Vic needs a slap! So her husband turns up. I thought she loved him more than Rob. We need Ginny to hex him into the next centuary!
And why on Earth is she at Robs house? Is he going to kiss it all better? She is a mother and has a responibility to her two daughters. Teddy woud be better off without her. I'm here if he needs any help you know! She's still married to Teddy, so is her not going off with Rob a bit like cheating on Teddy. Victorie -:hack: watch out! Sophie is coming to get you.
Sophie xx

Oh Sophie!! I think Vic is maybe a tad scared now. You certainly have skills with the hacker
Everything will be better soon!!!

Did you like lastnight? How is your cousin? (or should I say Buzz)

Good! So she should be!

Last night was great fun. I'm so tired though, I feel like I could pass out at any minuet,
And Connor the little rascal had a ball today, thanks.
Soph x

I LOVE this chappie!

The letter was interesting
I wonder what will happen next.

Keep up the great work!

Good good!!

Thanks Stef indeed

ooooohhhh Dun dun dun !! Great post

Thanks Kerri
Dun dun dun indeed

Hello Katie. Sorry for taking so long to get here. I actually feel sorry for Vic. I think she needed to grow up too fast in the world she thought would be so glamorous, and found it not glamorous at all. I hope she hasn't gone back, thinking in her funky state of mind, that Rob will give her what she thinks she deserves; pain. Maybe she thinks he will hurt her terribly like Ted had to suffer, and nearly die, and be hurt again when he came back to find the love of his life with another man, and for ruining her, and Teddy'd lives. She does need help, whatever her reason is. And I hope she gets it. I'm so very sorry if this doesn't make sense. It's very late, and I've been trying to catch up on my reading and commenting. I'm anxious to read more and find out what is going on with Vic, and how Teddy will save her. And don't ever say your story is rubbish. There have been times I wasn't thrilled with it, only cause I don't believe in premarrital sex, betrayals and love triangles and such, but you stuck with your guns, which was very brave, and you're keeping your readers curious, and loyal. It takes a very good writer to be able to do that.
I'll be watching for your next post.

No worries

I'm not saying:evillaugh

I hope so too

I'm glad you kept reading even if you didn't like it very much

Aww thankyou
Thanks for reading and commenting!

Hello Katie. Please don't misunderstand. I like your story very much. It's just those bits in there that I don't like. It's like when you go out to eat, and the waitress takes your order, and when you order your drink and say no ice please and they bring it with ice, you just put a straw in it, overlooking the ice, and enjoy it anyway, cause your lip isn't being frozen by the ice. So, I do like your story, I just overlook bits of it. Your storytelling ability is still enough to keep me interested in it because I care about your characters and want to see that they all come away in the end happy for the most part.

Hmph.. I was shaking in anger! Well, actually because of the cold because it's a cold autumn here.. But still!

Rob.. I.Hate.Your.Guts.So.Much.And.So.Bad.

Please let him be the bad guy and like has to go to Azkaban and he's like only using a love potion on Victoire! PLEASEEEEEE!

I don't like you Rob.. I don't you like at all!

I'm really glad you care about the characters and you seem interested to see how they are. I appreciate every comment that you give this story and you are very kind to explain. I know what you mean about the drink and ice thing, it's the kind of thing you learn to 'grin and bare', right? I didn't even know I had a story telling ability so reading this made me very grateful for you.
I am so thankful that there is a woman in Florida who could be doing much better things than reading my FF but she still decides to. Thank you very much

Katie

I love it that everyone hates Rob again!!!!

Just give Victoire a bit of space becasue she may not be up to what you all think she is:evillaugh

PS....I'm cold right now too Rainy and Windy Scotland!!

K xx

AAAAAAAUGH!!

I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE ANY LONGER!! MAKE TEDDY GET VICTOIRE SO THEY CAN LIVE HAPPILY EVR AFTER!! HOW LONG UNTIL MY WISHES ARE FULLFILLED?!

*takes a minute to calm down a little*

I'm very sorry that I screamed at you. (But really, how long did you expect before I totally cracked?) I will leave the writing up to you and (try) to not yell. Or scream. Or demand for Rob's death.

Toodles!

~Kassie

This post is for Bonnieginnyfan1 or Stef!!!  She is my Aussie reader who is funny and lovely! She LOVES the games section – a bit like myself – and she also seems to love this FF. I’m glad she has taken the time to read this and her comments always make me smile

Three cheers for Bonnieginnyfan1!!!

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I have recently counted how many readers this story has had, well the people that have commented anyway. They will all be alerted when the epilogue is put up – even though some might not even use the site anymore. At the last part I will list every commenter, even if they only commented once or twice. They still kept me going. The people that have had a post dedicated to them individually are the frequent commenters who made me smile after every post.

PS... I have had 23!!!

Victoire’s POV

I walked up to the manor fizzing with anger. Why on earth had he owled me a letter? To purposely make me mad? Had he meant for me to come here? To annoy Ted?

No doubt Mum had informed Ted by now.

I felt the parchment in the pocket, it felt poisonous – he had written it. Robert Fiddle, the used-to-be love of my life. The used-to-be mender of broken hearts. The man I now hate.

I knocked the door and awaited an answer, a dreaded answer. I heard footsteps coming down the hallway then the door swung open to a smiling Rob. I hadn’t expected him to smile, I expected anger but I was here to talk about my daughters and my husband, I didn’t care how he was.

‘Hello Rob, may I come in?’ I asked, rather unpleasantly. I didn’t await an answer and pushed past into the house I called home once.

‘I guess I must have said yes and forgot.’ Replied Rob with a sarcastic tone. He smiled at me and I replied with daggers for eyes.

‘You would have said yes Rob, you would have said yes if I asked you to take me to bed. You know what? You would have said yes to my mother if she asked you to sleep with her.’ I was now pointing my finger at his chest in an angry stance.

He took a step back and looked at me curiously, like he had no clue what I was talking about.

‘Oh right, I have met your mother a few times and I wouldn’t sleep with her. I do have a little maturity.’

‘Big emphasis on the word little.’ I replied, my rage getting the better of me.

‘What are you even angry about? I’m the one that got the crushing letter where you quoted a Muggle band, can you get any lower?’ Rob asked, the pain showing through.

‘I know it was low but then you sent me a letter and told me you still wanted to see me and the girls, that is lower than low. Do you seriously think I would let you do that?’ Now I was upset, not angry. The realisation of the situation hit me; this was more serious than I had anticipated.

We may have to go to the ministry; this could be a custody thing. Rob had raised the girls with me since they were born and Ted had just come back. He had a death certificate and the girls’ birth certificate father’s signature was blank.

‘I thought you would have the courtesy to let me see them. I kept you three alive for months; you might have committed suicide or anything. I kept you strong – you said so yourself.’ Rob said and looked me right in the eye as he walked toward me.

I took a step back as I said, ‘Courtesy, you don’t mean the meaning of courtesy.’ I continued to step back as he continued to step forward. I was moving toward the living area, the wall adjacent to the fireplace was behind me. I was soon to be trapped.

‘Is this courteous? If I ask permission?’

‘Permission for what?’ I asked, already knowing the answer – it was too late.

His hands were on my shoulders, his hips against my hips and his lips against my lips. It was so forceful it hurt. He shoved his hand into my jeans pocket and took out my wand and flung it on the couch. He pushed me so we were against the wall and forced himself towards me. I could feel all the muscles being exercised and his tough bones were digging into me. No matter the amount of wriggling, I couldn’t get free.

He realised and whispered in my ear, ‘Is this too much to stand up for? Maybe we should go somewhere else.’ I felt his smile against my neck.

‘Make me...’ I replied as I shoved with all my might.

‘You asked...’ He pushed so I was next to him and held me so tightly that I squirmed. Then he apparated into a bedroom and pushed me onto the bed. He came after me and pulled my cardigan from my shoulders.

The he began to slide my top off and I heard a bang from downstairs. It caught Rob’s attention and made him weaker, easier for me to escape. Then another bang, another and another. Like something was trudging up the stairs. The door burst open and the voice I had longed for said:

‘Don’t unhook her bra, she likes doing that herself.’

OMG!

Katie! I love you! You have made my day!
I don't know what to say! You are the BEST!!!
You always make me smile.

Rob sounds interesting in this chappie.
Your writing is truely always excellent!!

xox ♥Stef♥ xox

Aww thanks Love you too

Excellent?? Oh wow!!!

Ta xx

So, is the last one then, before the Epilogue?
Is it bad that I smiled at this?
Get him! Get him!
I don't think he really has a right to see them if Vic doesn't want him to. Even though he did help her and the twins out, they're still not his kids...
Yeah, but that's not really Ted's fault. And he's still their father, unlike Rob...
Mayday! Mayday! Apparate away! Are you a witch or what??!
Did you not hear my MAYDAY!?
Eeeeeppness! Loving what Teddy said at the end; totally priceless! *GlomptacklesTeddy* I'm glad he's there

Fantastic post, Katie! Please PAMS!

Hello Katie. Oh boy, things are getting intense! Vic's heart is in the right place, but she should have let Ted deal with Rob. I hope now that Ted is there he will be able to take care of things. And I don't know how the law is over there, but, no court system would give Rob any rights with the girls. Very nice Katie. I can't wait to read your next chapter.

It's really sad At first I felt sorry for Rob cause he did treat the girls like his own, but then...Who came into the room. I don't think its Ted cause he wouldn't just stand there watching the scene unfold in front of him. Teddy and Victoire are too unconventional for me. I'm glad they are only fictional characters cause they would give me a sore head otherwise. I don't know if the right thing for them to do would be to get back together. They seem too immature and then Victoires outburts at Robs house about who's sleeping with who-Does it matter anymore. I'd hate for two little girls to be stuck in the middle of it.
How many post are left. I'm looking forward to seeing whats going to happen with James and his fiance, plus what will Harry and Ginny say!
Soph x

Great chapter

Thanks everyone!!

There are a couple more then it will be the epilogue!!

I edited a part because Emily mentioned apparating and I felt kinda dumb cos I forgot about that Its at the kissy part, its edited now

Thanks everybody

Rob. You. Make. Me. Sick!

Awwww... Poor Victoire.

I hope that's Teddy, I really, really, really, do!

Aweeeesome chapter! I'm so sad it's nearly over! But then again, every good story has to end

I didn't mean for you to edit it... I was actually quoting Ron from the first book and I think Hermione from the last...

ROB. MUST. DIE.

I take that back. Rob must be murdered. BY ME!!

Teddy came to save her!! Whoohoo!! Go Teddy! Go Teddy! Go Teddy!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Kassie