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| | Candy Display Case (Finished Fanfiction) A dazzling showcase of fully wrapped-up stories, these sweet treats are polished and ready for your reading pleasure! | 
01-13-2004, 03:41 PM
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|  His life is like a riverBillywig
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Australia
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The following are some poems that I wrote. I hope you like them and tell me what you think!
What do you feel?
From Hermione to Ron
Why is it every word that you say can tear me apart?
How come every fight we have breaks my heart?
If only my eyes saw what you could see,
I would know, if you noticed me.
You curse, you lie, you bicker, you don't care what I feel!
Yet, your the first one by my side to help me heal.
When I mention Krum, your the first with a bad thing to say,
But when I open up, your the first to turn away.
I try to comfort you
I try to pull you through
Your by my side in rain, shine or any weather,
But why do I feel Harry's the only thing to keep us together?
Ginny says you like me
But it's that I fail to see
Give me the key and your heart I can seal,
Just tell me: What do you feel?
I don't want to love you, but I do
From Ginny in reflection of Harry
I can't believe I use to be the little girl who wanted to hold your hand,
But since then I have grown up and see that I still am.
Last year I made a promise to get over the boy with the scar,
But to my pain, I see, it did not get me very far.
I dated other boys, the only thing that I could do,
yet the entire time, I could only think of you.
I tried to get you to notice me, by being there when you were sad,
Yet you where not the Harry I had seen, you where cold, strange and mad.
I spoke to you coldly and tried to insult to get out your hate,
But I was the only one you treated like a mate.
Why didn't you swear or shout or push to the ends,
like you did to Hermione, Ron and your other friends?
Why did you turn from Luna and Neville but took in what I said?
My goal I failed to achieve, I was just left for dead.
But then I got thinking, my heart skipped a beat,
Maybe you like me too much to show your heat.
I was happy, full of light until it came through,
I don't want to love you, but I still do.
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01-13-2004, 10:10 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
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These are great!!! See my avvy I love R/Hr together too!
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01-15-2004, 10:05 AM
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| | Abraxan
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Perth, AU (GMT +8)
Posts: 25,070
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jasper Hart
First Year
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OMG this is good write more.
I liked the one with Harry and Ginny it was really intersting but I like the other one as well.
go on write more please :flowersmile:
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01-15-2004, 10:22 AM
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| | Hungarian Horntail
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Saffron City
Posts: 69,656
Hogwarts RPG Name:
November {Noe} Franze
First Year | Brain Twin | MASTAH ASHURRII | Reisdent PokeNerd | Digifangirl
OOOO I like the Hermione to Ron one :flowersmile: | |
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01-17-2004, 01:33 AM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: garden state
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Hi remember me?! Great poems is all I wanted to say! 
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01-17-2004, 01:58 AM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: United States
Posts: 1,552
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Cool poems. Mine are all harry potter related too. you might want to check them out.
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01-17-2004, 03:13 AM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 5,033
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Awww, great job! I liked the first one! The second was cooL as well.
Keep writing!  These are really good! :bouncepea: | |
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09-29-2004, 07:48 PM
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| SS Featured Author Snidget
Join Date: May 2004 Location: The Burrow
Posts: 2,923
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AWWW!!!! I don't know if you even come her anymore, but that was the sweetest thing!  Obviously loved the R/H one, but the G/H one was deep. It is so true Will. Quote: I don't want to love you, but I still do. That is so sweet Will. Who knew you could get so mushy? 
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