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05-15-2010, 10:09 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships No No No. I don't like Rob. Believe it or not, I'm crying. She should call Teddy... Oh wait, He's dead. Noooo. Bring him back soon Missy. Its killing me without him. He complets the story. It was a beautiful post though. Poor Victoire 
I'm still sobbing. I hate to start teams and even though he's dead I'm Team Teddy! (nice alliteration!)
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05-16-2010, 01:39 AM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
I hate Robs guts, i hate him so much
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05-16-2010, 06:22 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Hogwarts
Posts: 436
Hogwarts RPG Name: Witches Seeker Fourth Year |
Its amazing, I loved it pls write more |
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05-17-2010, 11:41 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Originally Posted by morag no no no. I don't like rob. Believe it or not, i'm crying. She should call teddy... Oh wait, he's dead. Noooo. Bring him back soon missy. Its killing me without him. He complets the story. It was a beautiful post though. Poor victoire 
i'm still sobbing. I hate to start teams and even though he's dead i'm team teddy! (nice alliteration!)
s x yes! Team teddy ftw! |
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05-18-2010, 02:57 PM
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#405 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
Posts: 2,770
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Originally Posted by hanje88 Its amazing, I loved it pls write more  As far as I can tel, I have a new reader!! 
I am Katie, this is my story: Love:Teddy and Victoire.
Whats your name?
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05-19-2010, 05:17 PM
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#406 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I am writing a post right now so it will be up very soon!!!
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05-19-2010, 06:31 PM
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#407 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Hello, everybody. Here you are!!!
Where is he? I need him! Why couldn't he be quicker?
Within moments of moaning, there was a whisper from the door. 'Alohamora!'
He had saved me. In time he had come.
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I woke in an unfamiliar room, surrounded by Healers. I was in a lot of pain and there was people surrounding my bed, two people were holding something.
'She's awake!!'
'Shhh....'
The shouter was James, my favourite cousin. He was holding some blankets in a cylinder shape, the blanket was pink. As I looked closer at everybody, I saw that Hermione was holding a bundle too, a pink bundle.
'Hey Victoire. Aren't they just beautiful?' Mum said, standing next to Hermione, staring at the blanket.
'Who?'
'The twins. Your daughters. Ted would have been so happy.'
'Can I see them please? They are mine.'
'Sure.' James said, sad as he parted with the light bundle.
She was just beautiful. Ted's double, but a girl. This was Evie Fleur. I could just tell. The cute little girl I was holding was actually mine, my daughter.
As Hermione handed me the other little bundle I immediately knew this was Violet Tonks. They were both beautiful, both like Teddy, well they were twins.
The door opened and I heard footsteps coming towards me. They were heavy so I could sense it was a man. My eyes were closed but I knew who it was. It had to be him. A crying noise came from the crib next to my bed, like one of the girls was being lifted up. He was cuddling one.
‘Who do you have there?’
‘You aren’t asleep, I’m sorry I should have asked you if I could lift her. Sorry. According to her tag this is Evie.’
‘She is a lot cuddlier than Violet, she just cries if you lift her.’
‘Can I hold her please? You can have Evie.’
‘Sure. Thanks,’ I said as he lay Evie on me.’I can’t believe how small and light they are.’
‘All that matters is that they are healthy and so are you.’
‘Why would you care if I was healthy or not?’
‘Well, I care about you so I want the best for you.’
‘What is best for me?’
‘Me.’
‘Rob, you don’t mean that. You can’t possibly mean that.’
‘I do. I would love to say I do after you walk down the aisle towards me.’
‘It’s too soon for now. You can be my babysitter at the moment.’
‘Sounds good to me, I could hold them for days at a time. I could hold you for days too.’
‘Hold me then.’
He sat on the bed and put his arm around my shoulder, holding me close. We put our arms together so that the twins were right next to each other.
‘They are just gorgeous, aren’t they?’
‘Not as gorgeous as their Mum.’
Then, he kissed me on the cheek. I leaned my head on his shoulder and cried. I was in a major dilemma. I was in love with a man who had been previously engaged to my best friend and I had just lost my husband. This wasn’t right.
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05-19-2010, 06:35 PM
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#408 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Awhhh the babies (L) PAMS PAMS PAMS
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05-19-2010, 06:42 PM
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#409 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Awhhh the babies (L) PAMS PAMS PAMS Thanks Kerri darrling!!!!!
The babies are sooo cute (in my head obviously)
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05-19-2010, 06:50 PM
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#410 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
Posts: 7,087
| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I was in love with a man who had been previously engaged to my best friend and I had just lost my husband. This wasn’t right. Correct you are, Vic. This isn't right. I think that she needs to be with JUST her babies right now, not Rob. Then maybe over time or something, when he's not such a slimeball for going after a recently widowed woman with new twins, they could maybe figure out what their feelings mean. Oh who am I kidding? I just don't like the guy. But it's not my story, it's yours, and whatever you write, I'll love 
Great post!! PLEASE PAMS!! |
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05-19-2010, 07:59 PM
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#411 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by emilyblack Correct you are, Vic. This isn't right. I think that she needs to be with JUST her babies right now, not Rob. Then maybe over time or something, when he's not such a slimeball for going after a recently widowed woman with new twins, they could maybe figure out what their feelings mean. Oh who am I kidding? I just don't like the guy. But it's not my story, it's yours, and whatever you write, I'll love 
Great post!! PLEASE PAMS!!  Thanks Emily!!!
I will add as soon as I can.
I'm sorry about Rob, I know you hate him but it's all in the story!
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05-19-2010, 08:32 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
Posts: 1,159
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP This wasn’t right. I totally agree! Her husband just died :'(!
R.I.P Teddy
Aww the twins are soooo cute. I love the names. I wonder if that is after any particular, Violet ? I like parma violets- thought I'd just say.
Loved the post, Dear. PAMS PAMS, PAMS!
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05-19-2010, 08:38 PM
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#413 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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She might be named after a certain Violet  I love the name though.
I don't like paramviolets
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05-19-2010, 09:46 PM
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#414 (permalink)
| Bugbear
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Down Under
Posts: 32,132
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cody Liam Evans Seventh Year | HP, Harry & Ginny ♥ | Music Girl ♫ | | BW, JB, CS, 1D, Glee, AVPM/S Lover | Pray &
*Faints* Babies!! Aww!  it!
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05-19-2010, 11:25 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
aww, babies, i still hate rob
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05-20-2010, 12:02 AM
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| Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Burnes Fourth Year |
that was a cute post
im glad the babies are finally born
wait! did she say in LOVE?!?!?!?!
no!
she can't be in love with him!
grr
thats it! im killing rob right now!
like she said, its not right
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05-20-2010, 01:05 AM
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#417 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black YO! ROB! This is titled Love: Teddy and Victoire.
NOT!
Love: Rob and Victoire.. GOOOOOO AWAY!
Sowwy, couldn't resist. Just in such a hating mood.
loved the chappie! Pams when you can,
AND I LOVE THE BABIES! I want my own baby, but uhhh. I'm only 12.. So not gonna happen for like, 10 years |
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05-20-2010, 02:57 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Katie, I don't know what to think of Rob. He's no good for trying to move in on Ted's territory. He was still going to go through with marrying Amelie while still saying he loved Vic. He shows no morals whatsoever, and I don't see why Vic would want someone like that around, and especially where the babies are concearned. I would think Vic would want good influences around her babies. But then, the way he picked up the baby to cuddle her when he thought Vic was asleep was sweet. At least that's one good thing he has going for him. I'm anxious to see if Vic comes to her senses and tosses Rob out on his ear. Post when you can.
Katie, if I'm getting into the story too much and it makes you feel bad, please let me know, and I'll edit my comment. You are a good writer, and I want to encourage you. I just don't like Rob, and the situation Vic has allowed herself to be in.
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05-20-2010, 07:00 PM
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#419 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Connie, I don't mind suggestions but I do have a plan so I won't be needing them a while. It's annoying when you all get it right! But, so far nobody has it right! 
Kerri and Sophie, thanks for being my friends and my readers: much appreciated! 
Gabriella, I want a baby too but I am 14 so, like you, that won't be happening for a while. I love babies!!! 
Everybody else, thanks alot. I love you all. (just as much as babies)
Lots of love, Katie (L)
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05-23-2010, 08:34 PM
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#420 (permalink)
| Snidget
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I will post as soon as I can but I can't think of what is coming next!!!!
I have plans that can happen in a while but I need to fill the gaps
Katie
xx
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05-26-2010, 06:00 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada (GMT -5)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Orchid Danelli Simmons Fifth Year |
'i was in love with a man who had previously been engaged to my best friend and I had just lost my husband. This is not right.'
No it is NOT although I think Rob is rather sweet around her and she does seem genuinly happy...maybe it could work for them...just not so soon after Teddy's death, wait a few months like 12 or 18 months that's a good amount of time right??? But I have a feeling that they'll have sex and she'll get pregnant and then they'll get married just like it happened with Teddy and Vic
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05-27-2010, 12:57 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by SarahLestrange 'i was in love with a man who had previously been engaged to my best friend and I had just lost my husband. This is not right.'
No it is NOT although I think Rob is rather sweet around her and she does seem genuinly happy...maybe it could work for them...just not so soon after Teddy's death, wait a few months like 12 or 18 months that's a good amount of time right??? But I have a feeling that they'll have sex and she'll get pregnant and then they'll get married just like it happened with Teddy and Vic Welcome to Love:Teddy and Victoire!!! I hope you enjoy your stay!!! 
I'm not saying anything about your idea!!!! Good plan but you never know.
I do though!!!!
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05-27-2010, 04:10 PM
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#423 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Hehe
I'm such a fan 
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05-27-2010, 04:17 PM
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#424 (permalink)
| Snidget
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I can't believe it Gabriella!!!!You are so serious about this FF, my eyes are watering!!!!
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05-27-2010, 04:18 PM
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#425 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Hehe, I reeeeeaaally like the ff. *hands you a tissue just in case* |
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