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Lucy's Poems Sa9+ Hello! These are Lucy's Poemes *ha ha Kodie!!!!!* Umm...... Hi Sarah, Rebecca, Ceci, and Kodie...and all other persons out there that I don't know. This is a poem that I'm thinking up right now, okay? Um, first poems aren't always the best right ? :blink: Stars The stars all shine, In glittery greatness, Five points are mine, Harry looks up, Thinks, "Is Sirius there?'' Is he watching? Is he aware, Of my troubles, And pain, The stars are so high, How could he see, Everything down here, Can he see me? Pleeeeeze comment!!! :whistle: |
YAY! It's up! It's up!! finally!!!!! I love it, I love it so much! |
Hi hi hi hi hi hi hi that...was...cool. hi hi hi hi hi hi hi - Sarah !! hi from space -Ceci we just watched Star Wars!!- Sarah May the force be with you!- Rebecca ANAKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Ceci We're all @ Sarah's - Rebecca bye lucy!! Star Wars : the best ever! -Sarah ;) |
I think it's cool how you could add in scenes in the poem. It makes all the more entertaining! :) ~~Riddle Queen Tina |
oh wow! such a great poem! i really liked it! i like how you used real emotions and parts from the stories. great work. |
thx you guys. I know I'm pretty new at this, but you really think it's good? Hidden Hidden behind a pumpkin, Staring at myself, Watching my every move, Regretting everything I did, Not to know that I'd be here, Staring at my past, Seeing my mistakes, Regretting that, I'm hidden, Uhhhhhh...... Please Comment |
wow. you managed to relate another one to HP but not have everything be about that. I like that. PAMS! |
COOL!!! PoA!! The pumpkins...i had a weird dream i was w/ Harry and Hermy in PoA, and the pumpkins started to move and started singing some weird song..witha beat like the song in Aladin da-da ta ta-ta da da-da da-ad ta ta-ta da you'll nev-er make it back-in time... i dunno........whatever. PAMS!! c-yahz @ school Rock On!! :music: *~Sarah~* |
I don't like that last poem as much. Eyuckhc!!!! :snide: Uh....is this one any better? Mirror Image I see myself, In this mirror, I beat Voldy myself, He's dead, It's not the scar, It's the heart, My mother left behind, He's dead. Please comment..... :hello: :faint: |
I liked the first one the best, the last one was really good too. I like how you start out with one thing like the stars or a mirror, and end it with something from Harry Potter. |
:poke: FINE! Don't bug me to post a new poem! I'll post one anyways....right as soon as I come up with one. At the Yule Ball There was a glimmer, In her eyes, As she danced, With a Krum, Kept mis-pronouncing, Her name, But she didn't care, Because he was hot, Jealous faces around the room, Taunted him and her, But she didn't care, Because he was hot, But she didn't care, Because he was hot, :loved: :loved: :loved: Plaese Comment |
lol! It's very. . . straightforward! I like it, because he was hot! |
I Wasn't Exactly I wasn't exactly picked, For the tournament, I wasn't exactly okay with that, We fought, A lot, We didn't exactly talk, For a very long time, I wasn't exactly okay with that, We were still fighting, A lot, We didn't exactly get over it, We just one day worked it out, I was exactly okay with that, We didn't fight, At all Did you like it at all? :jump: coment :jump: coment :jump: coment :jump: |
coolnessness! Alot, alot, at all! *bounce* here's your comment *bounce* |
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:whistle: can u do one about my and u know how :one_brow: |
A R/Hr one for KODIE.......associated with Becca and KODIE!!! He looked into her eyes, They gleamed with delight, They were in love, and no one could stop them, Sure, Somtimes they broke rules, But what would be the point, If they were not broken, Somtimes she numbed him, With a spell, He couldn't move for, An hour, But still they stared, Into each other's eyes, They gleamed with delight, They're in love... There Kodie!!!! Are you Happy?!?!?!? :loved: Kodie :glomp: Rebecca :loved: |
*Rebecca claps* (I'm happy) nice poem, thanx |
you're welcome |
Wonders This is a poem that is very little HP related WONDERS Do you think you know me, Well I wonder, You see, I could be in the corner, Hiding in a corner of flame, I'm seeing if you feel, The same way, But I know you don't, I wonder if you even know me, Sure you could ask me my name, But you havn't, And I wonder if, You ever will, Do you think you know me, Well I wonder, If you ever will......... somewhat G/H |
interresting, I like it ALOT!! Keep writing Lucy! |
Hi I like it thx can u wrigh a noth one plz im :jump: not :jump: high :jump: :whistle: i am on sharpy |
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