you like it or not???
hehe- hey am I the only 1 that ever goes on this nemore? :unsure: